Chapter 7.15-- Bleeding Heart

posted 4th May 2019, 6:09 PM

Chapter 7.15-- Bleeding Heart

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view HeSerpenty's profile

4th May 2019, 6:09 PM

HeSerpenty

Yer buggin' him, Hizruk :'D

Something tells me they're not really talking about the bird anymore in those bottom panels..

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Sorry the page is late! Guys until after June 8th just expect an update Friday..OR Saturday lol. Always shooting for Friday... but sometimes I just can't make it :P

See you next week!

We're gonna pause in this scene soon and catch up with some other characters! ^_^

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view ShaRose49's profile

4th May 2019, 6:22 PM

ShaRose49

Just...beautiful. Hizruk’s heart is so kind

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view HeSerpenty's profile

4th May 2019, 7:24 PM

HeSerpenty

He does have a good heart <3--too bad he doesn't quite know how to use it yet x"D

Thank you so much! <3

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view Alicia's profile

4th May 2019, 7:10 PM

Alicia

I mean, if you just leave the bird there and it dies then there's a dead bird in your home, Hellgiah. Do you want that? X'D

They both have the strength to help, but their motivations are completely different. I have a feeling these two are gonna butt heads a bit in the future. X)

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view HeSerpenty's profile

4th May 2019, 7:26 PM

HeSerpenty

LOL--it's NATURE, ALicia. NATURE rules! X"D

Yesss that's perfect :3. It's funny you should say that X3

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view NiaNook's profile

31st May 2019, 6:11 PM

NiaNook

That dead bird is his lunch!

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view Slim Kittens's profile

4th May 2019, 7:10 PM

Slim Kittens

Don't you corrupt Hizzy, Hellgiah!

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view HeSerpenty's profile

4th May 2019, 7:26 PM

HeSerpenty

It's worth a try!

He's got a better shot at it than the COuncil X"D

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view megados's profile

4th May 2019, 7:29 PM

megados

Compassion isn't a weakness. Hellgiah could learn a little from Hizruk.

In panel inset 4, where he's about to pick up the bird, your use of light and shadow really sells it. That's my favorite panel! :D

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view HeSerpenty's profile

4th May 2019, 9:04 PM

HeSerpenty

Thank you so much! Haha I think you're right---they could learn a lot from each other <3

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view DLKmusic's profile

4th May 2019, 8:12 PM

DLKmusic

The page is just beautiful, Serpy! What I was expecting was for Hellgiah to kill the poor bird because it annoyed him... This is quite a bit different and very well done.

What strikes me the most is frame 4. Hizzy looks JUST like Alaya did on Frame 4 here. As megados mentioned, the coloring in incredible, but the family resemblance is uncanny. Looks like once Hizzy gets his act together, he will have inherited her will!

...wow

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view HeSerpenty's profile

4th May 2019, 11:05 PM

HeSerpenty

Don...I love you for noticing all this! Seriously it's like you open a door into my brain and see exactly everything I hope people see! Regarding Hizruk and Alaya. Of her descendants so far.... it's almost like she comes through the MOST in Hizruk <3. He just needs....lots of training X"D (Where'sMerekandKeymenat;D)

This poor birdie had to sacrifice it's life for this important conversation X"D

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5th May 2019, 7:24 AM

DLKmusic

Is it too late to mention that Hizzy looks like he grew up in the last frame? The quiet confidence he exudes is awesome...
"I may be Jon Snow, and I may know nothing, but I DO know that if I can help I should."

I've said it before and I'll say it again... "That's m'boy!"

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view HeSerpenty's profile

5th May 2019, 2:16 PM

HeSerpenty

It's never too late! I think with Hellgiah's story he has gained a LITTLE bit more understanding which has therefore helped him to mature just a little bit. Hizruk will face many changes in the near future! :3

Haha you know...come to think of it Hizruk does kinda have some Jon Snow vibes X"D---a lot less skill however! For noooow >__>

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view DLKmusic's profile

5th May 2019, 6:41 PM

DLKmusic

LOL, Serpy, don't be dissin m'boy Hizzy's mad skillz, yo! I'd like to see Jon Snow bend Iron bars with his bare hands...

and don't argue that Jon Snow toe-to-toed with a walker, cause Hizzy talked back to Hellgiah... (both acts are very courageous, and suicidally foolish!)

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view junoro's profile

4th May 2019, 10:21 PM

junoro

Awww suuuch a pretty bird. Hizruk's right, the bird might just be stunned! In which case, he can take it outside to the fresh air and after it recovers, it might be able to live a fruitful bird life.

Or Hellgiah can just like, eat it in front of him, or something. >_> (YEAH I MIGHT BE SUSPICIOUS OF THIS GUY)

(Just a typo alert in panel 5, when Hellgiah says 'Let nature take it's course', there shouldn't be an apostrophe! 'Its' would be the correct word in this case, like how 'his' and 'hers' don't have apostrophes!)

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view HeSerpenty's profile

4th May 2019, 11:08 PM

HeSerpenty

Oops haha---I was just running on auto pilot..didn't even catch that. Thanks! All fixed X"D

Lol Hellgiah has NO love for the little birds of the world apparently! X"D

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view princess_lom's profile

5th May 2019, 1:03 AM

princess_lom

He is so coldblooded husband <3 I will make his heart warm again <3333

AWESOME PAGE! Like always

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view HeSerpenty's profile

5th May 2019, 2:12 PM

HeSerpenty

LOL if anyone can it's you! :P <333

Thank you so much!

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view MST3KFan's profile

5th May 2019, 1:32 PM

MST3KFan

Man, Hellie... You just have no compassion at all for anything do you?

At least Hizzy has some despite all the things he was put through.

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view HeSerpenty's profile

5th May 2019, 2:12 PM

HeSerpenty

Lol he doooesn't X"D. Not when he considers compassion a weakness X"D

LOL..."Hellie" X"DDD

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view The Accidental Ninja's profile

6th May 2019, 6:04 PM

The Accidental Ninja

Excuse you, sir, Hirzuk is a perfectly good soft bean please leave him alone
*hisses protectively*

(this page looks fantastic, by the way. I know I say that on every page, but like, the lighting/shading is really good here)

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view HeSerpenty's profile

12th May 2019, 4:55 AM

HeSerpenty

Lolol!!! He's so pure hearted and Hellgiah fixing to change that

Thank you so much!

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view Matt Knab's profile

7th May 2019, 6:08 PM

Matt Knab

I really like the lighting/highlights lately!

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view HeSerpenty's profile

27th May 2019, 12:25 PM

HeSerpenty

Thanks so much Matt! <3

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view Proxy170's profile

27th May 2019, 8:35 AM

Proxy170

I mean...he has a point, evolution has some benefits, and what happens when your saviors are gone? Self reliance and strength are favored in the long term. But on the other hand, if you only look out for yourself...what was the point of staying around if you only end up alone? :(

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view HeSerpenty's profile

28th May 2019, 9:53 PM

HeSerpenty

Yesss Hellgiah is a BIG fan of the natural laws X"D...but you're right life does end up becoming rather lonely. One's abilities to relate and emphathize with others becomes non exitistent. Weeelll maybe only in his case X"D.

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