Chapter 6.10-- Invitation to Stay

posted 7th Nov 2017, 8:30 AM

Chapter 6.10-- Invitation to Stay
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view HeSerpenty's profile

7th Nov 2017, 8:30 AM

HeSerpenty

And back to Hizruk! Walking Tia to work like a nice, chivalrous boy who was told to do it by his mother and he dare not disobey after all he's put her through X"D...

The glaring public must just be part of the punishment :P

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Grr I'm sorry the page is so late. I had a technical mishap over the weekend that REALLY put me back T__T. Starting that next page right now! like right now!

Haha thanks for reading everybody! Hope you had a good weekend!


view Alicia's profile

7th Nov 2017, 8:39 AM

Alicia

"ANYTHING PICKLED" hee hee hee... X)

I love the expressions on this page. The one Hizruk has when those people are glaring at him is literally perfect. <3

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8th Nov 2017, 8:37 AM

HeSerpenty

Hahaha YOU know what that means! XDD <3

Thank you so much!

view Proxy170's profile

7th Nov 2017, 8:40 AM

Proxy170

Yay, update! :D This is a big page too--lots of great panels! I'm liking that Hizruk is gaining allies for the war to come...and they aren't a bunch of pushovers either! Ignore those glares, Hizzy...they ain't worth your time.

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8th Nov 2017, 8:40 AM

HeSerpenty

Thank you Proxy! Haha yess he's gotta make that friend list a little bit bigger. That's his job this chapter, Man...make some more freakin' friends! XD

People are jerks!

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7th Nov 2017, 8:54 AM

MST3KFan

Hizruk's "Serpy-Sense" is tingling as he heads off, ignoring Tia's final comments to him. LOL

At least he has someone other than his mother around that at least will chat to him like a human being, right?

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8th Nov 2017, 8:41 AM

HeSerpenty

LOL pretty much yes! It's always good to abruptly cut off a conversation with one of ur only potetial friends XDD

And that's right! A man needs more than just his mother to talk to in life! XDD

view Centcomm's profile

7th Nov 2017, 1:58 PM

Centcomm

Oohh yay! thank you for the page! you wonderful person you!

Something has his attention for sure!

view HeSerpenty's profile

8th Nov 2017, 8:42 AM

HeSerpenty

Awww no YOU'RE the wonderful person <3

And it sure does!

view Seabiscuit's profile

7th Nov 2017, 3:40 PM

Seabiscuit

That fat troll... PFffthehehehe, yes, perfect name for him, honestly.;)

"For some reason"... -snerk-
Man, they needa lighten up.D:
(I love the pastely watery (?) colors on the background people there~~)

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8th Nov 2017, 8:53 AM

HeSerpenty

Haha maybe we should call him.. Troll-lock! XDDDD

Thankyou! I'm tryin to think of ways I can give the background peeps color without having to like..spend a lot of time on them X"D

7th Nov 2017, 4:11 PM

megados

Hmm, I wonder who Hizruk senses there. Nice of him to offer Tia his room.

Don't worry about lateness. Double page! Woo! Worth it!

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8th Nov 2017, 9:31 AM

HeSerpenty

Haha he's a nice boy when he's not messing things up or yelling at his uncle XD

And thank you so much!

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7th Nov 2017, 4:17 PM

Haegan2005

And some story and Character building on this page. Beautifully done as always!

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8th Nov 2017, 9:31 AM

HeSerpenty

Thank yoou that means a lot to me! <3 That stuff is important to me!

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7th Nov 2017, 6:42 PM

Slim Kittens

Tia: "Sorry. My middle name is Annoying."
Hizruk: "I'm sorry too. My middle name is Jerk."

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8th Nov 2017, 9:32 AM

HeSerpenty

And together they are the annoying jerks! XDDD

Haha

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7th Nov 2017, 9:45 PM

DLKmusic

The Dynamic between those two will take a while to find balance, but it's kinda fun watching watching it develop...

Another month from now, Tia will be in the same situation and be saying. "tch... who did he piss of this time!"

PS: This page was a lot of work! it was worth the wait!

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8th Nov 2017, 9:34 AM

HeSerpenty

Haha it will. I'm sure it'll transform into a sorta love-hate sibling type relationship soon enough! It's showing signs already!
Hahaha I'm sure it won't even take a month to get there LOL

Yesss it was, and thank you so much! <3

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8th Nov 2017, 11:19 AM

Kattapuss

Wow, there is now a grand total of four people who are nice to Hizruk! Congrats man! x'D

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8th Nov 2017, 11:07 PM

HeSerpenty

LOL they're adding up! X'DDD

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8th Nov 2017, 1:54 PM

JC Webcomics

Yay! More friends for Hizruk, provided she's not too mad at him later for running off :)

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8th Nov 2017, 11:08 PM

HeSerpenty

Hahaha he loses em' faster than he makes them! xD

view Matt Knab's profile

8th Nov 2017, 2:30 PM

Matt Knab

This is the bad part of living in a "small town"!
Your pages are like...3 pages long, so don't worry about delays!

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10th Nov 2017, 11:01 AM

HeSerpenty

Hahaha true that!

Aw thank you Matt! Haha that helps me feel a little better!

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13th Nov 2017, 6:46 PM

junoro

Ahhhh I love his yawning face!!! In the second panel!!!! He's so cute!!

Take all the time you need with these pages, Serpy. I still don't know how you manage to do like 50+ panels on average in a week! o: Your pages always look great, too!

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21st Nov 2017, 9:26 AM

HeSerpenty

Thank you Juno! Haha it's pretty interesting to draw a yawning face and make it not look awkward XDDDD

LOL thank you so much, that really means a lot to hear! <33

27th Nov 2017, 6:37 PM

Lilbluebox

So I was going to start off this comment by exclaiming over Tia, but then I actually read the signs in the first panel. Oh my word. I can't decide which I like better, 'Anything Pickled', or 'Relationship Advice and Help'. And I LOVE the different writing styles in both signs, they were obviously done by very different people, and both signs legitimately cracked me up the first time I saw this page. And is that Myst I see in the corner of that first panel, or generic NPC #....whatever it is we're on now?

Speaking of generic NPCs, cracking up at the orange-headed dude's mustache. He should join the bad facial hair club the Council founded.

And now, hurray, Tia's back! And Hizruk! I missed both of these crazy kids. :] It's nice to see them interacting a bit better in this page, considering they haven't gotten along before now. Even if Mom DID have to interfere, it still counts. Hizruk apologizing for being a jerk warms my heart. :]

Tia calling Merlock a fat troll is the best part of this entire page. I love her. Never change.

As for why Merlock hates Hizruk.... call me crazy, but I think it might have something to do with the fact that Merlock thinks he's the product of an affair (or an 'affair' if we subscribe to the Keymen = dad theory). And the fact that Hizruk is an inherently good person while Merlock is, in fact, a fat troll in every sense of the word. And that's only when he was a baby - I'm sure now there's all this plus the shame of Hizruk being tossed in jail for ten years to deal with. Tarnishes his 'reputation' and all that.

Blech. Everyone is better off without Merlock.

Speaking of people we're better off without, I would like to line up all the glarers in this marketplace and whap them upside the head. Come ON guys, what did Hizruk ever do to you? HE WAS EIGHT YEARS OLD. HAVE SOME COMPASSION GOSH DARN IT.

Moving right along, Hizruk..... *siiiiiiiigh* I'm getting you a dictionary on tape for your birthday. XD Bonus points to Tia for using 'nonchalantly' in a sentence though! It's not a word you see every day! And awwww, Hizruk wanting Gwynn to be happy. Even if it means he has to put up with obnoxious new semi-adopted sister. XD

And with that.... I believe it's time to move on to the art portion of this review. Your expressions are thoroughly on point this page; there isn't a single one I don't love to bits. I can't even pick a favorite, not for Tia or for Hizruk, they're so good. The 'Geez, sorry' panel might be a good contender for favorite Tia expression though.

And the last row of panels is probably my favorite row of Hizruk. I absolutely LOVE the last big panel; it's a technique you like to use sometimes to show movement, drawing one character over and over in different places in the same panel, and you do it very, VERY well. Although at first I admit I thought the gathering crowd was a stage curtain. Don't ask, I have no idea.

And... with the exception of talking about Merlock, or talking about the glares from the townspeople... Hizruk actually looks HAPPY here. Once he recognizes that his sour mood means he's being a jerk to Tia, he apologizes and he has a decent conversation with her, and he looks happy about it. It's nice to see him smiling. :]

And I very much appreciate yawning serpent teeth in panel two. Always fun to see those pearly whites in more detail!

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30th Nov 2017, 11:30 PM

HeSerpenty

Hahahahaha YAY someone looked at the signs! LOL I always wonder if people will find the little mini-jokes or funnies here and there. I try to be funny anyway.. not always successfully X"D.

LOL who else is in the bad facial hair club? We have this orange haired NPC...Daggot, lots of characters in SoO actually LOL. Hmmmm I can think of a lot of people in other comics too. I wanna see a group photo of this club X"D.

A million points to you for remembering Myst! However.. I totally didn't mean for this NPC to resemble her OOPS X"D. Hahaha...I guess my brain panics when it has to think of a random civilian and i start repeating hair styles LOL.

Yussss some Tia n Hizruk interactions! Brotherly sisterly type bond forming haha...aaand I know from my own siblings there's nice moments along with the annoying ones X"D. LOL yes..fat troll is Merlock to a T (LOL almost typo'd Merek instead of Merlock...oops he woulda been so mad X"D)

I'm glad to know that movement technique works! Hahaha it's a lot of extra trouble to draw four figures in one panel buuut... it's better than drawing four different panels for such a simple movement know what I'm saying? I'm the idiot who decided to make this shiz moment to moment X"D.

Things have been so downer and stressful lately.. it's nice to have some light heartedness via the main character...........eeeven if he's still angsty :P

Haha thank you so much!

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