Chapter 6.28-- Just Not Possible

posted 25th May 2018, 6:13 PM

Chapter 6.28-- Just Not Possible

average rating: 5

Please vote on TWC for an important look into Keymen's past!

post a comment
author comments
view HeSerpenty's profile

25th May 2018, 6:13 PM

HeSerpenty

Of course Kalverick would go for the kill X_X

But WE have a pretty good clue that the gal he's looking for isn't there >__>
Wonder what is in store for Kal X"D

-------

Technically last week I didnt say WHEN this week I would post! I decided to try to take my time....and post on Friday again! I like Fridays...I miss them T_T. Plus this gives me the weekend OFF off haha

Have a good week everyone! Thanks for reading!

end of message
user comments
view Alicia's profile

25th May 2018, 7:47 PM

Alicia

AH! Careful, Kalverick! You might be going for grandma in the bed and end up with the wolf instead. x_x

...Wait, why am I cheering for the "bad guy?" X'D

end of message
view HeSerpenty's profile

26th May 2018, 7:23 PM

HeSerpenty

LOL! Admit it, Kal has grown on you! :P

end of message
view Slim Kittens's profile

25th May 2018, 7:49 PM

Slim Kittens

I wonder if Grandfather is "ready"?

end of message
view HeSerpenty's profile

26th May 2018, 7:28 PM

HeSerpenty

Hahaha he looked like he was getting pretty ready earlier! Don't think Kal has a clue X"D

end of message
view The Accidental Ninja's profile

25th May 2018, 9:43 PM

The Accidental Ninja

Ho boy
Angry grandfathers aren't something you want to mess with, Kal pal.

Also, this page looks real nice. And those trees (especially the leaves) look great!

end of message
view HeSerpenty's profile

26th May 2018, 7:32 PM

HeSerpenty

Especially when they have a gun!

Thank you so much! That first panel took a lot of time X'D

end of message
view Vivocateur's profile

25th May 2018, 9:55 PM

Vivocateur

Uuuummm... Kal?
I don't think that lump in the bed is quite as hapless-serpent-witnessing-girlish as you're hoping...

end of message
view HeSerpenty's profile

26th May 2018, 7:37 PM

HeSerpenty

LOL! I think ur right!

end of message
view Mel Cormac's profile

26th May 2018, 2:05 AM

Mel Cormac

EXCUSE ME KALVERICK CAN YOU PLEASE NOT?

end of message
view HeSerpenty's profile

26th May 2018, 7:38 PM

HeSerpenty

Hahahaha HE CANT HELP HIMSELF XD

end of message
view megados's profile

26th May 2018, 8:24 AM

megados

No low is too low, huh Kalverick? Maybe there's an unpleasant surprise waiting for ya?

end of message
view HeSerpenty's profile

26th May 2018, 7:38 PM

HeSerpenty

Haha nope there is not! And yeeeaa....maybe you're right there X"D

end of message
view MST3KFan's profile

26th May 2018, 9:23 AM

MST3KFan

Hmm... I'm thinking...

image

But are we really feeling sorry for what may come for Kal here?

end of message
view HeSerpenty's profile

26th May 2018, 7:41 PM

HeSerpenty

LOL! That pic X"D

Could be right about that! >__>

end of message
view Proxy170's profile

26th May 2018, 10:09 AM

Proxy170

Oh no! What are you gonna do to my man Kal??? D: Gah I feel terrible for liking this guy, but he's seriously someone you love for all the shit he causes, kinda like Cersei in GoT.

Some wonderful backgrounds on this page btw, that top panel looks like a painting :D

end of message
view DLKmusic's profile

26th May 2018, 11:45 AM

DLKmusic

Cersei? I personally think of Kal as more of a Joffrey, myself. Dimas would be Cersie. And of course, Hizzy is John Snow, because they both know NOTHING....

so does that mean Keyman would be.... Tyrion?

end of message
view HeSerpenty's profile

26th May 2018, 8:04 PM

HeSerpenty

Hahahha these GoT references are making me so happy! I love that show xD
LOL....Hizruk and Jon Snow knowing nothing X"D. So true!

Hmmm yea actually haha Keymen and Tyrion share some similar traits especially when it comes to scheming haha

end of message
view Proxy170's profile

27th May 2018, 8:04 AM

Proxy170

I actually think Demas has some smarts to him, so I see him as more of a Tywin...and Kal, bless his heart, is more like Cersei in the "I think I'm smart and can win this but make poor decisions that backfire" category XD Keymen as Tyrion totally works imo, and has that nice parallel of (grand)parental hate that Tywin/Tyrion and Demas/Keymen share.

Hizruk....hahahaha so true XD

end of message
view HeSerpenty's profile

26th May 2018, 7:56 PM

HeSerpenty

LOL!! The words "My man Kal" are words I thought I'd never read but I love it! Hahaha i giggled outloud when I read it this morning :3

I'm thrilled for that comparison hahaha. Kal is definitely a problem causer and he's not done yet!

end of message
view Matt Knab's profile

28th May 2018, 4:13 AM

Matt Knab

Watch out for the Karmic sledgehammer. XD

end of message
view HeSerpenty's profile

2nd Jun 2018, 3:05 AM

HeSerpenty

Hahaha you got that right x"D

end of message
view Haegan2005's profile

28th May 2018, 5:41 AM

Haegan2005

You know, the more I see of this guy, the more I want him to piss off Andrea from the HUB.

Good thing its a separate universe, right?

Of course, my opinion of his bosses is not much better... A teeny tiny bit, but does that really count?

As always, good story telling makes a reader love/hate the characters. BRAVO!!!

I am always reading, just not always commenting!

end of message
view HeSerpenty's profile

2nd Jun 2018, 3:07 AM

HeSerpenty

I recall drawing Andrea a couple times :3. Centy makes some pretty bada*s characters, so I gotta agree with you there!

Thank you so much it really encourages me to hear that! And always happy to know you are reading <3. I appreciate your support!

end of message
view JammyTheBirb's profile

30th May 2018, 7:51 AM

JammyTheBirb

'not possible' or would you just not want to try? -_-

end of message
view HeSerpenty's profile

2nd Jun 2018, 3:07 AM

HeSerpenty

LOL, that's a good point Jammy!

end of message

2nd Jun 2018, 8:01 PM

Lilbluebox

Scene change! I put all my pocket lint on this whole thing not going well at all. The word 'fiasco' springs to mind. Particularly given that Kalverick, rather predictably, decides to just go directly for the kill.

I've decided to focus on the art for this comment, since really, story wise, it's just Kalverick breaking into someone's house to commit murder, which surprises absolutely no one. So! Let's start with backgrounds! Good gosh but do I adore the first panel of this page. The way the house is framed by the surroundings is just stunning. I love the atmosphere created by your color choice, the impending storm, and the little detail of the axe in the tree stump. You've managed to capture the look of a house in the woods right before a storm strikes with that establishing shot and it's absolutely magnificent.

I also love how you cut twice to the thunderstorm, once when it starts to rain, and once for a flash of lightning. It's exceedingly effective, especially since you always mirror it with a smaller panel of what Kalverick's doing. The composition of this page is really something.

I also appreciate Shera's bedroom. We haven't seen too many bedrooms in this story, but the ones we have all feel distinctly different, as if they belong to different people. And that's rare, I think; it's hard to give a room personality, but you've managed it every time and set every room apart depending on who owns it.

I feel sorry for her window, though. Kalverick using his knife to open it like that can't be good for it - though I do love the sketchy outline of him in the rain through the window just before he pulls the knife and breaks in. Very ominous.

And, continuing the trend of feeling sorry for things that aren't people, that poor tree in the second big panel looks like it's about to topple over. Poor thing!

end of message
view HeSerpenty's profile

16th Jun 2018, 1:33 PM

HeSerpenty

Haha prepare to a whole buncha pocket lint because I think you're right about that! ;D XDD

Thank you so much! this page took me a really long time because of those backgrounds haha--these establishing shots have to be nicer X"D..

When i imagined this scene in my head--this particular moment anyway..the storm was really significant part of it. In setting it up XD..since the fighting happens inside hah.
Im glad to hear about the bedroom! It's reeeally simple at grandpa's house X"D...not a lot of decor. But it has a little bit of Shera flare XDD

LOL save your sympathy! Don't waste it on THIIIINGSSS! You'll be needing to save it for the characters as this story continues!

end of message
post a comment
tip