Chapter 7.44-- No More Abuse

posted 22nd Feb 2020, 9:32 AM

Chapter 7.44-- No More Abuse

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22nd Feb 2020, 9:32 AM

HeSerpenty

Well Merlock I don't think you ought to challenge him on this :'D
There's a new Hizruk in town >__>


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WOO it's nice to be back! Last week was crazy but I am lookin forward to updating again.

Thank you for all the wonderful incentive ideas! I actually had plans for one that kinda combined a few of them together, but alas....I didn't finish it on time. So I'll have it next week!

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view ShaRose49's profile

22nd Feb 2020, 10:00 AM

ShaRose49

Bruh this Hizruk you better not mess with—those eyes yikes dey are gone

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view HeSerpenty's profile

23rd Feb 2020, 12:31 AM

HeSerpenty

LOL!! When you don't see dem eyes you wanna be runnin' away xDDD

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view Proxy170's profile

22nd Feb 2020, 10:10 AM

Proxy170

Oooh I LOVE Hizruk's look on this page!!! I'm kinda tossed though on whether I want him stopped or not...I feel like it's already gone too far, he'll just get reported, so...might as well finish the job? >.> lol

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view HeSerpenty's profile

23rd Feb 2020, 12:32 AM

HeSerpenty

Ohoho look at you Proxy! Siding with LESS restraint this time! Very interesting indeed hehe :3

I mean like..Merlock deserves this for sure tho haha

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view TheD-Wrek's profile

22nd Feb 2020, 10:26 AM

TheD-Wrek

Everyone while reading this page right until mum calls him off... XD

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view HeSerpenty's profile

23rd Feb 2020, 12:33 AM

HeSerpenty

LOL! Anti climactic! Thanks a lot Gwynn..

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view MST3KFan's profile

22nd Feb 2020, 10:35 AM

MST3KFan

See this is one of those decisions that could go bad either way you decide.

If you did kill him, it'd be probably seen in a negative light by the ruling council...but by letting him go, he can still pose a problem for Hizzy and gang.

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view HeSerpenty's profile

23rd Feb 2020, 9:56 AM

HeSerpenty

Heh that's true! The third decision to just sit back and let things stay the way they've always been...maybe the least consequential buuuut..probably the least palatible. Hopefully the fact that it's Merlock and nobody really cares about him will help out XDD

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view DLKmusic's profile

22nd Feb 2020, 11:24 AM

DLKmusic

I have three reactions to Hizzy in this one!

Civilized Don: "YIKES!!!!"

Inner Irish Don: "Yeah, baby, beat his arse!!!"

oh.. and inner 12 year old Don: "Fight! Fight! Fight!...MAAAAA, you ruin Eeeeevrything!"

Normally I tell you the page is awesome... Today is different... WOW!
I especially love how he switched back on a dime when Gwynn said something, and the "Holy Canole" look on Tia's face...

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view HeSerpenty's profile

23rd Feb 2020, 9:58 AM

HeSerpenty

Haha it's nice to see Merlock get what's comin' to him huh!

And thank you so much! I guess because he's completely sound of mind while he's doing it, not having an emotional burst, he can come right back out of it. That meeting with Higo did a lot to empower our confused little friend. X"D

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23rd Feb 2020, 2:28 PM

DLKmusic

Go back to your room, 12 year old Don, and one more word? No supper!

Thanks for encouraging him, Serpy, Thanks a lot...

(LOL, I just saw the teasers for the new Joker with Jaquin Phoenix, and maybe i should rethink cracking jokes about voices in my head... *shudder*)

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view Vivocateur's profile

22nd Feb 2020, 12:07 PM

Vivocateur

Great page! Very intense! I can only hope that Merlock doesn’t go running to the council...
One thing’s for sure though; he won’t be trying anything like that with Hizruk around.

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view HeSerpenty's profile

23rd Feb 2020, 10:01 AM

HeSerpenty

That's right! Now he sees a taste of what Hizruk is capable of, I don't think he'll be coming around to cause any troubles. At least not..alone X"D

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view megados's profile

22nd Feb 2020, 12:21 PM

megados

I think this is perfect! Merlock realized he was done for, and Gwynn calling Hizzy off, sends an unspoken message: Merlock you're SO lucky she stopped him. Will be learn anything from it? Who knows, but the lesson is decidedly there. Merlock, do NOT miss this message!

Hizzy in the main panel! Yes, Merlock, you'd likely be toast.

Hizzy is getting smarter too! He stopped, and that's good; I don't want to see him in a huge bind over it. Gwynn's right; he's not worth it

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view HeSerpenty's profile

23rd Feb 2020, 10:04 AM

HeSerpenty

Yes he is! Haha this isn't some half baked plan of his to attack Merlock like this. I mean it's spontaneous sure but he knows exactly what he is doing. Like I mentioned in one of the other replies, thats why he can come out of it so easily.

But yeeea I think Merlock is gettin the message alright! Haha

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view Rulerbrain's profile

22nd Feb 2020, 4:59 PM

Rulerbrain

I mean, who would know really? Maybe Merlock just got drunk one night and mysteriously vanished into the woods :D

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view HeSerpenty's profile

23rd Feb 2020, 10:20 AM

HeSerpenty

LOL! I like where you're going with this! xD

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view Alicia's profile

23rd Feb 2020, 3:47 PM

Alicia

That's right, Hizruk. Scare the crap outta him so he'll run away and won't dare come back.

...That is the plan, right? >_>;

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27th Feb 2020, 9:49 PM

jon12

"You are so unbearably naive".

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view HeSerpenty's profile

27th Feb 2020, 11:13 PM

HeSerpenty

Ohhh yea..that's DEFINITELY the plan and it will DEFINITELY work x"D >___>

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view alston123's profile

28th Feb 2020, 2:24 PM

alston123

He really isn't worth it. I hope Hizruk sees that.

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29th Feb 2020, 8:06 PM

jon12

It depends on if there is a local meat market.

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view NiaNook's profile

6th Apr 2020, 11:52 PM

NiaNook

(It took me this long to realize Merlock and Merek have the same eyebrows)

Flashing back to Hellgiah saying "Wake up" to Hizruk... well, I think it worked! Dems eyes is scurry

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view HeSerpenty's profile

7th Apr 2020, 1:33 PM

HeSerpenty

HAHA oh no I won't tell Merek you said that cuz he'll probably want to save them off!

Hehe it would seem his latest conversation with Hellgiah has indeed "woken up" a certain part of himself. Something tells me Hizzy has reached a new level! He's growing up! X"D

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8th Apr 2020, 12:22 AM

NiaNook

(lololol)

As long as Hellgiah didn't implant some evil-brainwashing mechanism in Hizruk, our boy just did a good thing and made Hizruk... more heroic??? At least, this sure seems like a good thing.

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