Chapter 4.43-- You Were Right-- FINAL

posted 13th May 2016, 11:00 AM

Chapter 4.43-- You Were Right-- FINAL

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view HeSerpenty's profile

13th May 2016, 11:00 AM

HeSerpenty

I promised some of you we would check back in with Shera before the chapter ends-- I always try to keep my promises!
Hmmmm I wonder how dear ol' Grandpa Steviek got that scar on his arm >__>

Fun fact time!
The Serpent Nation is on the coast, and the humans are much further inland. The further inland you go, the colder the weather becomes. It can be drastic change of temperature as the humans will even get snow, and the modern serpents have never heard of such a thing.
In the olden days, before being driven away, the Serpents would hibernate in the winter because they have a harder time surviving in colder temperatures.

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WOO! Chapter has come to an end! I'm excited for what's in store, I hope you are too :D :D
Almost all of the characters made for me by you the people will be in next chapter! AND there'll be some cameos as well..sooo lots of things to look forward to :3

There shall NOT be a chapter break (what IS a break anyway? I'm not sure what that even means XD).. so I'll see you right back here next friday for a very interesting interlude :3

Have a great weekend!



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Got a wonderful trade/fanart this week featuring Keymen, Gwynn, Hizruk, and Merek by MST3KFan! You should check it out and give him some luv! :D

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view Alicia's profile

13th May 2016, 11:05 AM

Alicia

Aw... I like Grandpa Steviek so far already! He seems so nice... YOU'DBETTERNOTDOSOMETHINGTOHIMSERPY. >_>;

I like how this chapter ends! It's like... got closure but at the same time, leaves a lot of mysteries that I wanna know the answers to! <3 GIVE ME MORE!

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view HeSerpenty's profile

13th May 2016, 2:28 PM

HeSerpenty

Lololol C'mooon you know NO ONE is safe in this comic! lololol I jest x'D.. >___>

And thank you so much! I love finishing chapters...it's the best X"D. I SHALL GIVE MORE <33

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view Slim Kittens's profile

14th May 2016, 9:37 AM

Slim Kittens

Says the author who kills off main characters in her own comic.

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view HeSerpenty's profile

14th May 2016, 11:14 AM

HeSerpenty

Lolol EXACTLY! THANK you
Hahahaha

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view alston123's profile

13th May 2016, 11:24 AM

alston123

Wow. Such a heavy chapter. Can't wait till the next. ^_^
Grandfather knows!!!! Grandfather knows!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ;P

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view HeSerpenty's profile

13th May 2016, 2:30 PM

HeSerpenty

YEsss Grandfather knowss!

Haha thank you Alston! I am excited too! There should be some good laughs next chapter to make up for all this heavy stuff X'D. There might also be more heavy stuff............one can just never tell X)

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13th May 2016, 11:37 AM

Visvires

I just hope he can pick out Hizruk's actions from the mess. It'd be nice if the upcoming vengeance were directed at a regime rather than a general population.

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13th May 2016, 2:32 PM

HeSerpenty

I agree more! Nothing worse than generalizations in my humble opinion X'D. Lumping a huge group of people together because of the actions of a few--- that way of thinking has been a root cause of all sorts of genocides!

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view MST3KFan's profile

13th May 2016, 12:15 PM

MST3KFan

Well, Shera's looking a bit worse for wear than when we last saw her, but I'm guessing it was quite the trek through the woods to get home.

And it seems Grandpa has had some history with the serpents. That can't bode well for things.
Though with how he glares out into the forest as if something was out there, too... Hmmm...

Anyway, good end to the chapter, Serpy! XD

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And again, glad you liked the art I did for you. X3

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13th May 2016, 2:34 PM

HeSerpenty

Haha yea I suppose running as fast as she could through a critter-ridden forest whilst being extremely distraught might make for a rough journey X'D

Haha and yes..it DOES seem like there is a little something in grandpappy's eyes........... hehe, I guess we will have to wait and see :3

Thank you so much!

(I loved it <333... and I'm workin on yours right now :D)

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view lifelight's profile

13th May 2016, 1:07 PM

lifelight

Ohhhh my!!!!! Poor thing. Even tho she brutally has the wrong idea about Hizruk (my love). And that ominous look over his shoulder in that last panel! Can't wait to see the next awesome page!!

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13th May 2016, 2:43 PM

HeSerpenty

Lololl yes she seems to be forgetting about the one key fact that a particular serpent risked his life and freedom to SAVE her X'D

Hehe thank you so much!! I am super excited too!

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view Chris the Blue's profile

13th May 2016, 1:31 PM

Chris the Blue

Shera should've listened to the rhyme!

Beware Beware the Great Black Wall,
Within the forest standing tall;
Within its borders, snakes'll be scarin'
Except for that one cool dude, named Barron.

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13th May 2016, 2:44 PM

HeSerpenty

LOL!!

Okay... I'm having a not so great day, aaand this really made me laugh. Thank you so much for that X'D *changes the rhyme throughout the whole story cuz this one is WAY better!* LOLOL!

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13th May 2016, 3:15 PM

Chris the Blue

Aw, sorry to hear that. A cool person like you deserves to have ALL the good days!

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view HeSerpenty's profile

13th May 2016, 4:32 PM

HeSerpenty

Bless you for saying that! :')
You have cheered me up a LOT today! <333

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view Chris the Blue's profile

13th May 2016, 4:38 PM

Chris the Blue

*makes taylor swift heart sign with hands*

You go, girl!

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view Matt Knab's profile

13th May 2016, 4:22 PM

Matt Knab

Hrm, time to break out the torches and pitchforks.

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view HeSerpenty's profile

13th May 2016, 4:32 PM

HeSerpenty

Lolol ya got THAT right! XD

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view DLKmusic's profile

13th May 2016, 4:54 PM

DLKmusic

ok, GRANDPA I like, we can keep him!

Oh, and sorry to hear you had a rough day, Serpy, but your strip made mine worth it in the end, so...

(ohm, mahsali ohm mahsali ohm... sending good Kharma way ...ohm mahsali ohm)

hmmm... I may have overdone it... according to this, you are due to be bathed in a rainbow....

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view HeSerpenty's profile

14th May 2016, 12:13 AM

HeSerpenty

Hehe thank you! We all should have a big tough grandpa like this guy x'D..... the world would be a better place lolol

And thank u so much, truly! Your support and comments and EVERYthing you do is wonderful and I'm so grateful! <33
That rainbow bath was juuust what the doctor ordered, hehe <33

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view azureXtwilight's profile

13th May 2016, 5:06 PM

azureXtwilight

Dat grandpa looks badaaass~

I bet he used to be a ninja on his prime! Or something equevalent!

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view HeSerpenty's profile

14th May 2016, 12:13 AM

HeSerpenty

LOL!! Perhaps he was! Hehe but he put on a few pounds nowadays X'D

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view Blissarda's profile

13th May 2016, 5:27 PM

Blissarda

Is this the start of a war between serpents and humans?

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view HeSerpenty's profile

14th May 2016, 11:53 AM

HeSerpenty

Heheh it very well could be :3 <33

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view Centcomm's profile

13th May 2016, 7:15 PM

Centcomm

Yay for Shera glad to see she made it back ok :)

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view HeSerpenty's profile

14th May 2016, 11:53 AM

HeSerpenty

Thanks Cent! ^_^
She made it back, but... IS she okay? We'll havta wait and see XDD

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view Centcomm's profile

14th May 2016, 12:06 PM

Centcomm

ok is a relative term in this case .. shes not missing body parts and does not have any gaping wounds.

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view HeSerpenty's profile

14th May 2016, 12:14 PM

HeSerpenty

Lol no I know what ya meant, sorry X'D
I was just talkin' a DIFFERENT sort :P

Hope all is well! ^__^

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13th May 2016, 9:09 PM

PearOfDiscord

Man, the last two pages have been great for plot/exposition!

I absolutely love the darker tones on this page, and you did a great job with making Shera look like she's gone through absolute hell (which she has). The first and Shera-closeup panels in particular are gorgeous!

Aand we get a new character. I like Baldy 2.0 a lot already, and I wonder if those scars are Serpent-related. It seems pretty likely with how he was the one who warned Shera about the Gate.

It is WEIRD to see characters with lighter eyes. I have gotten so used to the Serpent characters (never mind Keymen, who's weird in a totally different way).

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view HeSerpenty's profile

14th May 2016, 11:56 AM

HeSerpenty

Thank you so much! I figure it's good to get those things rollin' a little bit here and there lolol

Yea Shera has been through a LOT! Emotionally AND physically (but mostly emotionally). I am so happy to hear that shows through a little bit!

LOL! Baldy 2.0 X'D...thats so hilariously true isn't it? Last baldy was a small, frail little thing haha. Regarding those scars... perhaps there is good REASON grampa is so adament against serpents X'D

It is weird to DRAW characters with lighter eyes! lolol... yea weird Keymen totally doesn't count X'DDD... he's totally lumped in with the rest of them to me lolol.

THank u so much!

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view gideonland's profile

14th May 2016, 12:49 AM

gideonland

Awesome!
Let me just say right now that I am on the humans' side, regardless of how much I love SOME of the serpent characters.
I sticks with my own!

Nice close to the chapter. Suspenseful. Keep it coming.

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view HeSerpenty's profile

14th May 2016, 12:00 PM

HeSerpenty

Oohhh how interesting! Got someone in the human corner! Lololol we'll see if that will change... or get stronger X'DD

Thank you so much!! I hope you guys will enjoy it as much as I do! :D

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view CiciEnixa's profile

14th May 2016, 6:04 AM

CiciEnixa

Granpappy knows things.

HE KNOWS.

Hizzy you better keep your bum away from Granpappy.

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view HeSerpenty's profile

14th May 2016, 12:02 PM

HeSerpenty

HE DOES knooow!!!

Lololol indeed, grandpappy looks ready to kick some arse.... Hizzy doesn't need any more arse-kicking! X'D

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view Seabiscuit's profile

14th May 2016, 7:52 AM

Seabiscuit

Oh man! She's gonna cause some trouble I feel, but I'm still glad she at least managed to make it home... :D

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view HeSerpenty's profile

14th May 2016, 12:03 PM

HeSerpenty

Lolol yes a whole lotta good news mixed with bad news! Let's not forget a certain other diabolical creature is set on finding her...and bringing her back hehe xD

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view Shirokuro's profile

16th May 2016, 10:29 AM

Shirokuro

So Shera...we meet again! I do feel sorry for ya you know...even if you were being such a jerk to Hizzy... >__<

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view HeSerpenty's profile

16th May 2016, 12:19 PM

HeSerpenty

Lolol she's had a rough time! So I guess her "jerk-a-tude" can be forgiven perhaps a little bit? Haha...this won't be the last we'll be hearing from her :3

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view Outlaw's profile

19th May 2016, 9:08 PM

Outlaw

Another fantastic chapter, my friend.
I can't wait to see what happens next. The story just keeps amping up more and more.

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view HeSerpenty's profile

20th May 2016, 11:03 AM

HeSerpenty

Thank you so much! I'm so happy to hear it! <33333

Things are definitely starting to stir a little bit lol

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view TheD-Wrek's profile

20th May 2016, 11:28 AM

TheD-Wrek

Shera, my dear.... You know not what you say. :'D

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view HeSerpenty's profile

23rd May 2016, 4:02 PM

HeSerpenty

WHOA I thought I answered all my comments on this page oopsie :'D

Lol... ominous things ahead XD

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view junoro's profile

20th May 2016, 12:47 PM

junoro

Ooooh daaaaaaang I have a feeling this is going to spell trouble in the future! Especially with that scar of the grandpa's arm! Such tension! Congrats on finishing Chapter 4!!

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view HeSerpenty's profile

23rd May 2016, 4:03 PM

HeSerpenty

You are probably having an accurate feeling!

Thank you so much, Junoro! <333

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view ProfEtheric's profile

23rd May 2016, 2:27 PM

ProfEtheric

Spooooooooky end!

(Poor Shera... Though I am glad to see she made it! This doesn't bode well.)

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view HeSerpenty's profile

23rd May 2016, 4:05 PM

HeSerpenty

Yuss things might get a little more tense in chapters to come lolol

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view Chippewa Ghost's profile

24th Aug 2017, 8:18 PM

Chippewa Ghost

You've got great structure with this chapter.

Also, Keymen is awesome... IMHO the answer to his question is that reasons don't matter, actions do.

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view HeSerpenty's profile

24th Aug 2017, 9:10 PM

HeSerpenty

Thanks a lot! that's good to hear haha

And yea that's a good answer. If one does the right thing for the wrong reasons..they still did the right thing, right? Vise versa X"DD

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