Chapter 5.45-- Scolded

posted 15th Apr 2017, 1:44 PM

Chapter 5.45-- Scolded
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view HeSerpenty's profile

15th Apr 2017, 1:44 PM


And now she's going where she needs to go-- thank you Hizruk X"D

You may notice this page is another long one! Haha I just couldn't bring myself to waste two weeks on just a transition/setting up a later scene >__>


So sorry the page is a day late. Just a heads up, good chances the next one will be a day late as well as my grandma is going in for maajor surgery ON that Friday.

Going to do my best to get it done earlier!

view Proxy170's profile

15th Apr 2017, 1:51 PM


Yay, page! Not gonna lie, I was kinda eager for this one XD

So this is how they meet...with Gwynn steaming from just yelling at poor Hizzy! Oh boy, Keymen's gonna get a double slap. But then so many kisses ^_^

Better keep Hizzy hidden til that wound goes away >.>

Oh and I hope the surgery goes well for your Grandma, she's so lucky to have you!

view HeSerpenty's profile

15th Apr 2017, 2:20 PM


Hahah thank you PRox!!! I hope it didn't disappoint heheh <33

LOL trust me this is the best way! Maybe as the scene plays out you will see why :3
Lol yea we just have to make sure Hizruk doesn't run around shirtless any time soon out in public! x"D

Thank you! I hope so too--- its a disc-fusion surgery so a pretty big one! And she is elderly :'D. but...I'm sure things will be ok <3

view Proxy170's profile

15th Apr 2017, 11:13 PM


*gasp* I just that him looking up at a SUNSET??? Awww if they reunite there I'm gonna be overcome with girly feels!!!

view HeSerpenty's profile

16th Apr 2017, 12:15 AM


Hehehe! Get ready fer some girly feels, Prox! :D :D :D

view Centcomm's profile

15th Apr 2017, 2:41 PM


LOL guy who lives in the jail.. :D

I wish the best for your grandmother. be safe!

view HeSerpenty's profile

15th Apr 2017, 5:05 PM


Hahaha not shady at all to say to a worried mother X"D

Thank you Centy! <3

view Seabiscuit's profile

15th Apr 2017, 4:35 PM


New friend. Yup. BRAND NEW. Oh boy. OH BOY! :'D

view HeSerpenty's profile

15th Apr 2017, 5:05 PM


LOLoLOL! Should be a really interesting discovery! LOL

view Vivocateur's profile

15th Apr 2017, 7:00 PM


Ooohoo! Now THAT is going to be an interesting meeting!

"Some weird guy who lives in the jail house"Ha ha ha! Boy that doesn't make him sound sketch at aaaalll...

I hope your Grandma's surgery goes smoothly :)

view HeSerpenty's profile

16th Apr 2017, 12:16 AM


Yes it is! Or... I HOPE so anyway!

LOL soooo sketch X"D. Especially in the ears of a worried mother lolol

Aw thanks so much--- If I can't get the page done before Friday I will definitely be giving an update Saturday or Sunday ^_^

view DLKmusic's profile

15th Apr 2017, 8:29 PM


OK, Tia, you have now just officially become "Annoying little sister"! It is now you're job to follow Hizzy around, embarrass him in front of everyone whenever you get the opportunity (Especially his friends), and rat him out on things whenever you don't get your own way... and sometimes even when you do!"

It is also your job to have his back when he really needs it, to cover for him on important crap, and most of all to be there for him when he really needs you, cause sometimes brothers need to have a sister's shoulder to cry on (cause they really can't do it anywhere else)... and that's something that you NEVER share with others...

Ok, are your duties as annoying little sister clear? Good!
(PS, you can start now by helping him clean that mess up as soon as Gwynn leaves... A perfect opportunity for you to tell him how bad he is at something!)

... and who the heck is that in the last panel?

view HeSerpenty's profile

16th Apr 2017, 12:23 AM


Hahaha you NAILED it! Hizruk and Tia's relationship is taking off! The sibling rivalry is starting already and Tia was just sorta scooped up off the streets yesterday XD.
Imagine how it'll be once her presence there gets to marinate a little bit. Hizruk has never had to deal with jealousy before X"DD

Hmm it couldn't possibly be a certain jail house living weirdo Gwynn is going to pay a visit to.. hehe

view alston123's profile

15th Apr 2017, 9:44 PM


Hehe. Yes. I love mother Gwynn. We don't get to see her like this much! ^_^

view HeSerpenty's profile

16th Apr 2017, 12:24 AM


Alston! :D

Lolol throughout these next few Gwynn-centric scenes we will be seein' even more sides we haven't seen to her yet :3 :D

Thank you! <33

view HapyCow's profile

16th Apr 2017, 1:33 AM


Ah aaaa, finally got a chance to get all caught up! Man I really want to draw Killion(man I hope I'm spelling things right), he's super cool...I loved every little interaction he's had with Hizruk, aw his one friend!!

BUT OH MY GOD, Is Keymen finally growing a pair! Sheesh! XD Nah actually he should be super nervous, although I can't imagine Gywnn getting TOO mad, right? >.> Well....actually no she'll be pretty mad

view HeSerpenty's profile

16th Apr 2017, 9:49 PM


Eeee Hapy that makes me so excited! I'm so glad you like him! Lolol Kilion is JUST the right person to befriend Hizruk <333333

LOL growing a pair! Hahahaha yea he's not scared of anything! Except...this x"D. And I suppose he has good reason! I can assure there will be looots of mixed emotions going on X"D

view Jarvi's profile

16th Apr 2017, 2:25 AM


Wow that is some scolding :D
But quite deserved, Hiz really was avoiding spending time with mom the whole time.
But nevermind all that, she's going to meet Keymen :D

view HeSerpenty's profile

17th Apr 2017, 12:56 AM


Hahaha yes he did deserve it! Makin' her worry like that D:

But YESSS-- finally amiright?? X'D

view MST3KFan's profile

16th Apr 2017, 3:34 AM


The reunion approaches!

Heh. Sorry, Hizzy, looks like Tia has taken your spot as 'favorite child' now in the house, and she isn't even related to you. XD

view HeSerpenty's profile

17th Apr 2017, 12:57 AM


Yes it does!

LOL yea Tia moved in real fast and took that coveted "favorite child" role haha! Maybe he should stop being such a screw up x"D

view Mel Cormac's profile

16th Apr 2017, 4:01 AM

Mel Cormac

Aww, I loved Gwynn before, but this scene, man. She just feels so real. Like how she's telling him off while picking up all the broken pieces that could hurt him, and scolding him in a way that says "I love you, but you've been an IDIOT!" Actually she kind of reminds me of my own mum lol. And look at his face in panels 13-15. He knows what he did. XD

And that "one good kid" line. Killed me. XD

view HeSerpenty's profile

17th Apr 2017, 1:00 AM


This comment means a lot to me, thank you! :')

Lolol she may be a doting mother but don't think you won't get slapped upside the head when you deserve it X'DD. I'm SOOO happy to hear that ya like her and that she's relatable! <333

view CiciEnixa's profile

16th Apr 2017, 4:27 AM


OMG XD Pretty soon it seems like Gwynn's gonna disown Hizzy for Tia (nah, she wouldn't, Hizzy is much loved, he'll just have to live with the fact that he now has competition for Gwynn's momma love XDDD)

And to be fair, you probably could have worded that differently, Hizzy. Maybe something like, "Some sneaky blond Serpenty dude with bright blue eyes I met in prison gave me drugs".

view HeSerpenty's profile

17th Apr 2017, 1:02 AM


LOL indeed...he's gonna have to learn how to share momma love! And Tia seems to know how to play this game LOL.. Hizruk has never had to fight like THIS before XDDD

LOL! Yes if he worded it like that it would've been soo much better!

view sigpig's profile

16th Apr 2017, 6:51 AM


Note to Hizzy - chicks dig scars.

I wish your grandma the best of luck. My grandma is probably in the same boat. She has a disc impinging her spinal cord that's causing her to lose mobility in her legs. If she doesn't have the surgery, she may never walk again.

view HeSerpenty's profile

17th Apr 2017, 1:05 AM


They do! (atleastIdobutwhateverx"DD)

Aw, Sig! That is EXACTLY what is going on with my grandma! They told her if she so much as moves her neck in the wrong way she could either die or become a paraplegic D:...hence why she's going for surgery. Aw man I wish the best for your grandma! Make sure she doesn't overdo it!

view Matt Knab's profile

16th Apr 2017, 7:33 AM

Matt Knab

I've been noticing that your facial expressions have been getting even better lately, and that's saying something. Keep up the great work!

view HeSerpenty's profile

17th Apr 2017, 1:28 AM


Thank you so much, Matt! <3

view The Accidental Ninja's profile

16th Apr 2017, 9:02 AM

The Accidental Ninja

Man, Hizruk... of ALL the ways you could have explained that... *facepalm*

But auuuughhhh I hope this isn't too awkward of a reunion... or too painful for either of them :(

And I hope your grandmother is doing well!

view HeSerpenty's profile

17th Apr 2017, 1:58 AM


Hahahha 3 things Hizruk sucks at: reading, writing, and explaining important things x"D

There's a lot more to add to that list, but I thought I'd be nice xD

Hahaha let's just hope for the best with this reunion! :'D

Aw and thank u so much <33

view Alicia's profile

16th Apr 2017, 11:45 AM


LOL Aw, that "sibling" rivalry. X'D Hizruk, you are SO BAD at breaking things gently, but good at breaking THINGS. Gwynn is being more patient with him than I woulda been with my own kids though.

But YAY! FINALLY! Yes, go tell that 'strange guy in the old jailhouse' what's up, Gwynn. XD SO EXCITED! <3

view HeSerpenty's profile

17th Apr 2017, 2:00 AM


Lolol GOOD POINT about Hizruk! And 110% accurate X"D

YUSSS the chapters' whole namesake about to happen up in here! XD

view Carvone's profile

16th Apr 2017, 12:07 PM


Ways to (not) reassure your mother: claim you fought the equivalent of a T-rex with no other explanation.

I greatly apprectiate all Gwynn's expressions on this page. Panel twelve aka. Keymen-better-hurry-up-and-invent-Advil is my particular favorite. She just looks SO done. That the spilled medicines get more spread out over the page is also quite funny. Hizruk's going to be busy.

YES, GYWNN ADOPTED TIA! I'm been hoping it would happen for ages now. (Since I saw dreamfollower's sad picture of her in the rain, and decided Gwynn should adopt her, actually) Between her and Killion, I'm glad Hizruk finally has proper backup. They should (although they won't) go and thumb their noses at Hizruk's not-friends Tamrak and Mel-what-his-face.

Because of the sleeves (and the sunset), I'm going to guess that's Keymen. Assuming that isn't meant rhetorically, yes, I WOULD like to know what's wrong with him!

view HeSerpenty's profile

17th Apr 2017, 11:00 AM


LOL..when you say it like that it sounds even worse! XDD

Hahaha "so done" is EXACTLY how she feels in that panel XDD..because she is!
That's pretty awesome that you were able to kind of forsee that little idea about Tia even since her first drawing <3333. I'm so glad it happened this way! Couldn't really happen any OTHER way! <3
Kilion and Tia = WAY BETTER friends than Tamrak and Melchizek for SURE! <3

YUsssss! Lolol EVERYONE wants to know what's up with him!

view junoro's profile

16th Apr 2017, 6:14 PM


I was gonna say that this page seemed longer than normal! LOL Serpy when will you REST?? I do love what you did in this page, though! Gwynn's face where she has her hands together in front of her very unimpressed face is hilarious!
Also RIP Hizruk, that burn about not being a good kid is harsh xD

view HeSerpenty's profile

17th Apr 2017, 11:03 AM


It's not even as big as that Interview page but it SEEMED bigger! XDD

Hahaha Gwynn is done X"D...and Hizruk better watch his back! Lolol

view SunnySideUpSmile's profile

17th Apr 2017, 9:14 AM


Hizruk's in trooooouuubleeee!

Wow she acts like my dad when he's angry. xD

view HeSerpenty's profile

17th Apr 2017, 11:03 AM


He iiiis! LOL

Hahahaha oh boy--- it could be worse but it's never fun to be on the receiving end of this anger! XDD

view SunnySideUpSmile's profile

17th Apr 2017, 12:09 PM


Haha, yes, I remember when I cut my sister's hair when I was 5, that was the scariest moment of my life. Maybe Gwynnith and Dad learned from each other. xD

view HeSerpenty's profile

17th Apr 2017, 12:20 PM


LOL Oh no!!!!! Hahahahaah that sounds bad XDD

My brother and I would get the belt if we: lied, hit each other, talked back, or were blatantly disrespectful. LOL... I'm glad he did because I think I'm a better person for it, buuuuuuut Hizruk should be glad that Gwynn didn't learn from HIM LOL! XDDD

19th Apr 2017, 11:38 AM


Keymen, would you like me to answer that question chronologically or alphabetically?

XD Okay. I'll stop. :]

Since apparently I'm starting from the bottom and working my way up this time, can I just say that I love Tia? She's amazing and hilarious and she and Hizruk have this marvelous back-and-forthing that I recognize from the depths of my SOUL, since I happen to be related to brothers, and this is just the most spot on sibling relationship ever. I love it. On a side note, that face she's making in the second-to-last panel? I know exactly what she's doing, but she looks absolutely terrifying doing it. Not a good look for you, Tia!

And with that said, I'll go back to the top and do the rest of this review in proper order. Man, we've been needing a moment where Hizruk gets chewed out for his mistakes, and lo and behold, it happens and it's just as beautiful as I imagined. XD In all seriousness, this is a page that's been a long time in coming - as will the next one and however many are left for the reunion scene - and it'll do Hizruk good to be chewed out for this. He made a bigtime mistake - well intentioned, yes, but a mistake nonetheless.

And Gwynn, quite frankly, needs to be clued into all the shenanigans going on. So it's nice to see her get to put on her mom pants and go get some answers.

The entire page is obviously well done, but you've really nailed it with the expressions here. From Gwynn's various 'how DARE you?' expressions to Hizruk's 'ashamed and guilty' faces, the page practically lives this scolding and drips it off the page right into our hearts and it's excellently well done. And the DIALOGUE! Good golly gosh, but I am in love with the dialogue on this page. We've all been there. We've all been chewed out by mom or dad (or on the worst occasions, both) and been guilty and haven't had anything to say for ourselves. And even if we do, the scolding hurts so much we can't say anything out loud anyway. And that moment, that feeling, is portrayed PERECTLY on this page. Hizruk, despite being so prominent, has next to nothing to say here - and that shows more than words ever could.

On an amusing note, his little face in the second to last panel? Priceless~

EDIT: Oh gosh, your grandma's going in for surgery? D: Give her all my best wishes and good luck and I hope she makes it through okay. Surgery sucks.

view HeSerpenty's profile

23rd Apr 2017, 1:18 AM


Hahahaha of all the people throwin' heat at Keymen for how he's handled this mess I'd say yours is probably the most intense! he deserves it I'll give ya that!

Haha I'm SOO Happy that you are getting that sibling vibe from Tia and Hizruk (and i'm so happy you like her!). LOL it should be interesting. Nothing like having to share something to make you reeally start to finally apprciate it-- Mommy's love is no exception! XD

Haha you know.. In "Lion King", even as a little kid, it stuck out to me the way Mufasa had scolded Simba after he had disobeyed. Like that was a good portrayal of real parent anger/disappointment. Haha I guess that's what I wanted from this too <3. Yeea Hiz definitely deserves a good scolding XDD

Thank you so much! <333

view Outlaw's profile

22nd Apr 2017, 1:25 PM


She's gonna ground him to hell, isn't she?

view HeSerpenty's profile

23rd Apr 2017, 1:19 AM


Lolol you KNOW it! Hiz is gonna be hangin' out with Beelzebub in the Loser-son corner of Hell LOL!

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23rd Apr 2017, 9:26 AM



I'm sure this scene would have been really good, but Tia makes it GREAT! :)

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