Chapter 5.10-- No Merek Brigade

posted 12th Aug 2016, 10:43 AM

Chapter 5.10-- No Merek Brigade
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view HeSerpenty's profile

12th Aug 2016, 10:43 AM

HeSerpenty

Uh oh, Hizzy. What did you do?

Been a while since we had a CLASSROOM SCENE! Can you believe some of these characters I haven't drawn since chapter 2? Let's flesh em' out a little bit X"D


I don't feel worthy posting this when I don't finish on time, but..... if you'd like to support us <3


view Alicia's profile

12th Aug 2016, 10:48 AM

Alicia

Aw, poor Merek and the gang! ...Maybe this would be a good time to take a vacation? XD Someplace tropical, yeah.

It's awesome how all of these characters are so unique from one another! I feel like I want to know more about each and every one of them. (You have time to make all these extra comic pages about their backstories, right? lol)

view HeSerpenty's profile

13th Aug 2016, 10:53 AM

HeSerpenty

LOL! Beach episode?? YOu know what I mean? LOL let's have em' play some volleyball shirtless and then go to a party and then talk about their woes over a campfire. You get me XDD

And thank you so much! Hehe a couple of them we will delve deeper into I can promise u that! <3

view Alicia's profile

19th Aug 2016, 2:56 PM

Alicia

SERPY NO. NO BEACH EPISODE. NO!!

...I would still stay subbed/obsessed, even if there was a 'beach episode.' XD <3

12th Aug 2016, 10:54 AM

Lilbluebox

The clothing in this comic makes me so happy. Look at all those VESTS~

I also love the lacor. Lookit those adorable beasts of burden. I want one. XD

You know, the council needs to seriously rethink their ruling strategy. They kinda suck at it. Humans fear/hate them? Immediate reaction is to brutally execute/torture any humans that pass the wall. Thanks, guys. That's REALLY helpful to interspecies relations. Investigating the Head Umbra Official? We'll just shut down HIS ENTIRE DIVISION, split up the Frontiers (and thus leave the walls less defended), who have NO idea what's going on in the civilian life, do not know these individuals, and quite frankly have a very different job description than the Civils do.

On a totally different note, I adore the little Hizruk panels inside the big fourth panel. Incredibly expressive. Also big frowny eyebrows, which I approve of. XD

(It took me a second or seventeen to realize that it wasn't shaded. I'm not sure I would have noticed it was WIP at all if the thread title and your comment hadn't said it. So good job on making me think a not-quite-finished page was complete! YAY!)

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13th Aug 2016, 10:58 AM

HeSerpenty

Hahah THANK YOU! I'm trying to get better at outfits XD. Still need work but I actually do kinda like Arith's (the feisty blue vest XDD) vest.... I wish I woulda given it to Hizzy! DANGIT! XD

Hahaha to tell u the truth I'd like a Lacor too hahaha---so easy to take care of! And so sweet! <3

LOL yes.. it seems they are starting to crack with this decision about the frontiers and civils. ...they are kind of in panic mode no one has EVER escaped before :'D. About their foreign policy lolol... theeey have no interest in having friends ONLY in staying hidden from the outside world... therefore MUST kill all outsiders! Why did they keep Shera tho? HMMMM we shall see! :D

And thank you so much! You know i"m glad nobody really noticed but.. I always still feel compelled to say something just in case people are like "wow the quality is really going downhill on this comic" X'D. LET ME EXPLAIN XD

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12th Aug 2016, 11:42 AM

JammyTheBirb

Uh oh. That is really worrying. :c aaaa quick, look at the cute little lacor X3

view HeSerpenty's profile

13th Aug 2016, 11:00 AM

HeSerpenty

Lolol Jammz!! <333

Shhh shh.. it'll all be okay. Just look at that big green eyeball on that Lacor <33

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12th Aug 2016, 1:10 PM

Matt Knab

Pffft, Merek for life!

view HeSerpenty's profile

13th Aug 2016, 11:00 AM

HeSerpenty

LOL!! Gonna make that a t-shirt X"D

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12th Aug 2016, 2:00 PM

MST3KFan

Ah, classroom discussions...always a treat! XP

Also Serpy, I think you may have a small mistake in the first word balloon in the second to last panel of the page.

"Haven't you noticed to lack of ANY Civil Umbra in town today?"

I'm guessing the 'to' should be 'the'.

Just thought I would point it out if that's okay.

view HeSerpenty's profile

12th Aug 2016, 2:03 PM

HeSerpenty

Crap xD. And here I am trapped at work... hopefully it won't be too jarring as I can't fix it til I'm home tonight x'D

view HeSerpenty's profile

13th Aug 2016, 11:01 AM

HeSerpenty

Been a while since we had one! SO MANY CHARACTERS but... worth it XDD

And btw thanks for pointing out the type-- got it all fixed up! When I proof read I think i see what is SUPPOSED to be there and not what is actually there LOL X"D

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13th Aug 2016, 12:46 PM

MST3KFan

Happy to help, Serpy! XD

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12th Aug 2016, 3:29 PM

alston123

Ah, I don't think I would have noticed if you hadn't said anything, Sepy. I guess I was just so focused on the juice about Merek. XD

Honesty, Merek is my home daugg and everything, but I don't think I could work under him, let alone with him. He's just so...Merek. Aimmirrriiiight?! :P

I knew it! An investigation! Well, let's be honest, Merek's loyalty isn't the best. I mean, my God, you people locked up his nephew for years and tortured him too. Why wouldn't be pissed at his government? He's just a man! A serpent man, but a man nonetheless. ^_^ :D

view HeSerpenty's profile

13th Aug 2016, 11:03 AM

HeSerpenty

LOL that always seem to happen.. I call attention to my mistakes AND THEN people see them haha

That's interesting tho! Hehe I think all the men who work for Merek miiight respectfully disagree X"D-- he seems to inspire their undying loyalty :3
But you are SO right-- the last thing Merek needs is them looking into him cuuuuuz..let's face it.... he's not on their side X"D. Very good point! Hehe

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12th Aug 2016, 3:45 PM

DLKmusic

I didn't even notice an issue with the shading, lol! Like I mentioned on the DC site, your storytelling is so good, that I had actually almost overlooked how good of an artist you really are (well, maybe not "overlooked", more like "Took for granted"). You blew me away there, and you're blowing me away here too!!!!

Oh, and about about the vote link? Don't you dare forget to add it or you and I will have words, young lady!

view HeSerpenty's profile

13th Aug 2016, 11:05 AM

HeSerpenty

That really means so so much to hear! As you probably know by now I can be super hard on myself X"D. Doing this comic has helped me become a better artist...and the motivation I get from fans like you keep me going strong!

LOL funny thing.. I almost didn't post the TWC link and the ONLY reason I did is because I remembered that you would want me to and tell me to <3. See? I am capable of learning! LOL

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12th Aug 2016, 5:12 PM

azureXtwilight

I LOVE the sarcastic dark-haired student there! I am kinda hoping he appears more <333

But man, I hope Hizzy hears what happened from unca Merek straight from his mouth, and not from his "Friends"

view HeSerpenty's profile

13th Aug 2016, 11:07 AM

HeSerpenty

Hehehhe you will definitely be seeing more of all of these characters! Thank you so much <333

Hmm I dunno when Uncle Merek and Hizzy are gonna get to talk in person again X"D

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12th Aug 2016, 10:05 PM

pkrankow

Well worth the binge read!

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13th Aug 2016, 11:08 AM

HeSerpenty

Ohhh yay thank you so much! I'm super excited <333
And thank you for the sub! :')

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13th Aug 2016, 3:40 AM

lifelight

Oh dear! Why do I have this bad feeling that this discussion is going to end up with ppl being even meaner to poor Hizruk?? >.>

view HeSerpenty's profile

13th Aug 2016, 11:08 AM

HeSerpenty

Lol cuuuz.. people here tend to be jerks to him probably X'DD. At least...that seems to be where the evidence points LOL

view HeSerpenty's profile

13th Aug 2016, 11:00 AM

HeSerpenty

Thank you so much! It really is a privilege to be on there <333
I feel deeply blessed!

view Seabiscuit's profile

13th Aug 2016, 6:07 PM

Seabiscuit

Ohhh dear...
Hizruk has some news to catch up on :'D

view HeSerpenty's profile

13th Aug 2016, 11:31 PM

HeSerpenty

He does!! News that is completely all a result of his actions X'D

WAY TO GO HIZRUK lolol

view Blissarda's profile

13th Aug 2016, 7:55 PM

Blissarda

I was late to see unfinished page, but I guess that is a good thing for you?

I love how consequences actually matters in a webcomic, like how people are noticing how Merek seems to be gone at the moment.

view HeSerpenty's profile

13th Aug 2016, 11:32 PM

HeSerpenty

Haha YES TIS A VERY GOOD THING! I haaaate when I can't finish on time X"D

And thank you so much! Yes, indeed....there are some pretty nasty repercussions for the decisions made around these parts haha :"D

view Shirokuro's profile

15th Aug 2016, 1:35 AM

Shirokuro

Keep sneaking around hizruk! Find out moar!

view HeSerpenty's profile

15th Aug 2016, 9:40 AM

HeSerpenty

LOL is not Hizruk sneaking around kinda what caused this whole mess? HAhahahahaah <333

view Jarvi's profile

17th Aug 2016, 5:07 AM

Jarvi

I love that kid in the middle, he looks so bored to death or sleepy, like the last thing he wanted was to get up and listen to those two idiots xD

view HeSerpenty's profile

17th Aug 2016, 9:32 AM

HeSerpenty

LOL that's probably exaactly the situation X"DDD

view MistakeNPotatoes's profile

19th Aug 2016, 11:27 AM

MistakeNPotatoes

Oh gosh, yeah, it's been forever since they've been in the comic. They broke Jaunt's absence!

Good to see these jerks again, though.

view HeSerpenty's profile

22nd Aug 2016, 4:11 PM

HeSerpenty

O MAN how did I miss this comment? I do apologize, sir!

LOL yeeaa it's been a while X"D. Kinda nice to write/draw them again X"D. Some carefree teenage drama instead of the kidnap and killing kind X"D

Thank you!!

view ProfEtheric's profile

22nd Aug 2016, 11:45 AM

ProfEtheric

This level of politics is bad. See? Crushing the hopes and dreams of the next generation. I hope the Council enjoys what they are doing... :(

view HeSerpenty's profile

22nd Aug 2016, 4:12 PM

HeSerpenty

I wholeheartedly agree! I suppose young people with dreams are a threat to an established oppressive system X"D

I believe the Council are the ONLY ones enjoying what they are doing X"DDD

view raytoons's profile

26th Aug 2016, 11:25 AM

raytoons

Great design for the building with the columns up front. Gives a classical greek/roman type of feel. Much more unique than the typical old house type of drawing.

view HeSerpenty's profile

26th Aug 2016, 3:44 PM

HeSerpenty

Thank you so much! Lol I have no idea why I imagined this broken up stone building as their school house X"DD

view junoro's profile

20th Sep 2016, 10:31 AM

junoro

Ooh bad news concerning Merek... I still hope he's fine, though :'D Despite...everything.
-HOPES REALLY HARD-

view HeSerpenty's profile

20th Sep 2016, 1:12 PM

HeSerpenty

Hahaha poor Merek has had the brunt of the punishment for everything Hizzy's been up to X"D

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