Chapter 6.24-- JUMP!

posted 14th Apr 2018, 4:46 PM

Chapter 6.24-- JUMP!
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14th Apr 2018, 4:46 PM

HeSerpenty

A bold move! Will it work? :O

So much banter in this page. Can't you three get along when your facing a raging underground waterfall?

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My old way of paging is a little hard to adjust to in a new program. Still need much practice! X"D
Good thing this is a long comic


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14th Apr 2018, 4:56 PM

Alicia

AW! Lookit them all saving the day! <3 Haha I love the banter back and forth between Ryder and Sid. XD

And the page looks great! I hope this program saves you time and headache, because the end result still looks good! <3

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16th Apr 2018, 12:08 PM

HeSerpenty

Hahaha Im proud of these boys for getting the job done despite the fact that they can't just get along!

Lol program doesn't save those things quiiite yet because of my own page processes that probably need to change but it at least doesnt crash all the time! So in that sense it does! :D

14th Apr 2018, 5:58 PM

megados

A little risky, but it could work. (If that's okay with you, Sid) Really guys, quit squabbling; it's counterproductive.

Page looks good, new program or no! Once you get used to what you want to do, it will probably get easier too. :D

--also wanted to mention, I like the serpent-form speech font!

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16th Apr 2018, 12:12 PM

HeSerpenty

Hahaha they're like a bunch of adolescents those boys!

Thank you I'm glad to hear it! So far there's only a couple things I don't like about it but that's only because I'm soo set in my ways. I'm sure it'll change!

And thanks! I hoped to kinda show that in the serpent form their voices kinda change a bit. I imagine a bit Higher and raspier sorta? More snake-like? haha

17th Apr 2018, 4:25 AM

megados

"I hoped to kinda show that in the serpent form their voices kinda change a bit. I imagine a bit Higher and raspier sorta? More snake-like?"

I think it does that. I got the 'raspier' part. Higher is hard to show, I guess, but I took it as more air/less vocal. So it does work.

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28th Apr 2018, 11:51 AM

HeSerpenty

That is excellent feedback! Thank you so much! The font stays :3

view MST3KFan's profile

15th Apr 2018, 12:16 AM

MST3KFan

Everyone stop bantering with each other and just rescue the guy! Yeesh.

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16th Apr 2018, 12:12 PM

HeSerpenty

Hahaha seriously! Meanwhile...as Bleke is dying X"D

view Jarvi's profile

15th Apr 2018, 12:28 AM

Jarvi

Omigod this is intense :D
But yeah I love the banter, stupid guys, focus on being productive xD

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16th Apr 2018, 12:13 PM

HeSerpenty

Haha we were due for an intense moment!

They can work together... but they have to make sure they know how much they don't like each other X"D

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15th Apr 2018, 9:02 AM

Proxy170

Love how you really channel the serpent side by talking about what they smell...adds so much depth to the universe :) Love Ryder's special marks down his back too!

While I'm sure this will work, let's try not to add too much more damage to Bleke, ok guys? XD

The art looks just as good btw in this new program, so good job adjusting! The only thing that looks a bit different is speech bubbles--does CS have that built in?

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28th Apr 2018, 11:52 AM

HeSerpenty

Thank you for that feedback Prox! Sometimes it's easy to forget they're not human x"D

LOL ikr? Yea don't forget he's like....dying practically guys X"D

And thank you! Yes it has a speech bubble function--tbh the text is still the part that's a little hard for me X"D. Would you say they look...worse or better? Be honest! I thank u! <3

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15th Apr 2018, 1:41 PM

DLKmusic

The page looks great, Serpy! Like Proxy said, except for the speech bubbles, I can't tell the difference!

Don't mouth off to the guy tying a rope to your neck... Good advice, Sid, props for that, lol!

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28th Apr 2018, 11:53 AM

HeSerpenty

Thank you Don! STILL gettin the hang but this program has so many cool features! <3

LOL it is good advice....we should all follow that advice X"D

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16th Apr 2018, 1:35 PM

Tantz Aerine

Love the "i hate this plan" panel. XD

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28th Apr 2018, 11:53 AM

HeSerpenty

Hahaha so much attitude there X"D

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18th Apr 2018, 5:38 PM

JammyTheBirb

Woah okay that sounds extremely dangerous for such an injured guy! 0n0

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28th Apr 2018, 11:53 AM

HeSerpenty

You are not wrong about that! X"D

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