Chapter 8.43-- Good Morning

posted 9th May 2021, 12:22 PM

Chapter 8.43-- Good Morning

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view HeSerpenty's profile

9th May 2021, 12:22 PM

HeSerpenty

Aw seems like Hiz might have fallen asleep outside, waiting for Keymen to come back. He's a good boi....

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LOL well...Friday update didn't even last a week, but we'll get back x"D. Happy Mother's Day to all the mothers out there!

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view DLKmusic's profile

9th May 2021, 1:41 PM

DLKmusic

Possible responses to "What are you doing out here?"...
1. "My glasses! I can't seem to find my Glasses!"
2. "I thought we ran out of gas, and as soon as I got out of the car my date ditched me"
3. "Why shouldn't I be in my.. Hey wait, what happened to my room?"
4. "Where am I? Who are you? What's going on?"
5. "Uhm, none of your business!" wait, better not try that one again, it didn't work last time!
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all Joking aside, great page Serpy, and Happy Mother's Day to you too!!!

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view ShaRose49's profile

9th May 2021, 1:48 PM

ShaRose49

I love those responses lol X’D

I feel like maybe he was trying to keep an eye on Keymen to make sure he didn’t get backstabbed? Then again, that depends on where “out here” is.

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view DLKmusic's profile

9th May 2021, 2:48 PM

DLKmusic

@sharose49 I agree. based on the scenery in frames 2, 3 and 6, it looks like he's just outside the spire.
I'm hoping Hizzy tells Merrick that Keyman is inside patching up Kal though. that tidbid will come in useful

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view megados's profile

9th May 2021, 3:45 PM

megados

6. What a Night!

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10th May 2021, 4:39 PM

DLKmusic

@megados Brilliant!!! my only regret is that I didn't think of this first!!!!

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view Archangel Daniel's profile

9th May 2021, 4:06 PM

Archangel Daniel

7. "Waiting for someone to ask me that, obviously."

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view DLKmusic's profile

10th May 2021, 4:40 PM

DLKmusic

@archangel Daniel ROFL! OBVIOUSLY!!!!

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view HeSerpenty's profile

13th May 2021, 10:16 PM

HeSerpenty

Haha well dangit Don you should take over as writer of Serpents...these are all better than what I have planned! LOL

And thank you! I tried to make it nice for all the mothers in my life X"D

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view sigpig's profile

9th May 2021, 3:45 PM

sigpig

"I've been locked up in a dungeon for years, and I wanted to finally sleep in the great outdoors! Best sleep I've had in years!"

Next page - Hizzy starts to build his treehouse...

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view HeSerpenty's profile

13th May 2021, 10:18 PM

HeSerpenty

Haha you know that is a position Hizruk WOULD probably take. Afterall his first night of freedom he rolled around in the dirt and slept outside! X'D

(Oh man that'd probably be his dream house ...something to strive for! Lol)

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view megados's profile

9th May 2021, 3:53 PM

megados

Keymen pulls an all-nighter, and Hizzy crashes from waiting. Wondering if Keymen was able to salvage Kal. XD Kal owes Keymen big time!

Your outdoor scenes, man! :D I like the passing of time here. Nice job!

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view HeSerpenty's profile

13th May 2021, 10:21 PM

HeSerpenty

Lol that's a good point! Young whipper-snapper Hizzy couldn't hang... but Keymen's up there workin his butt off to save his enemy. Kids these days....

Thank you so much! I really prefer the outside scenes haha

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view Archangel Daniel's profile

9th May 2021, 4:01 PM

Archangel Daniel

Methinks Kalverick is never gonna hear the end of it.

As for a possible response to Merek: "Well, I was trying out this new dance where I grab my ears and dance around, and I guess I got carried away."

(For reference: where I'm from, a typical response to the question "what do I do" when it is asked with regard to a ridiculous or obvious situation, or when whoever is being asked the question is annoyed, is "grab your ears and dance")

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view HeSerpenty's profile

22nd May 2021, 6:33 PM

HeSerpenty

Haha you are right. Kal is in for it when he wakes up on a lot of fronts XD

LOL now that would be the most interesting response by far! (and that sounds awesome...now I am wondering where you are from! XD)

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view Alicia's profile

11th May 2021, 7:17 PM

Alicia

LOL Those responses...
I can't believe Merek doesn't know by now that to Hizruk, windows are doors and the ground outside is the bed. :P

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view HeSerpenty's profile

22nd May 2021, 6:33 PM

HeSerpenty

Haha Merek needs to get with it by now!

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view Proxy170's profile

27th Jun 2021, 7:36 AM

Proxy170

haha Keymen's face XD I know he was hoping they'd just let him be expendable lol

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view HeSerpenty's profile

27th Jun 2021, 1:32 PM

HeSerpenty

Haha he doesn't like that ol' raisin tellin him what to do! XD

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