Chapter 5.3-- Only Regret

posted 17th Jun 2016, 10:00 AM

Chapter 5.3-- Only Regret
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view HeSerpenty's profile

17th Jun 2016, 10:00 AM

HeSerpenty

Early update! :D (thanks day jooob)

How DID he know? It was only Kalverick and the Council in the room when the secret mission was discussed...right? D:

Thus concludes the first reunion of Reunions. I mean.. it COULD'VE gone worst X). Buuut like Keymen said! He'll see him around ;D

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Have a great weekend everybody! Thank you for reading! <33


view Seabiscuit's profile

17th Jun 2016, 10:39 AM

Seabiscuit

Pffft. What a scumbag... D:
Can't hide anything from Keymen!

view HeSerpenty's profile

17th Jun 2016, 6:04 PM

HeSerpenty

Hahaha he is! And no ya can't! He knows ALL >__> (or anyways likes to think he does x"DDD)

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17th Jun 2016, 10:43 AM

Alicia

This page... I dunno how you keep topping each of my favorite pages with a new one. XD SO AWESOME! This is a very cinematic scene! I really can see this being animated! <3

Oh, Keymen. <3 THOSE EYES! <3

view HeSerpenty's profile

17th Jun 2016, 6:05 PM

HeSerpenty

Ah thank you so much! That really means a lot especially from uuuu <333

view sigpig's profile

17th Jun 2016, 10:46 AM

sigpig

He had better not smile, or eat food, either (fangs)...

view HeSerpenty's profile

17th Jun 2016, 6:06 PM

HeSerpenty

Lololol somehow I think Kal will have an easy time not smiling or eating on this super secret mission X'DDDD

17th Jun 2016, 11:23 AM

Visvires

He deduced it as likely, and confirmed it by Kalverick's reaction. Because he's that awesome.

Now, is he going to somehow get word to the humans?

view HeSerpenty's profile

17th Jun 2016, 7:48 PM

HeSerpenty

He is, he is!! Thank you <33

Lol and that would be interesting to find out.. if Key would care enough to send out words to the humans-- I mean he did live among them for quite a while! I suppose we will havta wait and see :D

view Matt Knab's profile

17th Jun 2016, 12:29 PM

Matt Knab

He's got his EYE on you!

view HeSerpenty's profile

17th Jun 2016, 7:49 PM

HeSerpenty

Dang right he does! Lolol

view MST3KFan's profile

17th Jun 2016, 1:32 PM

MST3KFan

Oh, Keymen, you know hw to get into other peoples' minds and on their nerves so well. XD

Now Kal is going to be especially on edge as if Merek's comments earlier didn't already have an affect on him.

view HeSerpenty's profile

17th Jun 2016, 7:50 PM

HeSerpenty

Hahaha he really does X"D-- mind games are some of his favorite games. Aaand annoying his enemy..another favorite thing to do X)

And that is right! Knowing that Key and Merek are on the same side...that can't make him feel too confident X"D

view ProfEtheric's profile

17th Jun 2016, 2:42 PM

ProfEtheric

Aw, yeah! Get 'im, Keymen!

Such a beautifully lit and rendered page, Serpy!

view HeSerpenty's profile

17th Jun 2016, 7:51 PM

HeSerpenty

Thank you so much, Prof!! <3

view DLKmusic's profile

17th Jun 2016, 4:45 PM

DLKmusic

I guess I was wrong! it WAS a head game after all!

And such a beautiful one too, I think it brought a tear to my eye...

view HeSerpenty's profile

17th Jun 2016, 7:52 PM

HeSerpenty

Lololol welll Keymen loves a good head game-- I think the pleasure in watching Kal squirm for a while is more satisfying than the immediate thrill of taking him down--- that could be coming tho ;D

Haha and thank you so much! <3

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17th Jun 2016, 4:47 PM

alston123

Thls. Page. Is. Literally. Everything. Happy. That. Is. In. Existence. In. Life. Seriously. :D *_*
Bless you, Serpy. You have given us so much to feeeeeed on. Now I get it. He betrayed Keymen. I wanna know mooooore. I neeeeeeeeeed more in my life!!!!!!! :3

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17th Jun 2016, 7:54 PM

HeSerpenty

Alston this comment seriously made me smile so much! I am so glad that you are satisfied with what you were given in this scene..yet still hunger for me :3. That is all I could hope for!
Thank you so much! <33 :')

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17th Jun 2016, 5:11 PM

azureXtwilight

Such sass, Keymen. Such sass!

I can't comment on how beutiful this page is, you clearly improved your shadows and lighting Serpy!

I had a problem uploading my page again! As a result two updates were uploaded, argh.

view HeSerpenty's profile

17th Jun 2016, 8:04 PM

HeSerpenty

Awww thank u so much Azure!! It's always nice to hear when you're improving on something! <3333

O nooo! WELL YAY I get to read an extra page! :D

17th Jun 2016, 7:36 PM

PearOfDiscord

Kalavarik, you're an irredeemable piece of &#$%. But Keymen is at his best when he's bothering you, so I'll tolerate you XD.

I'm only getting more curious about what the "betrayal" was. You're really good at keeping up the suspense!

I don't think it has to do with Keymen's poor dad directly (does he have a name that we can know yet?) Keymen's tiny in the dream, and still friends in the flashback, so it can't be that. But I doubt it's entirely unrelated.

Keymen's ribbing is AMAZING. Watching Kal get all paranoid and annoyed is very fun. :D

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17th Jun 2016, 8:10 PM

HeSerpenty

Hehe thank you so much! I wanna try to keep you guys comin back ever week afterall Lololol

And you could be on to something there! Of course Key's dad died when he was very young and before he met Kal... but all things may indeed be connected. We will find out! :3 (Also.. I am willing to share Key's Dad's name was Dayrnn, and Key takes after him in many many ways <33)

haha it IS fun to watch Kal squirm, isn't it?? XDD

18th Jun 2016, 12:45 PM

Visvires

In the flashback, Keymen was getting into the council's good graces. Present day, he's set himself up as a beloved figure of a far off village to avoid execution. I'm guessing Kalverick's betrayal had something to do with that. Might've ruined his prior plan for revenge; certainly ruined the element of surprise.

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17th Jun 2016, 9:36 PM

Centcomm

ok i feel a little better that! us being slapped down by a well placed ear and eye ... still hoping he gets lynched... i would be ok with this...

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17th Jun 2016, 9:36 PM

Centcomm

grrrr stupid tablet... great page serpenty!!!

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18th Jun 2016, 10:32 AM

HeSerpenty

Lolol thank you Centy! Don't worry I'm sure he'll get what's coming! X'D

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19th Jun 2016, 1:17 PM

Shirokuro

Everything about this page is too beutiful! Also kaymans scary blue serpent eyes! <3

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19th Jun 2016, 1:38 PM

HeSerpenty

Thank u so much! Lolol yes dem eyes have gotten him lots of attention over the years x"D

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19th Jun 2016, 11:03 PM

junoro

This is a really interesting page! It makes the antagonism between Keymen and Kalverick even stronger! And of course raises MORE questions... like what was "that day"???? And seriously, what's the dealio with Keymen knowing everything??

view HeSerpenty's profile

20th Jun 2016, 10:15 AM

HeSerpenty

Thank you so much, Juno!! I am eager to get in to "that day"... I have a whole chapter dedicated to it and some other MAJOR and telling spoilers <333

What IS the dealio with know-it-all over here?? Hehe I guess we'll havta wait and see for that too <33

view Outlaw's profile

20th Jun 2016, 6:47 AM

Outlaw

Hahaha, that reaction is freakin' perfection, my friend. Excellent work.

I can't wait to see a certain someone get their just desserts.

view HeSerpenty's profile

20th Jun 2016, 10:15 AM

HeSerpenty

Thank you so much!! LoLolol yessss I am hearing lots of calls for justice regarding Kal--- I don't think you'll be disappointed! XDD

view Jarvi's profile

20th Jun 2016, 2:34 PM

Jarvi

Keymen knows everything :D

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21st Jun 2016, 1:06 AM

HeSerpenty

He is a smart guy, dat Keymen!

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18th Jul 2016, 1:25 PM

lifelight

well that guy's a jerk! I love keyman's aloof attitude tho. lol Makes it all the better. <3

view HeSerpenty's profile

19th Jul 2016, 8:07 PM

HeSerpenty

Hahha if there's one thing Keymen is good at it's having an aloof attitude in a tense situation! X'D

And yes...Kal IS a jerk!

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