Chapter 4.34-- Destroy Everything

posted 11th Mar 2016, 10:38 AM

Chapter 4.34-- Destroy Everything
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11th Mar 2016, 10:38 AM

HeSerpenty

**EDIT***
AND FINISHED...a few days later. You guys are so awesome to be so cool about a WIP! I promise that won't happen often! As far as I can tell, I intend to update on time this Friday with the next page! See you then <33

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Couple things to note about this page..
1). Are those serpents using serpents like tracking dogs? With harnesses and everything? O__O.. what's up with that?
2). WEX FINISHED THE BARS! Yay Wex!!
3). The "Adkien Forest" is what the HUMANS call the "Dead Forest"..tis' the same forest! Just a fun fact XD.
4). Kalverick's gonna DO something?? :O!


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11th Mar 2016, 10:45 AM

azureXtwilight

Aw D:: Good luck in finishing your page, Serpy! I kinda remembered, wherebdis SHE go anyway? We only see Hizzy hurt at the end, but she's nowhere to be found.

Also Kal seriously going to a human village? HMM

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14th Mar 2016, 11:36 PM

HeSerpenty

Thanks girl! Took a couple extra days but here it is <3

We will catch up with Shera at the end of this chapter :3...which we're almost there!

And yes.. its sounding that way :D

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11th Mar 2016, 11:10 AM

Alicia

Oooh Kal IS doing a thing! A big thing! I knew there was a reason why he was in charge.

Also I need to know more about these tracking serpents! Do they have human forms too?

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14th Mar 2016, 11:37 PM

HeSerpenty

FINALLY, amiright? Lolol he's finally gonna maybe show us some skill X'D

Hehe I'm gonna make a little info sheet about these fellas! But technically they DO have human forms..... but whether or not they can transform into them is the real question ;3 tteehee :D

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11th Mar 2016, 11:13 AM

Vivocateur

Ooohhannn...this sounds like fun (evil fun)! He's certainly not afraid of taking risks to further his career.
Would you mind if I did a creepy colouring of your lineart?

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14th Mar 2016, 11:42 PM

HeSerpenty

Evil fun indeed! So much evil on the event calendar!

Omg I wish I woulda answered this sooner! TenPenny you are ALWAYS welcome to color ANY line art I leave laying around <333-- I LOVE your coloring! Uh but I changed the page file so if you're still interested here is a link to the file!

Thanks so much!!

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11th Mar 2016, 11:40 AM

Seabiscuit

Uh oh. I don't like the sounds of these plans... D:
Aw Serpz it ok, take your time and remember to take it easy~

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14th Mar 2016, 11:42 PM

HeSerpenty

Thank you Sea <33-- it makes me uncomfortable to be so late on a page, but you guys all bein' so cool about it is really awesome to me!

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11th Mar 2016, 12:47 PM

sigpig

Serpy, real life always should take precedence. The cool thing is that this page actually doesn't suffer from the lack of colour - your art is THAT good!

ps: Panel 11 should read "past the Wall" instead of "passed"...

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14th Mar 2016, 11:44 PM

HeSerpenty

Aw man, thank you so much! Truly that really made me feel better to read this comment as I hate not updating on time X'D

Lolol and you know what I struggled with "Passed" or "past" for a while....even tried to look it up but google just wasn't clear :P. I'll take your word for it tho! *changed* :D

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18th Mar 2016, 1:13 PM

sigpig

Just don't get me started on "there, their, and they're"... lol

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20th Mar 2016, 12:34 AM

HeSerpenty

The one that gets me all the time is the "two, to, too" X'D.....

11th Mar 2016, 1:05 PM

Visvires

A real pity Kalverick wasn't guarding the girl personally. Oh well, at least this way his death is more likely to be on-panel. Maybe he'll deliver his skin to the humans himself.

I'm not seeing going after the girl at her village as a smart foreign policy move. Apparently someone who doesn't know where they are can find them in under a day of wandering around, so its simply a question of motivation. If it gets back that they're creepy and kill interlopers, they can play up their strength and convince the King to respect their borders. It need only be not worth the casualties to attack the wall, and their skins don't look very appealing. If it gets back that they're hunting down people in human territory, that's going to be a mandatory war.

P.S. <3 Tee hee.

Edit: Oh, and right now the girl might be the crazy woman who ran out into the forest, watched her fiance die to mundane forest hazards, snapped, and is now ranting about snake people. Until a snake person shows up and proves her story.

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14th Mar 2016, 11:47 PM

HeSerpenty

Haha indeed.... Kal guarding her personally would NOT have helped the situation x'D. LOL so morbid!

Ah well see that's assuming Kal intends to be public about it :3. Thus far it seems the Council's 'foreign policy' is kill or capture outsiders that stumble upon the wall and don't let the humans know they really exist X'D. Hmm come to think of it... that's STILL a bad foreign policy :'D

LOL! It is funny you should say that about Shera! Afterall.. from the prologue we learn people think her grandfather is crazy for believing in Serpents :3.........

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11th Mar 2016, 2:27 PM

MST3KFan

Take however much time you need to complete things, Serpy. Your art is awesome as it is.

In terms of what's going on in the comic... I get the feeling we're heading towards a possible war with the humans here.

I mean, why go after the girl at this point!? She's probably back with the humans and telling them of the stuff she went through and all that...so I'd guess they're preparing for possible attack.

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14th Mar 2016, 11:49 PM

HeSerpenty

Thank you MST3K! You guys are the best, seriously <333

Hmmm a possible war brewing..........it does sound rather plausible :3
HOPEfully for the Serpents' sake everyone just think she went crazy! :"D

11th Mar 2016, 3:23 PM

PearOfDiscord

Please don't worry about the unfinished page! I'm always amazed at how much detail you cram into just one page, and it must take absolutely forever.

Aaand exit Merek, having Aragorn-ed the door. I feel awful for him, especially now that he has the horrible duty of feeding Zak's family the council lie. That Merek's guys fixed the bars and got away safely is a huge relief though!

The serpent-form trackers are really neat, although I wonder why the Council is OK with serpent-form under their command, but lock up a kid for partial serpent-ness (hypocrites). There's no basis for this, but I wonder if it is possible to get stuck in serpent form, and that's what the trackers are or whether you can induce permanent serpent transformation as a punishment/silencing. Serpent form people are obviously looked down on if I remember correctly and I don't think they can normally talk.

Wow, Kal's actually landing in hot water a bit! (I probably enjoy it more than I should...) The mention of the human King is really doing weird things for my perspective, now that the council isn't the only threat on the horizon. I wonder whether the King's actively searching for the Serpent stronghold, or he'll only take action if word of Jonathan and Shera's treatment gets back to him. Dang it, I want to know so much more!

As for the imminent future, I see Kalavarik receiving an extremely hostile "welcome" from Shera's village. Her threat to Hizruk about getting rid of Serpents is almost certainly no joke. I don't know whether Kalavarik will just run or fight back, starting the kind of incident that gets the Kind involved, or even just get killed by a bunch of angry villagers. A girl can dream though.. XD

14th Mar 2016, 7:06 PM

Visvires

I thought those were serpent dogs. Kind of like they have serpent...horses?...to pull things.

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14th Mar 2016, 11:55 PM

HeSerpenty

Lolol they pretty much are...................except they are the same species as them only completely feral X'D. I'll try to get an info sheet ready for next page!

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14th Mar 2016, 11:55 PM

HeSerpenty

Thanks so much, my friend! Yea normally I get a system going for these pages that help me finish on time but last week was just impossible X"D. You guys were so gracious tho!

I had to have SOMEthing go right, here X"D--- I'd like to keep Wex, Barron, and Ryder around for a bit longer. I like those guys :'D lolol

Yesss the trackers are indeed kinda a weird thing they got going on here. They're completely feral and raised to be so (I'm gonna write up an info piece and probably share it with next page!)-- they are treated and behave exactly like regular animals. Also kinda used as an example to regular serpents >__>

Yea had to get Kal in a little hot water! He's not in the clear just yet. Gonna have some interesting times in the human village :3. As of right now... humans see serpents as an old myth or legend.............. for their sake it'd be good for it to STAY like that :'D

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11th Mar 2016, 7:12 PM

rufiangel

Oh boy, this is getting crazyyyyy @_@ and I love seeing just the inks, Serps, it helps us see the progression of your work in a cool way :D <3

Also that Wex panel with tee-hee-ing Barron is just adorable XDDD

I think Kal is going to have to go; that girl is goooone. Now *that* should be interesting... *imagines Kal putting in false teeth to cover the fangs* XD

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14th Mar 2016, 11:57 PM

HeSerpenty

Thank you Rufi! I try not to let it happen too often where I update just a WIP buuut sometimes ya just have no choice.

Lolol I kinda wanted to break the seriousness juuuust a lil bit with that giggling barron-- hope it helped!

Hahaha Kal in human village will be fun times....fun times for all! :3

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15th Mar 2016, 12:31 AM

rufiangel

Kyaaah <333 it looks so pretty with colour now! X3 <333

And it'd BETTER be fun, Serpy. FUN LIKE GOOD TIMES FUN NOT EVERYTHING ON FIRE FUN OKAY :'DDD

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15th Mar 2016, 9:25 AM

HeSerpenty

LOL Rufi.. I dunno if there is a difference in my book! ;D lolol

And thank you so much <333

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12th Mar 2016, 2:39 AM

gideonland

Love the scene jump seeing the bars fixed and the guys giggling about what they've done. Lets stay one step ahead of the Umbra.
Let's hope the humans catch Kal and give him the same kind of welcome that he gave the humans here.

& we're here whether it's a full-color page or a black and white. Take your time.
This page looks very nice either way.

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15th Mar 2016, 10:12 AM

HeSerpenty

Thank you so much <33... it's so awesome to know you guys have my back if I can't make it on time :'D

Yea of everything them fixing those bars on time and not getting caught is one good thing that has happened all day! Perhaps the ONLY good thing X'D

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12th Mar 2016, 3:39 AM

Matt Knab

He going to the human village, and it's all super idyllic and they treat him to all sorts of awesome country food, and HE HAS A COMPLETE CHANGE OF HEART.
Maybe.
>.>

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15th Mar 2016, 10:12 AM

HeSerpenty

Dude, Matt! Don't be guessin' my whole story up in here! XD

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12th Mar 2016, 8:40 AM

Proxy170

Hmmm this page really adds to the grey side of things. The Council is right to be just as mad at Kal, and is Kal really doing something...somewhat selfless looking? I feel he has other intentions...

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15th Mar 2016, 10:13 AM

HeSerpenty

Kal always looks out for himself! He probably realizes how deep of doo-doo he's in right now XDDD---someone needs to earn some brownie points back! :'D

Those pesky grey areas :'D

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12th Mar 2016, 1:42 PM

ProfEtheric

It would be just TERRIBLE if something happened to good ol' Kal there in the human lands... :P

(It would especially be terrible if something happened ON THE WAY to the human lands hint hint...)

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15th Mar 2016, 10:14 AM

HeSerpenty

LOL Prof!
Nothing bad EVER happens in this comic.... c'mon man ;)

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12th Mar 2016, 11:41 PM

Blissarda

Good luck on the page, HeSerpenty!

I really hope those humans find out who he is and kill him horribly.

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15th Mar 2016, 10:14 AM

HeSerpenty

Thank you very much! I managed to get it done at last XDD

Yeea that would be nice, huh? X'D

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14th Mar 2016, 9:37 AM

Dollipop

The outline is outstanding, if I do say so myself. :D

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15th Mar 2016, 10:15 AM

HeSerpenty

Aw thank u! BUT I am glad to have it finished now x''D

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14th Mar 2016, 6:05 PM

alston123

Ok. So, we learn a lot about the interactions between the serpents and the humans on this page. We already know that they are willing to capture and kill humans if they show up, and that's probably because they don't want the humans to know that they exist. Are they afraid or do they just want to stay to themselves? Hmmmm....I guess only time will tell...unless there is something that I am missing that was already revealed about their history....:P

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15th Mar 2016, 10:17 AM

HeSerpenty

Hehe well.. its somewhat been established that the general serpent population is pretty scared of humans--- they are conditioned to be this way. However.... I'm sure the COUNCIL has ulterior motives for wanting to keep humans at bay! Afterall.... in the very beginning Jonathan talked about a rumor of tons of gold in the Black Mountains---- we all know how humans act over money XDD. Ah but I said too much! Indeed...time will tell!

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15th Mar 2016, 6:40 PM

junoro

OH NO I hate Kalverick but I don't want him to mess everything up even more! He's totally going to get found out! My worst-possible-thing senses are tingling!

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16th Mar 2016, 1:06 AM

HeSerpenty

Lolol omg Jun, you're acting like bad things happen a lot in this comic or something! PSH!

O wait........... :O

Lolol <33

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15th Mar 2016, 7:11 PM

Alicia

Pssst... This shading with the amazing lighting you got going on it GREAT! <3 Just thought I'd share that. >_>

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16th Mar 2016, 1:07 AM

HeSerpenty

Aww thanks so much, buddy! <:')

(It took me way too long to finish this omg X'D lolol)

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15th Mar 2016, 10:40 PM

Centcomm

Ok this page is full of win and not win!

YAY for getting the bars fixed! I hope mister dumbsh-t gets cut to ribbons by someone very cool use of tracking serpents..
Smart too consider a snakes sense of smell.


Great page!

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16th Mar 2016, 1:10 AM

HeSerpenty

LOL thank you Centy! Hahahaha Mister Dumbsh*t's journey the human village will be....pretty interesting! I am eager to get to it :3

Yesss I am excited to share more about the tracking serpents! I think all the Serpenties forget about their heightened senses....living in their human forms full time n whatnot. Not THESE guys! >__>

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15th Mar 2016, 11:28 PM

CiciEnixa

First off, that Kal face at panel 3 XD I don't know why but it amuses me greatly.

Second, LOL guys, don't just stand there and giggle while the guards look at your handiwork, you might get caught XDDD (awesome job, though, giggle-fest well deserved)

And third... Kal, I hope you trip on your first step to the outside world XD

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18th Mar 2016, 12:11 PM

HeSerpenty

Lolol it's his "ah crud I'm in trouble too" face XDD

We needed gigglin' or SOMEthing to lighten the mood around here!

LOL.... *imagines Kal literally tripping on his first step out of the wall* XDD

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16th Mar 2016, 11:11 AM

DLKmusic

All of this drama, and the thing I find most surprising?

Kal knows two people he can trust...

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18th Mar 2016, 12:12 PM

HeSerpenty

Hahaha I know right? Who woulda thought? Must mean we're gonna meet a coupla not great people comin' up here soon XDD

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18th Mar 2016, 1:23 PM

Chris the Blue

Barron is still awesome at everything.
In fact, he should be the new head of the counsel.
I'd vote for him.

#MakeEvilSnakeCounselGreatAgain!

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20th Mar 2016, 12:38 AM

HeSerpenty

Lolol!! Wait.. I'm wondering now if you REALLY like Barron or if this is just some sorta funny sarcastic joke ya got going on hahahaha XDD. Either way I am greatly amused <3

#ogod.Iseewhatyoudidthere XDD

(btw somehow my latest page had been updated twice aand I had to delete the second one and ur comment was on that one. So I just wanted to thank you for your comment here and acknowledge it since it no longer exists T__T. So thank you!)

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20th Mar 2016, 5:14 AM

Chris the Blue

Y'know... I think it was sarcastic at first, but it has gotten to the point where I liked him ironically so much that I actually started to genuinely like him.

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20th Mar 2016, 10:18 AM

HeSerpenty

Lolol! That is pretty awesome <3
Awww Barron could really use some genuine fans <333- he's pretty much one of the top 3 nicest guys IN this comic! XD

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20th Mar 2016, 11:28 AM

Chris the Blue

He deserves a spin off. Serafine got one.

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20th Mar 2016, 12:34 PM

HeSerpenty

Hahahaha he deserves it WAY more than Serafine!

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10th Jun 2016, 8:01 AM

Damatris

Aww, those tree are so proud of themselves. :)

...Somehow I think they won't be so cheerful for much longer.

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10th Jun 2016, 9:23 AM

HeSerpenty

Lol..indeed they are X'D

Yea things aren't gonna be going too well for them either here soon lol :'D

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