Chapter 5.44-- The Sunset

posted 7th Apr 2017, 2:06 PM

Chapter 5.44-- The Sunset
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view HeSerpenty's profile

7th Apr 2017, 2:06 PM


IS he gone, Gwynn? IS he? Stay tuned. We gotta get her to the right place ;D

Which meanss...

Momma Bear needs some answers and Baby Bear better deliver X"D


Thank you for reading everybody! <333

view HeSerpenty's profile

7th Apr 2017, 2:06 PM



Hay Everyone! So for MONTHS and months I have been meaning to present a little show and tell of my own extra SoO works as well as beautiful art by other beautiful people!

So let's begin!

Starting with my extra content, I had recently hosted the 2017 Valentine's Crossover Exchange right here on ComicFury! There were quite a few shenanigans with wonderful characters from other comics! Click on the thumbnails to check them out!

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Here we have a recent(ish) illustration including an upcoming character! You can read a little bit about him if you follow the link! :D


And finally, I am partaking of a 30 day OTP challenge on DeviantArt. Of course several of these 30 illustrations are going to be of my SoO cast! One was used in this page.... here are the other two so far!

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And now on to the beautiful art by others!

To start us off... the Your SoO Ocs page has been updated with the improved bio of Ryder, and the newest OC to appear, Sid! Click on the thumbnails to read their bios by Alicia!

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And we have another new OC who has NOT appeared yet added to the site as well! You can click on the thumbnail to read a bit about her if you like! By LilBlueBox!


And lastly, but not leastly, the Fan Art Site has been remodeled! Here are some beautiful arts I have been blessed with over the past year-- please have a look and follow the links to their talented creators! <333

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WOO! And I do believe that does it! I won't let things build up like this again. I do hope you enjoyed this presentation! I hope you found some awesome new people to follow as well! Thank you all SO much!

view JammyTheBirb's profile

7th Apr 2017, 2:09 PM


Ooooh is she going to work out who helped him? I honestly can't wait.

view HeSerpenty's profile

7th Apr 2017, 3:37 PM


Yay Jammz! I'm excited that you're excited :D :D
Its looking that way! :3

view Matt Knab's profile

7th Apr 2017, 2:25 PM

Matt Knab

Time to put two and two together!

Man, Hizzy jumped like he was bit! Well, again, that is!

view HeSerpenty's profile

7th Apr 2017, 3:38 PM


Finally connect some dots, amiright?

LOL nothing strikes fear in his heart like the scolding of his mother! X"DD

view Alicia's profile

7th Apr 2017, 2:39 PM


That panel with Hizruk. LOL I died. X'D

Aw, that first part of the page though... I really feel for Gwynn. You used the panels and the expressions to give such feels. T_T

view HeSerpenty's profile

7th Apr 2017, 3:40 PM


It's been a while since we had a good laugh at Hizruk's expense xDD

Thank you so much <33... yea it's a pretty impactful moment for her, even if it's small!

view The Accidental Ninja's profile

7th Apr 2017, 3:32 PM

The Accidental Ninja

Been a while since Hizruk had to read much, huh?
Aaaaand he's in troubleeee...

view HeSerpenty's profile

7th Apr 2017, 3:41 PM


LOL X'D... reading and writing are not his strong suits haha

BIG trouble. Time out for at LEAST 20 minutes x)

view Centcomm's profile

7th Apr 2017, 3:50 PM


hah that last panel OMG too funny! sooo funny well done Serpenty!

view HeSerpenty's profile

7th Apr 2017, 3:54 PM


LOL thanks Centy! Glad it gave a good chuckle! :D

view ProfEtheric's profile

7th Apr 2017, 6:59 PM


Start talking boy. NOW. :)

So HYPE for the eventual meeting.

Prediction: Slap, then kiss...

And that last panel made me chuckle. XD

view HeSerpenty's profile

8th Apr 2017, 12:30 PM


Hahaha that is a good prediction-- it's not like Key probably doesn't deserve be be slapped! LOL

And GOOD! I hoped it would make people do that haha

view Vivocateur's profile

7th Apr 2017, 8:46 PM


Ha ha ha!
Wow Hizruk! Such poise! X'D

Poor Gwynn...
Ah ha ha! Yeah...leaving that note was probably not the best approach he could have taken...

(That remodelled site looks fantastic BTW! )

view HeSerpenty's profile

8th Apr 2017, 12:31 PM


Hizruk is the very definition of poise X"D

Lol yes some people are againsst the note.............. but I think it was a good little tool to start gearing her mind for what's coming. YOU KNOW! Instead of hitting her with EVERYTHING all at once :3

Oh and thank you! It took FOREVER but I feel like it was worth the effort! <3

view rufiangel's profile

7th Apr 2017, 8:46 PM


Hizruk-baby-bear, I love you, you great big goofball XD (seriously, that second-last panel is classic LOL)

Could you have been any more vague, Keymen, with your note to Gwynn? -v- for all we know it's an advertising campaign for the newest hotel by the beach! Though I'm surprised she didn't recognise his handwriting or anything? Though maybe that's because he never had to write her before XD;;;

Seriously though, I'm looking forward to how this is all going to pan out, because once Gwynn starts asking questions about where Hizruk got those meds and treatment instructions, she's going to get an idea of who might be behind that note...

view HeSerpenty's profile

8th Apr 2017, 12:41 PM


Lolol Thank you RUfi!! Hizruk-baby-bear needs the love...cuz now even Momma-Bear is mad at him (

LOL that's true! Hahaha you know what's funny? Originally I wanted another one of my lil' montage things to illustrate how she did recognize that handwriting from other love notes he'd sneak in her bags and such when they were young...then i was like "Naaah ain't nobody got time for that" X"D...DARNIT! Haha buut she did think about him instantly at least! It did it's part :3. I think she is somewhat more prepared than she would have been! :D

view Jarvi's profile

7th Apr 2017, 11:56 PM


Don't spill your medicine Hizruk! Better spill the beans about the doctor that gave it to you :D

view HeSerpenty's profile

8th Apr 2017, 1:16 PM


haha TOO LATE he already did!
He better get useful with the info, yes X"D

view MST3KFan's profile

8th Apr 2017, 2:21 AM


Gywnn's going to put two and two together here real quick I think with the note and Hizruk's medicine instructions.

view HeSerpenty's profile

8th Apr 2017, 1:16 PM


You may be on to somethin! :D

view Proxy170's profile

8th Apr 2017, 5:43 AM


REALLY, Keymen??? That's...that's kind of an asshole note. Like do you know how that messes with a woman's mind???? T___T

haha well at least Gwynn didn't walk in on him doing something else >.> But maybe his explanation of a blonde haired, blue eyed medic helping him will reunite them :D

view HeSerpenty's profile

8th Apr 2017, 1:53 PM


LOL! Keymen takin' heat for the move with the note! Now what's a man supposed to say when he doesn't just want to be all "this is keymen. Hi, I'm alive" XDDD. HEY it got her thinkin' about him at least ;D

LOL omg--- Hizruk is at least one teenage boy we don't have to worry too much about walking in on X"D. BUT indeed he's gonna help Gwynn get to the right place! ;D

view Mel Cormac's profile

8th Apr 2017, 6:53 AM

Mel Cormac

"Let's face it--this is not the worst thing you've caught me doing."

view HeSerpenty's profile

8th Apr 2017, 1:54 PM


LololOlol! Well with what he's been up to the last couple of days it could be a lot worse!

view DLKmusic's profile

8th Apr 2017, 2:58 PM


Leave it to me to be late to the party! is there any pizza left?

Those last 2 panels are priceless. Gotta feal sorry for Hizzy, he didn't do anything wrong! (well, this time at least).

Now Gwynn is gonna find out about Keyman in a way that Keyman REALLY didn't want... LOL, serves him right for tryin to be too smooth!

view HeSerpenty's profile

10th Apr 2017, 11:28 AM


Hay man, the party doesn't start til you get here! Hahahaha *finally brings out the pizza*

LOL Hizruk... has done SO MANY wrong things up to this point he deserves every bit of this!
There is lots of FAIL happening around these parts! XD

view Seabiscuit's profile

8th Apr 2017, 4:52 PM


Hahahaha, dang! Hizruk causes instant distraction.:'D
Oh oh oh but this'll lead them together surely!!;^;

view HeSerpenty's profile

10th Apr 2017, 11:28 AM


Haha he is good at doing that!
YES it will! :D

view Carvone's profile

8th Apr 2017, 5:51 PM


Keymen, I realize you were under pressure and all, but BAD IDEA. A vague note about a deeply personal detail is not going to put anyone's mind at ease! Let alone from a supposed dead guy. And sunsets were something she did with Keymen. OH. That page back in chapter three (Missing you) is now a lot more painful.

Pff, Hizruk. As much as I'm sure HE dosen't think this, it's definitely a good think Gwynn's going to take over. "Good enough" does not make for reassuring medical dialouge. That or Keymen gave him sugarpills to minimize the damage. Speaking of which, looks like he did a good job on Hizruk's shoulder, even if the sheer number of stiches is alarming. Most I've ever needed is seven stiches -- this looks like 700! I also wonder whether Hizruk's inexplicable toughness made the stiching harder. If his bones are stronger, then maybe his skin is too? Maybe not, if the rest of his scars are any indicator..

And since I wasn't around last week, continuing best of luck with your grandmother! I really hope it works out for you!

view HeSerpenty's profile

10th Apr 2017, 11:33 AM


I'm so impressed that you recalled that page from SOOO long ago! I didn't even havta link it! <3 you da best

LOL it's true.... she may be mad but she will know how to take care of him WAAAAAY more than he knows how to take care of himself X"D. what a little rascal! Okay not so littl but you get me! OHHhh very cool observation! Actually I can answer it too! Keymen had a HECK of a time trying to stitch up his wounds...because yes, just like his bones, his skin is harder to damage too (that goes to show that all the scars he does have were very serious injuries--he WOULD have a lot more!). Haha once we can get Keymen and Hiz hanging out a bit more we can learn some more facts about his physical traits :3 (Key's so good at getting us answers! Well..about OTHER people anyway XD)

Aw thank you so much! I am finally getting in the groove of things I think!

view SunnySideUpSmile's profile

10th Apr 2017, 9:57 AM


Ooh, Hizruk, watch it. Momma looks pretty angry.

view HeSerpenty's profile

10th Apr 2017, 11:34 AM


Hahahaha, she is! He BETTER watch it X"D

10th Apr 2017, 2:23 PM

Aiden Shield

Well in retrospect there are worse things Gwynn could have walked in on, Hizruk...

view HeSerpenty's profile

10th Apr 2017, 2:29 PM


Haha! This is true! At least with him we don't havta worry about some of those things any time soon X"DDD

view junoro's profile

11th Apr 2017, 11:18 AM


Oh man, I hope Gwynn reads those doctor notes and finds the truth in 0.3 seconds flat! Then she can run right to the sunset spot! Let Hizruk clean up the mess on his own!

view HeSerpenty's profile

11th Apr 2017, 9:18 PM


Hahaha somethin' like that! :D
Thanks to Hizruk for getting Gwynn to the right place! Lolol

view LeRenardRoux's profile

12th Apr 2017, 9:50 AM


Very smooth, Hizruk. T_T

Ugh, I cannot wait for this reuniooooooon, Serpyyyyy O:

view HeSerpenty's profile

12th Apr 2017, 8:21 PM


I am so happy to hear that Roux! It's ALMOST HERE! X"DDD

Hizruk is always Mr. Smooth x"D

view HapyCow's profile

12th Apr 2017, 7:27 PM


OMG love it. XD Gwynn has some lovely expressions on this page. :D

view HeSerpenty's profile

12th Apr 2017, 8:22 PM


I missed seeing your face around these parts! <333


13th Apr 2017, 5:48 PM


Now, Keymen, did you REALLY think that would help?

Then again, the only thing that would really help this situation is a time travel machine so you can go back in time and actually, oh, I don't know, let her know you're ALIVE. That woulda made this whole thing so much easier on both of you, yeesh. But noooooo.

In any event, what's done is done, and now Hizruk gets to fill in the last of the clues for Gwynn so she can go push Keymen off the nearest cliff because geez, he deserves it. It really, really hurts to see all these bittersweet moments; the sooner it gets resolved, the better. Then I can stop trying not to die of pain every time it's brought up. As can the characters themselves, for that matter.

Hizruk. HIZRUK. YOU LOVEABLE BALL OF MISBEHAVING GOOF. I LOVE YOUR CLUMSY FACE. Ah, it's been so long since we've seen Gwynn scolding Hizruk for doing stupid things. I've missed it~

And no, Hizruk, when it comes to medicine 'close enough' could actually potentially KILL you. So uh. Maybe don't do that. And he just broke every single thing Keymen gave him. *facedesk* He's gonna need replacements... but it was funny, so I'll let it slide~ XD

Now! Art!

It's really fantastic to see a Gwynn centric pace like this. We haven't had one in a long time, and certainly not since your art style settled into what it is now. The second line of panels is probably my favorite on a 'oh god why my HEART' level because you've got her emotions just so perfectly portrayed there. The first line is just... nnnnnnnng..... ow. Lots and lots of ow, I don't wanna talk about it, stupid flashbacks. D:

But a very well drawn flashback, so there's that. :]

Line three of panels sees Gwynn with some better emotions, which is nice. I'm loving the range of faces she's got there. And of course, in the last panel, her 'I'm gonna KILL you' face, which is my favorite. :D Yesssss~

On a final Gwynn note, I love how drastically you've changed her body between pre-and-post Hizruk. Childbirth changes the body, some of those changes are very much permanent, and I like how you've shown that with Gwynn.

And finally, Hizruk himself. You've done a splendid job on each one of his dumb panels with what looks like a very, very painful wound - no shoulder slaps for Hizruk for a while, huh? - and Hizruk toppling over is, quite frankly, comedy GOLD. Still, my personal favorite is his second panel, because the look on his face is absolutely PRICELESS.

It made me laugh so hard when I saw it the first time and it still makes me grin. :]

Thank you for ending this page on a humorous note; I think we all needed the break.

view HeSerpenty's profile

15th Apr 2017, 2:16 PM


LOL it's complicated, Blue! Hahahaha I think maybe i'm the ONLY one who's not pissed off at Keymen for how he's handling this hahahahaha
It's gonna be a huge relief for LOTS of people when they finally get this reunion over with--- for me, for THEM, for all the readers X"D...

But hey... until that least we get to shake our heads humorously at Hizruk and all his fail X"D. If there are two things he's good at right now it's screwing things up and making people mad at him X"D. Even the person he saved hates his guts! Poor dumb, simple Hizzy X"D.

Hahahaha it's cool that you noticed the changes in Gwynn. Definitely her body has matured since her younger days frolicking around with Keymen! Hahaha I notice it while I'm drawing it but it's cool when other people notice it too! Leave it to you to noice :P

HAHAHA I'm so glad that that Hizruk panel had it's desired effect! I had quite a lot of fun thinking of it and drawing it LOL

Thank you so much! <33

view gideonland's profile

14th Apr 2017, 12:56 AM


Hate to see Gwynn have her heart tugged at like that. Why doesn't Keyman just finally reveal himself to her. It'll be intense, but it will be the right thing. Eh, eventually they'll be with each other again (right?) so no worries. It's wonderful build up.
Thanks gotta hurt, Hizruk. Lol. Worse than the bite!
Wonderful comic! Keep up the great work, Serpy.

view HeSerpenty's profile

15th Apr 2017, 2:17 PM


Haha Keymen isn't scared of much but... this confrontation seems to have him petrified!
Soon we won't have to struggle with this frustration any more!

Thank you so much, man! <3

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