Chapter 5.7-- Not Hungry

posted 22nd Jul 2016, 11:30 AM

Chapter 5.7-- Not Hungry
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view HeSerpenty's profile

22nd Jul 2016, 11:30 AM


How NOT to be welcoming, with Hizruk: promptly ask your guest “why are you here?” with an awkward expression on your face X'D

So it would seem Tia is in the situation she's in for standing up to the establishment; Gwynn is in the situation SHE'S in for NOT standing up to the establishment. Hizruk, well....we all know HIS current situation now don't we XD.


Okay now that this page redo is behind me, I can finally move on with my life X”D. Thanks all of you who supported me and encouraged me through last weeks utter disaster. You're all so wonderful! I'm gonna leave that guest page up and those beautiful comments a few more days so I can stare at them--- they make me happy! <333

Please have a blessed day and an even better weekend! See y'all back here next Friday!

view Alicia's profile

22nd Jul 2016, 11:35 AM


Aw! Hizruk, BABY! ;_; She didn't mean YOU were a mistake! Come back and eat some breakfast!

Also that family photo. Ouch. >.<

view HeSerpenty's profile

22nd Jul 2016, 12:30 PM


Me thinks Hizzy is personalizing things a bit too much here :'D

Yess they are such a HANDsome family indeed lolol X'DDDD

view lifelight's profile

22nd Jul 2016, 12:20 PM


awe </3 gosh what a sad family photo too T^T I just wanna hug them all <3 ;_;

view HeSerpenty's profile

22nd Jul 2016, 12:31 PM


They could use hugs! Except Merlock... he can just go jump off a cliff x'DDD

Thank uuu! <3

view azureXtwilight's profile

22nd Jul 2016, 6:48 PM


Petition to make him jump pls

view HeSerpenty's profile

22nd Jul 2016, 11:36 PM


LOL!! Let's do it XDD :P

view alston123's profile

22nd Jul 2016, 12:41 PM


Oh, man. Gwynn just laid it all on the table. So, her father and the council wanted that life for her, and she accepted it. That's really sad. Well, Hizruk could have been a lot worse, and she is still standing after all the crap they put her through. It is never too late to be happy, Gwynn. Trust me. :3

And I don't think you were being selfish or anything. You were trying to keep Hizruk safe. That was your motivation. You complied to protect him. There is no shame in being uncomfortable to protect your son. But Hizruk is all grown up now. You can be happy, life your life for yourself. :D:D

And thanks soooo much for the sub to Elements. You made my day, really. ;D

view HeSerpenty's profile

22nd Jul 2016, 11:45 PM


Hehehe yep basically! I mean there is a little more to the story that we will hear later... but yes it's one of her greatest regrets X'D. But you are right! There IS a chance for happiness :3
Gwynn gets to undergo a lot of development as the story will continue :D :D

(And you're welcome, it's my pleasure! <333)

view revzet's profile

22nd Jul 2016, 2:14 PM


view HeSerpenty's profile

22nd Jul 2016, 11:45 PM


LOL... I KNEW that was comin' <333

He has to live up to it!!!!

view azureXtwilight's profile

22nd Jul 2016, 3:54 PM


I wanna hug all these peopleee <33
Also Tia speaks with so much sass, I love her!

But if Hizzy is not Keymen's, that's basically Gwynn wishing Hizzy doesn't exist, which is also kinda bad :(

view HeSerpenty's profile

23rd Jul 2016, 1:22 AM


Hahahah she IS a sassy girl!
And yea... everyone could use a hug x'D

And yes that is true! That could be one way he is misinterpreting what she's saying :'D-- she would NEVER think that, Hiz! Don't fret!

view DLKmusic's profile

22nd Jul 2016, 4:51 PM


Hizruk!!! Dude!!! She was talking about Merlock, not you!!!! Get yer arse back in there!

and you are NOT the family disgrace, Kid! I would be proud to have you as my son!

view HeSerpenty's profile

23rd Jul 2016, 1:23 AM


Hahaha I know right? Them teenagers always thinkin' it's all about them XDDD

AWW that is so nice to say! I'm not Hizruk and I feel touched by it even <333

view MST3KFan's profile

22nd Jul 2016, 5:00 PM


Hizruk takes things not about him too personally.

Interesting to see how Tia and Gywnn are basically "What Ifs" to each other. Tia went againt things, Gywnn did not, but wished she had.

view HeSerpenty's profile

23rd Jul 2016, 1:25 AM


Lol weeell to his credit... he knows how much he's been screwing everything up XD. It's no wonder he takes it a little personally hahaha

and yes! that is exactly it! I think it will be very good for Gwynn to have Tia around <333

view Blissarda's profile

22nd Jul 2016, 5:48 PM


I see now why Gwynn took Tia back, she is like the embodiment of herself if it went the other way.

view HeSerpenty's profile

23rd Jul 2016, 1:26 AM


Yesss exactly! I'm so happy ya caught that hehe <33... Gwynn definitely sees a bit of her potential self in Tia :')

view CiciEnixa's profile

22nd Jul 2016, 11:31 PM


Gwynn, Tia... maybe DON'T use the words "huge disappointment" and "failure" and any other related word around Hizzy XD

view HeSerpenty's profile

23rd Jul 2016, 1:27 AM


LOL so true X'D....considering his actions lately HAVE been disappointing and fall under the "fail" category hahahha..he's BOUND to take this personally X)

view TheD-Wrek's profile

22nd Jul 2016, 11:38 PM


Gwynn... You're the best. That is all. <3

view HeSerpenty's profile

23rd Jul 2016, 1:27 AM


Lololol I am so glad u think so D! :3

view Mel Cormac's profile

23rd Jul 2016, 12:17 AM

Mel Cormac

While my theory is that Merlock is not Hizzy's biological father, I'm not sure Hiz thinks that. Probably took mum's words a bit personally here... She didn't mean it like that! :(

view HeSerpenty's profile

23rd Jul 2016, 9:54 AM


Yes, I'd say you're definitely right about that! I think he is projecting some of his own thoughts on himself through his mother's words :'D (I guess I'm suddenly a psychologist? LOL)

view ProfEtheric's profile

23rd Jul 2016, 9:07 AM


Poor awkward snake baby Hizruk...

I actually really like the awkward dynamic going on with Tia here. I sense great things coming from this!

view HeSerpenty's profile

23rd Jul 2016, 9:55 AM


Hahahaha I think she'll fit right on in here! Hizruk could probably use someone blunt and energetic like herself in his life X'D... I'm interested to see what will happenX)

Thank you Prof!!! <3

view Shirokuro's profile

23rd Jul 2016, 1:14 PM


What's with this perfect page?! Tia and hizruk have some great dynamic here :D

view HeSerpenty's profile

23rd Jul 2016, 1:58 PM


Aaaah thank you i"m so happy you think so!! I enjoy illustrating their interactions lololol <333

Thank you Shiku!! <333

view Seabiscuit's profile

23rd Jul 2016, 5:12 PM



Gosh, every time her marriage is brought up it gets sadder and sadder... :C

view HeSerpenty's profile

24th Jul 2016, 2:12 PM


LOL!!! We shall see about this ship ;D ;P

Haha and yeea.... that danged marriage is a bit of a drag :"D
Things may ormay not get better!

view Matt Knab's profile

24th Jul 2016, 11:56 AM

Matt Knab

So...Hizruk, buddy...let's redo that reaction with "Nice to meet you! What are we having for breakfast?" ;)

view HeSerpenty's profile

24th Jul 2016, 2:13 PM


LOL!!! We gotta send that boy to a socialization class X'D

view Outlaw's profile

24th Jul 2016, 4:54 PM


Aw, man... that drama bomb hit hard.

Excellent page, my friend. Keep up the superb work!

view HeSerpenty's profile

24th Jul 2016, 6:10 PM


Thank you so much! Yes... there will be bigger bombs to come! X'D

view MistakeNPotatoes's profile

24th Jul 2016, 6:48 PM


Aaand caught up. Very cool, I enjoyed the read through a lot :D

You have a lot of likable characters, and I'm a fan of the fan favorites but honestly my favorite characters are Merek's men, Ryder and Barron :)

Now that I'm all caught up I can read it as it updates now :D Keep up the awesome work!

view HeSerpenty's profile

24th Jul 2016, 7:16 PM


Yay I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Thank you thank you for the time and for the sub! <33

lOlol I'm actually thrilled that you have a liking to Barron and Ryder! I LOVE those guys <33... and we will get to see deeper sides to them in this chapter and chapters to come <33

Thanks again so much! This made my day, seriously! :D

view raytoons's profile

28th Jul 2016, 10:18 PM


Very dramatic. Especially with the family photo.

view HeSerpenty's profile

28th Jul 2016, 10:34 PM


There is indeed a lot of drama involved with this..... happy family X'D

Thank you for the comment! <3

view junoro's profile

20th Sep 2016, 11:25 AM


That family picture looks pretty bad D: Also Gwynn's face when she says it's not like she needs Merlock's permission is great!

view HeSerpenty's profile

20th Sep 2016, 2:09 PM


Haha thank you! SHe's not scared of that guy X"D..despite all the damage he's caused :'D

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