Chapter 5.27-- Signature

posted 10th Dec 2016, 12:09 PM

Chapter 5.27-- Signature
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view HeSerpenty's profile

10th Dec 2016, 12:09 PM


I know it's been a while... but in case ya forgot, it is rumored that Hizruk had given himself his scar (old art alert--uuugh D:)

That is significant for this scene!

I'm sorry I"m a day late and this isn't my best work-- I wasn't well this week. Coming out of it I think X__X

Thank you for reading and understanding anyway!

view Seabiscuit's profile

10th Dec 2016, 12:12 PM


Ah gosh. I wonder what's up with poor Kilion... D:
...Signature. Interesting! O:

(I hope things improve for ya, Serpy!)

view HeSerpenty's profile

10th Dec 2016, 10:51 PM


Before the chapter is up... we will find out what was up with Kilion, I promise! ;D <33

Yessss Kal is putting together things in HIS tiny brain now too haha..

(Aw thank u so much, Sea! I'm coming outta it finally <3)

view Vivocateur's profile

10th Dec 2016, 12:57 PM


Yeah...or maybe he just really didn't want to have to write that paper.

I'm starting to think that there's something more going on here.

(The nice thing about old art is that you get to see how much your skills have improved :D )

view HeSerpenty's profile

11th Dec 2016, 2:33 AM


Haha! I'm sure that's a reason too XDD

It would indeed seem that way..there's ALways somethin more going on :3

Yeeeaaa that is true but.. it's still painful to look at that stuff X'D

view Centcomm's profile

10th Dec 2016, 1:10 PM


this if fine serpenty! i like this page :D:D HUGS!

view HeSerpenty's profile

11th Dec 2016, 3:03 AM


Thank you Centy! HUGSS! <3

10th Dec 2016, 2:08 PM


You say this "isn't your best work", but I really love Hizruk's face in the first panel-- it's perfect!!
(hope you get better!)
Also... is that Carson from Silver milling around in the crowd back there?

view HeSerpenty's profile

11th Dec 2016, 3:05 AM


Aww thank you so much that is very reassuring to hear! <33
I am doing much better now, thank you <3

Lol and YES! I'm super happy you recognized him! He had cameo'd already a few pages back as a part of this crowd :3

view azureXtwilight's profile

10th Dec 2016, 3:37 PM


I wonder how many nails a serpent have, does hizzy lose a nail or something when he was imprisoned?

view HeSerpenty's profile

11th Dec 2016, 3:39 PM


Haha it's just like a human hand--- but Kal is on the right track about that 'signature'-- the three strokes is probably purposeful ;D

10th Dec 2016, 4:39 PM


Kilion's ninja lessons are seriously paying off.

In more serious news, why am I not surprised that he fled? Oh, the poor boy. He seriously needs a hug. And I like how Hizruk takes his stuff to give it back to him later - good on him to recognize that someone that scared isn't likely to be back anytime soon to pick up things they left behind. Going to find out more about the interviews, however... *siiiigh*

Especially given that Kalverick pretty much knows what's going on here now. Bad plan, bad plan!

Honestly, I'm betting no money on Hizrul having given himself that scar. For lots of reasons that pertain to Theories I have, but also just because the rumor mill tends to be terribly wrong in this comic (thanks, Council >.>) ninety nine percent of the time so I place no credence on what it has to say.

Not that it hasn't brought Ricky-boy to the right conclusion, but that is totally besides the point.

To the art! I cannot praise your expressions enough. Ever. Never ever, I can't, it simply will not happen. They're incredible. Fantastical. Mostly Hizruk's, but that's just 'cuz I like his face better on principle. XD

And I like that these two pages are rather bare. It's a nice bit of a breather between emotionally charged scenes; we're definitely getting ready to delve into some stuff here, I can already tell. And I like that we have this relatively bare page to help clear the way for that.

Plus, those green bricks are gross. In a good way. Icky icky dungeon crawling; excellent ambiance there!

And last, but not least, sassy Nisha made my day. :] Well done!

view HeSerpenty's profile

11th Dec 2016, 4:20 PM


Ninja lessons come in handy sometimes! Haha Hizruk can be pretty oblivious but at least his instincts are on point SOMEtimes X'D. Buuut then he loses that the second he has it XDD

Kal figuring things out does not bode well--tho it's unfortunate he's figuring out what happened with evidence that actually has nothing to do with Hizzy. How's THAT for circumstantial evidence X"D.

It's a pretty ridiculous rumor about that scar! Buut it's not like Hizruk has offered up any other explanation..X'D. Not YET :3

Aw thank you so much! The expressions are my favorite part to draw! I'm so glad that they come out right ;D. Yea the green bricks ARE pretty gross! Haha they have been that way since day of the few things that has remained unchanged!

Haha I love writing Nisha... I want more of her!

view MST3KFan's profile

10th Dec 2016, 6:02 PM


Uh oh... Hizruk's being suspected. Not good. But where did Killion disappear off to?

So many things happening all at once.

And not "your best work"!? NOT "your best work"!?

Give me some of your talent, Serpy!!!

view HeSerpenty's profile

11th Dec 2016, 4:21 PM


Hehe we will find out what's up with Kilion soon enough!

AWWW thank you so much! That means a lot! <333

view Carvone's profile

10th Dec 2016, 6:09 PM


Oh Kalverik, I liked you better when you were paranoid AND unaware.

I'm sorry you don't feel well. Hopefully things improve! <3
(And sorry for my disappearance last week. I'm in the standardized testing jungle right now, and...)

Wait, how did Kilion disappear? I wouldn't put it past Hizruk just to be completely oblivious, especially with the little snarling match he just had, but naturally I have to think of worse alternatives. Were the loud, obnoxious umbras a distraction? They're NOT the Takeo and Abbaline Kalverik mentioned (I think), so it is possible that Kalverik's REAL "best men" nabbed Kilion while everyone else was distracted?

That, or the world's nicest b̶u̶n̶n̶y̶ Serpent has some hithro-undiscovered talents. If red-eye-ness isn't unique to Hizruk somehow (I'm sticking to that theory, at least until I turn out to be completely wrong), I do wonder if Kilion's personality means that he got more of the stealthy snake abilities/characteristics than Hizruk's straightforward combat ones.

So is Kilion the REAL sneaksnake? f̶i̶n̶d̶ ̶o̶u̶t̶ ̶n̶e̶x̶t̶ ̶t̶i̶m̶e̶!̶

view Carvone's profile

11th Dec 2016, 11:06 AM


Oh, and I forgot to attach a doodle/picture of Keymen I did last week! It doesn't really look like him (I think I made him too pretty, haha), but it was fun figuring out how his crazy hair worked.

view HeSerpenty's profile

12th Dec 2016, 1:17 PM


I know..things are much easier for the cast when he is unaware X'DD.

I am feeling much better this week, thank u! Aww no need to apologize you are always awesome! Good luck with that testing!

LOL nailed it! Hizzy was completely oblivious, yes XD. Kilion is good at disappearing when he needs to :3, but I promise we will catch up with him before the chapter is through! Definitely he's quite the opposite of Hizzy's bull-headed straightforward approach. HAHA things are all tying together! XDD

AH MAAAN when I copy-paste the link it tells me forbidden file and won't let me seeee D: *copy/pastes a billion more times* D':!
I am super eager to see it!!!

view Carvone's profile

12th Dec 2016, 2:41 PM


Aah, sorry! I forgot to use a hosting software. This should work better:

I'm glad you feel better!

view HeSerpenty's profile

12th Dec 2016, 11:22 PM


Ohh there it is! THAT LOOKS SO COOL!!! I love seeing him in this very different style! Thank you SO SO much!! :D :D :D

view Slim Kittens's profile

10th Dec 2016, 6:45 PM

Slim Kittens

Didn't hear or see him leave? Way to go, Serpent Sense.

view HeSerpenty's profile

12th Dec 2016, 1:18 PM


Hizruk has to get in tune with his serpenty senses a little more! XDD

view DLKmusic's profile

10th Dec 2016, 10:35 PM


Yeah, Serpy, WAY under par!!! I mean look at the.... and the.... and in frame...

Ok, I got nothin! it's hard to criticize perfection...

Oh!!! Wait!!!! there IS something I can criticize after all!!!! You left off the vote incentive link!

view HeSerpenty's profile

12th Dec 2016, 1:19 PM


LOL! Again I forget! I won't forget next wee, I promise!

Hahaha thank uu! But you flatter me... 'perfection' is WAY too generous a compliment! <333

view Proxy170's profile

11th Dec 2016, 1:01 AM


The leash is gonna get a LOT shorter soon...I can feel you're writing up a conflict that's gonna be big!

I think the page looks good! Only thing that had me do a double take was the double Hizzy in the first panel. It's not uncommon to have two in the same frame now it seems haha XD

view HeSerpenty's profile

12th Dec 2016, 11:23 PM


Haha right? It doesn't help that Hizruk continues to make choices that will not help his cause XDD

Lol yeea.. I totally get that. I think I had meant to put an outline round that first Hizzy that breaks the panel but.. I forgot. And once the page is finished I have a REALLY hard time working on it again XD

view TheD-Wrek's profile

11th Dec 2016, 5:20 AM


Hiz didn't check under the table. He's obviously there chilling eating Serpy Chips like:


view HeSerpenty's profile

12th Dec 2016, 11:24 PM


Haha! You know... Originally I had had a sketch of a panel where HIzzy looks under the table! Lolololol

Serpy chips? I'm scared to know what those taste like LOL

view Alicia's profile

11th Dec 2016, 12:49 PM


Oooh Kal's doing some detective work. :o

I can imagine Hizruk takes the bag only to be immediately tackled and thrown back into prison for theft. X'D

Also, don't think I didn't see that little Carson over there. He's the only one without a REAL job to get back to, ha ha.

view HeSerpenty's profile

12th Dec 2016, 11:27 PM


Haha yep! FINALLY someones doin' some of that! XDD

Omg.. poor Hizzy just trying to do a nice thing! Hopefully it's Barron and Ryder who tackle him-- he knows how to get away from those two! >__>

LOL!! Yeesss you found him! That slacker!

view Matt Knab's profile

11th Dec 2016, 2:37 PM

Matt Knab

Hrm...are those some cameo appearances waiting in queue? :)

view HeSerpenty's profile

12th Dec 2016, 11:28 PM


Lol yep! same people from earlier! Waiting for their interviews with the wonderful council X"D

view junoro's profile

12th Dec 2016, 10:18 PM


Ooohooho back to Kal!! What shall this sneaky guy come up with when he uses his noggin?

I hope that you feel better and you can take any time you need to have some chill time! This time of year is so busy... it's easy to get overwhelmed by EVERYTHING. The fact that you still update with so much difficulty and hard times is amazing!

view HeSerpenty's profile

13th Dec 2016, 12:52 PM


Hahaha when he stops raging and takes time to THINK he starts figuring things out--- sad to say raging Kal is better for everybody! :'D

Thank ya so much Juno! Yea this is a crazy time of year to be having regular updates that is for SURE X'D

view Chris the Blue's profile

15th Dec 2016, 9:03 AM

Chris the Blue

I really like the way the first two panels look! It's pretty clever.

Also, if you look at it right, it's almost like he's talking to himself. Such a lonely boy.

view HeSerpenty's profile

16th Dec 2016, 1:40 AM


Thank you so much!!

Haha he really is a lonely boy X'D.... but hopefully that will change! <3

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