Chapter 5.40-- Unexpected Apology

posted 10th Mar 2017, 1:19 PM

Chapter 5.40-- Unexpected Apology
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view HeSerpenty's profile

10th Mar 2017, 1:19 PM

HeSerpenty

Well said, Merek. Always Mr. Professional <3

What should he say next?
A). "Take your apology and shove it up your a---*S
B). "It's okay, thank you for apologizing"
C). Nothing XD.



Thanks for reading everyone :)


10th Mar 2017, 1:49 PM

Visvires

Ah. So, Kalverick is regretting the enhanced interrogations. His leak could've gone unnoticed.

This should be interesting.

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11th Mar 2017, 1:22 PM

HeSerpenty

Haha gotta hate it when you are trying to get brownie points and it ends up getting you in trouble! LOL

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10th Mar 2017, 2:01 PM

Centcomm

Oh the look on his face!!!

He should make a LIST!

reperations for everyone hurt. Merek restored to full station as Kalverics BOSS! hell yeah!!

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11th Mar 2017, 1:23 PM

HeSerpenty

LOL I know, right? This is a bit of a comeuppance for Kal coming, me thinks! Not quite as VIOLENT as some people (>__>) were hoping for for him LOL... but he's not a happy camper! :D

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10th Mar 2017, 2:28 PM

SunnySideUpSmile

Someone's surprised. No, Merek, what happened to the purty little pink bows? (I actually didn't notice it was gone...) >_<

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12th Mar 2017, 10:34 AM

HeSerpenty

LOL! Those little bows passed away ages ago! :P hahhaha

Buut I"m sure they'll come back to life at SOME point-- they just looked too good on him :P

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12th Mar 2017, 1:01 PM

SunnySideUpSmile

Haha yes, they did. That little girl should add rainbow ones, so that his grumpy expression will be less threatening. :P

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13th Mar 2017, 1:08 PM

HeSerpenty

hahaha! Alas! That would go against what Merek is going for! XDDDDD (but it WOULD be adorable :3)

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10th Mar 2017, 2:32 PM

sketchdoll

Can pantomime be option D?

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12th Mar 2017, 10:35 AM

HeSerpenty

*quietly googles what pantomime is, hoping no one will notice I don't already know what it is* >__>

LOL!! That would be hilarious! I vote yes XDD

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10th Mar 2017, 3:13 PM

MST3KFan

Here Merek was all ready to jump down the counsel's throat and suddenly they hit him with this!?

Hmm...How will he react to this?

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12th Mar 2017, 10:36 AM

HeSerpenty

Haha that's exactly right! I don't think they've EVER apologized to him... or anyone.. ever before!

Big moment, big moment X"DD

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10th Mar 2017, 5:38 PM

Carvone

So the council DID blame the person actually responsible. Well at least if they're unremittingly awful,then they're indiscriminately so. Not much of a compliment.

I think this is the second time they've "offered" a deal. Very fond of the illusion of choice, aren't they? It's very​ weird to hear Demand apologize, even if it's dubiously sincere. Then again he doesn't have Karl's stiff neck, and does play the long game, so it does make sense.

Kalverik hissing is sticking with me for some reason. Except for Hizruk, who is nice but weird (at least on this point), he's been seen in serpent form the most of everyone. If he does excecutions frequently, then I wonder if the hissing is a holdover from that. Feral behavior. (Of course this depends on whether it's actually possible to use execution by venom on other serpents).

Or maybe he just has a deep desire​ to become a teapot! He does the steam from the ears thing often enough.

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12th Mar 2017, 10:42 AM

HeSerpenty

I LOVE that you pointed out the hissy Kal thing hehe (LOL and the teapot omg XDD). But it's true! Aside from sneaky-serpent and the trackers, he is the ONLY one we have seen transform fully into his serpent form. He is definitely more in tune with his serpenty senses than most modern-day serpents... and that definitely adds to his 'danger' factor! When he mentioned last chapter that "I don't need a tracker"..... that would be why :3

And yes..the Council IS being suspiciously agreeable right now! XDD

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10th Mar 2017, 6:09 PM

DLKmusic

A twist I wasn't expecting! but it's definitely a good turn at this point. I'm sure there's a catch, but now's a good time to take advantage of it, Merek!

My Job here is done, El Key-Bong AWAAAAAAYYY!!!!!

(I'll be lurking around the corner just in case though)

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12th Mar 2017, 10:45 AM

HeSerpenty

You saved the day again, El Key-Bong! What would we ever do without you?? LOL XDD

Haha yes! Not ever day we get a surprise twist in the good guy's corner! I think if Merek can close his mouth and compose himself from this shock (lolol).. he might very well take advantage of the opportunity! Hehe

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10th Mar 2017, 7:51 PM

Seabiscuit

Oh, well, that...

...

Better than expected? And totally unexpected! But, I gotta say, I feel suspicious...

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12th Mar 2017, 10:46 AM

HeSerpenty

LOL!

It is wise to ALways be suspicious of the Council XDDD
Definitely better than expected! For Merek anyway.. not so much for Kal XDD

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10th Mar 2017, 8:06 PM

JammyTheBirb

Oh! That's kinda good! but also kinda ominous. I'm kinda worried XD

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12th Mar 2017, 10:46 AM

HeSerpenty

Hahahaha ALWAYS be worried, Jammz X"DD

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11th Mar 2017, 12:36 AM

Xylas_Incarnum

wait, what now?

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12th Mar 2017, 10:46 AM

HeSerpenty

You and Merek are thinking the same thing! XDD

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11th Mar 2017, 1:10 AM

Proxy170

What an awesome turn of events for our good guys! :D And reasonable proof that the Council isn't ALL bad XD Is it bad though that I feel sorry for Kal a bit? D: I mean, he's totally lost in his ways but I feel like he's not a totally evil person...any chance of redemption for him I wonder? I wonder if he's still going to the human village too...

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12th Mar 2017, 11:10 AM

HeSerpenty

Haha I know, right? We were all thinkin' Merek might be walkin' it to his doom! XDD
Turns out it's just Kalverick's :3 (probably)

LOL o man! I never thought I'd hear the words "feel sorry for" and "Kal" in the same sentence! Hahahaaha! It will be interesting to watch Kal from here on out... now that he's very much facing the idea of losing everything :3
His life might DEPEND on that human village! XDD

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11th Mar 2017, 5:07 AM

azureXtwilight

Welp, it is time for him to replace Kalverick as big boss!

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12th Mar 2017, 11:11 AM

HeSerpenty

Hahahha that would be SUPER NICE for everyone! 'Cept maybe the Council XDD. And Kalverick XDD

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11th Mar 2017, 8:39 AM

Jarvi

Oh nooo, don't go back to umbra armor xD

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12th Mar 2017, 11:12 AM

HeSerpenty

Hahaha you knew this day would come! XDD

11th Mar 2017, 12:48 PM

Robert

D. "I'm listening." No promises, no expectations, just see what happens. If they don't apologize for those bruises he can always tear the building down!

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12th Mar 2017, 11:14 AM

HeSerpenty

Ohhh D is a good answer! Probably the wisest for Merek to take hahaha
I'm sure he wants to tear the building down anyways! XDD

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11th Mar 2017, 7:19 PM

ProfEtheric

Ooooohhhhhh.... An offer!

...I NEED that next page...

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12th Mar 2017, 11:15 AM

HeSerpenty

Hehe thank you Prof! Gonna get started on it ASAP so I can get it to you guys ON TIME for once! XDD

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12th Mar 2017, 7:50 AM

Alicia

I can just imagine the next couple panels...

Merek: *Rubs his chin.* Weeeeell...
Next panel cuts to everyone getting ice cream. XD

I love the build up in this page! And Merek's face in that last panel-- VERY well drawn! <3

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12th Mar 2017, 11:25 AM

HeSerpenty

LOL! That would be an adorable turn of events. SPOILER ALERT!
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Haha aw thank you so much! That last face was especially important to me haha

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12th Mar 2017, 5:43 PM

rufiangel

HAHAHAHAHA XD that ice cream LOL

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13th Mar 2017, 1:09 PM

HeSerpenty

LOL I am happy that someone other than me thought that it was funny! XDDD

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12th Mar 2017, 8:33 AM

rufiangel

Merek's face in that last panel is truly a picture XD he did NOT see that coming!

What offer could these jerks extend after all of this crap, really? >_> "You can throw all the tomatoes you want at Kal." ... Not a bad offer that, actually...

Merek should do a combination of all A, B and C - say it all with his eyes, give a bit of a nod of acknowledgement, but say not a word XD

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12th Mar 2017, 11:42 AM

HeSerpenty

Hahaha he didn't! He doesn't have to make that fact SO obvious XD. C'mon Merek where's that poker face XDD

Haha o man...freedom to exact any sorta revenge he wants on Kal WOULD be a nice offer. Might win him over just a little bit X"DD

Ohhh that is a GOOD answer, Rufi! A very good one!

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12th Mar 2017, 10:56 AM

Matt Knab

Merek doesn't flinch when he plays chicken. XD

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12th Mar 2017, 11:43 AM

HeSerpenty

LOL nope, not at all! XDDD

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12th Mar 2017, 12:29 PM

Vivocateur

Well now! Probably the last thing he was expecting! XD
Kal's certainly taking this well (ha ha!).
Choose option C would be my advice...let them do all the talking (at least until he has more of an idea of what's going on here). The council is being just a little bit too pleasant...suspiciously so. He looks so utterly dumfounded in the last panel I had to lol.

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13th Mar 2017, 1:10 PM

HeSerpenty

Hahaha you had the reaction to that last panel I was going for then! Yess <333. Yeeeaaaa he wasn't expecting to come out on top here LOL

Option C is indeed probably the best answer!

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13th Mar 2017, 10:41 AM

junoro

Oh boy, this isn't the reaction I was expecting! From Kalverick OR the Council!
I choose option C, it allows THEM to talk more, while he plans his response!

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14th Mar 2017, 8:14 PM

HeSerpenty

Another wise answer for C! <3333

Heheh indeed this even marks a huge change for some characters! Kalverick in particulars >___>

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14th Mar 2017, 9:53 PM

TheD-Wrek

Aw, I was ready to see Merek rip those old bee's a new one. Oh, well.... some other time. X)

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15th Mar 2017, 1:41 AM

HeSerpenty

Hahahaha that woulda been nice! But alas.. he has to be smart about this! Heheh :D

Buut indeed perhaps some other time! XDDD

16th Mar 2017, 9:41 PM

Lilbluebox

C. Probably. Hopefully; A is just stupid and we all know B ain't an option here. XD No, I'm going with the third option here - Merek's got a temper, but he's also smart, and here... it's befuddling, to say the least. Should cool him down enough to not say or do anything TOO stupid.

I shall theorize that, given Kalverick's reaction (first instance of shifting serpents acting more serpenty than perhaps the Council would like! Now we gotta get a happy noise on the list. :]) to this whole mess, particularly that involuntary angry hiss... he's in trouble. Severe trouble. And I think the Council is about to offer him a deal that Merek very likely CAN'T refuse - not without resulting in Very Bad Things.

The Council is not used to being disobeyed or refused, after all. They tend to react badly to it.

Spoiled brats. >.>

But on the other hand, if they do offer Merek a 'promotion' or anything of the kind... it could very well play into Keymen's plans. That's the thing about this story. Right now there's lots of folded up layers to it; we're just barely starting to scratch the surface. It'll be interesting to see how this all plays out.

On a NOT theory note (which we are all looking forward to, I'm sure XD), I can definitely see why this page gave you trouble. I can also say with absolute certainty that it is AMAZING. And it satisfies my craving for more Merek - he's all over this page and he's not even angry in every single panel, I'm so happy~ XD

The staredown between him and Kalverick in the first two panels, Kalverick deliberately avoiding him and hissing as he walks away - that entire sequence is excellently done. I'm positively thrilled there's no dialogue and I love how well you've conveyed everything through their expressions and postures. We've definitely got two clashing alpha males here and I doubt the situation will improve from here on out. The two Merek panels after the hissing panel are just... I love them. I do. That face he's making is three parts furious, four parts grumpy, and two parts 'I need coffee' for the top one, and the bottom one is just mad. That's it. But it's SO well done; seriously, those two panels and the final one are my favorites on this entire page. Possibly ever since the last page with Kilion, actually.

I love the last panel for the lighting (khsgdkhsd IT'S SO LOVELY, SERPY, IT'S GORGEOUS <3) and the expression on Merek's face couples with his posture. He's gone from understandable fury to CONFUSED fury; the poor guy looks quite befuddled there and again the lighting, just... ugh. It's perfect. It makes that panel. I love how he relaxes just so - his shoulders slump, his arms fall to his sides... It's like he's been shocked into not being angrily tense. It works. It's great.

I also actually really like the first panel with the Council members. And y'know, we can't see their eyes. I'm positive that's intentional, both on your side and on the character side of the Council themselves. Very sinister and threatening (even though that one guy is doing... what with his tongue? Do I even want to know?) and it's a nice little line-up there. The Council's aware that Merek's pissed at them, and now they get to try to salvage the situation.

Next page oughta be interesting for sure.

EDIT: IT'S A MOUSTACHE XDXDXDXDXD *dies laughing*

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19th Mar 2017, 1:22 AM

HeSerpenty

C is the smartest answer (AND the right one! Well done hehe)

And yessss..... a proper assessment of Kalverick's situation as well lolol. He is NOT a happy guy right now...and indeed a worried one (underneath all that anger). He has every reason to be!

O gosh everything you said about that staredown between Kal and Merek in the first part of the page makes me sooo happy! No words were needed....at least I had hoped it would feel that way <3. ANd you nailed it all right on the head! Haha "two clashing alpha males" I LOVE THAT <333. Thank you so much for paying such close attention hehe..makes me feel like all this thought paid off! :D


THANK YOU so much for everything!

LOLOL YES THAT IS A MUSTACHE!
Hahahahaha The Council is clearly known for their completely terrible facial hair hahahahaha (totally intentional XDD). I was like.. "tongue? Hmmm what is she talkin about hmmm." I too died laughing haha.

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