Chapter 6.19-- Back off My Scene

posted 19th Feb 2018, 8:01 PM

Chapter 6.19-- Back off My Scene
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view HeSerpenty's profile

19th Feb 2018, 8:01 PM


Ohhh dear... well I think we all saw this coming X)

Who gonna win?? :P


Thanks for reading, everybody! <33

view MST3KFan's profile

20th Feb 2018, 1:13 AM


Two on one. Sure you wanna take those odds, Sid?

view HeSerpenty's profile

22nd Feb 2018, 10:03 AM


Haha guess he counts the dagger so it's 2 on 2!

20th Feb 2018, 5:34 AM


Sid, Sid, Sid, even with your knife it's 2:1, plus now that your intentions are known, they have a story to tell. I think you goofed, Sid.

view HeSerpenty's profile

22nd Feb 2018, 11:04 AM


Hahaha true he's not winning any intelligence or strategy points here! XD

view Alicia's profile

20th Feb 2018, 7:14 AM


Guys, guys! Work TOGETHER to figure this all out! Wouldn't that be best? XD (Sid ain't gonna do that, haha.)


view HeSerpenty's profile

22nd Feb 2018, 12:34 PM


LOL! Sid and Barron work TOGETHER? I don't think Sid would go for that too well. Or...Barron for that matter. TOO MANY BAD MEMORIES! XDD

view Centcomm's profile

20th Feb 2018, 9:22 AM


whooops someone is a bit testy!

view HeSerpenty's profile

22nd Feb 2018, 12:35 PM


He needs a snickers for sure!

view Proxy170's profile

20th Feb 2018, 2:21 PM


Two versus one? My odds are on Barron and Ryder!

Sid's ambitious, but he's not as intelligent about it as'll serve Kal well to have this sort of brute force option to do his dirty work...then throw him under the bus later to keep his hands clean.

Oops, too much evil thinking from me >.>

view HeSerpenty's profile

22nd Feb 2018, 12:36 PM


Hahaha I think you and Kal are thinking along the same lines here lololol....altho he's kinda been losing it himself! It's probably good that Kalverick has his other two guys filling in for him right now...but I don't think Sid sees it that way haha

view DLKmusic's profile

20th Feb 2018, 8:59 PM


Way to go Ryder! This is part of the reason why Merek Trusts you! Can we revisit the idea of tying Sid up with a rope and a gag and throwing him in a back room somewhere?

view HeSerpenty's profile

22nd Feb 2018, 7:00 PM


Haha that's right! Dependable Ryder <3

LOL! well they have the rope! And there's plenty of negative space in that dungeon to throw a body and have it not be found! XDD

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21st Feb 2018, 8:56 AM

The Accidental Ninja

That is a good kick. I like that kick.
Good job.
(I know from experience how hard it is to kick backwards like that...)

view HeSerpenty's profile

1st Mar 2018, 9:25 AM


Hahah thank you! I won't lie I had to reference the heck outta that X"D

Fancy moooves!

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22nd Feb 2018, 2:39 PM

Matt Knab

Trust me, no one wants any part of your thunder. XD

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1st Mar 2018, 9:25 AM


LOL right? Like...get over yourself!

view junoro's profile

15th Mar 2018, 8:43 AM


NICE DYNAMIC FIGHT SCENE DUDE 8D That kick that literally breaks out of the panel? EXCELLENT.

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15th Mar 2018, 7:03 PM


THANKSMAN! Hahaa yea action scenes are..hard X__X. Way harder than I expected! But this is some good practice! One of those art fears I'm vanquishing I guess X"DD

22nd Mar 2018, 2:20 PM


Actually, Sid, seeing as how the entire scene up until now has been Barron and Ryder, it's actually THEIR scene. You lurking little interloper. XD

All right. Now that I'm FINALLY getting around to commenting on this... let's really begin with the scene itself. I like how this is written, first off. I do like reading investigations when they're well done and involve great characters, which this does! At least in the beginning, before Sid barges in like the show-stealer he wants to be. I do think Barron's right - the cover-up is ALWAYS more important in this world that the Council has built. And, sadly enough, sometimes it's more important than the truth even for our lovely protagonists. So many secrets going on here. So many things to hide.

Although our wonderful protagonists hide things in an effort to make things better, not sweep the bad under the rug and wait for it to mold. That's what the Council does. Probably part of the reason things have gotten so bad.

Your water, Serpy... maaaaan, you've gotten so good at coloring water. That's a MAGNIFICENT panel.

And now for the second half of the page, in which Sid shows up and makes life miserable for everyone. Except for Ryder, who gets to show off an epic high roundhouse kick! I know I said this back when the page first came out, but it bears repeating: I love how you've positioned Ryder when he does that. VERY much an action pose! And it's a lovely little change of pace; you don't usually let your characters escape their panels, so it's got a lot of impact here!

Also, Barron + Ryder = bros for life. Totally besties. I love it to pieces.

Oh, heeeeey, would you look at that? Sid has his silly little knife with the hole in the middle that will probably do him absolutely no good at all and I think might be a different color than the first time we saw it? Looks great even if it is.

My favorite panel is probably the water shot. It's got fantastic angles and that water just looks so good. A very close second is Ryder's epic roundhouse kick because of course it is. And third is actually the last panel on the entire page with Sid's head! I'm not sure why, but I just adore the expression on his face. Probably because he looks like a petulant little brat. Fitting, considering his character!

(Apologies for the extreme lateness in this and the upcoming commentary. It's been a crazy month. ._.)

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31st Mar 2018, 12:35 AM


Hahhaaha thank you so much Im glad you're enjoying my little mini-investigation here! Yes the Council was sure quick to have all that blood cleaned up...aaaand notice now that finding the missing umbras is kinda more Merek's and Kalverick's order than theirs haha (both for TOTALLY different motives mind u x"D)

Yay Im glad the water looks good! Water is relaxing to color--- maybe I should take a week just to paint various forms of water X"D.

Hahahaha I worked hard on that kick that Ryder makes look so effortless! :P. And YES...bros for life that's what they totally are! If you get that vibe on this page then this whole scene is worth it! <3

Don't dis Sid's dagger, maaan! Hahaha the hole makes it COOOOOL! XP haha

Giiirl you never have to apologize about late comments, silly!! Your comments are always welcome no matter WHEN they are! <3

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