Chapter 7.13-- Final Words

posted 20th Apr 2019, 1:51 AM

Chapter 7.13-- Final Words

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20th Apr 2019, 1:51 AM

HeSerpenty

RIP Alaya. You were a strong warrior, a good mother, and you fought even til the very end.

At least her final words really motivated a certain individual with the power to make a difference >_>

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20th Apr 2019, 2:06 AM

princess_lom

I will cry in a minute T_T

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22nd Apr 2019, 12:48 PM

HeSerpenty

*Comforts you* Don't cryyyyy :'D

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view HapyCow's profile

20th Apr 2019, 3:48 AM

HapyCow

Ooh, I definitely see Hizruk in there...those are some good genes, lol. I'm so tired right now, but anyways amazing page! It's really sad though, Alaya seemed pretty cool. RIP

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22nd Apr 2019, 12:49 PM

HeSerpenty

Haha yes very good dreams! Hizzy definitely takes after his great grandma <33333---this is very purposeful on my part considering what his role will be in modern times! :3 <3

Thanks so much Hapy! The good ones always die young :'D

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view DLKmusic's profile

20th Apr 2019, 7:28 AM

DLKmusic

First things first... HAPPY EASTER!!!!

before I even read what was in the text bubbles, I could tell right away just by your artwork that that is Demas riding the Lacor. I gotta say, I'm really impressed comparing the young version to the old. Well done!!!

Then we add the text... Same ol' loveable fellow, that winning personality hasn't changed a bit in 60 years! Doesn't he just make you want to SQUEEEEE?!?!?

(vomit maybe, squee not so much.)

also of note, Alaya's look in panel three is incredible! It's hard to put into words how hauntingly expressive that image is. Probably the best 3/4 profile I've ever seen you do, which is saying a lot!

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20th Apr 2019, 3:22 PM

ShaRose49

I agree—that panel is incredible, it really stood out to me.

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view HeSerpenty's profile

24th Apr 2019, 5:11 PM

HeSerpenty

I hope you had a good Easter too, Don! Thanks so much!

Hehe yay I'm happy you can tell and that things stand out to you on this page! Makes me feel good...like I accomplished something LOL.

Aw and that's awesome to hear! It was a very important expression.... her last moments and realizing she can't protect her boys :(

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20th Apr 2019, 3:21 PM

ShaRose49

What a tragic and yet beautiful story. Idk how anyone can see Helgiah as an unsympathetic character after this.

Also your shading is really good, I have trouble with that sometimes

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view HeSerpenty's profile

24th Apr 2019, 5:12 PM

HeSerpenty

Yes...he certainly has had it pretty rough :'(. Thank you so much <3

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view Alicia's profile

20th Apr 2019, 4:44 PM

Alicia

AHH! Nuuu! TOO SAD! (Actually perfect amount of sad, because you know how much I love sad. X'D)

Seriously though... those poor babies. T_T

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24th Apr 2019, 5:12 PM

HeSerpenty

Yus! T__T

Sad but...necessary! :'D

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view megados's profile

20th Apr 2019, 4:59 PM

megados

Alaya's final words in the last panel are (I sure hope) prophetic. Very poignant; sad. :(

Echoing the sentiments above, the emotion in the scene comes through in the artwork, as much as it does in the dialogue! Good job! :D

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24th Apr 2019, 5:13 PM

HeSerpenty

Yes they were! It may have taken a lot of years, but..I think that her parting curse there is in the works of happening....

Thank you so much!

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view Proxy170's profile

21st Apr 2019, 4:57 AM

Proxy170

Am I reading into it too much to think that that may be a younger Demas? :o

This page was so well drawn, Serpy! You can just FEEL the curse she's putting on them in her death!

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24th Apr 2019, 5:14 PM

HeSerpenty

No you are not reading too much into it! :3

Thank you so much! I'm so glad because it was a very meaningful part of the scene! <3

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22nd Apr 2019, 8:06 AM

The Accidental Ninja

OHNO D:
This is a fantastic page, but sad :(
And now I, like everyone else, am wondering if that's a young Demas there.... he sure is old now if that's the case! xD

((Also I... hate to be that person, but I thought I should point out that Alaya's last speech bubble says "will will not last"))

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24th Apr 2019, 5:18 PM

HeSerpenty

Ack! Lol no thank you for pointing that out it COMPLETELY dipped under my radar x"D. Haha all fixed!

Thank you so much! This is a very important page to the plot <3. Well this whole scene was X"D

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view NiaNook's profile

31st May 2019, 5:24 PM

NiaNook

Eyy, it's that creepy old coot. Now less old, but just as creepy! >:[ Sadly, baby Hellgiah wasn't able to do much damage to (pre)avenge his adoptive mama. Maybe if he weren't still so young, they would be in for it!

And in agreement with the other comments, it's kinda cool how clear the family resemblances are. Even some council members sort of resemble some current members :'D

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1st Jun 2019, 1:15 PM

HeSerpenty

Heh, yess I would say if he wasn't such a youngin he would be rolling heads right about now...and Alaya would be alive and raising her sons to be strong, noble warriors, and-- *siigh*..it's too unfortunate to talk about <:'O x"D

And thanks so much it's always really encouraging to hear stuff like that!

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view Centcomm's profile

27th May 2020, 10:39 AM

Centcomm

Wow that was a good page

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view HeSerpenty's profile

28th May 2020, 10:46 AM

HeSerpenty

Thank you so much! I was really excited for this scene with Allaya :3

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