Chapter 6.44-- Time for Answers

posted 3rd Nov 2018, 12:13 AM

Chapter 6.44-- Time for Answers
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3rd Nov 2018, 12:13 AM

HeSerpenty

Now it's time to finally learn from the only known surviving witness wat REALLY happened that night in the dungeon (o lord old page alert-- can't wait to go back and redo them X_X) (ALSO FYI haha the one who's face Kal is getting in on that page is Bleke....our friend who's getting interrogated now! ^_^).

FUN Fact (for the dedicated readers who wanna know): Tarvere (that's ol' string beard up there with the serum)...... is kind of the "physician" of the Council. More like mad scientist XDD. He likes to come up with all sorts of crazy things....and this particular serum he used on Bleke is meant to pretty much increase the heart rate and wake a person up-- imagine getting WAY too much caffeine injected into your blood stream, haha that's basically what's happening to bleke right now. And Takeo helping out with a splash of cold water X"D.

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Thanks for the patience guys! School projects and family things-- we might get choppy here in the holiday season just a fair warning!

Thanks for reading! <3

(any thoughts on the font? Do you prefer the previous one? Or the one even before the previous one? Ugh I hate working with fonts -_-...I like one and then I hate it two weeks later. But I want to settle on one because it all needs to be consistent someday in a million years when I go to print this X"D)


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3rd Nov 2018, 1:15 AM

Proxy170

Oh man...I'm both anxiously waiting for this but also like "THE MAN NEEDS MEDICAL ATTENTION" D: Although in a twisted way, with Bleke being this alert I have hope for Kal to come back alive? Am I horrible for wanting a villain to stick around? >.>

To be honest with you, I didn't notice the font too much until you brought it up in the author's notes, which I think means it's seamless and good!

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3rd Nov 2018, 10:30 AM

HeSerpenty

LOL proxy I think you continue to be like the one person who doesn't want Kal to die a horrible, slow, painful death X"D

That's good to hear! I have a really hard time with this sort o thing X_X

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3rd Nov 2018, 1:18 AM

Vivocateur

Ooohoo!
Unfortunate as it is that poor Bleke is getting the (apparently potentially fatal) mad scientist treatment, for my part I'm very curious to find out what he has to say!
Also, I love that sinister angle on Takeo and Tarvere in panel three. Some serious villainy going on here :0
[I honestly didn't notice the font change until you pointed it out. In general I think that not noticing the font is a good thing...so yeah. It's easy to read, fits your style well, and (now that I come to look at it) has enough distinctive personality to set it apart from the totally generic. Seems good to me.]

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3rd Nov 2018, 10:32 AM

HeSerpenty

Thank you for the feedback! I'm on the fence about the font-- I'm getting great points on the yay and the nay side X"D. I'm sooo not good at this sort of thing X_X

And YUS! I think Bleke will have some interesting things to say indeed :3

3rd Nov 2018, 3:59 AM

megados

Guys, I literally said that the interrogation chamber wasn't going to be proper medical help!

Poor Bleke.

As mentioned by others above, I really hadn't noticed the font until you brought it up. I only had a feeling of 'something's different'.

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3rd Nov 2018, 10:34 AM

HeSerpenty

Haha yes I remember you saying that! X"D

Mkaay the question is......was it "somethings different" gooood or "something's different" BAD? X"D

3rd Nov 2018, 3:12 PM

megados

I'm going to have to say even, toward good. If it was bad, I think I might have noticed what it was on my own. :D

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3rd Nov 2018, 4:36 AM

princess_lom

feel little bit sorry for him

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3rd Nov 2018, 10:35 AM

HeSerpenty

Haha as do I--- he's probably the person on Kal's brigade who deserves it the least! X"D

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3rd Nov 2018, 5:00 AM

Alicia

Aw, Bleke... D': At least Merek and the boys are there. That gives me some relief. So they won't be able to do something completely awful to him and get away with it. ...Right? :'D

The font looks good! Like everyone else said, easy to read and looks unique enough without standing out so much that it's distracting or anything.

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3rd Nov 2018, 10:35 AM

HeSerpenty

Haha I don't knoooow I mean we saw what happened to that Civilian when Merek was literally within arm's reach :'D

Thanks for the feedback on the font! I still on the fence :'D

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3rd Nov 2018, 8:28 AM

DLKmusic

First off, the font. Just like everyone else, I didn't notice the change till you pointed it out. If I had to pick between the two though, I would say that this one looks a little too "DC Comics" for me, and I think the previous one looked a little more unique. My Opinion here doesn't mean much though, because you may very well have been going for a "DC comics" look! Besides, I also like strips of baloney in my lime jello, so there is that too....

As much as I want to hear the answers, I gotta feel for Bleke! the council should be doing this to KAL!!! You're torturing the wrong serpent!!!

p.s. I know it's hard to tell, but I really don't like Kal very much...

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3rd Nov 2018, 10:50 AM

HeSerpenty

Ohhh DC Comics...definitey not what I'm going for X"D. Crap...I never got that vibe but then again I never liked reading Marvel OR DC comics X"D

Omg you don't like Kal??? MAN I HAD NO IDEA! XDD

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3rd Nov 2018, 10:05 AM

The Accidental Ninja

I am concerned. Very. (About most everything in general)

Also, re: font: I think they're both fine! In all honesty I like the other one a little better; this one looks a little "rougher" to me, I guess. But they're both good :)

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3rd Nov 2018, 10:52 AM

HeSerpenty

LOL as you should be!

And thank you for the feedback! I've heard good arguments for both sides X_X. The previous font always looked stuck in Italics which DROVE ME CRAZY X"D. Sigh.....maybe I'll go back to the one I used before that X"D

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3rd Nov 2018, 10:23 AM

sigpig

I honestly don;t see any differences between your font and Comic Sans... lol

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3rd Nov 2018, 10:27 AM

HeSerpenty

Yikes lol.......guess its a no on this font then :'D

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3rd Nov 2018, 10:44 AM

HeSerpenty

Okay here's above font..
image

And here's comic Sans:
image

.....I think the first one has more character? I don't know X"D. I'll compile a list and perhaps make the dreaded CF post to ask for opinions X"D. I literally do not have a skill for this area XD

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3rd Nov 2018, 12:05 PM

DLKmusic

Seeing them "apples to apples" like that, the first one looks like a bold version of the second (I guess that's kinda why I got the DC vibe from it). I'm personally good with either, but I like the second one better.

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4th Nov 2018, 6:07 PM

HeSerpenty

OMG you like Comic Sans better?? Egad... haha I can't do Comic Sans X"D

3rd Nov 2018, 3:21 PM

megados

Once my attention was drawn to it, I have to admit, at first I thought of comic sans, but I did see that it's more stylized than comic sans. I know that very few people think comic sans is acceptable, but I don't know how many people could tell the difference W/O the side by side comparison. I could tell, so I guess it depends on how close you want to be to the edge.

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4th Nov 2018, 10:13 PM

HeSerpenty

It's so strange when I first saw this font Comic Sans didn't even pop into my brain :'D.........but I don't know if I can feel comfortable using it now that more than one person has made the comparison X"D haha

5th Nov 2018, 5:17 AM

megados

I don't want you to be uncomfortable on my account; that would make ME uncomfortable. To be clear, I didn't think it WAS comic sans, just that it was a little similar. :D

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9th Nov 2018, 4:32 PM

sigpig

Serpy, I was seriously joking about the Comic Sans thing. The first font looks more like YOU printed it by hand - it's more stylized and...personal looking, if you get my drift.

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11th Nov 2018, 4:17 PM

HeSerpenty

LOLOL WHAT that was a joke?!?? Dude! Hahahaaha I totally took you seriously omg X"D (if that wasn't obvious :P)

Well thank you for that feedback tho! It really helps!

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3rd Nov 2018, 5:43 PM

TheD-Wrek

Font looks nice and clean. A little thicker perhaps than I'm used to seeing (TWSS) but yeah, it's less italicized than the previous one? Either way, looks fine to me.

This might not be the most popular comment but the more time has passed I've noticed more parallels between the council and today's [redacted]. It creeps me out in a good way, makes the Council all the more spooky. But that's prob just me. X'D

That notwithstanding, this situation is gonna get worse before it gets better, isn't? :'D

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4th Nov 2018, 10:17 PM

HeSerpenty

Thanks for the feedback D! It is very carefully considered! I can't stand the constant italicized look of the previous one... haha so I do see this as an improvement in that sense XDD

Haha I don't mind you connecting the Council with any sorta RL situation-- -I didn't write it for that purpose or intention but I like thinks to be open-ended when it comes to this kinda stuff!People free to interpret it as they will as I go ahead and keep on tellin' the story! ;D

Haha you know it is X"D

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3rd Nov 2018, 8:41 PM

NiaNook

Oh my D:

I just imagine they're injecting him with Monster energy drinks.

I like the font. They both have different personalities, with the last one being softer and more whimsical, this one has more edge, so it's definitely suiting the bad-guys XD Will it still look suitable if we use this new font on the last warm and fuzzy page with Hizruk and Keymen? Hmm, probably.

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4th Nov 2018, 10:20 PM

HeSerpenty

Haha yeeea that's pretty much exactly what they're doing! X"D

Thank you for the great feedback! And I totally get what you're saying too.... I think my best bet at this point would be to keep looking to see if I can find something to fit all the different moods going on in this crazy place X"D

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6th Nov 2018, 9:32 AM

junoro

I didn't notice anything about the font until I saw you mention that you changed it, so I think that means it's pretty good? xD

Oh boy I bet there's gonna be mention of some creepy eyes in the dark in this interrogation >:D I wanna see glowy creepy eyes!

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9th Nov 2018, 1:39 PM

HeSerpenty

Haha yea I'd say so!

And you're dang right! Funny you mention those glowy creepy eyes! XDD

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