Chapter 7.26-- Potential

posted 2nd Aug 2019, 3:33 PM

Chapter 7.26-- Potential

average rating: 5

Please vote on TWC for an important look into Keymen's past!

post a comment
author comments
view HeSerpenty's profile

2nd Aug 2019, 3:33 PM

HeSerpenty

Awww Higo is such a nice...Oohh nevermind x"D

"Wake up" are two words that have been used to trigger Hizruk's other "personality" a few times in the story already if you remember!

Also this hints at something interesting perhaps? That Hizruk maybe isn't so ignorant of that other side to himself as he seems to imply >_>

-----

WELL now I do apologize for the unexpected week off! I was doing everything but relaxing, I can assure you X"D...and would've much rather been doing the page!

ANYwho! Hay if any of you guys have a Facebook and are curious about what I'm up to I post all my commissions on my Facebook Art page! I also post all my art in general to my DeviantArt...so I'll drop a couple links if you feel like checking them out!

HeHu Art and Design Facebook
My DeviantArt

end of message
user comments
view DLKmusic's profile

2nd Aug 2019, 4:14 PM

DLKmusic

If he just knocked Hizzy unconscious, He just did Hizzy a huge favor! being unconscious in a cave is a lot easier to explain than brooding alone in one! that potentially leads straight to under the dungeon... while a Hellgiah link is being investigated... by his uncle...

yeah.... Hizzy's gonna pay hell either way...

end of message
view HeSerpenty's profile

3rd Aug 2019, 8:53 AM

HeSerpenty

Haha this is very true! All of it is true haha...not gonna be very easy to explain all of this! LOL

end of message
view DLKmusic's profile

3rd Aug 2019, 10:24 AM

DLKmusic

Actually, this might actually help Merrick!

We saw Hizzy get whopped upside the head repeatedly by Sharra with a treebranch the size of a baseball bat, and the only effect it had on him was "What the heck was that for?"

(to be honest, I think when she spit on him the following page, it probably hurt more!)

After all the time in the dungeon, the council HAS to be keenly aware of how much punishment Hizzy can take. For something or someone to be able to knock him out cold has GOT to be a frightening thought.

end of message
view megados's profile

2nd Aug 2019, 5:19 PM

megados

There's more to Hizruk than meets the eye, and Higo knows what it is. I think Hizzy has some repressed or hidden memory, and Higo wants to bring it out. 'Wake Up' alludes to that, I think. I could be wayyyy off though. XD

Higo, that was kind of a jerk move, just so you know. Needed? Maybe. But a jerk move nonetheless.

You did mention that your updates might be more sporadic, so it wasn't entirely unexpected. This is an interesting page, and kind of a cliffhanger, as it gives just enough, and leaves us thinking. :D

end of message
view HeSerpenty's profile

3rd Aug 2019, 8:55 AM

HeSerpenty

Haha that's a pretty good analysis! I wouldn't say you're way off at all haha. No one can understand Hizruk's situation better than Higo for multiple reasons :3.

LOL buuut yeeea that wasn't very nice XD. Higo probably knows Hiz will screw everything up if he's conscious haha...but still. so much for that tender moment!

Hehe I like to make you guys interested in coming back when I can help it! XD

end of message
view megados's profile

3rd Aug 2019, 7:34 PM

megados

Well I took a look at your Facebook link, and saw a lot of cool stuff on there :D (anyone who hasn't looked oughta check it out)

Something piqued my interest: it is the artwork from which your avatar came. (The whole thing is cool). It gives me a thought as to something here. A connection . . . ;)

*edit: Nice new banner in the subscription list! ;)

end of message
view HeSerpenty's profile

5th Aug 2019, 8:45 AM

HeSerpenty

Haay thanks for checking out the FB page! Haha if every my page is late...my Art and Design page will likely give away the reason. I only post my commission art there :3

Except that snakey you noticed haha. Curious to hear what connections you have! ;D

And thank you!

end of message
view megados's profile

5th Aug 2019, 10:19 AM

megados

Hmm, well let's see if I can speak to your curiosity with a cryptic phrase.
"Two sides of one coin"

:D

end of message
view MST3KFan's profile

2nd Aug 2019, 5:32 PM

MST3KFan

Aaaaand he suddenly kills Hizruk.

THE END

...Well, we assume not anyway. O_O

end of message
view HeSerpenty's profile

3rd Aug 2019, 8:56 AM

HeSerpenty

Twist ending no one saw coming! A writing MASTERPIECE XD

end of message
view ShaRose49's profile

2nd Aug 2019, 11:34 PM

ShaRose49

It was so tender, and nuanced, and then—!!

I did not see that coming. You and Nia having a who-can-make-the-better-cliffhanger-page contest? Lol

end of message
view HeSerpenty's profile

3rd Aug 2019, 8:57 AM

HeSerpenty

Haha gotta keep ya guessing!

Lol yes it would seem so... Nia and I are in the throws of a very intense cliffhanger competition! Jk Jk haha but thanks for reminding me that I need to get my butt over there and catch up on BB! :p

end of message
view TheD-Wrek's profile

3rd Aug 2019, 10:58 AM

TheD-Wrek

Aw. He's kinda charming... in that totally evil kinda way. :')

P.S. - Please add "The easy way"to your final panel. Thank you. :3

end of message
view HeSerpenty's profile

3rd Aug 2019, 4:27 PM

HeSerpenty

Hahaha I think that line wouldn't quite go with this sequence x"D

But I see what you mean :P lolol

end of message
view The Accidental Ninja's profile

3rd Aug 2019, 12:48 PM

The Accidental Ninja

H E Y
back off from our bean
*growls* cough cough *ahem* don't worry about the week off, life happens! hope this week goes well for you :D

end of message
view HeSerpenty's profile

3rd Aug 2019, 4:27 PM

HeSerpenty

Poor Hiz he really shoulda seen that coming! X"D

Aw thanks so much!

end of message
view princess_lom's profile

3rd Aug 2019, 3:25 PM

princess_lom

Hellgiah can bang me xD I meant I won't mind if he touch me like he did to Hizu-san

end of message
view HeSerpenty's profile

3rd Aug 2019, 4:28 PM

HeSerpenty

L.O.L!! Careful what you wish for hahaha!

end of message
view alston123's profile

4th Aug 2019, 4:40 PM

alston123

Aaaaaand I’m caught up. I spent the last two days reading from chapter 3 to chapter 7, lol. I was really behind. This story is soooo gooood! I can’t believe that you came up with all of this. I have so many questions about Hizruk and Higo and Hizzy’s grandfather and Keymen and Merek and how the serpent society started and, well, pretty much everything, but I may pm you some time and I hope we can discuss it.

As far as the art goes:
Your backgrounds are bomb! Those bricks! :0
I also love the way you color hair. It’s always beautifully textured. It has a lot of dimension to it.
And these serpent forms are fiiiiiiiiiiiiiiire!!!! (Btw, are serpent babies born as serpents or looking more human? And how were the serpent people able to transform into something more humanoid? And why don’t the serpent people just live as serpents since no one can bother them inside the walls? Why do they still have to be humanoids?)

I’m just super proud of you, Serpy. You deserve every good thing. You are honestly one of the kindest people I have ever met on the internet. You respond to every comment (I don’t even comment on art and comics any more if the people don’t respond. There’s no point.) I have never seen a comment or post from you when you were anything less than kind, openhearted, accepting, and positive.

I can really see your artistic growth lately, in general. Those pet portraits are ridiculous, seriously! Amazing art!!

And lastly, because I’m rambling, thank you so much for making me feel like a part of the cf family. You’ve always been so supportive, and life got busy for me, and I couldn’t keep up with any of the webcomics on cf anymore, but I had to catch up with you and Alicia. Y’all are amazing!

Keep up the good work. I am always in your corner. ;)

end of message
view HeSerpenty's profile

4th Aug 2019, 7:53 PM

HeSerpenty

Oh man Alston...I don't know what's up with me lately lolol I get emotional so easy, but this comment put tears in my eyes <:'). Haha I can tell you the feeling is absolutely mutual! Since the first day you decided to give Serpents a read you've been a constant source of positive encouragement ...and it's been so amazing to be a part of your journey too! You compliment my pet portraits but dude your people portraits are so dang good! (seriously could probably be successful on Etsy since you're really good at traditional work and there's a big market for that :3)

I feel like switching to the smaller page size helped my art out exponentially haha...because now that I don't have so MUCH I have to get done within a week, I can focus a little more on actually improving. It seems to have worked! I should've taken that advice a long time ago haha.

Haha I'm REAL excited to get to some more answers for all these crazy questions. I kinda designed the story for you to figure things out as HIzruk does. Unfortunately for you guys Hizruk knows nothing! LOL so you have quite the journey! X"D. Hehe I'd be HAPPY to discuss it with u! Long as it isn't too spoilery heheh ;D.

And to answer your question about Serpent babies... it's actually a great questions! So when a serpent woman gets pregnant she basically has the first 3 months to decide whether she wants to have the baby in human or serpent form. whichever form she chooses (most of them pick human form nowadays since serpent forms are kinda not encouraged X"D) is the form the baby is born. A serpent form baby is a lot more independent right away...whereas a human form baby is kind of helpless like human babies are...but even still not AS much as a regular human.

WOW okay now I'm rambling haha. You got me started! Yes I put waay too much thought into all this x"D. Thanks again so much for your encouraging words! You truly made my day!!

end of message
view Alicia's profile

8th Aug 2019, 1:04 PM

Alicia

What the-- I thought I commented on this page before but it must not have posted? x_x Oops!

Haha the last thing Hizruk needs is some head trauma! But I wonder what plans Higo has for him now? :o If he's trying to trigger that other side of him or...? EITHER WAY I'M INTRIGUED!

PS: Also, alston, thank you for those kind words! :'3

end of message
view HeSerpenty's profile

11th Aug 2019, 2:50 PM

HeSerpenty

SHAME ON YOU BUDDY! I can accept such an error by anyone else but nOT YOU!

Jk Jk :P hahahaa

LOL heeey that's true. Let the poor boy keep the brain cells he has he desperately needs them!

end of message
view Proxy170's profile

10th Aug 2019, 4:53 AM

Proxy170

How do you NOT take that personally??? OUCH!

I'm looking forward to hopefully getting into Hizruk's head a bit more. We've seen a lot of him from a third party perspective, but not a self reflective side recently. But I have a feeling that's on purpose, you sneak ;) Secretssssss :P

end of message
view HeSerpenty's profile

11th Aug 2019, 2:50 PM

HeSerpenty

Lolol ikr? Kinda mean X"D

You're totally right about that it's been mostly everyone else dealing with his mistakes for quite a while! But we'll come back around, I promise ;D

end of message
view NiaNook's profile

2nd Sep 2019, 2:58 AM

NiaNook

OH DANG did not see that coming O__o

That bit with Hizruk asking to call him "Higo" is cute, though :3

end of message
view HeSerpenty's profile

7th Apr 2020, 11:24 AM

HeSerpenty

Haha! Things were going so well and then...heeee knocks him out xDD
At least they had a good moment!

end of message
post a comment
tip