Chapter 6.26-- Follow the Whistle Find the Dog

posted 6th May 2018, 6:17 PM

Chapter 6.26-- Follow the Whistle Find the Dog

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view HeSerpenty's profile

6th May 2018, 6:17 PM

HeSerpenty

WELLL so much for getting there first, Merek X"D

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It's Sunday! It counts!

Thanks for reading everyone!

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view Chippewa Ghost's profile

6th May 2018, 7:22 PM

Chippewa Ghost

What the hell is this? The Malfoys making a guest appearance?!

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view HeSerpenty's profile

6th May 2018, 7:27 PM

HeSerpenty

LOL....guess it does look that way X"D...tho I've never been in to Harry Potter X)
This isn't their very first appearance tho! Won't be their last either :D

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view megados's profile

7th May 2018, 6:11 AM

megados

Haha, Sid! Keep it up!

More complications >_< Nothing so bad that it can't get worse, eh?

Yep, you made it in time, HeSerpenty! It looks like you're getting more comfortable with your new program and process, too!

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8th May 2018, 1:15 AM

HeSerpenty

Hahaha that should be the slogan for the comic! "Nothing so bad it can't get worse" X"DDD

Thank you so much! THe pages are finally looking better to ME so I'm even happier if they're starting to look better to all of you too!

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view Alicia's profile

7th May 2018, 7:00 AM

Alicia

AH! Okay, okay he can be your responsibility... as long as you go get that him that medical attention he so desperately needs. >.<

...My guess is not though. T_T

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8th May 2018, 1:16 AM

HeSerpenty

Haha that is a very good guess! <3

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view Proxy170's profile

7th May 2018, 10:11 AM

Proxy170

Aw DANG IT who invited these guys??? That ruins EVERYONE's plan >:( Well, maybe not everyone...

So glad Bleke didn't say Hizruk's name though...but the red eyes thing makes me think it'll point to him eventually.

Also...is Barron hiding his package? XD That'd be so like him to do so I'd think lol

Speech bubbles look great now, Serpy! No pixelation :)

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view HeSerpenty's profile

8th May 2018, 1:28 AM

HeSerpenty

Haha everyone's except theirs! Yesss I think when he becomes more coherent it's gonna clear some things up for lots of people X3

LOL yes he is! It is so something he'd do!

YAY thank you! I'm relieved to hear that X"D

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view Vivocateur's profile

7th May 2018, 12:03 PM

Vivocateur

Hhmm...that mention of a red eyed monster is ominous. I wonder what more he'll have to say about it when he's recovered.

Yay! Abbaline and Takeo are here! ...is what nobody on this page is thinking. I'm happy to see them though :D (Those were not my words exactly...lolol!)

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view DLKmusic's profile

7th May 2018, 4:37 PM

DLKmusic

I for one am VERY happy to see them here... Now Merek can toss them over the waterfall!

Two less problems to deal with!

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view HeSerpenty's profile

13th May 2018, 10:29 PM

HeSerpenty

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13th May 2018, 10:30 PM

HeSerpenty

If they let him recover that is! X"D
Haha I know of one red eyed monster we all hope doesn't become suspect! (coughHizrukCough)

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view MST3KFan's profile

7th May 2018, 1:40 PM

MST3KFan

No one expects the Spanish Inqu--

Oh...um...the "Sinister Blond Brigade"?

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view HeSerpenty's profile

13th May 2018, 10:31 PM

HeSerpenty

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11th May 2018, 5:36 PM

JammyTheBirb

Uh oh. This really doesn't seem good at all...

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view HeSerpenty's profile

13th May 2018, 10:31 PM

HeSerpenty

No sir not at all!

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view junoro's profile

21st May 2018, 11:01 PM

junoro

oH GOLLY, looks like Hizruk is implicated again! It's been a while since those red eyes have shown up in the comic.... I wonder if we'll ever get to see what REALLY happened...? Perhaps a flashback, hmmmm??

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25th May 2018, 6:17 PM

HeSerpenty

Lolol you got that right! DOn't u worry we'll be seein' more red eyes! Possibly TOO MUCH RED EYES D: (lol)

Yuss we'll find out for sure I promise thee!

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2nd Jun 2018, 7:24 PM

Lilbluebox

Sid, stop giving Felix the evil eye. He's not using your knife. Though I suppose you could be giving the evil eye to Merek, in which case, also stop it, he literally just saved your life.

Well, enough of that. Aside from Sid being a continual ungrateful brat, there's a lot happening in this page, and it's all quite interesting. I believe in panel two that Merek's trying to see if he can get Bleke's eyes to focus? If so, that's a lovely little detail that I appreciate. And of course, I can't not love Felix getting a line of his very own. My little baby growing up~ XD But more than that, I appreciate the middle panel of the second row. Bleke's giving little tiny details, and that panel, along with Merek's face, give us such a lot of characterization, because they all react differently.

Merek clearly has an idea of what he's talking about, Ryder's horrified, Kyle looks shocked, and Felix is trying to think it through and figure things out. It's a really cool panel that gives us a snapshot of them all reacting differently, which in turn gives us an idea to their individual personalities. I love it. It's very well done. And I feel so badly for Bleke, trying so hard to convey this information when he's in such bad shape.

Ah, Takeo and Abbaline appear! I have to admit, Abbaline's dialogue makes me more inclined to like him over Takeo. Takeo's just kind of a massive sleazy jerk. I appreciate Abbaline being more even and logical. He doesn't appear to take joy in this; it's just a job, whereas Takeo is very clearly enjoying this.

Nice dress sense though.

I think my favorite part about that second to last panel is how Merek asserts his dominance by standing up and being at least a head taller than everyone else there. Look at this solid brick wall of a man. He'd probably make one heck of a basketball player if that sport existed and he wanted to play it.

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11th Aug 2019, 2:28 PM

HeSerpenty

Lolol Sid is just a brat all the time--I'm not sure if he can ever change! LOL


Haha and yes...Abbaline is WAY better to deal with than Takeo and especially Kalverick. It was a rare good call on Kal's part to have Abby come along too cuuuuuuz his team really needs a level head. Aand lucky for Merek he's a more neutral head than the other two x"D. Still sucks for Bleke tho....cuz even tho one of his two acting superiors is more neutral and less inclined to want to punish him... he's STIIILL not willing to put his neck on the line for him either. That's totally a Merek thing x"D (as we'll find out >_<)

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view lirvilas's profile

10th Aug 2019, 6:28 PM

lirvilas

hey look it's the frikkin' Malfoys

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view HeSerpenty's profile

11th Aug 2019, 2:29 PM

HeSerpenty

LOL yup! Cuz nothing says evil like super bright hair and dark eyebrows!

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view lirvilas's profile

11th Aug 2019, 2:31 PM

lirvilas

edit: Oh. My. God.

I already commented on this page (as Chippewa Ghost)... and it was the same freaking comment.

...

Uh, I dropped you some change in PayPal, let's just pretend this never happened.

Jaysus.

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view HeSerpenty's profile

11th Aug 2019, 2:46 PM

HeSerpenty

LOL!! I remember you making this comment back then too!

But I thought to myself "I'm just happy he's still here <3"

And thank you so much I appreciate it!

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