Chapter 5.5-- WAKE UP

posted 1st Jul 2016, 11:00 AM

Chapter 5.5-- WAKE UP

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view HeSerpenty's profile

1st Jul 2016, 11:00 AM

HeSerpenty

More familiar scenes. Oh Hizruk... so destructive in the morning x'D...

I just want to say-- it's a miracle I finished this one time. Miracles exist x'D.

Anyways, thank you so much for reading! You guys mean a lot to me! <33
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view TheD-Wrek's profile

1st Jul 2016, 11:19 AM

TheD-Wrek

Hiz and his night terrors... :'D

Page looks super clean and crisp. More so than usual? Doing anything different? :)

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view HeSerpenty's profile

1st Jul 2016, 11:53 AM

HeSerpenty

Thanks D! :D
Well...not really doing anything different necessarily... just trying to improve what I got X"D. Hopefully it's actually improving!

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view alston123's profile

1st Jul 2016, 12:40 PM

alston123

Oh Hizruk, we have all been there. Fear is a really crazy thing. It can make you do things that you would not believe.

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view HeSerpenty's profile

1st Jul 2016, 10:31 PM

HeSerpenty

So very true!! And I mean...so far it's made him knock out the damsel in distress, try to kill someone who was trying to help, aaaand almost die from injury X'D haha

Fear is not so kind to HIzzy... he should learn to overcome it :3

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view Alicia's profile

1st Jul 2016, 12:53 PM

Alicia

LOL Hizruk, as if that pillow is gonna-- *Sees it flop over.* Yeah, good job there. X'D

Oooh, could it be a girl? Let's try not to punch this one this time, Hizruk. lolol Nice page! <3

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view HeSerpenty's profile

1st Jul 2016, 10:32 PM

HeSerpenty

Hahahaha yet another thing he fails at--DANGIT HIZ CANT U DO ANYTHING RIGHT??

LOL.. yes..it would be nice if Hizruk didn't punch any more girls X"D. Dangit Hizruk XDD

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view revzet's profile

1st Jul 2016, 1:00 PM

revzet

I ship it already

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view HeSerpenty's profile

1st Jul 2016, 10:32 PM

HeSerpenty

LOL.. you would, Rev <33
You would <3

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view MST3KFan's profile

1st Jul 2016, 1:24 PM

MST3KFan

Not again! Not another nice soft comfy pillow!!! Why!? Why'd I do to deserve such a thing!? XP

And now it's conversation time between Gwynn and the thief girl. XD

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view HeSerpenty's profile

1st Jul 2016, 10:33 PM

HeSerpenty

Yay for conversations and meeting new people! :D :D

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view Centcomm's profile

1st Jul 2016, 2:38 PM

Centcomm

looks fantastic as always serpenty!! thank you for your hard work!

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view HeSerpenty's profile

1st Jul 2016, 10:33 PM

HeSerpenty

Awww thank you Centy! Thank you for always being an encouragement to keep pushing on! <3

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view Shirokuro's profile

1st Jul 2016, 3:05 PM

Shirokuro

Omg....the secret ship...has reached the surface!

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view HeSerpenty's profile

1st Jul 2016, 10:33 PM

HeSerpenty

Lol!!!!! It should be interesting to see how this plays out!

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view CiciEnixa's profile

1st Jul 2016, 4:09 PM

CiciEnixa

*I* can't say enough how glad I am that little miss sneaky pants was not that headboard :,D

Hizzyyy give me your scary and totally hot shadow nightmare, I shall keep it forever for you <3

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view HeSerpenty's profile

1st Jul 2016, 10:35 PM

HeSerpenty

Lol yea :'D...thank goodness for that! I suppose Hizzy should make sure he always sleeps alone for the rest of his life too haha X'D

Lol!!! Cici I NEED my scary shadow nightmare! You can't has him!! YOU CAN'T, CICI! Lolol <333

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view azureXtwilight's profile

1st Jul 2016, 4:47 PM

azureXtwilight

Pff hizzy-boy do you think covering it with pillow is gonna work?

Also I hereby declare I don't ship it. You know why serpyyyyyy

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view HeSerpenty's profile

1st Jul 2016, 10:36 PM

HeSerpenty

Hahhayou have to admit it was a....valiant effort?

Hehehe yes, yes I do! :3

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view DLKmusic's profile

1st Jul 2016, 4:55 PM

DLKmusic

ok, now THIS ship is gonna sail!!! If I may quote "The King and I"... So it is written, so it is done!

Again with the awesometude! great job, Serpy!

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view HeSerpenty's profile

1st Jul 2016, 10:39 PM

HeSerpenty

Lololol!!! So many eager to see this ship sail! I do hope you guys will enjoy the voyage-- it's a big ocean out there! LOL

And thank you so much! Truly means a lot good sir <3

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view Blissarda's profile

1st Jul 2016, 5:20 PM

Blissarda

I pity Hizruk and his nightmares. I don't think his mother will get angry with him if she knows the truth, so it'll be fine, Hizruk.

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view HeSerpenty's profile

1st Jul 2016, 10:40 PM

HeSerpenty

Indeed.. Momma-Gwynn will probably understand, even try to help him cover it up......aaahhh but there may be others who wouldn't be so understanding :'D

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view ProfEtheric's profile

1st Jul 2016, 7:59 PM

ProfEtheric

Poor, poor Hizruk...

And this looks to be an interesting meeting. :)

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view HeSerpenty's profile

1st Jul 2016, 10:40 PM

HeSerpenty

Thank you Prof! I can only hope so <3

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view sigpig's profile

2nd Jul 2016, 8:55 AM

sigpig

(After Panels 6 & 7) "It hurts so good, I don't understand! Infatuation..."

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view HeSerpenty's profile

3rd Jul 2016, 11:55 AM

HeSerpenty

Hahaha I am trying so hard to understand what that means... but alas X'D

Lololol!

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view sigpig's profile

4th Jul 2016, 1:03 PM

sigpig

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nH_xiZZheg4

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view HeSerpenty's profile

7th Jul 2016, 6:58 PM

HeSerpenty

Haha! Now I understand!
I will never read that line the same ever again now XD

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view Slim Kittens's profile

2nd Jul 2016, 10:41 AM

Slim Kittens

Later...
Hizruk: "Tia, I have a confession. I change into a serpent."
Tia: "Well...d'uh!"

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view HeSerpenty's profile

3rd Jul 2016, 11:55 AM

HeSerpenty

LOL!
WHAT?? Hizruk, TELL ME THIS ISN"T SO!!! XDD

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view Matt Knab's profile

2nd Jul 2016, 1:12 PM

Matt Knab

No sleep-mauling in this house, mister!

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view HeSerpenty's profile

3rd Jul 2016, 11:55 AM

HeSerpenty

Kids these days, amiright?? Lololol

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view Seabiscuit's profile

2nd Jul 2016, 8:01 PM

Seabiscuit

Oh daaaamn! Not the best wake up call. Holy crap!

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view HeSerpenty's profile

3rd Jul 2016, 11:56 AM

HeSerpenty

Well the good thing is... starts ya off good an alert in the morning to wake up from a horrifying nightmare! X'D

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view gideonland's profile

4th Jul 2016, 12:35 PM

gideonland

Nice page, like always. The dream ripping through to the wake up is really good work. Some much imagery.

His mother is so nice taking that girl in. Girlfriend for Hizruk???

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view HeSerpenty's profile

5th Jul 2016, 9:55 PM

HeSerpenty

Awww thank you so much! Someday when certain things are revealed my hope is that you guys will remember these nightmares and be all like "Ooohh THATS what it meant!" hehe

Hahaha that's what everyone seems to be hoping for! I suppose we shall see :3

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view lifelight's profile

18th Jul 2016, 1:27 PM

lifelight

aw poor guy ;_; I just want to hug him <3

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view HeSerpenty's profile

19th Jul 2016, 8:08 PM

HeSerpenty

He needs lots a hugs! X'D

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view HapyCow's profile

6th Aug 2016, 10:05 PM

HapyCow

Whoa yes! That's so awesome! That first panel! Sorry, just geeking out...>.> Don't mind me. Is Hizruk getting a blind date?!

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view HeSerpenty's profile

6th Aug 2016, 11:49 PM

HeSerpenty

Thank you so much, Hapy!! Hehe more on THAT (the first panel) to come ;D Hehehe

LOlol it seems people are HOPING that is the case! :3

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