Interlude 4.2-- Coming Home

posted 8th Aug 2017, 8:14 PM

Interlude 4.2-- Coming Home
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view HeSerpenty's profile

8th Aug 2017, 8:14 PM

HeSerpenty

And thus ends the brief between-chapters interlude.... and you have officially met "Kaleal." Yaaay! She's been around almost since the very beginning....as in since 2005 when I first came up with this whole idea xD.

Lol LOTS of fan-made OCs in this page! Check out the Your SoO OCs page to see if you can name them! I'll post appropriate refs n such when their names are actually introduced in comic ;D.

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AAAAALAS....sorry about this late late page. I'm not going to waste your time with the many reasons I was held back. I did, however, at least put a lot of effort into a couple of these backgrounds? X"D...I hope it shows. Sigh

Anyways...I'll see you on Friday with the cover to the next chapter!

Thanks for stickin' with me, y'all!


8th Aug 2017, 8:22 PM

Guest

Aww... I can't WAIT to see these two reunite!

Yussss dem cameos, dem backgrounds... such a lovely page! <3

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9th Aug 2017, 2:51 PM

HeSerpenty

I know this is YOU, ALicia! XDD

Thank you so much! <3

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8th Aug 2017, 8:27 PM

rufiangel

Yay, we finally meet The Girl!! X3 happy to meetcha, sweetheart! <3 seems to me though that she may not be completely aware of what hizruk-baby has been going through the past few years... She may be in for a bit of a shock. But hopefully hizruk-baby will be happy to see her again ;v;* really looking forward to the next chapter serpy!

And as a perpetrator of late updates recently myself, all I can say is... I understand completely :'D here, let us hug in unity lolol <3

view HeSerpenty's profile

10th Aug 2017, 1:08 PM

HeSerpenty

Yesss finally! Hahaha finally gonna get some ladies up in this comic! :P
Yea I don't think she has any clue what's been doing down--some happy lil girl is gonna be gettin a reality check!

Hahaa that makes me feel better Rufi cuz U been so diligent with regular updates too! *Hugs all around!* <3

view Proxy170's profile

8th Aug 2017, 9:30 PM

Proxy170

Wow she is beautiful! And so is that panel of her walking down the stairs in the bottom left! Really awesome details. Now I can't wait for her to reunite! But... I'm also worried because it probably won't be like she imagines...

No worries about the late page, life happens! It is such a treat though to see it :)

view HeSerpenty's profile

10th Aug 2017, 1:09 PM

HeSerpenty

Thank you Proxy! Haha that particular panel is the one that took me the looongest X"D

view Kattapuss's profile

8th Aug 2017, 9:53 PM

Kattapuss

Er... She's in for a bit of a shocker, I think.
And everything around her is still so very pink xD
She seems bright and bouncy, I like her! :D

view HeSerpenty's profile

10th Aug 2017, 1:13 PM

HeSerpenty

Haha I think you're right!

And yep she's still a lil pink thing hahahaha--- she has had a pretty sheltered life too. Let's see if that won't change X)

view MST3KFan's profile

8th Aug 2017, 10:13 PM

MST3KFan

Ooooh... She's cute. X3

Shame she's in for quite the surprise when she sees Hizzy again all this time. T_T

view HeSerpenty's profile

10th Aug 2017, 1:14 PM

HeSerpenty

Thank uu <3

Aaand yes...you are right :'D

view PeterVonBrown's profile

8th Aug 2017, 10:19 PM

PeterVonBrown

Nicely played (art and story). And how wonderful it must be for you to see it come to the page. I know there's plenty I won't get to for too long, and yeah, it's gotta be great. Thanks and congrats for the wonderful.

view HeSerpenty's profile

10th Aug 2017, 5:19 PM

HeSerpenty

Thank you so much that's so wonderful to hear! <3333

view DLKmusic's profile

8th Aug 2017, 11:45 PM

DLKmusic

Serpy, what you do in real life is incredibly demanding... both of your time and energy! Don't you dare apologize for that!

btw, the page is wonderful! I'm in love with Kalea already, and even 12 year old Don likes her so much that he promises to behave!

view HeSerpenty's profile

10th Aug 2017, 5:28 PM

HeSerpenty

You are always so understanding and put my right back in check when I get all guilty <3--- thank you sir!

I'm so glad you like her! And tell 12 year old Don I appreciate it LOL!

view Centcomm's profile

9th Aug 2017, 11:19 AM

Centcomm

I like her! shes awesome ! and yes love the page as always! Kalea is cuuuute!

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10th Aug 2017, 5:31 PM

HeSerpenty

I'm so happy to hear that Centy! Thank you! <3

view Matt Knab's profile

9th Aug 2017, 5:54 PM

Matt Knab

Well, she's adorable. I feel bad that she's coming back just in time for the uprising. O.o

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10th Aug 2017, 5:31 PM

HeSerpenty

Lolol troubling times upon us X"D

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9th Aug 2017, 10:48 PM

HapyCow

Those are some beautiful backgrounds! :) I need to draw flowers sometime. Also very interesting to read about Hizzy's childhood friend! And she's coming back?! That'll be cute :P

view HeSerpenty's profile

10th Aug 2017, 9:27 PM

HeSerpenty

Thank you hapy!!! <3333 I spent too much time on some of these X"DD

And yes indeed there was a happier time in young HIzruk's life!

view Jarvi's profile

10th Aug 2017, 1:09 AM

Jarvi

This society takes "no CO-ED" to the totally next level xD

view HeSerpenty's profile

10th Aug 2017, 9:27 PM

HeSerpenty

LOL they sure do! X"D

view ProfEtheric's profile

16th Aug 2017, 5:10 PM

ProfEtheric

Gah! I fell SOOOOOO far behind.

Excellent job on this part, Serpy. It has ALL the feels!

I can't wait to see her in the rest of the story. :)

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21st Aug 2017, 11:21 PM

HeSerpenty

Hahaha don't worry about it Prof! <3
(Lawd knows I fall behind and apologize for it every other week these days!

Thank you so much I'm so happy to hear it! <3

17th Aug 2017, 3:56 PM

Lilbluebox

Well, I could name I think most of them, and then I forgot. I can for sure name Delilah, Taya, and Maya though. I'm ninety nine percent certain the curly haired blonde is an OC too, but heck if I remember her name.

Ah, yes, Kaleal in all her adorable glory. Seriously, I am loving this character. It's so nice to see fundamentally happy characters in this universe. It happens SO rarely. And here's Kaleal, happy and unbroken and cheerful. I hope she remains that way at her core; Hizruk could use some cheer in his life. Kaleal's bubbly nature should help with that.

As to her comments on lady serpent schooling... Yikes. I wouldn't want to go though. I'm glad she's managed to keep hold of who she is. Perfection is boring and overrated.

And this whole thing on the island school actually makes me wonder about women in serpent society. Clearly they aren't expected to do much other than be beautiful and socialites and good wives and mothers. I'm guessing they're not into ladies having actual professions - some things they can clearly get away with, medicine is close enough to midwifery that they can probably manage it without TOO many strange looks, and shopkeeping wouldn't raise any eyebrows, but I sincerely doubt you get a lot of serpent ladies in the crafting professions. And we already know they're outright barred from politics and the umbra force. Which is a downright shame.

On a completely unrelated note, I love Kaleal's outfit. I would wear that. It looks fantastic and comfortable and fantasy and I love all those things. XD

Particularly loving the panel where she's putting on her boots - I just love how you've drawn that motion. It looks REALLY good. And then my favorite panel of all is the last one, with that hopeful/excited smile on Kaleal's face.

Really, I think I just adore Kaleal's expressions overall. She's so open and happy and sweet and it's really coming across in the artwork.

Oh, yes, and I wanted to mention the ship, because you made that HORRIBLE pun about it and I should slap you silly for it. XD The decoration on the boat being a female serpent head is very appropriate. I like it.

Also I can think of a character who would fit through the bars on that railing. And then demonstrate the fact that she could. Probably a good thing she never got on the boat, huh? XD

view HeSerpenty's profile

23rd Aug 2017, 11:25 AM

HeSerpenty

Haha I am soooooo happy that you like Kaleal! Yea I'd say of all the characters so far her life has probably been the least... problematic XD. I mean her issues are nothing that all the other elite girls have to deal with xD.

Yea those things you listed...pretty common and acceptable for ladies but yea things like Umbra Sect... nnnoot so much. WHo knows maybe that'll change X3 ;D

LOL you loved my pun, admit it! A scoff is a form of laughing in my opinion XDD. And yes..probaby a good thing X"DD

view junoro's profile

11th Sep 2017, 9:39 PM

junoro

Kaleal! A new person! :D Wow... she's like 12 years old, huh? That's amazing! She seems almost TOO chipper for what's waiting for her when she gets back :'D

view HeSerpenty's profile

14th Sep 2017, 11:46 AM

HeSerpenty

LOL!!! Oh man does she only look 12? O dear x"DD.. I imagine her more closer to Hizzy's age XDD hahaha

Yeeaa real life gonna teach her some things when she gts back that is for sure :'D

view junoro's profile

14th Sep 2017, 7:58 PM

junoro

OH SORRY I meant she was 12 literal years old! Like the character's creation was 12 years ago! She definitely looks a LOT older and more mature than actually 12 :'D

view HeSerpenty's profile

14th Sep 2017, 8:10 PM

HeSerpenty

LOL oh wow that's my bad!!! I'm sorry! Hahahaha yea guuurl! She's almost as old as Hizzy in that sense! I think she was created back in 2005 as well! Either that or 2006 hahaaha

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