Chapter 5.36-- Surprise Visitor

posted 11th Feb 2017, 12:18 AM

Chapter 5.36-- Surprise Visitor
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view HeSerpenty's profile

11th Feb 2017, 12:18 AM

HeSerpenty

Waaay to go, Hizruk... you made him cry :/

Next week is the big reveal-- I'm very much looking forward to it!

FUN FACT: Yes.... yes, Kilion DOES live here XDD

I ALMOST made it before midnight, but alas. I haven't gone to bed yet so I still consider it friday-- I'm finally recovered from those monster page weeks! xDD

Thanks for reading everyone! See ya next Friday! :D

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view Proxy170's profile

11th Feb 2017, 12:23 AM

Proxy170

So... The hair in front of your eye isn't just a style choice? XD
Hizzy, you really should learn to knock! And poor Kilion, where are his parents? Maybe Hizzy should be thankful he's got his...

view HeSerpenty's profile

12th Feb 2017, 12:11 AM

HeSerpenty

Hahaha that's what Kilion HOPES people will assume!

And that is so very true---- Kilion literally has nobody! I think HIzzy is gonna learn some things about empathy AND gratefulness through his new friend X"D

view Alicia's profile

11th Feb 2017, 12:24 AM

Alicia

AW! I'm sure it's fine, Kilion! <3 LET ME SEE THOUGH. >_> So he wears his hair like that for another reason besides just bein' shy. :3 Can't wait to see it! NextpagetomorrowokaySerpy? XD

view HeSerpenty's profile

12th Feb 2017, 12:16 AM

HeSerpenty

HahahasurenoproblemI'llgetrightonthat!

Hehe I'm super excited for next week!

view azureXtwilight's profile

11th Feb 2017, 12:37 AM

azureXtwilight

*raises hand*

Did Killion has a three claws mark like Hizzy did? That is my guess XD

view HeSerpenty's profile

13th Feb 2017, 7:44 PM

HeSerpenty

Hehe that is a good solid theory! We shall find out next page! :3

view MST3KFan's profile

11th Feb 2017, 1:56 AM

MST3KFan

Why YES, Kilion I did see...you have an awesome little cave/bachelor pad all your own. Mind if I bunk here, too?

XP

11th Feb 2017, 5:02 PM

DLKmusic (at work)

Thanks a lot, Mst3kfan! that joke brought to mind a whole slew of Pinky and hte Brain AYTWIT jokes, and I... Can't get them... out of... my head....

view Centcomm's profile

11th Feb 2017, 2:07 AM

Centcomm

Oh my! this is a turn of events.. nicely done Serpenty!

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16th Feb 2017, 8:40 PM

HeSerpenty

THank you!! I been waiting for this scene! :D

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11th Feb 2017, 3:26 AM

Mel Cormac

Hizruk: Sorry, I would have knocked if... you had a door... :/

view HeSerpenty's profile

16th Feb 2017, 8:40 PM

HeSerpenty

LOL true!
Except maybe he woulda used a window..had he a window.. whiiich I guess is not much better than just walking in XDD

view Carvone's profile

11th Feb 2017, 5:58 AM

Carvone

Ooh, so there IS something with Kilion's eye!

The paneling for the bottom half is great, especially with it framing Kilion and Hizruk (and clever hiding of his eye too). I'm going to go with missing or weird color for that, because both of those would be a problem for the Council. Side note: I very much like this new look. He went from "adorable" cute to just plain old cute, xD.

This is completely unrelated, but I am very inordinately pleased with those panels of teacups on the ground. They're just so completely domestic compared to everything else. Also, two cups, hmm. Does he get more regular/invited visitors than this?

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16th Feb 2017, 8:43 PM

HeSerpenty

Hehehe very good guesses about the eye! We shall find out the true (lord willing) tomorrow hehe. WHatever it is it's enough to make Kilion want to isolate himself from all of society!

Haha Kilion, despite his living conditions, is still a classy fellow! Haha and yes he has two cups... but no he's never had visitors before. I suppose he has them for the sake of having them--maybe it makes him feel less lonely? XDD

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11th Feb 2017, 6:32 AM

SunnySideUpSmile

Great job, Hizruk. You made your first friend (after you returned from prison) cry already. 5 chapters in. X)

Aww, I liked Killon's hair like that! :( But what's wrong with his face?

view HeSerpenty's profile

16th Feb 2017, 8:46 PM

HeSerpenty

LOL ikr? It's especially sad when you say it like that!

Aw don't u worry--- it will be back the way it was in no time haha (well maybe not for this scene :3 >__>)

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17th Feb 2017, 7:21 AM

SunnySideUpSmile

Nuuu....Killon's hair is fab! :( (I can't believe I'm sad about this, and not how Hizruk made someone cry 5 chapters in...)

11th Feb 2017, 11:06 AM

Kat

Wow, Kilion has a neat place, he's even got a rug!
As much as it looks cool in stories and stuff (I use it too, I'll admit it), I've always been a little skeptic about the hair-covering-something-suspicious stuff. I mean, what if there's a gust of wind? Blows your cover right then and there.

11th Feb 2017, 11:07 AM

Kat

...And yes that pun was totally intentional. Yep.

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11th Feb 2017, 12:53 PM

HeSerpenty

Hahaha fully understand the skepticism and totally agree! Kilion only goes to two places that are 'public' and that is class and the archives where he works. Both places indoors lolol. His trips to the market are so few and far between its likely he won't be found out lol!

12th Feb 2017, 4:05 PM

Kat

I guess it could work, if that's the case...
Wait, he works? How old is he? Actually, for that matter, how old is Hizruk?

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12th Feb 2017, 4:23 PM

HeSerpenty

Hahaha yusss

If Kilion were running around acting like a normal character hanging out and doing things.. it would be like "for real? NO ONE noticed?" XDD..but alas :P

Hizzy just turned 18! Kilion is right behind him haha

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11th Feb 2017, 1:08 PM

ProfEtheric

Gah!

I want that next page NAO!!!!!

What is Kilion's big secret?

(Imma die from suspense, Serpy. Absolutely die!)

view HeSerpenty's profile

16th Feb 2017, 8:47 PM

HeSerpenty

Lol thank you Prof!!! I don't want you to die.. but I love the suspense! hahhahaa doin my best to get that page out on time! :D :D

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11th Feb 2017, 2:56 PM

Seabiscuit

Woah, so there's a secret with his eye after all- I can't wait to see it! >:D

...What a "home" :(

view HeSerpenty's profile

16th Feb 2017, 8:47 PM

HeSerpenty

Hehe me too Sea!! Thank you so much!

Yea...a cold lonely place this is X"D

view DLKmusic's profile

11th Feb 2017, 6:37 PM

DLKmusic

Damn you Serpy, now I gotta adopt Kilion too! HOW THE HELL AM I GONNA BE ABLE TO AFFORD TO FEED ALL THESE TEENAGERS????

*sigh* I'll figure something out... Get inside where it's warm, kid, living in a cave is no way to live...

A few pages back you asked who we thought Sid might be related to. If it turns out that the answer is Kilion, then Kalverick will have competition for which Umbra I hate the most.

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16th Feb 2017, 8:55 PM

HeSerpenty

Hahaha!! Don't worry Kilion doesn't eat much and he'll just use up a small corner of his house! You may even find him cleaning up from time to time!
He just appreciates the warm home and good company <333 hahaha

O man haha... poor Kilion if that is the case! Maaaybe Kal will still have competition for most hated Umbra even if Sid isn't related to Kilion hehe!

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11th Feb 2017, 11:42 PM

rufiangel

You big TEASE, Serpy XDD

Honestly I just want the next page to be like

Hizruk-baby: Yes... I saw...
YOU'RE DANGEROUSLY GOOD-LOOKING HOMG

Kilion: I KNOW *sob* I CAN'T GO OUT IN PUBLIC PEOPLE MOB ME

view HeSerpenty's profile

18th Feb 2017, 12:10 AM

HeSerpenty

LOL Rufi!!!! What a problem to have!
Hahaha iiif only X'DD

That would be hilarious though hehe :3

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12th Feb 2017, 4:21 PM

CiciEnixa

^ OMG RUFI XDDD

Ah, I really wonder what is with that part of Kilion's face. At first I was thinking he's sporting a Zuko, but honestly it could be a number of things, all possibly related to his current living conditions, and all something no one would probably ignore.

view HeSerpenty's profile

18th Feb 2017, 12:11 AM

HeSerpenty

You are definitely right about the no one would probably ignore! And yus it has everything to do with why he isolates himself out here in the middle of nowhere :'D XDD

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13th Feb 2017, 7:31 AM

alston123

Aw, this is kinda sad...but also happy because now they are gonna be besties forever! :D:D:D:D:D

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18th Feb 2017, 12:11 AM

HeSerpenty

Lol YESSSS exactly! :D :D

15th Feb 2017, 4:11 PM

Lilbluebox

No, Hizruk, he just comes here to change his clothes in someone else's cave house. DUH.

Way to go, boy. You made your only friend in the world cry on your first day of friendship. He's literally got the shakes now. Maybe this'll teach you to knock first.

Though I suppose Kilion doesn't exactly have a door...

IN ANY EVENT! The backgrounds on this page are lovely. Perhaps not quite as visually stunning as they were on the previous page, but they're lovely nonetheless. I do like seeing where Kilion lives, and oh, the poor boy, it breaks my heart and he needs hugs and acceptance and love. And probably hot chocolate. Solves all the world's problems.

I still love that clothesline and the lamp on top of the books. And is that a scroll I spy? Looks like Kilion takes work home with him sometimes!

Speaking of the sweetheart, I hate to be a mimic, but those three panels where he's got his hair back and you can see one side of his face? Hnnnng. He was hiding some SERIOUS attractive underneath that floof.

And he just looks so incredibly sad. Considering what a day it's been for him so far, I can't blame him, but oh my dear lord do I ever just wanna give him a big squeezy hug and tell him it's all gonna be okay.

....He needs a big squeezy hug so bad, Serpy. D:

Here's to that reveal. May it be as heartbreakingly amazing as it deserves to be.

view HeSerpenty's profile

18th Feb 2017, 1:21 AM

HeSerpenty

LOL Hizzy does seem to ask the obvious doesn't he XDDD. Aaand has a knack for making brand new friends cry-- maybe he should work on that :')

Thank you so much! Yess I deliberately wanted the warm, pleasant backgrounds in the previous page to be contrasted by these plain, cold backgrounds in THIS page haha. So they aren't as striking... but neither are they supposed to be :3. Success perhaps? :D

Haha despite his living conditions Kilion is not an animal! Well... I guess technically they're ALL animals but he doesn't consider himself such XDDD.

Hehe I am so pleased that you like what ya see under the floof! I don't think he'd believe you hahaha

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17th Feb 2017, 4:23 AM

LeRenardRoux

OH MAN I think I have a guess!

(he's a pirate and he has to hide his eye patch)

Really though, I might know where this is going. :0

view HeSerpenty's profile

18th Feb 2017, 12:12 AM

HeSerpenty

Hehe I am curious to see if your guess was correct! :3

LOL..pirate XDD

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24th Feb 2017, 10:14 AM

Vivocateur

Aha! At last the curtains (of hair) have been parted! What could drive a nice young chap to live in an isolated rock cave? (Tee hee, being behind on pages means that I don't have to wait a week to learn the truth.)

Oh come on Hizzy, did no one ever tell you not to walk in on people while they're changing? Don't they teach you these things in prison?

view HeSerpenty's profile

25th Feb 2017, 2:01 AM

HeSerpenty

Hahahaha! The boy is a complete savage, amiright??

As it turns out Kilion has a pretty goo reason :3 lololol-- poor boy!

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