Chapter 5.11-- Really 'Sick'

posted 19th Aug 2016, 11:00 AM

Chapter 5.11-- Really 'Sick'

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view HeSerpenty's profile

19th Aug 2016, 11:00 AM

HeSerpenty

I guess we found out the identity of Daggot's HOOLIGAN XDD

It wasn't luck that made Daggot sick yesterday was it? X)-- good to finally get some follow up on THAT situation X"D

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Thanks so much for reading guys! I hope the chapter has been to your liking so far! :D

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view Matt Knab's profile

19th Aug 2016, 12:08 PM

Matt Knab

I like that we get to know the rest of the class a bit more!

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view HeSerpenty's profile

19th Aug 2016, 12:27 PM

HeSerpenty

Thanks! Yea some of these guys are pretty fun X"DD

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view MistakeNPotatoes's profile

19th Aug 2016, 12:29 PM

MistakeNPotatoes

You're right, that drawing does make more sense now :)

Heyyy Kilion, good to see you again!

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view HeSerpenty's profile

19th Aug 2016, 9:48 PM

HeSerpenty

Haha thanks! Lol yes, it's always nice to see a friendly face around here--there are so many UNfriendly ones :'D

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view Shirokuro's profile

19th Aug 2016, 12:39 PM

Shirokuro

Hizruk's pretty face in thé last panel <3

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view HeSerpenty's profile

19th Aug 2016, 9:49 PM

HeSerpenty

Thanks so much Shiku! I'm glad u like it <3333

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view MST3KFan's profile

19th Aug 2016, 12:56 PM

MST3KFan

Ah, classroom antics.

Gotta love how on edge Hizruk is here at first with even just a simple question freaks him out. XD

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view HeSerpenty's profile

19th Aug 2016, 9:50 PM

HeSerpenty

Haha so many different dynamic to play with X"D

Lol yeeea Hizruk isn't so good at cover up X"DDDD

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19th Aug 2016, 1:11 PM

Lilbluebox

This page makes me so happy on so many levels. The other kids in the class, for one. It's great fun to see them interacting and see more personality out of them. The argument, the hooligan, and more Kilion... ah, it's fantastic. I adore them.

Panel two is probably my favorite, just because Hizruk has NO poker face. "How are you feeling?" "NOTHING!"

Nothing indeed. XD

Is Daggot's name supposed to be only one letter off from 'maggot'? Because either it's a hilarious coincidence or it's the best intentional almost-an-insult name I've ever heard in my life. Whichever it is, it cracks me up. XD

And 'hooligan' has got some A-game mimicry skills. I'm just saying.

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view HeSerpenty's profile

19th Aug 2016, 10:16 PM

HeSerpenty

Ah gosh, thank you so much for this comment--- it is deeply encouraging! Some of these guys have been around almost since the very beginning and they get so little screen time X'D--gotta let them shine SOMEhow! If you can call whaat Simian is doing "shining"

Haha you are SO right.. HIzruk FAILS at poker face X"D. Thank goodness he has Keymen and Merek watching his back--two pros at the poker face X)

AND FUNNY U MENTION THAT XD. Daggot is close in appearance to a couple different derogatory names...and indeed it was purposeful. I created him to be the most ridiculous character I could think of X).

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view alston123's profile

19th Aug 2016, 2:05 PM

alston123

Man...on a serious note, who do you run to for help when your gov't is out to get you? This is really scary, and I am terrified for Hizruk. :(

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view HeSerpenty's profile

19th Aug 2016, 10:19 PM

HeSerpenty

That is very true, Alston! Especially when the government has their fingers into so many things...like the COuncil does :'D

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view lifelight's profile

19th Aug 2016, 2:23 PM

lifelight

Sick!!! Always a good excuse!!! It's the one I like to use :DDD ol reliable.

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view HeSerpenty's profile

19th Aug 2016, 10:19 PM

HeSerpenty

Lolol right? Weeelll Hizzy isn't completely fibbing here... I mean technically he did almost die yesterday X"D...before Keymen found him haha XDD

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view Alicia's profile

19th Aug 2016, 3:58 PM

Alicia

LOL OMG this dialogue... XD It's crackin' me up SO HARD. I cannot WAIT to see what is being put on the board. X'D

Serpy, seriously. Your characters have the most AMAZING conversations! <3

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view HeSerpenty's profile

19th Aug 2016, 10:20 PM

HeSerpenty

haha I"M SO GLAD! One always hope the moments they want to be funny are funny X'D

Thank you soo much! <33

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view DLKmusic's profile

19th Aug 2016, 4:40 PM

DLKmusic

sweaty palms? check...
Pit in my stomach? check...

Yup, highschool hasn't changed a bit!


(the above joke is entirely original and is no way shape or form related to a similar joke that may or may not have been told in Shrek 3)

On a side note Serpy, I thought you would like to know that a Headshot of Hizruk is now showing up as one of the choices when you vote on TWC. I saw that today!

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view HeSerpenty's profile

19th Aug 2016, 10:22 PM

HeSerpenty

LOL o dear... did this classroom scene bring back bad memories? Hahaha I sorry X"D. We can chock it up to tryin' to have a little something for everybody! Hey if ya like teen drama..we have that here in SoO too X'D. If you HATE teen drama....don't worry the scenes are sparse X)

Ohhh YAY!! That is very exciting for me to hear! Thanks for telling me! :D

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view DLKmusic's profile

20th Aug 2016, 12:51 AM

DLKmusic

no particularly bad memories got conjured... but I always liked the joke and here was a good opportunity to use it.

of course, the kid with the "there's always Kalverick" I do kinda want to flush his face down the toilet... Just a little....

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view HeSerpenty's profile

20th Aug 2016, 1:08 AM

HeSerpenty

Hahaha well I am glad! (tho I knew u were kidding hehe)

I had some awkward times in Highschool-- but nothing was more horrible than JUNIOR high X'D

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view DLKmusic's profile

20th Aug 2016, 1:11 AM

DLKmusic

***PANIC MODE***

THERE NEVER WAS JUNIOR HIGH!!! IT DIDN'T HAPPEN!!!!

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view azureXtwilight's profile

19th Aug 2016, 6:43 PM

azureXtwilight

Well, he is not going to be accepted in umbra with those vocal cords...

Also it is nice to seea someone preferring Merek instead of Kal!

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view HeSerpenty's profile

19th Aug 2016, 10:23 PM

HeSerpenty

Haha I'm sure deep down a LOT of people prefer Merek over Kal X'D <333

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view Seabiscuit's profile

19th Aug 2016, 7:12 PM

Seabiscuit

Aww, Hizzy feelin' the guilt... :C
...Oh gosh, those Daggot impressions!! :'D

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view HeSerpenty's profile

19th Aug 2016, 10:24 PM

HeSerpenty

Heee most certainly is :'D....aand well..should, let's face it X)

Lolol there is no easier person to make fun of than Daggot!

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view TheD-Wrek's profile

19th Aug 2016, 9:36 PM

TheD-Wrek

Did... Did he fart? Lol

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view HeSerpenty's profile

19th Aug 2016, 10:24 PM

HeSerpenty

Haha he only pretended to XDDD

So sorry if that disappoints :P X)

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view CiciEnixa's profile

19th Aug 2016, 10:54 PM

CiciEnixa

I figured it was him doing the chalkboard shenanigans XD His face says it all! The descriptions tho... TMI. Just... TMI XDDD

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view HeSerpenty's profile

20th Aug 2016, 12:10 AM

HeSerpenty

Simian is just too easy to figure out!
LOL...... c'mooon you don't wanna know exactly what was going on with Daggot yesterday? x"D

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view Centcomm's profile

20th Aug 2016, 8:49 AM

Centcomm

hehe awesome page Serpenty! :D

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view HeSerpenty's profile

20th Aug 2016, 12:17 PM

HeSerpenty

Thank you Centy!

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view raytoons's profile

21st Aug 2016, 9:20 PM

raytoons

Thanks for the quick updates. :)

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view HeSerpenty's profile

21st Aug 2016, 10:56 PM

HeSerpenty

Awww you bet! Every Friday <33
Thank you so much for the nice comments!

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view ProfEtheric's profile

22nd Aug 2016, 12:48 PM

ProfEtheric

Of COURSE the chapter has been to my liking! I mean, I don't like some of tue events, but I have the distinct feeling we're not SUPPOSED to. The telling of them and the art, though. So good!

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view HeSerpenty's profile

22nd Aug 2016, 5:14 PM

HeSerpenty

Gaah, THANK YOU so much Prof! Seriously some wonderful positive feedback that came at the perfect time today <33
Haha you are right-- some of these current events are defnitely not likable if one is rooting for the goodies X"D.

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view gideonland's profile

22nd Aug 2016, 6:33 PM

gideonland

Really sick page! (pun intended)
"How are you feeling"
"NOTHING."
LOL classic!

Plus, I'm awaiting to see what's going up on the board. I think that guy is my new favorite character lol.
Fantastic work, Like always.
How you squeeze so much content into one page and get it all out in one week effortlessly. Nice.

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view HeSerpenty's profile

22nd Aug 2016, 11:21 PM

HeSerpenty

haha! Brilliant Pun!
LOLolol Hizruk isn't known for uh.... subtlety X"D. At least.. he really sucks at it

Omg don't let Simian hear you say that he's been claiming he'll be everyone's fav character since before all this began! LOLI jest... buuut he would get a big fat head XDD

Thank you so much, sir! Your comments always encourage me greatly <3. I guess I've got a routine so worked into my brain.... it just kinda comes out on it's own I feel like sometime hahaha X'D

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view Chris the Blue's profile

24th Aug 2016, 7:04 AM

Chris the Blue

Hizruk has very classy classmates.

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view HeSerpenty's profile

24th Aug 2016, 7:35 PM

HeSerpenty

Haha yes! He is a... lucky boy x'D lolol

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view keltyzoid!'s profile

24th Aug 2016, 10:26 PM

keltyzoid!

man why are you downrating pages?

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view raytoons's profile

25th Aug 2016, 5:24 PM

raytoons

You mean rating a page?
If I gave a low rating, it was an accident. Let me see what you are talking about.

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view LeRenardRoux's profile

26th Aug 2016, 9:17 AM

LeRenardRoux

This is perfect because it's back-to-school season and Hizruk's.... back in school. >.>

Sorry, I got nothin'.

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view HeSerpenty's profile

26th Aug 2016, 11:33 AM

HeSerpenty

Lolol
Things will get interesting again sorry! X'D

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view LeRenardRoux's profile

26th Aug 2016, 11:42 AM

LeRenardRoux

Bahaha no I'm looking forward to what Kilion has to say!

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view junoro's profile

20th Sep 2016, 11:32 AM

junoro

LMAO 'THE HOWLS'
That panel where that kid realizes what to write on the board made me laugh out loud hehehhe

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view HeSerpenty's profile

20th Sep 2016, 2:13 PM

HeSerpenty

LOL GOOD!! I hoped for that sort of reaction X"DD
Simian thinks he's hilarious (none of us like to admit it that he actually kinda is X'D)

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