Chapter 2.41-- That Old Rhyme

posted 31st Jul 2014, 3:11 PM

Chapter 2.41-- That Old Rhyme

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31st Jul 2014, 3:11 PM

HeSerpenty

Meant to have this page done in the morning! Gaaah, stupid day jobs -__-'
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*siighs*... so we have our first character death-- unfortunately for Jonathan his death is more important for the story than his life :/. He' not actually dead in the page... but losing consciousness for the last time T^T
His last words uttered are the words of the rhyme he chanted way back in the PROLOGUE. One phrase in particular really stands out to Hizruk up there >_>
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ALSO! We have another QnA this week! This question is directed to Hizruk...regarding his LIFE IN THE DUNGEON
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Two more pages in Chapter 2! I'm so excited guys.. already have most of it sketched out!

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view kelverse's profile

31st Jul 2014, 3:21 PM

kelverse

NO

NO NO NO

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO NOT MY BABY JONATHAN
*cries for a thousand years*

The page looks really great! I can't wait to see what Hizruk does next. <3

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31st Jul 2014, 3:34 PM

HeSerpenty

I'm sorryyy RIiink! I know you loved him T^T... haha.. like me you picked the wrong character to love XD

And thank you! I have some excitement planned for next chapter :3

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view kelverse's profile

31st Jul 2014, 6:15 PM

kelverse

It's okay, Canan doesn't die so at least one of us won't end up sobbing into a tub of ice cream XD

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view HapyCow's profile

31st Jul 2014, 3:29 PM

HapyCow

*takes off hat* Poor guy. So has Hizruk never been outside the Black wall? Okay I feel like I need to go re-read this XD I need to get all the facts straight.

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31st Jul 2014, 3:33 PM

HeSerpenty

I know T^T
He has not.. not at all XD. And he isn't now they're lookin at the wall from the INside :D

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view Proxy170's profile

31st Jul 2014, 3:32 PM

Proxy170

Aww I feel sorry for both these guys :(

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view HeSerpenty's profile

31st Jul 2014, 3:39 PM

HeSerpenty

Hizruk had tried so hard... and all for naught it would seem T^T. But... this jump starts the plot for next chapter... and sparks a very important relationship :F

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view Proxy170's profile

31st Jul 2014, 3:53 PM

Proxy170

Oooohhh~~ if it goes a certain way...I can't help but imagine it sparks a war D:

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view Matt Knab's profile

31st Jul 2014, 3:57 PM

Matt Knab

Well, he TRIED to save the guy, at least. Now he just has to figure out how to make his people not racist and stuff. History has shown this task to be rather... difficult.

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31st Jul 2014, 5:48 PM

HeSerpenty

Lol yes... THAT might be a hard thing to overcome XD.. the "racism".. or.. "Specie-ism" XDD.
There's still one more human he can desperately try to save!

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31st Jul 2014, 4:27 PM

Travis Michael Moore

Looks great!

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31st Jul 2014, 5:48 PM

HeSerpenty

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view Doomy's profile

31st Jul 2014, 4:34 PM

Doomy

Aww guess that venom finally took its effect. :C

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view HeSerpenty's profile

31st Jul 2014, 5:49 PM

HeSerpenty

Yes... now that he's with a safe person and the adrenaline is gone, I guess his poor body just couldn't take it anymore T^T

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view Centcomm's profile

31st Jul 2014, 4:55 PM

Centcomm

wow .. excellent work here :D love the artwork !

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view HeSerpenty's profile

31st Jul 2014, 5:49 PM

HeSerpenty

Aww thank you very much!

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view TheD-Wrek's profile

31st Jul 2014, 6:03 PM

TheD-Wrek

That is so sad.... !_!

I am overwhelmed with feels at the moment. Heh.

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view Calisa's profile

31st Jul 2014, 6:40 PM

Calisa

Me too, D. Feeeeeeels T^T

Hizruk has many adorable expressions this page <3

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view HeSerpenty's profile

31st Jul 2014, 9:18 PM

HeSerpenty

Awww.... *pats D on the back*.... it'll be okay, D T^T

(I consider this reaction a success XD)

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view VulturesUnderTheMoon's profile

31st Jul 2014, 6:36 PM

VulturesUnderTheMoon

So sad. i feel so bad for him... I like the previous page. The way Hizruk's face fell when he said dungeon was prefect...it would've been even more perfect in a towel...XD

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31st Jul 2014, 9:15 PM

HeSerpenty

LOL... I like the way you think, sister XD
Hmmmm... *is thinking about changing Hizruk's outfit into a towel permanently now* haha

But *cough* seriously...it is sad. First character death T^T

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view Seabiscuit's profile

31st Jul 2014, 9:02 PM

Seabiscuit

...Well I don't think a webcomic has made me tear up before.D:

It's just something in my eye...!

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view HeSerpenty's profile

31st Jul 2014, 9:16 PM

HeSerpenty

I couldn't ask for a better reaction....since I wanted this scene to be somewhat moving! So thank you!

I mean...*gives you eye wash for that "thing in your eye"* (lol)

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view Alicia's profile

31st Jul 2014, 9:24 PM

Alicia

...... D_:

(I'll go start digging a grave. We've got a place for him at the comic character graveyard.)

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1st Aug 2014, 6:31 AM

TheD-Wrek

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JNJJ-QkZ8cM

@_@

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view HeSerpenty's profile

1st Aug 2014, 2:15 PM

HeSerpenty

lol yea it's gonna become necessary. Especially cuz of YOU T^T (lol)

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view Ephemeros's profile

1st Aug 2014, 12:01 AM

Ephemeros

Ohnooo it's so sad~ ; n ; Very nicely done with the rhyme andand stuff, really tugs at the ol' heart strings.. ; n ;

Also, looking forward to life in the dungeon Q&A. :>

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1st Aug 2014, 2:15 PM

HeSerpenty

I'm glad it does! I wanted it to.... even tho it ain't easy killin' characters T^T

I updated the QnA page! New question up n ready if ya wanna take a look :D

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view corntown's profile

1st Aug 2014, 8:42 AM

corntown

Just found this series in the comic fury forums. Looks amazing. Gonna start reading it now!

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view HeSerpenty's profile

1st Aug 2014, 2:12 PM

HeSerpenty

Thank you so much! I hope you enjoy the read and will continue to enjoy it!! <3

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view FlamingReaperComics's profile

1st Aug 2014, 9:27 AM

FlamingReaperComics

awwwww, I felt his pain.

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view VulturesUnderTheMoon's profile

1st Aug 2014, 10:12 AM

VulturesUnderTheMoon

Question: Hizruk what's your ideal romantic partner?

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view HeSerpenty's profile

1st Aug 2014, 2:16 PM

HeSerpenty

Oooo that's a good question XD.. Can't wait to present it to him hehehe

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view VulturesUnderTheMoon's profile

1st Aug 2014, 3:09 PM

VulturesUnderTheMoon

Neither can i.

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view Jarvi's profile

1st Aug 2014, 1:42 PM

Jarvi

.T_____________T.
I has a sad now... big sad...

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view HeSerpenty's profile

1st Aug 2014, 2:17 PM

HeSerpenty

I'm soorrryyyyy.... *gives Saari a Happy. and a Joy..*.... did that help a little? T^T (lol)

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view Vivocateur's profile

2nd Aug 2014, 12:27 AM

Vivocateur

Poor guy :'(

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view Damatris's profile

2nd Aug 2014, 12:37 PM

Damatris

Finally caught up!

I have been meaning to read this through for a loong time now but had time only now... BTW. Your prologue was unnecessarily painful to read when this was the first page I saw... ;_;

I really enjoyed reading through the archive and now I'm looking forward to more. Your story has nice pacing and likeable characters (Merek is my fav <3 ).

So, yeah... I just wanted to tell you that you're doing fantastic job over here. :)

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2nd Aug 2014, 12:47 PM

HeSerpenty

WOw thank you so much! That feedback really truly means a lot! Like... makes my day, seriously!

Lol yea....this scene is a lot more rough if you have the Prologue fresh in your mind T^T

I hope that you will continue to enjoy the story and it's characters! :D :D

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2nd Aug 2014, 3:18 PM

Damatris

You're welcome!

Actually, the prologue was the rough part. xD Not that re-reading this scene was too nice. *sob* But when he started to chant that rhyme in the prologue, it clicked that he's the one who's going to die and I started to feel so sorry for him and his soon-to-be fiancee. ;_;

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4th Aug 2014, 10:56 AM

HeSerpenty

I see! Lol well I kinda hoped this scene would prompt those who've been subbed a long time to go back n re-read the prologue..... so they kinda make that connection! Haha it's been soooo long since that was uploaded XD

Lets hope things end better for his fiancee T^T

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view Leafa's profile

2nd Nov 2015, 1:54 PM

Leafa

Ahhhh so sad! I stopped leaving you gazillions of comments just because I was so engrossed in what was going on. Curious that Jonathan's girlfriend wasn't executed in the same way, I wonder what machinations she's being involved with!

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2nd Nov 2015, 10:25 PM

HeSerpenty

Goood I am glad that you were engrossed!! That is what I hope for <33

We catch up with Shera (da girlfriend) in Chapter 3... but it IS rather odd that she didn't suffer the same fate. Curious and curiouser >___> lolol

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