Chapter 6.27-- It is what it is

posted 13th May 2018, 10:22 PM

Chapter 6.27-- It is what it is
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13th May 2018, 10:22 PM

HeSerpenty

This page wraps up this scene! But we WILL be checking back on these guys don't worry. I think the scene coming up is gonna be one ya don't wanna miss! <3

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WWEEELL what can I say-- weekends are the best time I can page and this weekend I was busy with my momma (Cuz you know...Mother's Day and all lol).

BUT! I'm working on the real colors as we speak! So check back in the next couple of days to see the completed page! It's kinda fun to see the major difference xD

Just wanted to make sure to post something before the week is up! Thanks for your patience!

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Finished the page! I feel like they take me longer. I think that's because I'm trying harder? Haha I hope it LOOKS like I'm tryin harder cuz then that'd be sad X"D

Anyway! Be sure to come back next week cuz this next scene should be a fun one :D! (Tomeanywaylolol)


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14th May 2018, 6:47 AM

Alicia

Well *I* am proud of you, Sid. XD <3

Aw, poor Bleke though. HE'S GOTTA PULL THROUGH! Also, is that a certain pickle-loving man carrying Bleke away? >.>

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15th May 2018, 6:27 PM

HeSerpenty

Hahaha it sure is! Good EYE hehe. Get it? Cuz of his eye? Lololok

14th May 2018, 7:43 AM

megados

Hey, Sid, one question: Tell us please, if you would, who found Bleke first? :D

Speaking of Bleke, you all know he needs some medical attention, right? Pretty soon would be better. Judgement Chamber doesn't sound a lot like medical help.

Maybe Merek can divert him.

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15th May 2018, 6:27 PM

HeSerpenty

Hahaha! I'm preetty sure the right answer is Sid? Amiright, Sid? X"D

Judgement chamber turns out to be the OPPOSITE of medical help X"D.... if you think about what happened to that poor civilian X"D

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14th May 2018, 11:06 AM

Proxy170

Oh Sid...when will you learn? XD

I always enjoy seeing WIPs, and I want to say this is the first time I've seen it in the B&W phase for you? Looks great in B&W too, but if this is showing your whole process (sketch layer) I'm surprised you don't draw more backgrounds in! I'd be terrible at scaling and perspective if I didn't draw the backgrounds too. But your guys all look appropriately to scale :)

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15th May 2018, 6:29 PM

HeSerpenty

Haha I wanted to at least finish lines before I posted it...then it occured to me that Barron and Ryder looked kinda naked if I didn't color their suits LOL. But yeea it's better to draw the backgrounds first however.. I always procrastinate too much on the page X__X

Thank you Proxy! <3

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14th May 2018, 5:42 PM

Haegan2005

I kinda like the black and white lines.

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15th May 2018, 6:30 PM

HeSerpenty

Haha you know, honestly? Sometimes I wish I woulda just done B&W haha. Buuut at almost 300 pages in full color its WAY too late X"D

Thank you! <3

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15th May 2018, 7:47 PM

Slim Kittens

Panel 7: "I want to bite you SOOOO bad!"

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18th May 2018, 7:18 PM

HeSerpenty

Hahaha he does!

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16th May 2018, 2:35 PM

Matt Knab

He totally wants a medal. :)

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18th May 2018, 7:18 PM

HeSerpenty

A medal and a promotion! X"D

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16th May 2018, 5:03 PM

DLKmusic

Wow, Takeo is really pushing it here... It would take a LOT for me to any ANY character more than Kalverick, but I have to admit that Takeo is giving me a good run for the money here!

hmmm... Nah, still hate Kalverick more!

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18th May 2018, 7:19 PM

HeSerpenty

LOL Kal had to make sure there was someone left behind to get you all riled up Don! <3

I think you might really enjoy this next scene coming up X3

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16th May 2018, 9:49 PM

Centcomm

caught up! HUGS ive missed this :D great job!@

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18th May 2018, 7:19 PM

HeSerpenty

Aw yay THANK U CENTY! <3

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17th May 2018, 7:47 PM

Vivocateur

Uhhg! Takeo! I knew he was going to do this and yet still it annoys me X'D

Sid...really? (Lol, he was great on this page)

I'm excited for the next couple of pages; it seems like all the pieces are in place for the first (doubtless of many) clashes between the factions since Merek and his guys have agreed to take a stand. I just can't see Merek letting this go so easily...and there's just no way Takeo will back down. Civil strife seems imminent!

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18th May 2018, 7:21 PM

HeSerpenty

Hahaha! So despicably predictable!

Ohh you can be sure there's going to be some clashes coming up! I'm excited for it :3. Thank you I am glad you are too! Haha it's too bad Takeo is too much like Kalverick to listen to Abby X"D

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21st May 2018, 11:05 PM

junoro

Nice angle in the first panel!!

And after reading your author comment, yeah, I can confirm that the pages are looking more detailed! Like you even put those two serpents on the wall behind the two unwanted guests! That's some nice dedication, Serpy!!

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25th May 2018, 6:16 PM

HeSerpenty

Thank you Juno!

And that makes me so glad to hear! LOL I'm trying! Trying to put more character in my BGs X"D. These pages are too big tho I just dont have time :'D. So I appreciate the feedback <3)

2nd Jun 2018, 7:43 PM

Lilbluebox

The page in which the bad guys are total jerks. Well, we saw this coming. As Merek says, he suspected this could happen, and I know I did too. Takeo and Abbaline continue proving themselves to be uncaring, which also doesn't surprise me in the slightest, and I love how harshly shadowed Takeo's face is in the fourth panel. I recognize that that's a result of the natural harsh lighting and contrasts in this scene, but it works wonders with this morally bankrupt character, particularly when matched up with those cheekbones.

In fact, Bleke being carried out of the light of the waterfall and into those harsh shadows is a terrifying foreshadowing of where he's actually being taken do. Ow. Poor man, he deserves better than this.

I don't think Abbaline's had an expression other than 'bored' yet, and it works very well for him. Excellent contrast to Sid throwing a hissy fit back there, and Takeo's angry sarcasm. Ryder, however, takes the medal for best expression this page, because the look on his face in the fifth panel is all squinty eyed and 'hmph' and it cracks me up. XD

I always appreciate a good close-up of Merek's face, but I like even more that the last words he says on this page are said when he himself is mostly off the panel and all you see is a section of shoulder pad. It's a neat way of framing what's happening and I like it a lot.

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16th Jun 2018, 1:36 PM

HeSerpenty

Haha yeaa Takeo and Abby have big shoes to fill in the JERK department. You know they have to make it like Kal never left at all X"D. But it's a shame for Bleke that his fate isn't in Merek's hands....because things may turn out for him a lot worse than they would have.

Thank you so much for your feedback it's always nice to hear when things I'm hoping to go for or illustrate works out successfully! It's gonna be an interesting thing...this time before the council X3. To be continued on that!

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