Chapter 6.16-- So Much to Say

posted 27th Jan 2018, 5:26 PM

Chapter 6.16-- So Much to Say
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27th Jan 2018, 5:26 PM

HeSerpenty

OHh you mean humans aren't over there thinking "DEATH TO ALL SERPENTS"?? That goes against council propaganda!

Lol also it would seem Keymen's spent some time in the human lands X3--we'll learn more about this

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You guys...at this point... I'm too ashamed to even keep saying all the stuff in my life that's preventing me from being on time. It's probably sounding like I'm making it up at this point.

I just really appreciate your patience, thank you for sticking with me! T__T


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27th Jan 2018, 6:25 PM

Haegan2005

Real Life getting in the way of posting a comic? Who would have thought? ;)

We feel for you. I had to lower my posts from 5 days a week to two. Editing takes time and energy. I sometimes don't have either of that!

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28th Jan 2018, 11:05 PM

HeSerpenty

Ikr?? Imagine a real life out there aside from comicing...a crazy thought!

Daaang 5 a week? I'd say TWO is still impressive! Hahah I can't even manage one X"D.

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27th Jan 2018, 6:28 PM

Alicia

NOW KISS! >_>

Seriously, one interruption after another... I need these two together Right. Now. XD

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28th Jan 2018, 11:06 PM

HeSerpenty

LOL they do always get interrupted huh? We gotta make em' work for it!

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27th Jan 2018, 7:53 PM

Slim Kittens

Dr. Keyman is IN.

Let me guess. Serafina?

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28th Jan 2018, 11:07 PM

HeSerpenty

Hehehehe that is a SPLENDID guess! <3
I'm very impressed you remember her! :D

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28th Jan 2018, 12:38 AM

Centcomm

Dont worry. we are hanging in .. and i well know about issues causing problems. :D HUGS!

view HeSerpenty's profile

29th Jan 2018, 6:22 PM

HeSerpenty

I know you do, Centy! I hope all is well for you!

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28th Jan 2018, 2:31 AM

MST3KFan

Of course these two can't have any free time together. XP

And don't worry, Serpy. People should know unless a webcomic artist is doing the webcomic strictly as their job (making money), that they have things going on in the real world to deal with and sometimes that takes precedence over the comic. If not, then they're shallow.

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29th Jan 2018, 6:23 PM

HeSerpenty

We have to make them work for it! XD

And you're totally right. It would be pretty silly for people to get mad over a free webcomic's updating schedule XD. But it's still comforting to hear the reassurance!

28th Jan 2018, 5:57 AM

megados

Keymen's got the whole crowd in the palm of his hand, doesn't he? :D Well he has the attention of those guys in the back . . . Who's Gwynn's distraction, I wonder.

Things don't always go according to plan. There's a saying: "Life sometimes gets in the way of living" ;)

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5th Feb 2018, 8:33 PM

HeSerpenty

Haha yeap Keymen knows how to command an audience! LOL it's a skill that's proved very useful in his life!

Lol that is a REALLY good and accurate saying X"D

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28th Jan 2018, 11:25 AM

Proxy170

Oh gosh...is that Serafine? Not NOW girl! >.>

It might go against Council propaganda for now, but I think that might change soon...

Serpy don't stress so much, you're a great creator who has honestly been doing more for her readers than we deserve!

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5th Feb 2018, 8:34 PM

HeSerpenty

LOL! Super good guess!!!
Aaaand yes..you caught that haha. Thanks to a certain main character who gave a great opportunity or the humans to find out aaaand not be too happy about it X"D

Aw proxy you are always so supportive...thank u <33

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28th Jan 2018, 2:41 PM

zartala

Serpy! Please don't ever feel ashamed for all the stuff in your life that's preventing you from updating on time! Your life matters! :)

(also totally nth-ing all the Serafina guesses XD)

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7th Feb 2018, 5:51 PM

HeSerpenty

Thanks so much for saying so, Zartala! You guys all always reassure me so much <33

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28th Jan 2018, 3:31 PM

Matt Knab

Getting run out of town had NOTHING to do with being such a charming devil, I bet. ;)

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7th Feb 2018, 5:51 PM

HeSerpenty

LOL nooo nothing at all !X"D

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28th Jan 2018, 6:59 PM

The Accidental Ninja

Seems like Keymen has many agendas, and all of them are against the Council... good, good. This is good.

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28th Jan 2018, 8:21 PM

DLKmusic

don't you mean....

image

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7th Feb 2018, 5:52 PM

HeSerpenty

LOL yes...this is true. Bunch of mini agendas to help along the biggest agenda of them all X"D

(haha DLK that gif is perfect x"D_

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28th Jan 2018, 8:24 PM

DLKmusic

I tried really hard to come up with some kind of funny one liner about your situation, Serpy, but I respect what you are currently doing too much! Keep up the good work, and if any one of your readers doesn't understand that, it's their problem!!!!

Can I get an AMEN from the congregation?

29th Jan 2018, 9:09 AM

robnot

29th Jan 2018, 9:12 PM

megados

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7th Feb 2018, 5:53 PM

HeSerpenty

AMEN! Preach it! Haha it's true I seem to be the hardest on myself--all of YOU have been wonderful! <3

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28th Jan 2018, 11:49 PM

WitUnderPressure

I'm reminded of an episode of "The Simpsons" in which they had a holiday dedicated to killing snakes called Whacking Day.

view HeSerpenty's profile

7th Feb 2018, 5:53 PM

HeSerpenty

Aw gosh what a sad, terrible holiday X"D LOL

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2nd Feb 2018, 12:49 AM

shinka

nice work!
Clean art and nice coloring.

Keep it up

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7th Feb 2018, 5:54 PM

HeSerpenty

Hay thank you so much!! I shall keep it up, I the feedback!! <33

12th Feb 2018, 5:35 AM

Lilbluebox

....Keymen. What did you do. Now that we know the humans don't care/didn't notice you're a serpent, clearly this means you have been DOING things that lead to you being kicked out of towns. So spill.

Well, spill to the readers. Clearly you've already spilled to your in-universe audience. XD

Poor Gwynn looks very torn about being there, listening in. I don't think it has anything to do with the content of the story either, I think it's all about the man telling it. Quite frankly, Gwynn has no desire to leave the Nation, and humans probably affect her exactly zero (right now). She's far more concerned with a broken heart and eighteen+ years of hurt. She lightens up a little bit when she first starts that conversation with Keymen and they fall into what's likely to be very old, familiar banter, given by how easy Gwynn looks with the interaction - and then it's back to reality and the present in the next two panels when he asks that question and brings Merlock to the forefront.

Ah, and there they go with the touching and the handholding. Guys, if this is how you acted all those years ago, it's no WONDER your relationship got out. And you two aren't fully comfortable with each other yet! I predict it'll be 500 times worse when you get the air cleared and all your issues dealt with.

Still rooting for a Keymen slap. Can't lie won't lie. XD

Because I don't like seeing Gwynn upset, the 'your ability to entertain a crowd' panel has my favorite Gwynn expression on this page, bar none. Haven't got a favorite expression for Keymen, but in a few select panels - the panel I mentioned with Gwynn, the 'Right. Merlock...' panel, and the third one in the second row all have his hair looking particularly floofy, which I appreciate greatly. I just wanna ruffle that hair, it's practically MADE for it.

Unusual for me is to offer criticisms, I know, but... I'm not a big fan of the blurry background trick on this page. I think it's the darker colors; it worked a lot better in the forest, and it definitely works fine for a couple of panels here, but I think you may have overused it a tad.

On the other hand, first panel of the last row is darned impressive. Just LOOK at those hands! I love it. Very well done!

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19th Feb 2018, 10:20 PM

HeSerpenty

Hahahaha don't invite Keymen to tell all those stories, i don't think you have the time! XDD

Yess I think maybe under different circumstances Gwynn would be more eager and excited to hear stories about Keymen's human land adventures but I think for now it's almost kinda like salt in the wound haha. She does suck it up pretty good tho hahaha. I think she's still in so much shock he's even here it's almost like..."act normal so you don't freak out" haahaha buuuut don't u worry--- all Keymen has to do is one little thing to piss her off and then BAM! haha he gonna get it X"D.

LOL they can't help themselves what can I say X"D. Thank you for all the feedback!
Haha and I agree about the backgrounds X"D. I need to stop saving them for last so I stop cutting corners like this :P

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15th Mar 2018, 9:40 AM

junoro

Lol at Keymen STILL getting chased out of human towns. Looks like he really has a troublemaking side to him, huh?

Also woah Gwynn is pretty well reserved here! Maybe I'm mean for expecting her to smack him upon seeing him again. xD Luckily for him, it looks like they'll have a chance to talk nicely again later!

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15th Mar 2018, 6:19 PM

HeSerpenty

Hahaha heee's a rascal!

LOL yea I been hearing that a lot! Don't be fooled tho...... it's all in there like an active volcano. Haha all Keymen has to do is one thing to make her mad and then it's Mt. Saint Helens potential up in here XD

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