Chapter 2.31-- Didn't Make It

posted 17th May 2014, 12:37 AM

Chapter 2.31-- Didn't Make It
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17th May 2014, 12:37 AM

HeSerpenty

Well FINALLY! Sheesh guys... sorry for another late update..after I said I wouldn't have those anymore. If only you knew what my last 2 weeks have been like T^T.

But anyways! Sometimes the hero doesn't get there in time..... poor human Jonathan. For knowledge sake... venom doesn't kill it's victims quickly (so no he's not dead in that bottom left panel). I'm sorry to all of ya who hoped Hizruk would make it in time!


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17th May 2014, 1:56 AM

Ephemeros

Ohhhwww even though I feel bad for the human I think it's good that Hizruk didn't make it from a character development point of view~ @u@ yessss Hizruk :D

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17th May 2014, 6:34 AM

HeSerpenty

This we agree on, my friend! :>
Besides I don't think Hizruk realizes how bad it would've ended for him had he made it into that crowd O.o

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17th May 2014, 3:14 AM

LeRenardRoux

D:

(Really good panels/action shots.)

*sob*

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17th May 2014, 6:34 AM

HeSerpenty

T^T

(hehe thanks! :D)

*offers you a tissue*

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17th May 2014, 4:55 AM

TheD-Wrek

Ow... poor human. Poor Hizruk... poor everybody... :/

But yeah, page looks amazing! Great work, Serpy! :D

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17th May 2014, 6:36 AM

HeSerpenty

Thanks D! Yea this is one of them.... sad pages XD. Everything is tragic..even the fact that Hizruk lessened Barron's chances at having children some day T^T

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17th May 2014, 10:27 AM

TheD-Wrek

I've said it before but I'll say it again... this page looks like several screen caps from an animated series. :)

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17th May 2014, 11:50 AM

HeSerpenty

AAaaah my friend I could NEVER tire of hearing that XD

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17th May 2014, 7:15 AM

Rinkel

N-nooooooooooooooooooo ;n;

Another gorgeous page, though, totally worth the wait :3

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17th May 2014, 8:34 AM

HeSerpenty

Thank ya Rinky!Makes it all worth while <:')

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17th May 2014, 8:44 AM

Alicia

I feel sorry for the human.

But Barron... Oh, man. Poor Barron. XD

Hizruk's sad face... SO SAD. T^T

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17th May 2014, 1:41 PM

HeSerpenty

LOl I know XDDD.... Ryder should've gotten the nut-shot :P

Yeeea he's pretty upset bout the whole thing T^T

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17th May 2014, 8:04 PM

ChaoticSlacker

^
this. absolutly.
so glad to see a new page...:)

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17th May 2014, 9:17 AM

Jarvi

At least that was fast.. or I hope that was and that he's not agonizing there :(

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17th May 2014, 1:42 PM

HeSerpenty

Heh, yea.... <.<'

Poor kiiid T^T

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17th May 2014, 11:12 AM

Calisa

His surprised face and his little sad faaaaace :'(

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17th May 2014, 1:43 PM

HeSerpenty

I knooooow poor disappointed, sad boyyyy QAQ

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17th May 2014, 12:34 PM

Proxy170

Really great coloring on this page! Especially where the serpent is opening it's mouth--looks like a frame from an animation!
Although I wish we could have seen a larger action panel of the actual attack. Though I suppose the focus is on Hizruk's reaction more so than the big attack.

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17th May 2014, 1:45 PM

HeSerpenty

Thank you very much!

And that's absolutely right hehe-- in fact this whole scene really is more for Hizruk than it is about anything else... Like Ephy said up there-- "character development" ;P. But yea a fuller shot woulda probably worked too!

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17th May 2014, 3:17 PM

Matt Knab

Gah, punch it right between the fangs! >:O Bad snake!

On the serious side, I'm really pleased you didn't take the easy way out. Gotta make things worse first, so that making them better later feels more real and satisfying.

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17th May 2014, 4:22 PM

HeSerpenty

Yea PUNCH them sharp teeth out!

Thank you ^_^! It really couldn't have happened any other way... Jonathan's fate was sealed since the prologue T^T

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17th May 2014, 7:59 PM

HapyCow

Oh noooo D: Merek's face kinda made me giggle. He's all "yeesh" well at least that's what I imagined him saying, haha. XD

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18th May 2014, 8:45 AM

HeSerpenty

I knoow!
Haha his face does pretty much look like that, don't it? XD

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19th May 2014, 3:55 AM

TAOMark

Oo, macabre. Great page.

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19th May 2014, 8:30 AM

HeSerpenty

Thank you! :D

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19th May 2014, 3:58 PM

Deducer1

Ohhh, tough way to go..

That red sets such an ominous mood - nice job

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19th May 2014, 9:49 PM

HeSerpenty

Thank you I hoped it would XD! The lighting change in the next coupla pages is gonna prove to be difficult heh

28th Aug 2014, 6:47 PM

Guest

He has a remarkably good condition for one having spent his entire life in prison.

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28th Aug 2014, 7:03 PM

HeSerpenty

Yep..he sure does! He's been up to a little more than just sittin in his cell :) (more on THAT story later ;D)

18th Oct 2014, 2:03 AM

Guesticus

Guess those snakes copied the hu-mans a little _too_ closely :P

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23rd Mar 2015, 10:56 AM

Ana Karenina

That's horrible!! D:
Poor guy, can't believe how happy he was before, that's so sad!!
Poor girl, now she's all alone! D:

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23rd Mar 2015, 11:17 AM

HeSerpenty

Lol yes I think it's all the more affecting when you read everything all at once--- the humans from the Prologue are still fresh in your mind!

It is horrible tho D':
I did feel kinda bad.. but this neeeeded to happen >__>;; XD

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