Chapter 5.24-- Promise

posted 18th Nov 2016, 1:09 PM

Chapter 5.24-- Promise
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view HeSerpenty's profile

18th Nov 2016, 1:09 PM


Yes.. Keymen punked out X"D-- Little shout out to Octavia who's saying what we're ALL thinking in panel 7. Please forgive him (and ME. Mostly me. Forget Keymen X"D)-- I know we all hoped for the big moment to happen now, but..... well just think about how cruel that would be? Neither parties are ready at this precise moment X)

We just havta wait a little while more!! X'D
Oh..Hizruk's back! :D



view Centcomm's profile

18th Nov 2016, 1:21 PM


hahaha - ok that hand wave panel cracks me up .. and then her looking down at Keymen.. Ok Key thats NOT how you look up her skirts. oops.. I blame my comments on painkillers!! Wheee (( great page! ))

view HeSerpenty's profile

18th Nov 2016, 5:41 PM


Hahaha I just imagine that moment being super awkward between these two x'D. Hahaha o boy I think looking up skirts is the last thing on key's mind right now LOL

hope you are doing well, Centy!!

view Matt Knab's profile

18th Nov 2016, 2:10 PM

Matt Knab

Oh man...I don't think leaving her a message like that is a good idea. That's like sending her a text with lols and emojis.

view HeSerpenty's profile

18th Nov 2016, 5:43 PM


Hahahaha no I fully agree this would be an absolutely inappropriate way to break the news... but then again we don't know what he actually put on the paper ;) hehe

view MST3KFan's profile

18th Nov 2016, 3:53 PM


LOL Keyman's one true still a weakness.

At least he was able to go all ninja when he needed to. LOL

In the meantime, looks like Hizruk's got something bad brewing...

view HeSerpenty's profile

19th Nov 2016, 8:32 AM


Haha you got that right--weakness big time! Pathetic Ninja-- That's Keymen lololol

Haha yusss someone noticed a Hizruk on this page! That boy can't get no peace :P

view Carvone's profile

18th Nov 2016, 5:10 PM


Keymen, you have (very good) reasons, but that letter is... Not A Good Idea.

I imagine Gwynn knows only slightly more about Keymen's disappearance than we do. And she thinks he's dead! A letter out of the blue is going to make her suspicious, definitely worried, and IT'S NOT GOING TO ANSWER HER QUESTIONS! Think about it: she'll get a letter with absolutely no details telling her that someone she was in love with, and the council /knew/ she was in love with is back from the dead somehow. With Hizruk just having fun off, I'll be amazed if Gwynn doesn't think it's a Council fake designed to find out whether she knows anything.

So yeah, BAD idea.

I think it's actually rather unfair to Gwynn that she has to deal with everything with only a quick note of "hey, I'm actually not dead :) " to go off of. But then again I don't see another way beyond just continuing not to tell her anything, which is also not great.

It's just a bad situation, and I hope it resolves reasonably well.

view HeSerpenty's profile

19th Nov 2016, 8:35 AM


I whole heartedly agree! A letter giving this big news is suuuch an insensitive and bad idea X"D. BUT! one little glimmer of hope is that we don't know exactly what he put on that paper :3. MAaayybe he's a little more clever with it than what we might expect :D

But that is interesting the idea of the Council fake planted note thing! I wouldn't be surprised if she did think that haha.
Somehow things will work out-- I have a funny feeling! <3

view azureXtwilight's profile

18th Nov 2016, 5:51 PM


At least he left her a note, but he is really panicking about it. When it comes to Gwynn, he is real weak eh?

view HeSerpenty's profile

19th Nov 2016, 10:46 PM


He reeeeally realy is! haha it's so weird to see him so at a loss X"D

view Slim Kittens's profile

18th Nov 2016, 8:10 PM

Slim Kittens

And Serafina is back!

view HeSerpenty's profile

19th Nov 2016, 11:42 PM


Yess with one line in one panel! Hahaha buut we will see more of her again in part 2 of this chapter :D

view Jarvi's profile

19th Nov 2016, 5:07 AM


The content of this note goes like this:

"Dear Gwynn,

Roses are red,
Violets are blue,
Guess who's alive!
umm.. and still loves you?"

view Alicia's profile

19th Nov 2016, 6:22 AM


LOL Jarvi, that is perfect! X'D

Aw, I love all of Keymen's expressions on this page. And Octavia's "Uuuugh MEN" face. XD You had better make good on that promise, Keymen! This ship can't leave without you! <3

view HeSerpenty's profile

19th Nov 2016, 11:50 PM


Thanks buddy! Haha I know, right! He needs to make this right! X"DD

view HeSerpenty's profile

19th Nov 2016, 11:43 PM


LOL!!! Omg that is beautiful <33
Dad, you never told me u were such a poet! <3333

view Seabiscuit's profile

19th Nov 2016, 7:39 AM


Dang! I knew it. Well, you can't avoid each other forever! THE SHIP MUST SAIL! D:<

view HeSerpenty's profile

19th Nov 2016, 11:51 PM


Never have truer words been spoke, Sea!! XDDD
I agree! He needs to man up :3

19th Nov 2016, 8:56 AM


Octavia's lack of dedication to fan service disappoints me.

view HeSerpenty's profile

19th Nov 2016, 11:52 PM


She is a hard working businesswoman she has bigger things to worry about! (I guess LOL) XDDD

21st Nov 2016, 8:05 PM


A hardworking businesswoman should welcome the break. ;)

view HeSerpenty's profile

22nd Nov 2016, 2:06 AM


Haha she SHOULD... you are right about that!

19th Nov 2016, 9:49 AM


Found the page I was looking for.

So the veeery last panel. Gwynn's face and line? That was me. My exact reaction.

(Also, wooooah, blast from the past, look at how good your art's gotten! I'm so proud of you~)

Here's the thing. As much as I really wanted the reunion to be now (as approximately every single one of your readers did), I half expected something like this to happen. And I am incredibly disappointed in Keymen for doing so. Do I understand it? Yes. Do I like it? Eeehhhhhh...

The thing is, this reunion isn't going to be easy. They will NEVER be ready for this. Gwynn certainly won't, at any rate, so Keymen needs to screw up the courage to let it happen, and that's tough. He's never REALLY going to be ready for this. Their meeting is going to be cruel either way - it's not the kind of thing that can BE nice and pleasant.

Softening the blow... whatever he wrote, I doubt it'll do that. At best, she'll be confused, at worst... well, angry and suspicious and hurt is the least of it. Given how badly Keymen thinks when it comes to Gwynn, I'm not prepared to bet on the contents of that note being particularly intelligent, though I will be most happy if they are, and I don't think it's a good idea even if it is just like a... a time and place to meet at with maybe a 'don't worry I'm a friend' type thing scribbled on.

Which wouldn't help either.

I honestly don't see any way that letter is going to make things better, and I see thousands of potentials for it to make things exponentially worse. The best I'm hoping for is for it to not change the status quo here. Because if it does... yikes.

(Please feel free to prove me wrong on this. I'd be perfectly okay with being proved wrong on this. XD)

Poor, poor Gwynn. And you just KNOW she spotted Keymen out of the corner of her eye in that first panel. She looks STUNNED - and second line of panels, having her hand on her necklace like that just proves it. I wonder if she's seen 'ghosts' like this before. Probably a lot, back when all this first happened and he 'died'. Kept thinking she saw him out of the corner of her eye, turned, and nothing.

That... would make a terribly depressing fic. I should write it.

In other news, Octavia is thoroughly unamused with Keymen's shenanigans, as well she should be. Fourth panel with her has the best expression, followed closely by that furious white-eyed look on her in her third appearance. And that first panel! Classic 'I didn't do aaaaanything' look and I love it.

Keymen's got some beautiful expressions in this page. Just as a whole. I love watching his face go through all these negative emotions; it works really well, particularly the panel where he's jumping over Octavia's counter.

Nice perspective on those boots, by the way. I am impressed!

And finally, oh, look, there's the main character of this comic, I was wondering when he'd be back!


Or maybe just wake up. I think sleeping in class is discouraged. XD

I actually really love his hair in that panel. Maybe because I haven't seen it in a while; who knows. XD Nice job!

view HeSerpenty's profile

20th Nov 2016, 12:52 AM


LOL even before I copy n pasted the link I somehow knew it was gonna be this page and this panel hahahaha! I think many agree with this lolol. (you are so right the art really is VERY improved I can't look at these old pages without wanting to redo them X"DDDD)

Yus it is disappointing that he went and hid-- buuuut I mean on the other hand...she is gonna be PUNCHED in the face with this. Aaaand also.. he's never been one to do ANYthing when he's not ready XD. Selfish perhaps.. buuut it's just who he is sadly. BAD BOY!!

MAAAYBE.. just maybe.. his last minute light bulb moment here.. WON'T make it worse. Juuust maybe. We'll havta wait and see ;D
Haha and funny thing about all of Keymen's expressions on this page... I think it's the first one ever where his mouth is closed the whole time LOL! I almost don't recognize him! :P
That panel with the boot perspective..that was a tough one X'D. Thank you so much I'm really glad it turned out decently!

Hahahahaha I always miss Hizzy when he's away for a couple scenes! It feels like an eternity! Of COURSE he's gonna fall asleep in class :P

Thank you so much! <333

view TheD-Wrek's profile

19th Nov 2016, 1:37 PM


Next update Gwynn will be like~


P.S. - Sera!!! <3 :D

view HeSerpenty's profile

20th Nov 2016, 1:06 AM


LOL!! Omg D that is perfect x"DDD

(Haha as her biggest--and quite possibly only :P-- fan I thought you might be happy for her brief appearance xD)

view DLKmusic's profile

19th Nov 2016, 10:19 PM


Sorry Keyman, I gotta agree with Octavia here... that was PATHETIC!!!!


oh, and Octavia, when you have a guy that acts that stupid because he's in love with you, you'll secretly love it... trust me on this one!

view HeSerpenty's profile

20th Nov 2016, 1:07 AM


Hahahah YUP! she's callin it like it is and it is TRUE! X"D

And you are right hahaha. Especially if it's someone like Keymen who is usually on top of things................. and suddenly he' all floundering around like a fish outta water X)

20th Nov 2016, 5:44 PM

DLKmusic (at work)

Was reading it again, and suddenly I got a bad feeling about that note...

Never a good idea to put something in writing if there are people around that you don't want finding out what you said (like for instance... a husband?).

view HeSerpenty's profile

21st Nov 2016, 1:46 AM


O gosh...... yes we have an easily irate, meanie-weenie husband to think about here! I wouldn't doubt it if he happened to rear his ugly head into this chapter before it ends X"DDD

view DLKmusic's profile

21st Nov 2016, 7:55 PM


Popping his head up? what a great idea!


(I'll split the profits with you 50-50, Serpy! We get rich, Keymen and Gwynn get each other, EVERYONE wins!)


view HeSerpenty's profile

22nd Nov 2016, 2:09 AM


LLOL brilliant!!!! I can finally quit my day job! XDD-- two pages a week here i come!

I know two people who will be first in line to try this game...

Uh oh I think we need to tell them it's just a GAME (LOL X'D)

view DLKmusic's profile

22nd Nov 2016, 4:07 PM



Nah, let'em have their fun, it's all part of the game! Besides, Merlock is thick headed enough that will take a LOT more than that to actually hurt him! (we may even get repeat business from these two!)

view HeSerpenty's profile

25th Nov 2016, 1:33 PM


Hahaha I can guarantee you that! These two have a lot of years to make up for...and Merlock has earned what's comin' PLLEENTY XDD

view Shirokuro's profile

20th Nov 2016, 2:33 PM


Oh keyman why... :/

view HeSerpenty's profile

20th Nov 2016, 3:35 PM


He's the disappointment of the week!

view alston123's profile

21st Nov 2016, 7:37 AM


Aw, Keymen. Why you gotta be like that? Just let her see you. :/

Awwww. A sleeping Hizzy. :3

view HeSerpenty's profile

22nd Nov 2016, 2:10 AM


He's not ready!!! Lol one thing about Key is he doesn't do anything when he's not ready if he can help it XD. Sometimes that's a good thing..sometimes it can come across as selfish. Alas--it who he is!

Haha he's so peaceful when he's hearing dark voices in his head <3

view Proxy170's profile

23rd Nov 2016, 11:40 AM


Ugh Serpy NO! We didn't find out more about the herb nor did we get a reunion! You're so evil!
Grumblings aside, I love how expressive Octavia is on this page! Perfect XD

view HeSerpenty's profile

25th Nov 2016, 1:34 PM


Hahaha I'm so sorry! DOUBLE DISAPPOINTMENT! That's what I shoulda titled the page X'DD
I shall make that info sheet for Magnus Deleox just for u <33..... and as for the reunion, trust me on this, it had to happen this way! ;D

view Vivocateur's profile

25th Nov 2016, 2:42 PM


Come on Kaymen X'} what was that?!
Octavia's expressions on this page are priceless!

view HeSerpenty's profile

26th Nov 2016, 1:11 AM


Haha I know right? That was pathetic!

And thank you! She is a fun one X"DD

view Chris the Blue's profile

5th Dec 2016, 5:21 PM

Chris the Blue

Passing love letters are we?

view HeSerpenty's profile

5th Dec 2016, 6:19 PM


Hahaha always the easier way out!

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view HeSerpenty's profile

13th Dec 2016, 12:55 PM


LOLOL!! I know it looks really bad!!
It might not be as bad as it looks! Hahahaha!! :'D

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