Interlude 5.1-- Morning Chill

posted 22nd Mar 2020, 2:51 PM

Interlude 5.1-- Morning Chill
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view HeSerpenty's profile

22nd Mar 2020, 2:51 PM

HeSerpenty

If there is one thing I hope this page can convey is just the silence of the forest on this cold misty morning.....the only sounds is the soft drip from the storm the night before falling off the branches and the mysterious footsteps whispering through the trees.

Also Kal's misery...I hope that is conveyed as well :P

Who do these mysterious footsteps belong to? Who is about to stumble across Kalverick in these lonely woods?

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It's nice to be back! Hope you guys are staying healthy <3


view Proxy170's profile

22nd Mar 2020, 3:00 PM

Proxy170

Why do I have a horrible feeling those are human feet, not serpent feet?? D:

view HeSerpenty's profile

22nd Mar 2020, 10:45 PM

HeSerpenty

Hehe we shall seeee! Maybe it'll surprise ya! ;D

view sigpig's profile

23rd Mar 2020, 11:01 AM

sigpig

Well, Keyman usually travels via wagon, so it shouldn't be him...

view HeSerpenty's profile

23rd Mar 2020, 11:42 AM

HeSerpenty

Haha very true! It's probably not him! X)

view megados's profile

22nd Mar 2020, 3:08 PM

megados

In answer to your questions, yes the mood is captured!

I've walked through woods when it's foggy and wet, and the fog deadens the sound, and the chill goes right to your bones. Luckily I didn't run across any injured people. Kal's in a bad way, and it looks like it's either gonna get better or worse in a short time!

So far, we're OK here, and hoping you are too!

view HeSerpenty's profile

23rd Mar 2020, 7:10 AM

HeSerpenty

YAY! Lolol I happen to love walking through a misty forest, but yea..finding an injured person would not be good X"D. BEING the injured person is much worse!

And I am doing great! Getting really sick of everything if you know what I mean but...quarantine life really isn't much different than my normal life (which is depressing in of itself XD)

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22nd Mar 2020, 3:27 PM

Alicia

Ah! Get up, Kal! Ugh, WHY AM I CHEERING FOR YOU?! Serpy, what did you do to make me like him and feel bad for him? X'D

view Proxy170's profile

22nd Mar 2020, 6:41 PM

Proxy170

Yesss join the Kal fan club! >:D

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23rd Mar 2020, 8:18 AM

HeSerpenty

HAHA proxy you are too much! :3

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23rd Mar 2020, 8:16 AM

HeSerpenty

LOL I don't know how it happened he hasn't done anything to redeem himself by any means! X"D

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22nd Mar 2020, 3:42 PM

Microraptor

My guess: The mysterious feet guy is Santa Claus.

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29th Mar 2020, 7:50 PM

HeSerpenty

LOL that is a very good guess ( I don't know how I missed this comment X"D)

view ShaRose49's profile

22nd Mar 2020, 4:07 PM

ShaRose49

Oh I thought that was Kalverick! Sorry I’m having a little trouble keeping track of all the bad guys/umbras and such, I’ve been reading this for a long time and I’m bad with faces XD

That does not look like a nice road to walk on what with all that mud

view HeSerpenty's profile

23rd Mar 2020, 8:19 AM

HeSerpenty

Haha well the one lying there IS Kalverick you're right! Unless you thought the footsteps were coming from Kal?

Maybe I worded things funny somehow lolol

view ShaRose49's profile

23rd Mar 2020, 9:34 AM

ShaRose49

Don’t worry, my first thought was that Kalverick was lying there, I just needed to confirm that, thanks!

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22nd Mar 2020, 4:58 PM

DLKmusic

It is probably very un-christian of me to say this, but... I don't think he looks miserable enough!! Maybe the guy walking along the road can kick him in his wounds a couple of times.

Sigh, no... I'm guessing that it's a human, and he's gonna take Kal in and heal him up, and then die horribly as a reward for the kindness he showed...

Can we go back to a kick in the wound? please?

I will say though that if I'm way off base with this guess, I would be pretty ok with that!

p.s. great ambiance, and yes, very eiree

view HeSerpenty's profile

23rd Mar 2020, 8:22 AM

HeSerpenty

Hhahaha well you're right that WOULD be unchristian LOL! But...since this is a fictional character and all I think you're good :D--- hate him all you want!

Haha it might surprise people who this turns out to be BUT THATS ALL I'M GONNA SAY!

Thanks so much!! <3

view alston123's profile

23rd Mar 2020, 6:02 PM

alston123

Aw, poor guy. Yes, I can definitely see his misery, Serps. :)

I’m a sub, so I’m stuck at home. Drawing and reading comics is my life now.

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29th Mar 2020, 7:50 PM

HeSerpenty

Haha the one time I'm glad you see a character looking miserable! XD

Aw well...looking forward to seeing more Cardinal Traits soon then?? Hehe <3

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23rd Mar 2020, 6:14 PM

MST3KFan

I'm gonna assume it's someone maybe to check up on Kal's progress, and if he failed...finish the job?

OR...a human soldier out patrolling...

view HeSerpenty's profile

29th Mar 2020, 7:52 PM

HeSerpenty

Ohhh maaaybeeee ;D

The latter would NOT be good for Kal...then again this could be worse >_>

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26th Mar 2020, 4:22 PM

The Accidental Ninja

Oh, man, I can just feel how cold and damp the air is just from looking at the page!
(Those are some very nicely-drawn feet, by the way!)
Hmmm I wonder what is going to befall the Kal-man....

view HeSerpenty's profile

29th Mar 2020, 7:53 PM

HeSerpenty

Yayy thank you so much!
LOL honestly the feet were the part I was most proud of..isn't that sad?? X"D

We shall see!

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30th Mar 2020, 3:08 PM

The Accidental Ninja

Not at all xD Feet are hard. You should be proud of it!

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6th Apr 2020, 11:18 PM

NiaNook

This page definitely feels very damp and cold. The seizing dread... hnng

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