Chapter 6.30-- The Fight (1)

posted 9th Jun 2018, 9:12 PM

Chapter 6.30-- The Fight (1)
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view HeSerpenty's profile

9th Jun 2018, 9:12 PM

HeSerpenty

Kal really had it there for a second....

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Meant to get this page out this morning but there was some family stuff that really needed some attention. All is well tho..thanks for reading!!

See you next week! <3


view Haegan2005's profile

9th Jun 2018, 10:04 PM

Haegan2005

Missed! Or did he?

Even if the old man did hit the killer, he may not have killed him.

view DLKmusic's profile

9th Jun 2018, 10:43 PM

DLKmusic

I don't think Grampa missed, but I don't think it will kill Kal either, just force him to retreat.

Unfortunately, I think Kal is wearing Plot Armor...

view Haegan2005's profile

9th Jun 2018, 11:31 PM

Haegan2005

Plot Armor is nigh invulnerable. I want some!

view HeSerpenty's profile

10th Jun 2018, 12:24 AM

HeSerpenty

LOL!! Plot Armor! I love it X"D
Sucks when the nasty characters have it X"DDD Hahaha

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10th Jun 2018, 12:25 AM

HeSerpenty

I assure you that we will know for sure within the first couple panels of the next page ;3 XDDDD

view DLKmusic's profile

9th Jun 2018, 10:41 PM

DLKmusic

Yeay grampa! now don't die!!!!

never underestimate the power of the Og boots!

view HeSerpenty's profile

10th Jun 2018, 12:25 AM

HeSerpenty

Those boots are his best chance! At looking fabulous <3 (lolol X"D)

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10th Jun 2018, 1:16 AM

Jarvi

Hmmmmmmm there's something different about your style on those new pages x) a bit thicker lines or am I mistaken? :)

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10th Jun 2018, 10:27 AM

HeSerpenty

Haha you know...it wasnt intentional X"DDD....I might've been a little heavy handed due to rushing X"D (which I shouldn't do X_X)

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10th Jun 2018, 1:43 AM

MST3KFan

Well, even if he missed pointblank with the shot, I'd think some of the shot would graze Kal.

At least if it's the kind of gun I'd think it was.

view HeSerpenty's profile

12th Jun 2018, 10:13 AM

HeSerpenty

Haha if he missed TWICE then he deserves to get killed, I'm just sayin!
Just kidding that's mean D:

10th Jun 2018, 4:45 AM

megados

Hope Grampa is OK .. . and Kal is not-so-OK. ;D

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12th Jun 2018, 10:13 AM

HeSerpenty

Lolol I cannot make any promises as to the okay status of either party x"D

view Matt Knab's profile

10th Jun 2018, 12:14 PM

Matt Knab

Woah, potential double KO??

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12th Jun 2018, 10:13 AM

HeSerpenty

Potentially! :3

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10th Jun 2018, 2:36 PM

Centcomm

damn it old man. Should have just shot him in the back no muss no fuss dead snake. :D

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12th Jun 2018, 10:13 AM

HeSerpenty

LOL amen to that, Centy!

10th Jun 2018, 7:53 PM

SeanR

Agreed. You already had him dead to rights trying to kill your granddaughter in her sleep. What did it matter what species he was, and you could always check postmortem.

10th Jun 2018, 8:38 PM

SeanR

Also, I think we can safely say that the grandpa is not okay. He was stabbed in the back and blood came out his mouth.
Even if it missed his heart, that is not good.

view HeSerpenty's profile

12th Jun 2018, 10:15 AM

HeSerpenty

Yes.... he took a pretty bad hit there and he's hurting! I'd say his chances lessened considerable....depending on what happened with that latest shot >__>

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10th Jun 2018, 10:36 PM

Alicia

"BANG?!" You can't just end this page with BANG! I NEED THAT NEXT PAGE! O_O;

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12th Jun 2018, 10:15 AM

HeSerpenty

YES I CAN CUZ I NEED YOU TO COME BACK NEXT WEEK! XDD

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12th Jun 2018, 10:15 AM

HeSerpenty

YES I CAN CUZ I NEED YOU TO COME BACK NEXT WEEK! XDD

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11th Jun 2018, 7:05 AM

Proxy170

Oh no...tin foil hat theory here...

Kal beats the Old Man, wounded, but takes the gun back to learn from it and arm the serpents in prep for the coming war with humans...

MAN I hope I'm wrong, lol.

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12th Jun 2018, 10:16 AM

HeSerpenty

Ohohoho man x"D....I guess all I can say is we wait and seeeeee! :3

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11th Jun 2018, 10:01 PM

The Accidental Ninja

*puts down binoculars*
Yyyeah... I think we all saw that coming a ways away.
D:

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12th Jun 2018, 10:16 AM

HeSerpenty

Yes.... lolol indeed we did x"D. Proper damage assessment to be had next couple of panels!

26th Aug 2018, 5:42 AM

Lilbluebox

I haven't left a comment since JUNE?

Time to fix that.

I think the reason I didn't comment at first was because this page and the next two all flow together. And they're supposed to; they're all part of a fight scene and nothing else BUT the fight scene is happening, as it should be. And that fight, by the way, is excellently done. Kal grandstanding in this page really makes for a solid start; we see him shocked by the gun, of course - and he's darned lucky it missed this time - and then we see him... taunting old grandpa.

Personally, this seems to an immensely bad idea to me. Taunting takes time. And in a fight like this, which is literally to the death, why on earth would you want to give your opponent a second longer than they already have to strike back at you?

The answer to that if you're Kalverick is clearly because you're egotistical, and you are CONVINCED that you can't lose, even with this newfangled weapon that you don't know or understand that your enemy has in his hands.

Kal really didn't think that one through. And, as we know, he pays for that mistake at the bottom of the page. I'd hope he'd learn from this, but that would require learning a little something called humility, and I don't think Kal knows the word.

Now, for the art portion of this review. Your poses are so. Good. I love them; everything is very, very clear and nothing looks weird. I always know exactly what's going on, it flows very well from panel to panel and follows a clear sequence of events, which is SO crazy important in a fight scene. I can't even stress how much. And it's visually interesting to boot, which is thanks not only to your excellent posing skills, but to your paneling. Usually, you stick to boxes, and that's fine, it usually works. But here you've done much more energetic panels, with diagonals and whatnot, and it works so much better than boxes would have. In particular you have this violent point where panels seven, eight, and nine meet on the slope of panel six. I love that layout. It works SO well.

And of course, Kal's arm coming out of the panel line? Priceless.

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28th Aug 2018, 5:41 PM

HeSerpenty

Haha! To be fair I hadn't even noticed it's been that long! So no need to apologize <3

Thank you very much for the feedback! Indeed the rectangular panels don't work for the straight up action sequences haha-- I'm really glad that these flow out the way they are supposed to! That's especially important for scenes like this indeed--- great practice because they are hard for me haha

Kalverick definitely coulda spared himself a lot of pain if he wasn't a pompous a*s! At least we don't mind seeing HIM suffer! This fight could've went better for both of them X"D

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