Chapter 6.12-- The Great Serpent Virus (2)

posted 27th Nov 2017, 5:22 PM

Chapter 6.12-- The Great Serpent Virus (2)
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view HeSerpenty's profile

27th Nov 2017, 5:22 PM


Happy belated Thanksgiving! I shall celebrate with a belated page X'D. Anyone else have a crazy holiday week last week? I know I did X)

In the spirit of Thanksgiving let me just say how much I am thankful for all of you <3

THanks for sticking with me you guys!

view rufiangel's profile

27th Nov 2017, 5:36 PM


Poor Kilion!! :'D But love for Keymen grows all the more stronger with this update. I'm so glad he saved this sweet child <3 among many many others!

Keymen is a very positively famous figure then! I wonder what in the world sent him away from them all? D:

Also... I'm preeetty sure there's way more to this Great Serpent Virus than meets the eye. >_>

view HeSerpenty's profile

30th Nov 2017, 12:08 AM


Hehe thank you Rufii! <33
Ohh what ever would give you such an impression about dat der virus? >_> :3

Thank goodness there's a good misfit out there who will help save lives of other misfits! Haha Key himself is no stranger to being different than the rest.. however he's used it to his advantage. You right he is pretty famous in those parts of the nation he saved! <33

view Kattapuss's profile

27th Nov 2017, 6:11 PM


Kilion chiiild D: (protectively hugs Kilion, baps his nasty aunt) (she sure has a fancy house though...)

I didn't think I could appreciate Keymen more but now I do xD
Hmmm... Keymen so far has been the most fatherly person to Hizruk out of everyone... and also to Kilion... which would make Hizruk and Kilion honorary brothers of sorts xD and then there's Gwyn-mom... yes yes, I like this family arrangement

Okay I know this page is serious at all, but I can't stop laughing. Hizruk, Hizruk please, get your breakfast out of your hair! xDD

view DLKmusic's profile

28th Nov 2017, 12:34 PM


but... but... it's the new fashion, hadn't you heard? EVERYONE is wearing cabbage in their hair this season!

view HeSerpenty's profile

30th Nov 2017, 12:11 AM


LOL I was the first one to start wearing cabbage in my hair!

view HeSerpenty's profile

30th Nov 2017, 12:11 AM


Lolol yusss give him all the hugs to make up for that meanie aunt X"D. Haha yeesssh Kilion grew up the first part of his life in a big mansion but it still wasn't much different than the caves he lives in now X"D

That's a really cool observation! Lolol actually I LOVE that you kinda put this little family of misfits together <3

LOL..Hizruk has to help us not get TOO serious here x"D

view junoro's profile

27th Nov 2017, 7:52 PM


Aww Killion that's horrible. I'm so glad there was a happy story at the end of this. Also interesting to see that Keymen had those wrist scars back in the day...

view HeSerpenty's profile

30th Nov 2017, 12:12 AM


Haha yus... he's had them for quite a while now-- but we WILL learn more on that, I promise!

27th Nov 2017, 8:07 PM


Well, Kilion has good reason to like Keymen! Man, Auntie, though, she's a piece of work.

view HeSerpenty's profile

30th Nov 2017, 12:13 AM


He sure does! <3

And yes...she sure is X"D. I think every character so far has an awful family member somewhere LOL

view azureXtwilight's profile

27th Nov 2017, 10:50 PM


Ooooo Keymen, you are a man not only with a hair of gold, but also apparently a heart of gold!

view HeSerpenty's profile

30th Nov 2017, 1:36 PM


Aww that's such a lovely way of putting it! <33

view MST3KFan's profile

28th Nov 2017, 2:08 AM


Killion's had a rough life. Poor guy deserves some positive things to happen.

And Keymen deserves to be praised by the people for all he's done. Otherwise, there'd be a lot less of them I'd gather by now.

view HeSerpenty's profile

30th Nov 2017, 1:37 PM


haha indeed... but he is alive and he has a friend--those are positive things, yes? :D

And that is a good point! Looks like he's swoopin' in there for some attention though hahaha.. he has to get on that quick with that Council wanting to get rid of him!

view Seabiscuit's profile

28th Nov 2017, 4:19 AM


D'awwww! His status as Awesomest Dude increases!

view HeSerpenty's profile

30th Nov 2017, 1:38 PM


Haha I'm so glad about that! <33

view Proxy170's profile

28th Nov 2017, 9:26 AM


Hmmmm why do I have a funny suspicion this "illness" was caused by the Council? And no cure was developed because they didn't want one? And victims were selected? Am I too tin foil here? >.>

Also, it looks like at one point in time Kilion wasn't TOTALLY rejected for his condition? Like his family must have known?

Great page Serpy, I hope you had an awesome Thanksgiving :) And of course we'll stick with you, pages late or not :)

view HeSerpenty's profile

30th Nov 2017, 1:40 PM


You are indeed not too tinfoil here! LOL nothing is too tinfoil when it comes to THIS government X"D.. in fact the more conspiracy theories the better just don't be too noisy about them...lest they hear you >___>;;;

And it would seem so! His aunt at least let him live in her house for a time... buuut obviously was quick to get rid of him soon as she had an excuse X"D

Thank you Proxy! I did and I hope you did too! <3

view DLKmusic's profile

28th Nov 2017, 12:37 PM


Happy Thanksgiving to you as well, Serpy!

One of the things I am VERY thankful for is all the talented, imaginative, witty friends I have made on Comic Fury. Thank you for letting an old goof like me be a part of your life, and share in your vision!

view HeSerpenty's profile

30th Nov 2017, 1:48 PM


Aw Don well for ME... I'm thankful and older goof like you puts up with a younger goof like ME! <3
I'm not just saying that either, I really mean it! Thank you for everything!

view Matt Knab's profile

28th Nov 2017, 1:58 PM

Matt Knab

Great background info on both of them!

view HeSerpenty's profile

30th Nov 2017, 1:48 PM


Thank you Matt!

view Alicia's profile

29th Nov 2017, 5:18 AM


AW! Baby Kilion...I would have held you and loved you ESPECIALLY when you were sick! Poor little guy! T^T

view HeSerpenty's profile

30th Nov 2017, 11:19 PM


Aw he needs the hugs and the love! At least he got away from that place amiright? X"DD

1st Dec 2017, 9:01 PM


no kid deserves that.!
sooo.! the last i read your comic,, human girl had just made it to grandpa's... then Centcomm: used Olivia and referenced her today,, so now im fully caught up...

view HeSerpenty's profile

1st Dec 2017, 10:53 PM


I know, right??

Oh wow that was some time ago! Haha aw yay thank you for reading! I hope you enjoyed it and will continue to enjoy it! <33

7th Dec 2017, 5:02 PM


You know, I went back and I reread some older pages (beginning of the chapter, really) and I think the white outlining IS a new thing. It's interesting, and I don't think it looks bad, but it DOES sometimes kind of make the characters look a little like stickers, so maybe watch out for that?

Anyway. This page. Man.... this hurt so much to read. Killion deserved so much better than Venestris. Incidently, I do love her design; it fits her perfectly. All that fussy, horrible lace. Reminds me of the wicked stepmother/stepsisters from Cinderella. I also love that plush purple toy; is it supposed to be a licken? It's adorable, whatever it is.

And that hair of his. It LOOKS really soft the way you draw it, but I bet it's tangled and matted and gross. He needs a haircut and a hug. And better relatives, AUGH. I'm very glad Keymen found him. Certainly a stroke of luck for poor Killion - and everyone Killion meets in the future, too! There's a lot of people who'd have holes in their lives right now if it weren't for this moment.

it's a very well-told flashback, by the way. well drawn, well told - it really feels like Killion's actually telling the story, and that's always tricky to pull off in a story/flashback sequence. You did a really good job of it. I think the dimmer coloring tones help a lot. It's faded in comparison to present day, which really makes those two present day headshot panels in the middle pop. The stark contrast works REALLY well, I'm very much in love with how you chose to tell this. And it nicely signals that storytime is over at the end of the page, another bonus. Very, very good switching here; very smooth and lovely. Just a great job overall.

Hizruk's face in the middle of the panel is one I appreciate. Yes, Hizruk. Killion's family is full of terrible people. You two can bond over that later, I'm sure.

Any panel with little!Killion in it just hurts so much to look at, the poor guy. Especially the ones where he's having trouble breathing. Ow. Ow ow OW. He's such a sweetheart, he doesn't deserve this. Dumb plague.

The worst part is how Killion's words are italicized when he says 'and he took care of me'. Like it's so shocking that someone would want to care for him that this above everything else sticks in his mind. That's just horribly, horribly depressing. Augh. Everyone in this comic needs hugs.

....Unless they're antagonists. Then they need to be booted off the edge of a very tall cliff.

And on a lighthearted note, the 'prickly' in Hizruk's hair still amuses me. That silly boy~

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10th Dec 2017, 6:00 PM


Oh wow, I'm moved. ;_; Keymen seems like even more of a great guy.

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