Chapter 7.3-- Death Sentence

posted 25th Jan 2019, 12:14 PM

Chapter 7.3-- Death Sentence

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view HeSerpenty's profile

25th Jan 2019, 12:14 PM

HeSerpenty

Bleke saw this comin'... any bets on what Merek is gonna do?

Thanks for reading!

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view princess_lom's profile

25th Jan 2019, 12:37 PM

princess_lom

Whaaaaaaaat?! NO!

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view HeSerpenty's profile

26th Jan 2019, 1:46 PM

HeSerpenty

Sadly, yes :'D

Unless someone does something about this! >_>

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view CiciEnixa's profile

25th Jan 2019, 2:10 PM

CiciEnixa

Merek, you halt this execution RIGHT NOW, mister! Tell them... tell them... I dunno... that you need Bleke... for your upcoming papercrafts project??? Look, you're super smart, pleeeeease, he don't deserve this.

:(

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view HeSerpenty's profile

26th Jan 2019, 1:48 PM

HeSerpenty

Demas: A papercrafts project? That indeed sounds important. Never mind then!

LOL X"D. Weeeeell....maybe not x"D. But you are right about one thing... he doesn't deserve this! I think sentencing innocent people to death really does it for the Council :'D

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view Alicia's profile

25th Jan 2019, 2:10 PM

Alicia

AHHH! You can't! Bleke has a wife and kids and EVERYTHING!

Somebody's gonna do something, I know it. The question is who and what? X'D

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view HeSerpenty's profile

26th Jan 2019, 1:49 PM

HeSerpenty

HOPEFULLY someone does something! Cuz yea..those poor wife n kids :'D
Oh yea..and poor Bleke too!

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view Vivocateur's profile

25th Jan 2019, 2:29 PM

Vivocateur

Oh no!!
Someone do something! This is so not fair D:

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view HeSerpenty's profile

26th Jan 2019, 1:49 PM

HeSerpenty

If only the Council cared about fairness! :'D

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view DLKmusic's profile

25th Jan 2019, 4:58 PM

DLKmusic

What is Merek going to do? Probably something braver than I would have the courage to do.... I HOPE so, anyway!

I kinda like Ceci's idea... "You can't kill him, I need him for my *insert project name here* project that's about to start! He's a CRUCIAL COMPONENT!

ps. What's not done? the page looks great!

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view HeSerpenty's profile

26th Jan 2019, 1:56 PM

HeSerpenty

Something tells me Merek has just about had it with people getting executed right in front of him in this chamber X"D

Haha thaks Don! Well all I have left to finish now is backgrounds! :3

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view Matt Knab's profile

25th Jan 2019, 5:43 PM

Matt Knab

UM....DO-OVER?? APPEAL?!

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view HeSerpenty's profile

26th Jan 2019, 1:56 PM

HeSerpenty

Lol right? OBJECTIOON! X"D

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view megados's profile

25th Jan 2019, 6:04 PM

megados

See?! What did I tell you? Interrogation chamber is NOT proper medical care! :(

Merek is in a good position to do a few things, either verbal or physical. Let's hope he can do something that WORKS.

The page looks pretty close to done; enjoy your time! It conveys what it needs to, so no rush. Don't stress. :D

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view HeSerpenty's profile

26th Jan 2019, 1:58 PM

HeSerpenty

You were right! :'D

And yes.... Merek is one his way to probably doing something along BOTH of those lines :'D. Hopefully he's smart about it!

Thank you for saying that! Haha it's very close now--just have to flesh out those backgrounds and add some texture!

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view Haegan2005's profile

25th Jan 2019, 8:07 PM

Haegan2005

I know I saw a reset button around here somewhere! Or maybe that was a Staples button?

That whole old age thing is creeeping up on me!

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view HeSerpenty's profile

26th Jan 2019, 2:04 PM

HeSerpenty

LOL X"D. Sadly no reset buttons around here! Hahaha

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view ShaRose49's profile

25th Jan 2019, 8:22 PM

ShaRose49

DON’T DO IT!! NOOOOOOO! (Jumps through the iPad, attempts to beat everyone up but ends up getting executed too)

On a more serious note, the emotion on this page is terrific. You can see he tears in the Captain’s eyes and it’s painful to watch. 😢
Also it looks good

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view HeSerpenty's profile

26th Jan 2019, 2:06 PM

HeSerpenty

OH NO!! *Jumps it to save Rose from being executed too* THIS WASN'T PART OF THE PLAN! X"DDD

Aw thank you so much! That's always important for me to convey accurately. That's the tears of a man who will never get to see his wife and two little boys every again T__T (unless someone does something)

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view ShaRose49's profile

26th Jan 2019, 2:09 PM

ShaRose49

Here’s hoping!!

And thanks for saving me, phew!

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view The Accidental Ninja's profile

26th Jan 2019, 4:09 PM

The Accidental Ninja

MEREK DO A THING
QUICKLY

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view HeSerpenty's profile

27th Jan 2019, 9:18 AM

HeSerpenty

Yus THERE ISN"T MUCH TIME! D:

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view Icefall Kitsune's profile

28th Jan 2019, 2:03 PM

Icefall Kitsune

Merik: Before carrying out the sentence, be advised that Kalverick reassigned Bleke without designating a replacement. The failure would then be Kalverick's, would it not?

Anything to make the water murkier.

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view HeSerpenty's profile

1st Feb 2019, 8:33 PM

HeSerpenty

I would agree with that assessment! Kalverick has had MANY failures recently X"DD

We can't have clear fresh water around here! The murkier the better LOL!

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view Proxy170's profile

30th Jan 2019, 7:04 PM

Proxy170

Oh no! Poor Bleke...I can't really think of a smart way to manipulate the Council into keeping him alive, without looking weak on Merek's part. And I think Sid might be questioning which side he's chosen...

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view HeSerpenty's profile

2nd Feb 2019, 10:05 AM

HeSerpenty

Yeea haha..and it didn't go to well for Merek LAST time he did something very similar to this X"D

WHo wouldn't be questioning at this point, amiright? X"D

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view MST3KFan's profile

1st Feb 2019, 5:46 AM

MST3KFan

Wow. Might as well have left the poor guy to die in the tunnels.

"Thank you for telling us what happened...now DIE!"

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view HeSerpenty's profile

2nd Feb 2019, 10:05 AM

HeSerpenty

Lol so true! Sat but true X"D

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view Jarvi's profile

23rd Feb 2019, 1:10 PM

Jarvi

Geeeez...and again with death.... GUYS YOU REEEEAAAALLLYYY WANT ME TO ROOT FOR YOUR UTTER DESTRUCTION XD

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view HeSerpenty's profile

25th Feb 2019, 2:04 PM

HeSerpenty

Haha..heeere we are again X"D. Kinda deja vu....... O.o

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