Chapter 8.20-- Been Spotted

posted 17th Oct 2020, 1:40 PM

Chapter 8.20-- Been Spotted

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17th Oct 2020, 1:40 PM

HeSerpenty

Uhh ohhh-- who could it be??

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17th Oct 2020, 1:58 PM

The Accidental Ninja

welp :T this will probably either go badly, or even more badly

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view ShaRose49's profile

17th Oct 2020, 3:39 PM

ShaRose49

...Yes. O - O

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view HeSerpenty's profile

19th Oct 2020, 12:56 AM

HeSerpenty

Or perhaps even worse than that!

lolol jk jk :3---we shall seeeeee!

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view MST3KFan's profile

17th Oct 2020, 2:30 PM

MST3KFan

*plays the alarm music from Metal Gear Solid*

Snake? Snake? SNAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAKE!!!!!

Maybe they can still run off if the person (or persons) aren't on horseback or something.

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view HeSerpenty's profile

19th Oct 2020, 12:56 AM

HeSerpenty

LOL!

Maybeee! Horse vs Lacor...wonder which one is faster!

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view DLKmusic's profile

17th Oct 2020, 3:17 PM

DLKmusic

Kewl page Serpy! Seems Barron has put on his big boy pants! (and he's absolutely making the right call too!)

Who is it? I got 3 guesses and I think only one of them would end well, Trak.

2nd Guess is Shara and Company, not a good thought.

3rd Guess is Hellgiah, and that one could go either way, but if it goes badly, will go REALLY badly!

Sooo... is it time to break out the popcorn?

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19th Oct 2020, 12:57 AM

HeSerpenty

Haha Barron has to get serious sometimes! Merek knew what he was doing putting him in charge <3

Hehe those are all such good guesses! You'll find out mmmm...in a few days! :D lolol

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view Mango Cat's profile

17th Oct 2020, 3:54 PM

Mango Cat

I just read this whole entire comic just now. I like it, good job! :3
Looking forward to seeing more.

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view DLKmusic's profile

18th Oct 2020, 2:12 PM

DLKmusic

welcome to the fan club, Mango Cat! Have some popcorn!

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view HeSerpenty's profile

19th Oct 2020, 12:58 AM

HeSerpenty

Ohhh thank you so much, I really appreciate that! I hope you will continue to enjoy the rest of the story! :3

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view Alicia's profile

17th Oct 2020, 5:20 PM

Alicia

That look Barron has... "What now?" X'D Not having a good day, me thinks. Hopefully it doesn't go from "not a good day" to "an even worse day." :'D

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view HeSerpenty's profile

24th Oct 2020, 9:59 AM

HeSerpenty

Lol one thing after another! You know how we like to torture our characters we like the most, right? >_> :P

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view megados's profile

17th Oct 2020, 5:57 PM

megados

Barron is acting properly here, I think. However nice it would be to go adventuring, they have to carry out their task. Merek was right to put Barron in charge.

As far as my guess, goes, I'm going with Higo too. He was just with Kal telling him he wasn't worth the effort.

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24th Oct 2020, 10:01 AM

HeSerpenty

Yess exactly! He's one of the less reckless and more thoughtful Umbras---really the best choice for this sorta mission X"D. Well unless they have to kill someone >_>....Barron would struggle with that order.

Hehe good guess! We'll find out sooooon :3

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18th Oct 2020, 12:37 PM

sigpig

When on a long-range reconnaissance patrol, it is a standard practice to employ what is known as "noise discipline". This means that you avoid weapons and equipment rattling around, you watch where you step to avoid dry leaves and twigs, and, most importantly, speak in whispers.
You do NOT raise your voice as you argue with your patrol commander.

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24th Oct 2020, 10:03 AM

HeSerpenty

Yess excellent point! I'm sure Mylon will be reprimanded later..... depending especially on how this goes and who they've spotted X"D. Heck that's probably WHY they were spotted.

This situation has certainly gotten a little out of control!

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24th Oct 2020, 11:05 AM

sigpig

Looking back at this, I remembered that they are CIVIL UMBRA troops, not FRONTIER(?) troops, meaning a sort of police force, IIRC.
Police in an urban (ie: civil) environment are generally NOT trained in bushcraft and stealth. What I mean by "bushcraft" is not knowing how to make a fire and live in a tent (in the SoO universe, these skills would be common knowledge for everyone. I am talking about how to move in the woods noiselessly, among other skills that modern Infantry use. I know this by virtue of my many years of military exercises in the woods... lol

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view HeSerpenty's profile

25th Oct 2020, 12:43 AM

HeSerpenty

I love hearing your perspective with that military experience! :3

And that's absolutely true! Someone had made the comment earlier about how their uniforms are kinda not "stealth friendly" haha and that is because they aren't supposed to be. They're SUPPOSED to stand out and be seen by the public haha

Sooo yea...Love your thoughts! :3

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view Slim Kittens's profile

18th Oct 2020, 8:42 PM

Slim Kittens

Go ahead and follow the tracks. I'm sure Kalverick can crawl the rest of the way to the hospital.

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view HeSerpenty's profile

24th Oct 2020, 10:04 AM

HeSerpenty

LOL

Alas....he already tried that and now look at him! XDD

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view Proxy170's profile

23rd Oct 2020, 5:48 PM

Proxy170

Awwwww SHIT. This team doesn't seem like the kind to ensure no one's left alive to tell the tale, so they better hope it's not a reliable witness O.O

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24th Oct 2020, 10:04 AM

HeSerpenty

Ikr? Can you imagine sweet, nice-guy Barron doin' that? Obviously he must have it in him tho if Merek would trust him with this X"D. But...still!

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