Chapter 5.48-- REUNITED, Page 3

posted 6th May 2017, 10:36 PM

Chapter 5.48-- REUNITED, Page 3
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6th May 2017, 10:36 PM

HeSerpenty

Nothing like a moronic offspring in need of medical attention to snap a worried mother out of her emotional turmoil (for now)
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Thank you for your patience with this tardy page. I'm very sorry--it's been a week X"D

More importantly thank you for reading! <3



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6th May 2017, 10:42 PM

Alicia

"To answer your question..." WHAT?! Nooooooooo I can't wait an entire week to see what the rest of that sentence is!

Aw, but this is so sweet though... Finally back together. And it was Hizruk's blundering mistakes that brought them together too! <3 XD

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7th May 2017, 6:48 AM

sigpig

You just KNOW Serpy's gonna do a scene change for next week's page Alicia... lol

view HeSerpenty's profile

7th May 2017, 4:01 PM

HeSerpenty

LOL! So little faith in me!
C'moooon it's not like I've done that to you guys before >__>

Oh wait....

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7th May 2017, 4:00 PM

HeSerpenty

Haha! I am sorry but you has no choice! I am mean, yess lol

See, Hizruk being a screw-up IS sometimes a good thing! Maybe sparked the potential for a human war buuuut hey...got Mom and Keymen back together *shrug* good trade off XDD

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6th May 2017, 10:52 PM

Proxy170

Awwww the sunset! Don't worry, guys, you will have MANY more to come! Love the lighting effects you gave it too ^_^ And I dunno what it is but I love Gwynn's look in the "wait and see" panel. Serpy, this is just too cute ^_^

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7th May 2017, 4:04 PM

HeSerpenty

Thank you Proxy! <333

Yess plenty more sunsets to come for these two! <33

view junoro's profile

6th May 2017, 11:18 PM

junoro

Are they gonna kiss? THEY'RE GONNA KISS, AREN'T THEY??????

view HeSerpenty's profile

7th May 2017, 4:05 PM

HeSerpenty

LOL That would be nice, HUh???? X"DDD

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6th May 2017, 11:43 PM

MST3KFan

Having a moment together and then Hizruk somehow ruins it even when he's not around. XD

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7th May 2017, 4:05 PM

HeSerpenty

He's so good at ruining everything he doesn't have to be present! X"D

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6th May 2017, 11:43 PM

HapyCow

Aw seeing Gwynn all teary made me a little teary! So sweet! I bet she forgot she had a son for a minute there ;) haha

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7th May 2017, 4:06 PM

HeSerpenty

Hahaha for a minute she sure did! But good thing she remembered cuz we gotta get back to dat plot SOME time! X"DD

Thanks hapy!

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7th May 2017, 5:23 AM

Carvone

Now that is a pretty sunset!

Even if I feel kind of bad about it (prying and all) I REALLY want to know what those letters say! Are they from right after whatever happened? It seems more likely that they're a bit later, considering Keymen was probably in no shape to write directly after. I do wonder if they're from outside the GBW. Keymen was outside the wall for a good long time, that much I know, but where did he recover right after? Is that maybe where he met his human friend (A-something. I can't quite remember his name).

Also, this may be stretching it a bit, but the two of them kind of look like a sunset themselves! Keymen has blue for the water, and yellow for the sun, while Gwynn has all the warm redder colors.

Keymen's eyes look especially pretty on this page, I just noticed.

view HeSerpenty's profile

7th May 2017, 4:12 PM

HeSerpenty

Haha well I do promise that, at least the first one, we'll get to find out what it says--- I mean if Keymen is going to offer it as his explanation we dang well better hear it amiright? X"D
But MAN , you are sharp! I can't remember when I hinted at it, or where I might have said something... but yes indeed those letters were not written right after. A couple years in fact! The reason for that is, well... to be announced XDD. Tho we've already seen a clue :3.

I LOOVE that observation <3...and tbh it's not something I haven't thought about! So it's REALLY cool that you would mention their coloring and the sunset hehe thank you for always paying attention to detail <33

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7th May 2017, 6:50 AM

sigpig

Love the sunset, Serpy...

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7th May 2017, 4:13 PM

HeSerpenty

THank you so much! <3

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7th May 2017, 7:01 AM

Matt Knab

Talk about a cliffhanger page!
Now...switch to another character/scene next page. XD

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7th May 2017, 4:14 PM

HeSerpenty

Haha!! That would be cruel and unusual-- you act like I've done that before!

>____>;;;;;

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7th May 2017, 7:04 AM

TheD-Wrek

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7th May 2017, 4:24 PM

HeSerpenty

Haha D! You really want this! XDD

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7th May 2017, 9:09 AM

ProfEtheric

Serpy, a late SoO page is better than no SoO...

You certainly have the art of the cliffhanger down solid. Next page NOWNOWNOW!!!!!

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7th May 2017, 4:28 PM

HeSerpenty

PRof thank you, you are always too kind <333
I appreciate that!

LOL and I'm glad to hear I gotta keep you guys wanting to come back!

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7th May 2017, 9:38 AM

Centcomm

AHHHH cliffhanger.. AUGH! its ok Serpenty.. we can wait you know that :D great page. :D

all the feels here .. well done.

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8th May 2017, 5:42 PM

HeSerpenty

Thank you so much, Centy! That makes me so glad! <33

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7th May 2017, 1:01 PM

DLKmusic

THE FEELS!!!!

Yer Killin me, Serpy! I wait all week to post and show my razor sharp wit, and what do you do? You make a beautifully romantic page that gets me right here!

no jokes today, this was just too beautiful.

view HeSerpenty's profile

8th May 2017, 6:28 PM

HeSerpenty

Hahaha well.. I would say sorry but that makes me happy! Thank you so much that REALLY means a lot! <333

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7th May 2017, 8:00 PM

Kattapuss

I was going to complain about the cliffhanger and then remembered another comic I read literally finished a page with a character saying "So just--"
so I can't really complain x'D

Aaaaa this page is so... so...
..............words elude me x'D

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8th May 2017, 6:32 PM

HeSerpenty

Awwww thankies so much!
LOL that's quite a conversation cliffhanger! I don't know if I could end it like THAT haha

I'm so glad you like the page! <333

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9th May 2017, 5:07 PM

Seabiscuit

What is the answer- WHAT IS THE ANSWWWERRRRR?! *-*

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10th May 2017, 8:58 AM

HeSerpenty

Haha! We are sure to find out (HOPEFULLY) on Friday! XDD

view Outlaw's profile

10th May 2017, 1:22 AM

Outlaw

What a spot to end the page...! So much suspense!

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10th May 2017, 8:59 AM

HeSerpenty

Haha gotta keep you guys comin' back somehow! XDD

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10th May 2017, 2:08 AM

Vincethestick

I finally sat down and read through the archive and I feel like things are only just getting started! I like it, so I'll be sticking around with the rest!

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10th May 2017, 9:00 AM

HeSerpenty

Oh man, this makes my day, thank you so much!
Lolol indeed there is LOTS of build up here.. but the balls gonna really start rolling.
I hope you will enjoy the rest of the story! <3

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11th May 2017, 1:54 PM

Vivocateur

Aw! This page... :')
And, of course they would be reunited just at sunset.

view HeSerpenty's profile

15th May 2017, 10:01 AM

HeSerpenty

Haha of course! This is why he had to wimp out at the market earlier! Can't have this moment during the DAY psh! XDD

11th May 2017, 7:55 PM

Lilbluebox

Interesting that he says 'the most honest'. There's a qualifier there - not even these letters are the entire truth. And really, Keymen - I reamed you last page for this nonsense. I still don't think Gwynn's going to satisfied with your explanations, and I don't think she SHOULD be either.

You, my good sir, deserve her handprint bruised onto your face.

...Just for a few hours though.

......And then it can be brought up again in every argument for the rest of your lives, as Serpy so fantastically keeps pointing out, because you, my friend, have screwed UP.

That being said, it's a very emotional page with a lovely little interlude to pick on Hizruk some more and some more of Keymen being cryptic about things going to change. So plot is being hinted at to Gwynn at long last! Whoo-hoo! Although, I do have to wonder whether or not Keymen ever mentioned something like that when they were together before. Honestly, given that she doesn't seem to overly surprised by his statement, just curious, I think he might have. Or maybe she's just emotionally overwhelmed and can't really handle anything else on top of everything right now, which is understandable if so.

Lovely, lovely sunset panels in the middle there. It's a nice one - sailors will be having a good day tomorrow what with that red/magenta sky. :]

I'm also pretty sure Gwynn has watched the sunset every single night she's physically capable of it, so. Hey. There's your answer, Keymen. XD

Now! Favorite panel overall has GOT to be the "Now... I see you came here for a REASON..." panel. Mostly because of the look on Keymen's face as he mentally sighs over Hizruk's idiocy, but also because it's nice to see Gwynn have a bit of a chance to properly recollect herself here. It's been a very emotional five-ish minutes for her here. She needs some time to compose herself and just recover from this massive shock. That panel's a nice little way to step back from the emotional maelstrom and get herself in a slightly steadier place.

The last two lines of panels are my favorite in terms of sequence on this pace; I particularly love the second panel in the second to last line. Keymen looks the best here and I think the same goes for Gwynn, though honestly, she has so many great faces in this one that it's hard to pick a favorite. The second to last panel overall is also an excellent Gwynn face, and the last panel gives us a good Keymen one to boot! You've just done a really magnificent job of conveying the emotion in this incredibly emotional scene. Well done. I applaud you.

view HeSerpenty's profile

15th May 2017, 6:30 PM

HeSerpenty

Hahaha BUT YOU DON'T KNOW WHAT THE EXPLANATIONS ARE! You so hard on him :P..haha but someone needs to be so its okay! XD

I do think the latter is correct-- she is more emotionally overwhelmed and can't process everything all at once. Back in the old days when they were together he lost complete focus of his mission at hand---times are different now. ANd THEY are different :3.....mostly X"D

Haha Hizruk is good for making a few laughs at least! Even if it's at his expense and he's not present XDD. Good thing he's around to get Momma back on track cuz we can't spend too much time HERE now can we? :D

But thank you it's nice to have some reassurance about the scene! It was indeed an emotional one so that's always intimidating XDD

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