Chapter 8.34-- So Many Places

posted 15th Feb 2021, 1:42 PM

Chapter 8.34-- So Many Places

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15th Feb 2021, 1:42 PM

HeSerpenty

Of coourse Keymen wants to hear aaall about how Hizruk threw Merlock outta the house last night XDD.

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WHOOPS didn't mean to be so late, sorry guys. I have a lot of excuses...won't bore you with them. Originally that first panel was gonna be a lazy exterior shot of Keymen's stupidly rectangular house buuut...then I stupidly thought "Well an interior shot fits the vibe more"....and..I hate interior shots -_-

Anyway!! See you guys next weeeek! :3

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15th Feb 2021, 1:45 PM

MightyWizard19

It's a lovely interior shot though! Love it :D

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15th Feb 2021, 2:06 PM

HeSerpenty

Success then! Hehe thanks so much! <3

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15th Feb 2021, 2:32 PM

The Accidental Ninja

Hiz bonding with Keymen is like my favourite thing <3
(actually, Hiz bonding with anybody is my favourite thing)

That is a very nice-looking interior shot, I'm kinda jealous hahaha (I love the old-style oven!)

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15th Feb 2021, 2:46 PM

ShaRose49

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16th Feb 2021, 10:58 AM

HeSerpenty

Hehe that makes me glad to hear! I've always loved their relationship so I'm excited to finally get to develop it in the comic!

And thanks so much! I worked really hard on it x"D

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15th Feb 2021, 2:47 PM

ShaRose49

That interior shot is amazing and looks really hard (◎ー◎;)

Why does Hizruk’s hair look so silky here? He should be in a shampoo commercial

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16th Feb 2021, 10:59 AM

HeSerpenty

Thank yoou! It was lolol...it's the only reason the page was as late as it was X"D. One day I just gotta hunker down and draw places like Key's house that will be used a lot very detailed from every angle so I can just copy and paste it in the comic LOL

LOL that gives me a pretty good idea for silly pictures to draw XDD

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15th Feb 2021, 5:50 PM

megados

Well, like everyone already said, that's a Great (and nicely detailed) interior shot! I also like how Keymen and Hizzy are getting along. Makes me wonder how Keymen and Higo would get along. Hmm.

Additionally the new title banner looks cool too!

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17th Feb 2021, 9:53 PM

HeSerpenty

THank you very much! Lol yeeea probably not as well, I don't think X"D

And thanks! Been a while since I had a new banner haha

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15th Feb 2021, 6:02 PM

Archangel Daniel

I... I...

*comeonyoucandoitdon'tgofulljealousmodeyouca...*That interior shot is awesome, I want to be able to draw interiors like that!!!

...OK, now that I got that out of the way, it feels like Keymen is about to tell a story. Or am I wrong? Maybe he already told a story?

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17th Feb 2021, 9:58 PM

HeSerpenty

LOL! THankyousomuchthatmeanslottomeeee! <3333

Weell he does have LOTS of stories he can tell that's for sure! A few years ago I was pretty set on doing a whole other comic just based on his travels.....buuuut I just don't have it in me anymore ^_^;;

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15th Feb 2021, 8:35 PM

Slim Kittens

How many weeks did it take to draw panel 1?

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17th Feb 2021, 9:59 PM

HeSerpenty

Lol! Couple days X"DD
But thank you so much! :3

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view Alicia's profile

15th Feb 2021, 9:18 PM

Alicia

Oooh yes! That interior shot IS nice! <3

Anybody would bond over beating up Merlock. In fact, that's how most friendships start, I hear. LOL

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16th Feb 2021, 12:04 AM

DLKmusic

I was gonna make a crack about no socks on the floor, but I then I thought you might take it seriously! or maybe think I have socks scattered on MY floor

For the record, I do not have any socks on the floor... as a matter of fact, I have know idea at all where my socks are but they aren't on the floor!!!

Great page Serpy, and the paper dangling off the edge of the table was a nice touch!

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16th Feb 2021, 10:06 AM

sigpig

Your clothes dryer ate them, you silly man... lol

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17th Feb 2021, 10:01 PM

HeSerpenty

Lol Don... PUT YOUR SOCKS WHERE THEY BELONG MAN! In the hamper or in the drawer, sir! Lolol :P

Thanks so much! Haha it adds some character, no? XD

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16th Feb 2021, 10:07 AM

sigpig

That perspective of the bricks under the bed tho...

Just a thought, but wouldn't Keyman and Hizzy be the "serpents of the NEW Nature"?

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16th Feb 2021, 6:20 PM

megados

Eh, the mattress is just sliding off. XD

(who knows what goes on in there?) LOL

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17th Feb 2021, 10:03 PM

HeSerpenty

Lol weeell....perspective is hard X"D...I don't give myself enough time to do these things every week :P

Hehe well Keymen CERTAINLY! Hizruk is kinda caught between the old and the new ...kinda like the new banner illustrates! ^_^

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16th Feb 2021, 1:57 PM

:)

I agree, an interior shot here is better than an outer shot:
An outer shot is good for first time at location, or when the scene is actually on the outside. In any case there should be variation, not always very similar shots for the same location.
Also placing inside talk on an outside shot is always a bit distracting.
Finally the flow is better with the discussion crossing meaningless hard changes of color set etc. And this shot sets the scene better: Warm, homely inside instead of cold, non-personal outside.

... and messy protagonists are a wonderful excuse to ignore my own mess :)

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16th Feb 2021, 2:01 PM

:)

... although, not really any mess here. Oh no! I have to tidy up! :)

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17th Feb 2021, 10:34 PM

HeSerpenty

Yesss that's what I ended up thinking haha.... it would've been too distracting for sure. I think this was the right choice eeeven tho interiors take me the longest lolol

Haha Keymen can't be bothered to put ALL his things away all the time!

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16th Feb 2021, 4:42 PM

Jylani

Just an appreciation post that Hizruk has continued to have an injured shoulder, and it didn't just poof the instant it was off scene. Drives me nuts when characters are all magically healed from their injuries next time you see them.

Also that Keymen eye in the last panel, and them lashes <3 XD

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17th Feb 2021, 10:41 PM

HeSerpenty

Haha yea I know what you mean! It's funny what's taken several years in real life time has only been a few days in comic time X"D

His eyes are his finest feature some may say <3

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17th Feb 2021, 5:50 PM

MST3KFan

I'm jealous of your backgrounds. I have to get around to creating (or commissioning) some backgrounds I can post behind my characters here at some point.

But onto the comic page...Keyman has been EV-ERY-WHERRRRRRRRRRE....

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19th Feb 2021, 5:15 PM

HeSerpenty

Thanks so much man! Yesss I've been meaning for a long time to create a detailed image of the common place BGs to spare myself all the time it takes, but....it seems I can't get myself motivated to do it without a deadline X"D

Haha I started hearing that Johnny Cash song XD

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