Chapter 4.40-- Go Home

posted 22nd Apr 2016, 11:00 AM

Chapter 4.40-- Go Home

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view HeSerpenty's profile

22nd Apr 2016, 11:00 AM

HeSerpenty

HIZRUK, does that FREKKIN' LOOK like "home to your mother"?! Dang!
Hmmm... Hizzy has no idea how much Keymen "knows" about her tho X)
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Tying up a few loose ends, and then it's time to head into next chapter! Where LOTS of long awaited things are going to happen :3

Anyone remember Merlock's strange interaction with Merek quite a few scenes back? Little follow up with that here >__>

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LAstly, if you would be kind as to vote for us on TWC, I would be eternally grateful! You'll get to see a cute glimpse into Hizruk's past friendships! :D

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view revzet's profile

22nd Apr 2016, 11:05 AM

revzet

MERLOCK YOUUUUUUU

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view HeSerpenty's profile

22nd Apr 2016, 10:20 PM

HeSerpenty

Ain't he just the best ever? X)

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view ProfEtheric's profile

22nd Apr 2016, 11:43 AM

ProfEtheric

If only you knew, kid...

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view HeSerpenty's profile

22nd Apr 2016, 10:21 PM

HeSerpenty

If only X'DDD....

Hizruk would do well in life to know more things in general lolol

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view Centcomm's profile

22nd Apr 2016, 11:52 AM

Centcomm

Merlock is SLIME!!!!

And rock on Keymen!! I am liking him more and more!

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view HeSerpenty's profile

22nd Apr 2016, 10:22 PM

HeSerpenty

Lolol HE IS!

Aw good, I am REALLY happy to hear that! He is one of my personal favs X) <3

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view Vivocateur's profile

22nd Apr 2016, 12:01 PM

Vivocateur

Meeerrrrrlock!! I see you being a lame tallte tale over there with your…er…lady friend…

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view HeSerpenty's profile

22nd Apr 2016, 10:24 PM

HeSerpenty

LOL he's totally tattling to daddy right now! I'm just puzzled why he thinks it's something he wants this lady friend to see him doing X'D

Ah well, she's paid to act impressed x)

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22nd Apr 2016, 12:08 PM

PearOfDiscord

I really, really like how Keymend handles his interactions with Hizruk. There's no ordering him to do something "just because", but neither is he just letting him do his own (probably disastrous) thing. And Hizruk listens! Merlock (ugh) should really try to imitate Keymen a bit more.

Speaking of Merlock, I'm trying to figure out how he's Merek's brother. If I remember correctly, Gwynn's mom cheated on Hedran with Merlock's father, who had already had had this Merlock,to creating Merek. So I think they're half-brothers? From the timeline picture ages ago, I remember that Merlock Sr. was pretty awful to Merek, and now Merlock's writing to him to complain? This is really bad news!

I don't know if it's deliberate, but it's pretty neat how each of the main trio has some enemy (Hedran/Hellgiah, Kalavarik, and now Merlock Sr.) from the past that's getting worked into the story just now.

Also, that outdoor panel is gorgeous! I really like the night sky and the grass. Merlock has oddly nice handwriting as well.

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view HeSerpenty's profile

22nd Apr 2016, 11:21 PM

HeSerpenty

It's so awesome for me that you have noticed this! Keymen does seem to treat Hizruk rather differently than the rest of the cast-- it does seem to have an effect, I mean Hizruk just opened up to him already a little bit right there in the last page!

And yes! You are spot on! Merek is Merlock's HALF brother, indeed. But there is no need to talk "halves" to Daddy-o... he is well aware. ANd yess..... Merlock Sr. was HORRIBLE to him (so cool you remember! You're the best! <333). I think Merek needed MORE things to worry about, don't you? X'D

You are making my day here! Catching on to all these things that are somewhat subtle but indeed purposeful :'). I am a huge fan of parallels in stories, hehe

And thank you so much! That outside panel was the one I most dreaded but ended up being my fav XD. As for Merlock's writing... I was trying so hard to make it different than my own but I suppose cuz of the time crunch with this page I couldn't get myself enough in character to accurately portray his chicken scratch X). AH well, at least you guys can read it now! :D

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view rufiangel's profile

25th Apr 2016, 2:19 AM

rufiangel

Oh wait WHAT XD
I totally thought this whole time that Gwynn and Merek were blood siblings :'DDD

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view HeSerpenty's profile

25th Apr 2016, 2:31 AM

HeSerpenty

Hahahahaaa... HALF blood siblings! They have the same momma, but different dads X'D

Both bad dads in their own respective ways X))))

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view rufiangel's profile

25th Apr 2016, 3:21 AM

rufiangel

Sooooo... Gwynn and Merlock are *not* blood related, right? >_>

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view HeSerpenty's profile

26th Apr 2016, 8:24 AM

HeSerpenty

Hahhaha! A legitimate concern, but.... indeed they are not related at ALL X'D. In fact it is kind of BECAUSE Gwynn's mothers affair with Merlock's dad that created little Merek that probably helped them decide to arrange this gross nasty marriage! X'D

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view rufiangel's profile

26th Apr 2016, 5:51 PM

rufiangel

LOL okay thank goodness XDDD

So let me get this straight...

Gwynn-mama + Gwynn-papa = Gwynn
Gwynn-mama + Merlock-papa = Merek
Merlock-papa + Merlock-mama = Merlock

Hmmm... okay, it's easier to see it now that I've written this out XD;;; man. Merek is not happy to be related to Merlock, I'm sure :'D

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view HeSerpenty's profile

26th Apr 2016, 6:33 PM

HeSerpenty

Lolol!! You got it! It is purposefully a cluster-F XDD.... and really embarrassing for Merek indeed X'D. He has chosen to accept GWYNN as his sibling and disassociate from the rest of his family :'D

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view Jarvi's profile

22nd Apr 2016, 1:03 PM

Jarvi

Oh Serpy.. you can't blame Hizzy. He's been out of home for so many years.. poor guy just forgot where he lives and now is wandering trying to find his home ;<

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view HeSerpenty's profile

23rd Apr 2016, 12:20 AM

HeSerpenty

LOL
Poor lost little Hizzy....

I would perhaps buy this story if he didn't find his way back home that day he was LET OUT of the dungeon! Lolol!

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view Jarvi's profile

23rd Apr 2016, 5:04 AM

Jarvi

Oh come on.. he wasn't stressed out then, and worried and all that ;p

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view HeSerpenty's profile

26th Apr 2016, 8:25 AM

HeSerpenty

Stop defending him, Dad!!! He's BAD!!! Lolol! <33

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view Shirokuro's profile

22nd Apr 2016, 2:20 PM

Shirokuro

Hahaha Keyman...he's acting like such a "father" to him xD Also trolling him like that pretending he doesn't know Gwynn... xD

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view HeSerpenty's profile

23rd Apr 2016, 12:21 AM

HeSerpenty

Hahahaha Keymen be trollin' X)))

He is good at that! And apparently pretty good at acting like a "father" too hehehe <3. Maybe Hizzy will warm up to him... hopefully X__X

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view MST3KFan's profile

22nd Apr 2016, 2:26 PM

MST3KFan

Keyman is just so amusing at how he manages to deal with Hizruk.
I get the feeling though Hizruk is going to be hearing quite a lot from his mother about his little escapade.

And Merlock...dude... Merek is so going to get you back, I can just see it now.

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view HeSerpenty's profile

23rd Apr 2016, 12:23 AM

HeSerpenty

Key deals with him a bit differently than everyone else.............it is indeed fun to write x'D

Yea Hizzy better hope Gwynn doesn't find out about what' he's been up to X)

And yea lol..................there may very well be a pending battle between Merlock and Merek X'DDD.

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view Matt Knab's profile

22nd Apr 2016, 2:43 PM

Matt Knab

Another one on the butt kicking list. >:)

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view HeSerpenty's profile

23rd Apr 2016, 12:24 AM

HeSerpenty

Ya got that right! >:3

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view azureXtwilight's profile

22nd Apr 2016, 4:10 PM

azureXtwilight

O gosh. The first panels just makes me sad :'( Keymennn let me pap you!

But the last panel just made me so angry. How come that husband be any more useless :(((((

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view HeSerpenty's profile

23rd Apr 2016, 12:29 AM

HeSerpenty

Llolol... there are so very many emotions revolving around the subject of "hizruk's mother" for him....that is for sure X)))

Ohhhh I'm sure there are more ways for Merlock to further make himself useless! Lolol

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view Blissarda's profile

22nd Apr 2016, 9:13 PM

Blissarda

Of course you're not going to tell him you love his mother, Keymen... And the possibility that you're his father...ish...

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view HeSerpenty's profile

24th Apr 2016, 2:31 AM

HeSerpenty

Butof COUURSE not! KEymen does not just TELL people things hehe.
LOL...now that would be quite the scandal! :3

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29th Apr 2016, 7:48 AM

Dreamfollower

Im with you on the "Keymen is really Hizruks dad" thing. I REFUSE to believe that that TROLL Merlock is legitimately Hizruks dad > > Not to mention Hizruk bares NO resemblance to Merlock while he bears an uncanny resemblence to Keymen in terms of facial structure and what not. Give Keymen a tan and dye his hair and BAM. Hizruk doppelganger X)

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view HeSerpenty's profile

29th Apr 2016, 8:22 AM

HeSerpenty

LoLlol!!! I still can't get over that one pic you modified a long time ago X'D.. of younger Keymen.

All's I can say is.... we'll havta wait and seeeee! ;3

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view Ltger's profile

22nd Apr 2016, 9:15 PM

Ltger

Awesome page

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view HeSerpenty's profile

24th Apr 2016, 2:32 AM

HeSerpenty

Thank you so much! <3

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view Alicia's profile

22nd Apr 2016, 10:55 PM

Alicia

Welp! Merlock has to impress the ladies with a letter to daddy.

...Cuz he's got nothing else to impress them with. X'D

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view HeSerpenty's profile

24th Apr 2016, 2:32 AM

HeSerpenty

LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!! so Sad how true this is XDDDD

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view Seabiscuit's profile

23rd Apr 2016, 8:08 AM

Seabiscuit

That definitely does not seem like "going home to mom" D:<

Ahhhhhh that night scene is so gorgeous~ ;-;

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view HeSerpenty's profile

24th Apr 2016, 2:33 AM

HeSerpenty

Yep... it seems Hizzy deliberately disobeyed...AGAIN D:

Aw thank u so much!!! <3333

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view alston123's profile

23rd Apr 2016, 8:12 AM

alston123

Hmm...I thought Keymen was going to tell Hizruk about his connection with Gwynn. :/

Ugh...Merlock. Why did we have to see him again?! -_-

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view HeSerpenty's profile

24th Apr 2016, 2:37 AM

HeSerpenty

Aw but Keymen can't just TELL hizruk things! That would be too easy for him!

Hahaha unfortunately we will be seein' Merlock quite a few more times!

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view Slim Kittens's profile

23rd Apr 2016, 7:01 PM

Slim Kittens

"You HAVE a mother, don't you?" Nice save, Keymen.

Merlock is really a catch, isn't he?

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view HeSerpenty's profile

25th Apr 2016, 12:29 AM

HeSerpenty

Hahahaha yep... nailed it!

And he IS! He's the kind of husband all young girls dream of having x)))

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view rufiangel's profile

23rd Apr 2016, 7:24 PM

rufiangel

Hizruk-baby, Keymen knows a LOT more about your mother than you do :'D

And wow I didn't think I could hate Merlock even more than I already do but DANG :'DDD go die in a fire you old brute!

(Seriously though, I WAS worried that whole scene Merek caused with Merlock was going to bite him in the butt some point. ;_; oh man I hope it's not too bad.)

(Also, 'Father', huh...? I didn't know Merlock was the son of the Council head :'DDD)

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view HeSerpenty's profile

25th Apr 2016, 12:34 AM

HeSerpenty

Hahahaha Keymen knows a lot more about everything than Hizruk does, me thinks X'DDD (but that's not hard to accomplish :P)

LOL! Die in fire! Funny you should say that X)
Of COURSE Merek isn't gonna just get away with that little interaction earlier hehe

weeell, Merlock ain't related to the council but his family and the council may or may not have close ties X)))
Merek's ALREADY in trouble with the Council! Hahaha not he's gonna be in trouble with Daddy it would seem :'D

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24th Apr 2016, 2:14 AM

Guest

ugghhhh merlock's nipple oh god that's gonna haunt my nightmares.

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view HeSerpenty's profile

25th Apr 2016, 12:35 AM

HeSerpenty

LOL!!!!! Aw what but it's so cute and littllllee X'D (wow I feel messed up for saying that x'D)

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view CiciEnixa's profile

24th Apr 2016, 6:29 AM

CiciEnixa

I don't think I can say anything more about Merlock that no one else has said XD That sleazy sleazeball. Though I guess for him, that hit was a big surprise and totally unlike Merek.

HIZZY COME ON GO BACK TO MAMA!!!

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view HeSerpenty's profile

25th Apr 2016, 12:37 AM

HeSerpenty

Oh, for sure! Their lives growing up together... MEREK was never the one to be physically harmful X). That little confrontation earlier was indeed very shocking for him :'D

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24th Apr 2016, 10:50 AM

TheD-Wrek

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view HeSerpenty's profile

25th Apr 2016, 12:38 AM

HeSerpenty

LOL

I don't understand........................ you just posted an ACTUAL picture of Merlock? I don't see what's different here!

Hahahaha XDDD

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view Mel Cormac's profile

24th Apr 2016, 10:54 PM

Mel Cormac

Keymen, you sly devil.

Merlock, I have no words.

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view HeSerpenty's profile

25th Apr 2016, 1:27 AM

HeSerpenty

LOL
Merlock is good at rendering people speechless X))

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view lifelight's profile

25th Apr 2016, 1:19 PM

lifelight

This comic is amazing!!!! I love it!!! So glad I got the chance to binge read it today. Consider me a fan :D

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view HeSerpenty's profile

26th Apr 2016, 8:26 AM

HeSerpenty

Aww THANK U!! Thank you for reading and for the sub!! It means much because I am a fan of yours as well <333

I hope you will continue to enjoy the story! I have a lot of stuff planned :3 hehe

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view Outlaw's profile

25th Apr 2016, 4:35 PM

Outlaw

Looks like Merlock is straight basking in this. Lol.
Great page, as per the usual, my friend.

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view HeSerpenty's profile

26th Apr 2016, 8:27 AM

HeSerpenty

Lololol he really shouldn't be! Buuut he is X'D
"Hey baby, look at how I can tattle to Daddy" haha

Thanks so much, man! <3

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view LeRenardRoux's profile

29th Apr 2016, 5:18 AM

LeRenardRoux

Wooo, your art is looking so good these days, girl!

And this was an interesting meeting to say the least. Didn't seem to go all bad. >.>

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view HeSerpenty's profile

29th Apr 2016, 8:23 AM

HeSerpenty

WOoo thank you so much, Roux!!! I'm always looking to improve <333

Yes! Wasn't all bad............could have been a lot worse X'D. It willbe interesting to see this relationship develop! :D (well,,, I HOPE it's interesting anyway :D)

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view junoro's profile

7th May 2016, 9:29 AM

junoro

NOOOOOOOO Merlock.... no.......you jerk.

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view HeSerpenty's profile

9th May 2016, 1:46 AM

HeSerpenty

He really is a big jerk, isn't he? NO redeeming qualities! X'D

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