Chapter 7.14-- Poetic

posted 26th Apr 2019, 10:39 PM

Chapter 7.14-- Poetic

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view HeSerpenty's profile

26th Apr 2019, 10:39 PM

HeSerpenty

Aww shucks and here I thought Hellgiah was just helping Hizruk just because he cares about him X'D... >___>


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I made it before midnight! Updates by be a little choppy like this until my class is over. About a month left of that!

See you next week! <33

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view HapyCow's profile

26th Apr 2019, 10:46 PM

HapyCow

Man what a nice guy, lol. Great page! I love Hizruk's innocent, sweet naive face in comparison to Hellgiah's face! :)

Also what class are you taking?

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view HeSerpenty's profile

26th Apr 2019, 10:50 PM

HeSerpenty

He's totally a peach! <3 LOL
Haha I love that you make that comparison <3...they are so very different in that way :3

It's just a class to get a certificate in Interactive Media--so print, video, and web design. It's SOMEthing to show for myself anyway :P...haha and I'm finally learning how to do things I've always wished I could do myself. Can't WAIT to update my comic site X"D

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view princess_lom's profile

27th Apr 2019, 3:02 AM

princess_lom

He's hot <3
Who will they meet huhu

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view HeSerpenty's profile

27th Apr 2019, 9:40 AM

HeSerpenty

Hahaha he can do no wrong in your eyes, huh?

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view princess_lom's profile

27th Apr 2019, 10:04 AM

princess_lom

He's perfect in all ways :D

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view megados's profile

27th Apr 2019, 5:07 AM

megados

Hey Hizruk, in for a penny, in for a pound, eh? ;) His lack of understanding is priceless here!

I like the different angles and views in the panels here. those backgrounds, man! :D

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view HeSerpenty's profile

27th Apr 2019, 9:41 AM

HeSerpenty

LOL! Weeell hopefully he'll hang around some more understanding people X"D *CoughKeymenandMerek*..and start to get a healthy perspective!

Thanks so much! Got make these conversation scenes interesting to look at somehow! X"D

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view Haegan2005's profile

27th Apr 2019, 5:14 AM

Haegan2005

See the potential? Oh, the Council will likely fall all right. Along with the deaths of most of the rest of the people if it continues in this way.

His people will end up facing guns armed with swords and bows. History shows us that that normally does not end well.

Though I am sure that I have no idea of the awesome plot and ending that you have planned, I am definitely worried now!

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27th Apr 2019, 9:43 AM

HeSerpenty

Heheh and now you see where Hellgiah's ambitions actually DIFFER from Keymen's and Merek's. On it's face...it seems like they're all pining for the same things. Buuut Hellgiah has some of his own opinions regarding the current serpent nation and all it's people. Maybe someday we'll learn about those X)

I like keeping you guys on your toes if I can! :D

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view DLKmusic's profile

27th Apr 2019, 7:48 AM

DLKmusic

OoohKAY then...

And just like that, Hellgiah goes from "Sympathetic character with a troubled past" to "Super-Villain that even scares the Joker" status! Frame 5 is particularly creepy in that regard...

Ya know, Hellgiah, I get wanting to fulfil your mother's dying wish... I even get the "Screw justice, I want VENGEANCE!" attitude, but I gotta say, letting everyone else die so that Demas has no-one to be a Tyrant over is NOT A GOOD PLAN!!!

You mentioned something on the cover page that was a foreshadowing of what is going to happen on the next page. Well done Serpy, you have officially given me the creeps with this guy!

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view HeSerpenty's profile

27th Apr 2019, 9:45 AM

HeSerpenty

LOL I personally take that as a compliment hahahaha. Aww but come on he's still sympathetic riiight? He's probably suffered more abuse than anybody X"DD

LOLololol I think Hellgiah has a looot more behind his ideas than just plain ol' simple revenge X"D

Hehe and yes! You remembered :3

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view DLKmusic's profile

28th Apr 2019, 9:35 AM

DLKmusic

It was absolutely meant as a compliment! One of the things I like most about SoO is that all of your characters, Good or Bad, have depth. That's why we love your Heroes (and Heroines) and despise your Villains so much... Even the "Extra's" are carefully thought out!

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view HeSerpenty's profile

29th Apr 2019, 12:58 PM

HeSerpenty

Aww thanks so much Don! That's the best compliment I could receive, truly <3. I have certainly put a lot of thought into this! Some might argue..TOO much thought over the years haha!

I hope to keep you guys intrigued :3

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view Slim Kittens's profile

27th Apr 2019, 8:16 AM

Slim Kittens

Poor Hellgiah has...issues.

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view HeSerpenty's profile

27th Apr 2019, 9:46 AM

HeSerpenty

DOn't they all? X"D

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view MST3KFan's profile

27th Apr 2019, 11:09 AM

MST3KFan

Hizruk just wanted to be a good guy, he doesn't want to work for evil.

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view HeSerpenty's profile

27th Apr 2019, 8:11 PM

HeSerpenty

You got that right!

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view Alicia's profile

27th Apr 2019, 11:10 AM

Alicia

As long as your end game is to take down that council... I approve. X'D LOL

I think Hellgiah is right about Hizruk though. Things might not go EXACTLY as he has planned, but he could end up being the one who makes the difference. <3

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view HeSerpenty's profile

27th Apr 2019, 8:11 PM

HeSerpenty

LOL ooo careful with THAT logic buddy X"D

And yes <3. He may have a bigger role to play yet :3

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view The Accidental Ninja's profile

27th Apr 2019, 12:40 PM

The Accidental Ninja

*very concerned for Hirzuk*

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view DLKmusic's profile

27th Apr 2019, 1:26 PM

DLKmusic

Me too! This isn't Merek whom Hizzy can just annoy and Ignore. This is Hellgiah, and I think Hizzy is just about to find out what happens when something annoys Hellgiah!

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view HeSerpenty's profile

27th Apr 2019, 8:11 PM

HeSerpenty

Understandable X"D

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view ShaRose49's profile

27th Apr 2019, 2:53 PM

ShaRose49

Hizruk’s face in the second panel is beautiful and sincere. He’s a precious one, eh? It’s too bad this guy is probably not on his side...

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view HeSerpenty's profile

27th Apr 2019, 8:16 PM

HeSerpenty

Aww thank you so much <3. Lol I think he IS precious <3... but I might be a little bias X"D

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view ShaRose49's profile

27th Apr 2019, 11:06 PM

ShaRose49

Not really. :) I think a lot of people would agree

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view junoro's profile

28th Apr 2019, 8:59 AM

junoro

This whole flashback with Hellgiah and Alaya is sooo gooood. And painful. But man, it explains more about where Hizruk actually comes from, which is great. I've been wondering about the details of that family history for a while now!

...and wait a second, just how old is Hellgiah?? O_O He's really aged well!

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view HeSerpenty's profile

4th May 2019, 6:19 PM

HeSerpenty

Thank you so much Juno! Yess I've been eager to provide a little more insight! Altho I know it also rises up some more questions X'DDD. Can't answer EVERYTHING all at once that'd be no fun! For me :P

LOL his aging..well I guess that's one of the questions that arise, huh? ;D

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view Proxy170's profile

4th May 2019, 9:39 AM

Proxy170

Aaaand now I'm back to thinking he's just as bad for Hizzy as the Council XD He's gonna try to use you, man!

But I do wonder how Hizruk got the red eyes trait that Hellgiah has, like is it a recessive serpent gene or are they actually related?

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view HeSerpenty's profile

4th May 2019, 6:21 PM

HeSerpenty

LOL awww...JUST as baad? X"D

I promise that question will hopefully be sufficiently answered! Later X"D. Can't give EVERYTHING at once can I?? X"D

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view NiaNook's profile

31st May 2019, 6:07 PM

NiaNook

....

Well, you know what, deep down I'm still rooting for Hellgiah at least SORT OF caring about Hizruk. He's just got many years of... cold isolation, disappointment and childhood abuse giving him a very VERY veeery thick... hard shell XD (I keep telling myself)

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view HeSerpenty's profile

1st Jun 2019, 1:16 PM

HeSerpenty

Haha it is much nicer to believe that, isn't it?

But I actually think you might be on to something there X"D

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