Chapter 6.23-- Work Together?

posted 30th Mar 2018, 8:30 PM

Chapter 6.23-- Work Together?
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view HeSerpenty's profile

30th Mar 2018, 8:30 PM


Human form just can't climb up stone walls quite like the Serpent form can xDD. So nice to see these boys getting along! ....Sorta


SO.....this is the week I'm gonna delete photoshop OFF my dam computer, guys, and find something else.. I can't take the constant crashes anymore. Coulda had this page to you YESTERDAY -__-

Thank you for your continued patience!

view SunnySideUpSmile's profile

30th Mar 2018, 8:56 PM


For a minute I thought his snake form had hair haha

view HeSerpenty's profile

30th Mar 2018, 8:58 PM


Hahahaa for a second it did! A brief little transitional second X"D. Enjoy the teeny hair patch on Serpent-form Barron X'D

view Alicia's profile

30th Mar 2018, 10:22 PM


Eeeeeeeee! Their serpent forms! I love seeing everyone's other forms so much! YOU GUYS ARE SO COOL! *_*

I seriously can't stop staring at this page. It makes me want to design more serpents. X)

view HeSerpenty's profile

31st Mar 2018, 1:37 AM


Hehe I'm so excited about them! I LOVE Ryder's colors and I think he and Barron compliment each other well <33. By all means DESIGN MOAR SERPENTS! Maybe I'll steal the colors for characters I haven't decided on yet LOL! Jk jk Id never steeeal......I would just beg and plead :P

I'm happy you like this page! <3

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31st Mar 2018, 12:11 AM

Mel Cormac

Ooooh, I LOVE seeing their snake forms!

So sorry to hear Photoshop is messing with you. I switched to Clip Studio Paint about a year ago and I really like it! It's worth waiting until it goes on sale though, as it's normally quite expensive, but on sale it gets as low as $25ish.

view HeSerpenty's profile

31st Mar 2018, 1:39 AM


I have been dying to draw more characters in their serpent forms! These guys are funner to look at then..bleh..KALVERICK :P

Ooo yus I heard about Clip Studio Paint!If it's as easy to figure out as Sai I would be a haaappy camper. I just need one program that can do it ALL you know? :'D...I think that's the program I'm going to try out!

view MST3KFan's profile

31st Mar 2018, 1:20 AM


Serpent forms GO!

If Photoshop is causing issues, have you tried stuff like SAI?
I've been using it for a while, though mainly just for backgrounds and all that.

view HeSerpenty's profile

31st Mar 2018, 1:47 AM


Haha!! I feel like they should've yelled that before transforming "Serpent forms..GO!" XD. This has been a missed opportunity..

Ohh yes I LOVE Sai. I only use photoshop for my paneling and letter and just to do that is dam near impossible X"D. Part of my hesitation is tryin a new program is because Im so used to Sai and it's so easy! WHYY couldn't they have text or shape toools? WHyyy! X"D

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31st Mar 2018, 6:48 AM


Photoshop (like ALL things Adobe) is quite a memory hog - if you don't have at least 16GB RAM you will run into trouble. I have heard that Manga Studio is a pretty good program to use.

We don't see enough serpent forms - we need MOAR!!!

view HeSerpenty's profile

6th Apr 2018, 9:12 PM


Yes I think that's what the problem was--- photoshop was just too much for my poor littl computer to handle. Seems ridiculous I mean I only used PS for wording and paneling!

I have been getting lots of suggestions about Clip Studio (Aka Manga Studio) I got it! So far so good! kinda crazy tho haha!

31st Mar 2018, 5:36 AM


Oh, yes! Serpent form is perfect for this kind of area! (I never thought of that)

Sorry to hear of computer problems, although I don't have any helpful answers.

view Proxy170's profile

31st Mar 2018, 2:30 PM


Yay update! What an awesome surprise on a Friday :D Although I guess it's Saturday now... I've had a long flight and don't know what time it is anymore XD

Seeing these guys in their serpent form is always awesome :D What causes the color differences in serpents though I wonder? Reflection of personality or just how you're born?

view HeSerpenty's profile

6th Apr 2018, 9:14 PM


Hahaha it felt good to update on Friday again! I always Liked Fridays' best X"D. Ohhh girl u back in the states now???

Haha u know to be honest there's not much of a correlation to colors but generally if someone is pretty fair skinned or light hair they will have lighter S-form colors, aand same thing if someone is darker haired/darker skinned! That's the closest it gets really haha

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31st Mar 2018, 5:04 PM

Tantz Aerine

Poor Bleke..

Also, I feel you about Photoshop. It's why I transitioned to GIMP. Took a bit of customization but I'm far happier.

view HeSerpenty's profile

6th Apr 2018, 9:15 PM


Yeaa he's not had a good few days X"D

Ooh nice! Yea I decided to go with Clip Studio Paint cuz it was by far the most recommended and so far so good! Tho there's a lot of things that are different X"D

view DLKmusic's profile

31st Mar 2018, 7:10 PM


GEEZ! One quick trip to the store for peanut-butter, and you update without me! Wattupwidat?

Kewl page, but it brings to light a question I've had in the back of my head: Are they all shape-shifters, or is it only a lucky few?

p.s. Evils of Auto-correct: A almost posted "are they all Shop-lifters.."

view HeSerpenty's profile

6th Apr 2018, 9:20 PM


Haha I would never want to leave you behind, Don!

Yus all the serpents have a serpent form! Tho to transform into it is a little taboo X3

LOL shop lifters! All serpents are that too!

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1st Apr 2018, 4:21 PM

The Accidental Ninja

Sneks with eyebrows! Amazing

view HeSerpenty's profile

6th Apr 2018, 9:21 PM


U gotta love that inbetween form between the cute snakes and regular people--- Barron's little hair patch is my personal fav! X"D

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7th Apr 2018, 3:17 PM

The Accidental Ninja

Yes, that too! xD

2nd Jun 2018, 4:25 PM



And now we know what my favorite part of this page is. XD So let's go back and go over the whole thing now, shall we? I mentioned this on the last page, but I still love the waterfall and the different color it provides us. It's such a relief after all the dungeoning and dark rivers we've been seeing. Really just brightens the whole place up; I approve immensely. I like the architecture of the dungeon here too, with the bridge by the waterfall like that. It just really emphasizes what an unpleasant fall that would be.

I'm very much appreciating the dialogue on this page, as it proves that, unsurprisingly, Barron is the only person actually thinking right now. Sid... yeah, it's really easy to tell if someone's alive or not. Feel for a pulse. Check if they're breathing. Seriously, dude. You're not doing anything to fix your twelve-year-old credentials here.

And then, of course, Bleke proves his status of being alive by talking to you. At least you didn't try to slap him awake.

Ah, partial stripping. The real reason this page is so great. XD I kid, I kid, but I do very much like the panel where Barron's taking off his belt. I think it's probably his expression, coupled with the way his shirt folds as he pulls off the belt. It just looks really good. And it would be my favorite panel, but there are serpents, so it has to settle for second best.

Speaking of serpents! I very much like the choice to show them partially shifted; it's really interesting to see those in-between stages with shifter characters, I find. Sometimes they're grotesque, sometimes they're downright pretty, and here they're just very matter-of-fact. The way that Ryder's hand hasn't quite finished shifting into proper claw-foot form, the eyebrows, the hair... very well done, it's a good way to showcase the shift. And then they're shifted, and it's great.

I also do definitely like the color schemes here. Ryder's form steals the colors from his hair, while Barron's just pretty. Green and tan and reminds me of plains in spring and summer. And I like how Ryder's carrying the rope in his mouth, though I don't think he likes it very much. Well done!

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