Chapter 6.3-- Warm Welcome

posted 1st Sep 2017, 7:30 PM

Chapter 6.3-- Warm Welcome
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1st Sep 2017, 7:30 PM

HeSerpenty

The mysterious misty morning continues....with two mysterious serpents hanging out on a roof. Sneaky Snek may have more of a role in this chapter me thinks..

Merlock and Gwynn haven't been together since chapter 4...what a joyous, warm welcoming she gives him! While she...reads letters from a special someone X"D.
Huh...seems like more enemies are on their way--that's what everyone needs right? This has come up a couple of times

Aaand if you can guess correctly who Keymen's gonna be talkin to next page....... you can have a free headshot request! Any takers? Post your guess in the comments! No shame if you get it wrong!

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FRIDAY UPDATE GUYZ! Ugh it would've been up hours ago if this stupid site wasn't done X"D. I would've posted BEFORE the sun went down :P


view Alicia's profile

1st Sep 2017, 7:33 PM

Alicia

Oooh! I LOVE so many of the drawings on this page! Those side profiles and Gwynn's expressions! <3

...And dem man boobs. >_>

view HeSerpenty's profile

2nd Sep 2017, 7:52 AM

HeSerpenty

Thank you so muuch! Haha I'm glad my battle with this page resulted with some decent drawings at least!

HAHA so what do u think? should I put a N! flag? xD

view Centcomm's profile

1st Sep 2017, 9:07 PM

Centcomm

excellent page Serpenty! .. and is it possible for me to hate him more than Joffery.. Hmm I dunno! lets see.

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2nd Sep 2017, 7:52 AM

HeSerpenty

More than JOffery?? That's some deep hate!

Thank uuu! <3

view DLKmusic's profile

2nd Sep 2017, 12:28 AM

DLKmusic

Free headshot, huh? Ok... I gots two guesses! The first is, Keyman kinda looks like he's bracing himself for this, so I would guess Zen.

The second Guess is Merek, but thats seems too obvious,

Now, on to the good part! Making fun of Merlocks Double-D's! Although I probably shouldn't be too mean about it, you know... something about glass houses and bricks...

view HeSerpenty's profile

2nd Sep 2017, 7:55 AM

HeSerpenty

Very good guesses! Next Friday we shall find out the correct answer! :3

LOL Merlock's Double D's XD. By all means..make fun! Everyone hates him enough to not turn their scorn onto you for it! hahaha

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2nd Sep 2017, 5:19 PM

DLKmusic

I may be way off base here, but this doesn't look like the same Sneek-snake that attacked the guards, or the one that was following Hizzy when he was talking with Kilion. For one thing, this one has hair on it's head.

This makes me wonder if Hizzy is dreaming here...

I may be way off base, but whether I am or not, it's really kewl effect!

view HeSerpenty's profile

2nd Sep 2017, 11:45 PM

HeSerpenty

Haha thank you so much! But oh dear it is meant to be the same sneaky snek-- perhaps I am either drawing him better or worse than before? Haha those are his hoods not haairr--and they always been black yus. I'm sorry it wasn't more clear! I didn't go into as much detail with the scales like i've done before.which I..should've xD

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3rd Sep 2017, 12:16 PM

DLKmusic

LOL, don't panic, I'm think I'm the only one who thought this, and as we all know, I'm a Dufus anyway, so...

:-)

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2nd Sep 2017, 12:38 AM

Proxy170

Nooo you left us on a CLIFFHANGER?? T__T We'll see what happens to Kal eventually I'm sure...

This paneling is so good up top, and the transition from Hizruk to red eye Hizruk and then the Serpent still has my tin foil hat going, "Maybe it's still an entity only known to him" and not a separate person...

As for Keymen...hm....well he's outside, but I doubt he's next to Hizzy...I'd think that he'd be doing something to make the next move so...Merek? Hmm seems too obvious but I'm not sure what else to conclude...

view HeSerpenty's profile

2nd Sep 2017, 9:10 AM

HeSerpenty

Haha we will! we'll get back to that battle ;D

And thank you so much! Yes it's kind of an eery surreal moment...not quite sure what to make of it. we might get some answers about this sneaky snek in this chapter ;D

Heheh and good guess! Results to come next paaage!

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2nd Sep 2017, 1:24 AM

MST3KFan

They're all on a collision course to disaster aren't they?

view HeSerpenty's profile

2nd Sep 2017, 10:38 AM

HeSerpenty

It's shaping up to look that way. when it rains it pours, right? X"D

2nd Sep 2017, 3:20 AM

megados

Who can blame Gwynn for daydreaming of Keyman when Merlock treats her like crap all the time.

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2nd Sep 2017, 10:39 AM

HeSerpenty

Haha true that! It's preeeeetty big contrast between how they both treat her XD

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2nd Sep 2017, 6:36 AM

azureXtwilight

Sooo does Hizzy knows this serpent exist? Is he letting that serpent sit next to him? I AM MIGHTY CONFUSED RIGHT NOW.

Also, hey, it's Merlock! We miss you... not.

view HeSerpenty's profile

2nd Sep 2017, 10:43 AM

HeSerpenty

THAT IS A GOOD QUESTION! It seems pretty unlikely that Red-Eye Hizzy does'nt know he's there ;D

LOL awww you didn't miss Merlock? Shaame--- he took his shirt off for you and everything!

view DLKmusic's profile

2nd Sep 2017, 11:16 AM

DLKmusic

That's not right, Azure! I missed him.... Twice! but then I ran out of buckshot and had to go home... :-(

view a Drop of Beauty's profile

2nd Sep 2017, 1:07 PM

a Drop of Beauty

Yo, Keyman! I'mma need you to go. get. your. lady!

view HeSerpenty's profile

2nd Sep 2017, 1:46 PM

HeSerpenty

LOL! You tell him!
Stop wasting your time sneaking around the Mist and get over there NOW mister! XDD

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2nd Sep 2017, 5:36 PM

Seabiscuit

I just want Merlock to die already. UGH.D:

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2nd Sep 2017, 11:40 PM

HeSerpenty

Haha you are not alone in this! <3

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3rd Sep 2017, 9:22 AM

Matt Knab

Hrk!
I think we all wish he wasn't coming back. XD

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4th Sep 2017, 9:00 AM

HeSerpenty

Hahahahaha You're right! Not one person has expressed joy to see him again X"DDD

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4th Sep 2017, 2:42 AM

Proxy170

Wait! I had a thought! What if Keymen is out at the grave/place of death of his father, and he's talking to him? Really it'd be talking to himself I guess but the intent was there XD ok final guess haha.

Love the new banner btw, really sets up Keymen as a key player.

view HeSerpenty's profile

4th Sep 2017, 10:46 AM

HeSerpenty

Well it is another good guess! That is not something keymen wouldn't do or hasn't done plenty in his life! So we shall see :3

Thank you so much! Yea figured he is 'the other main'... at least for this first arc X3.....so he should be on the banner! :D
And of course your awesome font really makes it a lot better!

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4th Sep 2017, 11:14 AM

Proxy170

First arc? D: He better stick around for ALL the arcs!! lol

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4th Sep 2017, 12:33 PM

HeSerpenty

Oh dear hahahaha Id idn't mean to make that sounds so ominous!!! XDD

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7th Sep 2017, 2:04 PM

alston123

Man, I think it's about time Gwynn got her happy ending. :(

Dang it. The only person I can think of is Keymen's grandfather. Maybe Keymen could have struck a deal with the human, the grandfather of the girl whose boyfriend was murdered? Keymen seems like he's charming enough to do something like that. ^_^

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8th Sep 2017, 10:44 AM

HeSerpenty

Hahaha I think u right but the ending is so far away! X"DD

Ohhh that would certainly make for some interesting interaction! Hehe good guesses!! We shall find out the answer... mmm probably tomorrow. I don't think I'll finish today T_T

9th Sep 2017, 5:25 AM

Lilbluebox

Or you could do a quick scene change and we can find out about that confrontation some other time. That works too. XD

So it looks like you're giving us a quick little snapshot of where all the important players are and what they're doing, which is nice. It's a good way to open up this chapter after all the insanity of last chapter. Things were revealed, plans were set in motion, and now it begins. No, I have absolutely no idea who Keymen's going to talk to. Zen's a pretty good guess though, I completely forgot that was a thing he was going to be doing. Merek and Kilion are also potentials, but given the look on his face...

Ah, who even knows. I'll find out when you post the next page. XD

Speaking of characters doing things, I have no idea what Hizruk's doing up on the roof, but I don't think he's been inside tonight. I really like the way the panels have been configured up there; it's a nice little progression with the smaller panels inside the large one. I like how red-eyed Hizruk knows about the serpent while normal Hizruk's just like 'wut?' It makes sense, especially if his red eyes are mostly a manifestation of his instincts, which I'm seriously leaning towards.

And I love how you draw your serpents. They're magnificent, every last one of them. :]

Ew, Merlock. He's so gross. D:

As for Gwynn... looks like she's been reading those letters all night, and she doesn't look happy with what she's been reading. Sad, yes... but I don't know, I think she's going to let her temper out to play the next time she runs into Keymen. You can love someone and be absolutely infuriated with them. If she hasn't reached that point quite yet, I'm pretty sure she will soon.

And Merlock being around is not helping matters, because it's Merlock, and he's fat and gross and a waste of valuable space. He's also heralding Bad News, which isn't a surprise, but it doesn't help anything either. (And I can see his nipples whyyyyy EW GROSS MAKE IT GO AWAY D:)

And I talked about Keymen looking all pensively dramatic into the fog already, so now it's time for art!

This page is put together really well. You've got a fondness for putting panels inside other panels, giving us closeups inside larger body shot panels, and you always manage to pull it off really well. Somehow it never looks cluttered, and this page is no exception. I like how easy it is to tell what time of day it is based on the lighting, and oh my goodness the fog is just spectacular. I've always loved fog and you've captured it beautifully here.

Gwynn's expression in the 'Clk' panel is my favorite, and I like the full body shot of her just above that, with the sigh. Especially her neck, that's a really hard angle to do but it looks good! I'm also just enjoying the novelty of seeing her without any makeup and with her hair down. It's a good look for her.

view HeSerpenty's profile

14th Sep 2017, 3:33 PM

HeSerpenty

Lol it's too big a confrontation to just jump into it like dat! Haha

Yess there is a lot that has been started last chapter that I have to follow through with hehe

Yea Hizruk's whole red eye thing is still pretty mysterious and that's what I hoped to illustrate here. there's a lot more to it and the relationship with Mr. Sneaky Snek here BUT! As with everything! We'll havta wait and see. Til then...there will be more weird scenes like this hahaha

Gwynn's learning a lot in those letters--lots to think about!

Thank you so much I'm really tryin hard to improve my art for this chapter!

view junoro's profile

11th Sep 2017, 9:43 PM

junoro

OH boy, I bet Gwynn is just SO EXCITED to clean the house for her garbage husband's dad. I bet she's not going to spit in his food at all. I BET!!

view HeSerpenty's profile

14th Sep 2017, 3:34 PM

HeSerpenty

LOL! Garbage husband's dad X"DDD
You are right she is thrilled!

view Calisa's profile

14th Dec 2017, 1:41 AM

Calisa

I love this page Serpy! :O

Sneaky Snek~ <3 My own Snakey is making a reappearance in my new comic ;D

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14th Dec 2017, 9:22 AM

HeSerpenty

Ohhh Thank you!!

Ooo you have a snek? INSTANT INTRIGUE! hahaha when am I gonna start seein' this new comic Hmmmmmm?

view Calisa's profile

14th Dec 2017, 11:52 AM

Calisa

Don’t you remember him, he’s a snake skeleton, Snakington! xD

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14th Dec 2017, 12:00 PM

HeSerpenty

Awwww mah gosh! Snakington!!!!! I didn't realize that you meant THAT comic! Aw yay!! :D

view Calisa's profile

14th Dec 2017, 12:17 PM

Calisa

It’s not really the same plot anymore xD But there will be familiar faces, including Mr. Snakey ;)

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