Chapter 6.31-- The Fight (2)

posted 16th Jun 2018, 11:01 AM

Chapter 6.31-- The Fight (2)
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view HeSerpenty's profile

16th Jun 2018, 11:01 AM


Weeeeell now we KNOW at least one of them is gonna die.... >__>

Another kill for Kal :/ (you know..come to think of it everyone who's died in this comic so far me thinks was killed by Kalverick...).


Thanks for reading, guys! Just to let you know, next week I'm going to the mountains with my folks and I probably won't be able to finish the page in time before I go. I'm gonna try! But expect a week off just in case!

view Alicia's profile

16th Jun 2018, 11:08 AM


A valiant attempt but... Alas.

WHYDOIFEELBADTHATKALWASSHOT? What have you done to me, Serpy? >_>

view HeSerpenty's profile

16th Jun 2018, 12:20 PM


Alas indeed X"D


view DLKmusic's profile

16th Jun 2018, 12:09 PM


Actually Serpy, the guards that died the night Hizzy broke out Sharl from the dungeon Kal wasn't responsible for...

or WAS he?

And he certainly didn't start and spread the Great Serpent Virus that killed so many before Keyman found a cure!

or DID he?

Well, at least we know he didn't start WW2... That was Demas.

Have fun in the mountains, the update can wait a week, but you've been under a lot and you deserve some fun time... We'll still be here when you get back!

view HeSerpenty's profile

16th Jun 2018, 12:19 PM


Dear gosh.. YOU'RE RIGHT! But that's still a mystery X"D

Hey Kal..put them there? Haha. Okay...every ON SCREEN death so far has been Kal's doing XDD

And thank you Don! Some mountain time is just what I need <3. Maybe I can give myself a little boost on these pages so I can have somewhat of a buffer X"D

view DLKmusic's profile

2nd Jul 2018, 12:28 PM


LOL I noticed you were strangely quiet about Kal's alleged involvement in spreading the great serpent virus....

makes one wonder....

view HeSerpenty's profile

3rd Jul 2018, 10:04 PM


All the conspiracies :3

view Proxy170's profile

16th Jun 2018, 12:27 PM


That may be the first time I've seen Kal actually scared/surprised. In addition to learning about their weapons, he's going to have some humility which in this case, will only make him more dangerous.

I wonder if he'll have a better chance of surviving if in serpent form?

view HeSerpenty's profile

19th Jun 2018, 12:45 PM


Haha that's true! But after all this he will for SURE be humbled....and you're right when someone isn't so focused on being the best around they try harder aaand can become more dangerous X"D

I'd say so! I mean animals are insane...what they can survive through. People are too I guess when they have a strong will but S-form is definitey more resilient. <3

view Centcomm's profile

16th Jun 2018, 2:03 PM


.. die kal.. die..

sets up a memorial for the old man

love the page!

view HeSerpenty's profile

19th Jun 2018, 1:03 PM


LOL you been hoping for this for a long time!

16th Jun 2018, 6:56 PM


Not the outcome I was hoping for. :(
Page good, outcome bad.

*edit: This might bring about some awareness and negative feelings toward Serpent-kind.

view HeSerpenty's profile

19th Jun 2018, 1:32 PM


Yea things took a turn for the worse D:

And you may be right about that! ;) >__>

view MST3KFan's profile

17th Jun 2018, 12:24 AM


Grandpa, NO!

This should be the point where the villagers then burst into the building with their own guns drawn, right? Right!?

view HeSerpenty's profile

19th Jun 2018, 1:33 PM


Just wait til Shera finds out :'D

Haha even if they did! Pretty sure none of them have a cure to serpent venom :'D

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17th Jun 2018, 9:29 PM

The Accidental Ninja

Oof, right in the gut. At least Grandpa didn't miss the second time around...

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view HeSerpenty's profile

19th Jun 2018, 1:33 PM


Indeed! But too bad he didn't dodge---he would've come out the winner in all this D':

view Matt Knab's profile

18th Jun 2018, 12:51 PM

Matt Knab

Never forget about the natural weapons!
Still, a double KO is still not out of the question.

view HeSerpenty's profile

19th Jun 2018, 1:34 PM


That's right! Don't need to worry about reloading THAT weapon!

Aaand u right...still possible!

view junoro's profile

29th Jun 2018, 1:51 PM


I KNEW IT. I KNEW GRANDPA WAS TOAST. But I AM surprised that he got a shot off on Kal there! A gunshot wound isn't pretty at all, though, especially in the stomach... >_> He might just die slowly from THAT.

view HeSerpenty's profile

3rd Jul 2018, 10:03 PM


Haha another mark on Kal's kill list! He's in the lead so far! X"D (on screen anyway)

Yeeea he's not going to have a good time with that X'D

26th Aug 2018, 4:55 AM


We're back to boxes as the fight calms down. Kal's hubris has paid off in the form of a bullet to the gut - which, by the way, is NOT going to be fun for him. If he even manages to survive long enough to get back home and gets medical attention and if that medical attention actually WORKS... well. Gut wounds are NOTHING to mess around with. He'll be a very lucky man if he survives longer than a few hours after this fight, and in typical Kal fashion, I doubt he'll appreciate it.

We're back to boxes for the most part here; the excitement of the active fight is primarily behind us. Our two fighters are grievously wounded, and I like that the boxes have calmed down to reflect that. It's the plus of using a very distinctive boxing style for most of your pages - when you break it, there's always a reason, and when you get back to it, everyone knows things are a little calmer. At least in action if not in emotions; I would call this page VERY tense.

Loving the fact that they're both shaking in that middle row. And Kal, fyi, coughing up blood? That's a bad thing. You should get that checked out. You've also got some absolutely fantastic posing going on in this page, and it all looks entirely natural. Impressive, given some of the odd angles you're working with. Looking up at Kal from below, for instance, that's HARD to do right, so good on you! And panel five is wonderful. Poses and distance are spot on. In fact, that's a good line of panels in general there.

But my favorite line of panels is the bottom. Sure, Kal's being horrible and he really should have done this from the beginning instead of grandstanding and getting a bullet lodged in his intestinal tract, but the fact remains that this is an incredibly cool set of panels. From the beginnings of the transformation to those TEETH (which are appropriately terrifying, and I LOVE how they've already gotten all sharp and awful in the previous panel, and those eyes just. Man. Perfect.) to the final moment where Kal takes those teeth dripping poison and buries them in grandpa's shoulder.... it looks so good. I love the lack of background.

Now I'm just wondering how much force a serpent can bite with. It's presumably a lot, if he can bite through two layers of clothing like that.

Just well done all around here.

view HeSerpenty's profile

24th Sep 2018, 12:54 AM


MAN it took me long enough to reply to this lovely comment X"D. Sorry about that!

Yeeea Kal is going to have a rough time with this one X"D. Wonder what kinda medical help he's gonna get when he gets home. I mean he might need the most accomplished doctor in the nation for this one. Hopefully that person won't also be his worst enemy XDDD

Thank you so much for all the wonderful feedback----i struggle sometimes with this format I've chosen buuut i'm glad to hear when it works out. This was such an important scene to get the poses right and such haha. You don't miss any details that's for sure! That's what I love about ya!

Yes I would say serpents do have a pretty strong bite force indeed! Unfortunately for Grandpa :'D

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