Chapter 5.26-- Try toTake Me

posted 2nd Dec 2016, 4:28 PM

Chapter 5.26-- Try toTake Me
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view HeSerpenty's profile

2nd Dec 2016, 4:28 PM


"Hey let's NOT antagonize Hizruk. But, hold on a sec, lemme antagonize him real quick" XDD

Hizzy is slowly starting to piece things together in his little brain (isn't he precious? <33). In case you're forgetting about the conversation he's referencing... it's a few scenes back (on the bottom!).

Thanks for reading you guys! You keep me going! <333

view MST3KFan's profile

2nd Dec 2016, 4:42 PM


Ah, the usual jerks that scream 'gonna die horrifically' at some point for being jerks...well, in horror movies that happens anyway...

view HeSerpenty's profile

3rd Dec 2016, 11:20 PM


LOL! Wouldn't that be nice? XDD

2nd Dec 2016, 6:40 PM



You know, somebody had to put a lot of hard work into MAKING that table you just jammed a knife into, but do you ever think about that? Nooooo. All you think about is picking on kids. What. Even. Is wrong with you.


This page is just one big reminder as to why the entire frontier umbra section of society is just... wrong. Does it just attract bullies by nature or is it all Kalverick's fault? Is it both. It's probably both. >.> Then again, the frontier umbra ARE the ones who get to torture people, and presumably they know exactly what they're getting themselves into when they sign up...

Council, how much do you completely screw everyone over, let me count the ways...

Daggot has the best face in the last panel of line three. It amuses me SO much. :D Probably because it's basically an emoji. And his clothes are the same shade of red as the frontier umbra... hm... coincidence? I think not!

I note how Kilion is suspiciously missing from this page. Which, considering that the poor dear is currently having a very large panic attack, is probably for the best. Good this these FINE gentlemen aren't even acknowledging his existence, hm? They'd rather antagonize Hizruk. And ruin tables.

I am miffed about that table, come oooon. Now someone's gonna have to spend their valuable time fixing it. *sigh* HMPH.

At this point, I'm fairly certain 'Egads!' is, if not Daggot's favorite word, then at the very least his favorite interjection. I shall never be able to take it seriously ever again.

Not that I ever did to begin with, mind. In that sense, it suits him perfectly. XD

Gravet's waist-pointy-armor-things in panel two look aaaaalmost like a half skirt type thing and it cracks me up. :D

The art, by the by, is as fantastic as ever. I've never really mentioned your metalwork coloring skills before, since it's never been quite as prominent since I started commenting as it is in this page. But you do an EXCELLENT job of it. Definitely loving those shines on the armor; it actually looks like metal. Very well done indeed.

And I'm just in awe of that knife. Holy crap is it awesome. I kinda want it. Although why it has a hole in it is anyone's guess. Aesthetics? Good place to keep your lucky marble? If there's an actual, functional reason for it, I'd love to know! Otherwise, well, it certainly does look neat! :D

Excellent job, as per usual!

view HeSerpenty's profile

4th Dec 2016, 2:36 AM


Haha even the TABLES get to justice here!

Weeeell Kalverick is a big reason as to why there are so many rotten apples in the Frontier Umbra in this district. They aren't like this EVERYwhere, thoooough it's not uncommon for lots of corruption in the frontier AND civil umbras just cuz being on the Council's good side is very useful XD. Merek's crew is kinda unique!

Aaahaha you noticed a missing Kilion. He might be missing on a little more than this page XD

LOL yep..."egads" is Daggots fav word haha-- I haven't been able to take it seriously for a very long time.

Thank you so much!! Haha yes...I will admit some more love and care was put in the metal on this page than previous--I really appreciate you noticing!

LOL yea kinda weird design on that knife. I saw it in my head with a hole in it-- upon further research I learned that sometimes odd shaped blades will have holes in it (or a hole) to balance the weight--- I think that is the case here haha. KInda funny my imagination knew before my brain did!

view Centcomm's profile

2nd Dec 2016, 6:48 PM


.. yep add these guys to the list of .. people, to be killed.. One question.. do they have blue underwear * giggles * ;D

view HeSerpenty's profile

4th Dec 2016, 2:40 AM


Lol! I am not sure I understand the significance of blue underwear XDDD... but still a funny mental image!

Centy you wanna go on a murder rampage in this comic! Perhaps I should just send them all to yours? Lots of death up in there! LOL

view Centcomm's profile

4th Dec 2016, 7:55 PM


Yess thats why i asked if they had blue underwear. :D

view HeSerpenty's profile

4th Dec 2016, 9:19 PM


OHHHHHH Now I get it. LOL well that makes perfect sense haha. Yes...yes they do have blue underwear ;D

view DLKmusic's profile

2nd Dec 2016, 6:52 PM


I was thinking back to all the Umbra that were killed during the "Jailbreak", and thinking.
A: Why is no-one mentioning this
B: how would the community react to to several umbra just... disappearing.

Based on these two, I'm guessing now that the answers are
A: Who cares
B: And there was much rejoicing.

am I close?

view HeSerpenty's profile

4th Dec 2016, 3:04 AM


AHA!! You brought up the very question that is going to be brought up quite soon. It IS rather strange that no one is taking into consideration the bloody scene and the missing Umbras. It is rather interesting I mean it's seemingly a huge piece of the puzzle! Or rather.. it should be. We will find out the answers, I promise ya! <3

view Seabiscuit's profile

2nd Dec 2016, 7:37 PM


Oh, him? Ahh... That's good for Hizruk, then.:'D
Hmph, good on him for not backing down.>:c

view HeSerpenty's profile

4th Dec 2016, 3:05 AM


Haha just like always... he makes it, just barely!

I think u may be the only one so far to PRAISE hizzy for speaking up hehe <333 (someone has to!)

view gideonland's profile

2nd Dec 2016, 8:52 PM


Oh, Why don't they leave the kid alone? All umbra troops love pestering him. It's annoying.
My favorite part tho is them not getting off easy just cus they're getting a half-day. NOPE! 3 pages due tomorrow about the most boring subject for them. Lol.
Another fantastic page.

view HeSerpenty's profile

4th Dec 2016, 11:07 AM


He does seem tobe everyone's favorite victim XDD. He puts up with it really well considering how strong he is!
Hahaha Daggot is DYING to read all their essays on HISTORY!! XD

Thank you so much <3

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2nd Dec 2016, 9:20 PM

Slim Kittens

I can't look at Daggot without thinking about the thong o_0

view HeSerpenty's profile

4th Dec 2016, 11:08 AM


LOL! I do apologize about that... XD

view azureXtwilight's profile

2nd Dec 2016, 10:39 PM


Someone needs to give that guy a slap across the backside. And front. And both.

view DLKmusic's profile

2nd Dec 2016, 11:11 PM


*Hands Azurextwilight a 2x4*

Will this work?

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view HeSerpenty's profile

4th Dec 2016, 11:08 AM


I couldn't agree more! XDD

view Proxy170's profile

3rd Dec 2016, 4:10 AM


Whoa, what beef does this guy have? The others seem to be just following orders (I'm gonna go out on a limb and say maybe not ALL frontier are bad?) but this guy...he's got an axe to grind. And sometimes, it's best to not tell your target the axe is coming. Get with it, Gravet!

view HeSerpenty's profile

4th Dec 2016, 11:10 AM


Yea he definitely seems a little power trippy this Gravet! Telling the kids to all put their heads down, threaten Hizruk when he doesn't--- he doesn't like being crossedit would seem XDD. All of these fools are lucky Hizzy doesn't react further than some back-sass XDD

view Matt Knab's profile

3rd Dec 2016, 8:39 AM

Matt Knab

Moving right up that list of future comeuppance, aren't you? ;)

view HeSerpenty's profile

4th Dec 2016, 9:20 PM


LOL lots of characters here are good at that XDD

view ranger_brianna_new's profile

3rd Dec 2016, 8:46 AM


Seeing Hizruk again soon is, from a narrative point of view, probably not the best of ideas.

It tends not to end well for the ones doing the seeing.

view HeSerpenty's profile

5th Dec 2016, 2:48 AM


Haha that is true! Trouble surrounds this kid x"DD

view Vivocateur's profile

3rd Dec 2016, 7:18 PM


That's the ticket mate! Lead by example ;)

view HeSerpenty's profile

5th Dec 2016, 2:49 AM


Haha I know right? Such good role models <3

4th Dec 2016, 1:32 AM

rufi (too lazy to login)

Hmmm, Hizruk-baby really needs more friends... XD;;; Hope his new friend isn't shaking too hard in his boots to recover next page >_>

I like how those last few panels came out in particular! :D

view HeSerpenty's profile

5th Dec 2016, 2:50 AM


Heee does hahaha. Funny you should mention his new friend! He seemed exceptionally nervous about these guys ;D

Thank you Rufiii (at work :P)!!!!

view CiciEnixa's profile

4th Dec 2016, 5:19 PM


I *was* gonna say "Did you NOT just say right then to NOT antagonize the poor Hizzy, Mr. Buttface? D:<"

So Daggot does documentation, too, huh? He handles past AND kinda recent history.

Also... Kilion knows poof magic, or is he like, conveniently positioned in all panels so he never gets spotted? XD

view HeSerpenty's profile

5th Dec 2016, 5:02 PM


Hahaha Daggot is little Council puppy who does EVERYTHING it would seem! The good loyal ones they gotta keep close! XD

Haha it's funny you mention Kilion and poof magic! He's really good at disappearing in a tense moment XD

view Alicia's profile

4th Dec 2016, 5:30 PM


There's the knife! He's such a perfect jerkface! <3 I LOVE HIM SO FAR, SERPY! :D

view HeSerpenty's profile

5th Dec 2016, 5:02 PM


Haha I AM SO GLAD! He is pretty fun to write :3
I can't wait til we can get that helmet off! :D

view Outlaw's profile

4th Dec 2016, 6:02 PM


Yeeeeah, he changed his mind awful quickly there, didn't he? Lol.

Still tough-guy knifeplay aside... I still think Hizruk could take him. Just saying.

view HeSerpenty's profile

5th Dec 2016, 5:03 PM


Haha! I think you are right XDDD

Sometimes they just can't help themselves!

view Chris the Blue's profile

5th Dec 2016, 5:23 PM

Chris the Blue

"But that was my favourite desk!"

view HeSerpenty's profile

5th Dec 2016, 6:20 PM


RIP desk.....out time together was all too short

view TheD-Wrek's profile

11th Dec 2016, 5:11 AM


Ey, don't poke the bear, buddy. Or in this case, Hiz. *anti poking shield engaged*

view HeSerpenty's profile

13th Dec 2016, 12:52 PM


Haha we all know what happens when he's pushed too far! :'D

Lolol XD

view junoro's profile

12th Dec 2016, 9:53 PM


a THREE PAGE ESSAY??? on such short notice???? Daggot is the true antagonist in SoO!!

view HeSerpenty's profile

13th Dec 2016, 12:53 PM


LOL!!! First major plot twist!

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