Chapter 8.38-- Mistakes

posted 26th Mar 2021, 5:04 PM

Chapter 8.38-- Mistakes

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view HeSerpenty's profile

26th Mar 2021, 5:04 PM

HeSerpenty

Not lookin' good for you, Kal

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That stupid exterior shot was harder than I thought it would be lol....ah well. Aanyway.. I wanted to be back on Friday updates again! Been a rocky month for me but we'll get back on track!

Can you believe this chapters only like half over? Lolol

Anyway see you next week!

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view megados's profile

26th Mar 2021, 5:47 PM

megados

Hey! Friday update! ^5! :D

Kal Kal Kal, not looking too spiffy there Kal.

That outside view came out pretty good though! Kudos!

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view HeSerpenty's profile

27th Mar 2021, 9:27 AM

HeSerpenty

Thanks so much! Yeeea Kal has seen better days xD

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view ShaRose49's profile

26th Mar 2021, 7:05 PM

ShaRose49

Lovin’ that bricky texture and the shadow effects!

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view HeSerpenty's profile

27th Mar 2021, 9:27 AM

HeSerpenty

Thank yoou! <3

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view mersharr's profile

27th Mar 2021, 12:48 AM

mersharr

Well, it doesn't look like to bullet hit any vital organs, so we Keyman only has 3 possible causes of death to prevent
- blood loss
- sepsis due to faecal matter getting into the blood stream trough an injury of the gut
- lead poisoning from the bullet
That last one could be tricky if he doesn't know about guns and doesn't think to look for a bullet

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27th Mar 2021, 9:30 AM

HeSerpenty

Hehe exactly, exactly, and exactly! The good news is if there is anyone who MIGHT think to look for a bullet... it may just be the doctor who learned everything he knows from humans aaand spent a lot of time traveling their lands :3

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27th Mar 2021, 5:44 AM

DLKmusic

I was gonna mention that his Tattoo can double for a bullseye marker, but I promise I won't make any more fun of Kal while he's still barely alive, barely alive, ah ah ah ah barely alive.
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that "Stupid Exterior Shot" is what I had always imagined Act 1 Scene 1 in Hamlet to be. The only thing missing is a ghost! Bravo

PS to whoever said "We can't afford any more mistakes", Newsflash: You couldn't afford this one!

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27th Mar 2021, 9:33 AM

HeSerpenty

Naaaah it's okay you can totally still make fun of him! He deserves it! You're right about that mark...it totally would be a decent kill shot bullseye xD

Well thank you so much! Depending on what happens with Kal maybe there WILL be a ghost lolol

(that's true! they screwed up too much already lolol)

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28th Mar 2021, 12:09 AM

mersharr

The sternum may be one of the worst places to aim for with an early gunpowder weapon.
Well, without rifling you aren't likely to hit where you aim anyway, but if you hit the sternum, the bullet is more likely to get caught or even ricochet, than penetrate the bone. (Still gonna hurt like hell and possibly put the target out of commission for a while)
So yes, much like the yellow emblem on Batman's chest that bullseye might be to the wearer's benefit.

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27th Mar 2021, 12:04 PM

Archangel Daniel

OK, I have to give you props for the reference. No, seriously, that was good. Thumbs up from me :)

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view DLKmusic's profile

28th Mar 2021, 12:02 AM

DLKmusic

Lol, now I'm curious... which reference? Shakespeare, or the Bee Gees?

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view Archangel Daniel's profile

28th Mar 2021, 6:57 AM

Archangel Daniel

The Bee Gees. The setup for it was so beautiful.

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view DLKmusic's profile

28th Mar 2021, 8:02 AM

DLKmusic

LOL, did you see my post on This page? I actually butchered the entire song!

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view Archangel Daniel's profile

28th Mar 2021, 8:05 AM

Archangel Daniel

OK, you deserve a flippin' medal for that one!

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view sigpig's profile

27th Mar 2021, 8:29 AM

sigpig

Nothing phallic in that top panel, nothing at all... lol

Did Kal meet up with Zorro too?

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view HeSerpenty's profile

27th Mar 2021, 12:45 PM

HeSerpenty

Lol huh....weeell I guess if that's where someone's mind goes :'D
Mine sure doesn't lol x'D


Lol the Council Like "Z's" too! "Z" for Zedrahen Serpent Nation xDDD haha. Ah we'll learn more about it later :P

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27th Mar 2021, 12:13 PM

Archangel Daniel

I can only imagine what chaos is gonna erupt when and if they realize that it was a crazy human weapon that did this.

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view HeSerpenty's profile

27th Mar 2021, 1:30 PM

HeSerpenty

I know, right? Anxiety levels prolly gonna rise exponentially!

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view Slim Kittens's profile

27th Mar 2021, 10:16 PM

Slim Kittens

Keymen: "Hand me that scalpel and sutures."
*humming*
"oops."

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28th Mar 2021, 12:01 AM

DLKmusic

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view megados's profile

29th Mar 2021, 5:03 AM

megados

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view HeSerpenty's profile

29th Mar 2021, 10:57 AM

HeSerpenty

LOL.. yeea. Medical mishaps happen all the time X"D >__>

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4th Apr 2021, 5:11 AM

Alicia

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view zartala's profile

2nd Apr 2021, 12:03 PM

zartala

Hi! Had a dream the other night that your comic had been turned into a movie with AMAZING animations. I think that's a testiment to how engaging your story is and the power of what you're drawing! :)

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2nd Apr 2021, 2:15 PM

HeSerpenty

Awww wow Zartala you very much made my day by sharing this with me! First of all it's really good to see you around here again <3.....secondly..that means so much! Every once in a while I need that extra boost of encouragement and you hit me right at the perfect time <3...thank you so much!

I really hope you are doing well with all these crazy times lately! <3

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4th Apr 2021, 11:58 AM

TRMcLeod

Oh oh. Ritual sacrifice?

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view HeSerpenty's profile

5th Apr 2021, 3:53 PM

HeSerpenty

Lol..not a bad idea!

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