Chapter 4.32-- Make My Day

posted 26th Feb 2016, 10:00 AM

Chapter 4.32-- Make My Day
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view HeSerpenty's profile

26th Feb 2016, 10:00 AM


Merek and company suspended? Oh noes! :'(

Also! Unnamed Civilian affectionately called Baldy by myself and so many readers....has been assigned a name courtesy of CiciEnixa. Zakluc, aka "Old Man Zak"

"RIP Old Man Zak. Your only crime was you talked almost as much as you loved" ---- paraphrased quote from Cici

Well, since the pages lately are kinda downers :'D..... uuh.. There's some really lovely things by nice lovely people to look at!

Totally awesome Hizruk Transformation by Undeadloaf


A very sweet Mirabe and Ryder by Alicia

view Alicia's profile

26th Feb 2016, 10:05 AM


AH! So much sadness! Why we always hurting our own characters, Serpy? WHY? XD

Becauseitmakesforgoodstorythat'swhy. :'D

view HeSerpenty's profile

26th Feb 2016, 1:32 PM


Uh , uh I'M not hurting them....they're hurting EACH OTHER! Yea! :'D


view Seabiscuit's profile

26th Feb 2016, 10:58 AM


So he did get Merek!
Not as bad but...Ouch.:(
And grabbing it and...OUCH

It's time to rebel and wrekt some fools D:

view HeSerpenty's profile

26th Feb 2016, 1:33 PM


He did! Just a bit, but I'm sure he'll feel it more a bit later. Right now he's just an angry bear D:

I couldn't agree more!

view ProfEtheric's profile

26th Feb 2016, 11:55 AM


Wow... Merek is HARD CORE!

This is really not looking so good for him. I am REALLY beginning to hate Kalverick AND the council here...

view HeSerpenty's profile

26th Feb 2016, 1:34 PM


HE IS! Lololol...especially when he's reeeally really blindingly angry X'D

Yeeaaaa I suspect the hate-club to be ever growing for these guys! :'D

view alston123's profile

26th Feb 2016, 1:27 PM


Ugh. Yes, I have a question: Why do you all hate freedom? :/

view HeSerpenty's profile

26th Feb 2016, 1:34 PM


Ohh the Council LOOoves freedom! For themselves XD.

Sadly.. in order for THEM to live content and happy lives... they have to squish the peoples X'D

view JammyTheBirb's profile

26th Feb 2016, 3:26 PM


Nuuuuuu Old Man Zak!!! Grr, Kalverick is a meaniepants gitface.

view HeSerpenty's profile

27th Feb 2016, 2:53 AM


LOL that is a perfect way to describe Kal <33

view MST3KFan's profile

26th Feb 2016, 5:25 PM


Welp. The hate club for the Council continues to grow here. Definitely doing themselves any favors here.

view HeSerpenty's profile

27th Feb 2016, 2:54 AM


I should say not! The times be changing for a lot of people soon here, I think! Hehe

view Centcomm's profile

26th Feb 2016, 5:26 PM


Wow .. that was brutal. Nicely done. I think things are going to go a bit sideways here.

view HeSerpenty's profile

27th Feb 2016, 2:54 AM


I think you could be right!
And thanks Centy! <3

view Xylas_Incarnum's profile

26th Feb 2016, 5:48 PM


*sniff* *sniff* I do believe I smell revolution brewing.

Lads! start making the Molotov cocktails! Modify the pitchforks and make get some long handled hammers! Show time.

26th Feb 2016, 6:45 PM


Well the resident blacksmith's already in on the cause...

view HeSerpenty's profile

28th Feb 2016, 1:01 AM


You got that right! :D

view HeSerpenty's profile

28th Feb 2016, 1:00 AM


Lolol I'm smellin' it too! It's long overdue xDD

view JayyLyn's profile

26th Feb 2016, 6:23 PM


Sqwoosh his head, Merek!! >:O sqwoosh it like a GRAPE!! Kal, you mook. You will be treated unkindly in my sketchbook doodles. >_> no mercy for doodle-Kal. >:(

the tensionnn!!! :O

view HeSerpenty's profile

28th Feb 2016, 1:03 AM


LOL... if ever you do fill up a doodle page of abusing Kal... I would very much love to see what that looks like <333 lololol (especially if it turns out anything like those Daggot masterpieces! XDD)

There is indeed SO much tension X'D---Hopefully Merek won't do anything stupid!

26th Feb 2016, 6:45 PM


This is an AWESOME page! I love, love the dialogue between Merek and Kal, especially the sword-grabbing bit at the end (merek, you'll hurt your haaaands).

This is probably Umbra politics, but I wonder how Demas is going to explain obviously favoring Kalavarik this way to the other members of the council. It doesn't seem likely that someone as powerful and jerky as Kal doesn't have enemies/rivals within his own group. Also, just what is Merek's "history" alluded to a couple pages ago (probably Keymen/Kal falling-out related, but I want to KNOW dangit!)?

And "taking up the civilian front?" With Gwynn on warpath? Nooo, that's going to be awful! Not to mention that the investigation is probably going to uncover Wex, Barron and Ryder's involvement. I really hope nothing happens to any of them.

view HeSerpenty's profile

28th Feb 2016, 2:33 AM


Ee thank you so much!! I'm always pretty excited for Kalverick's actual interactions with the main cast--- I CANNOT WAIT for a certain interaction with a certain other character <333

It's pretty clear to most everyone that Kalverick is the Council's "golden boy" X'D.... that's why no one really crosses him, I'd say. Merek does have quite a uh.. history X"D... lolol but I promise we will get into it soon enough! I'm excited for that story :D :D

Yeeeaaa especially considering how THIS civilian was just handled..... none of this can be considered a good thing :'D

view CiciEnixa's profile

26th Feb 2016, 9:03 PM


Poor Zak, so sweet, so gentle. You did not deserve this fate. :,(

view HeSerpenty's profile

28th Feb 2016, 2:38 AM


Indeed..... I should build a nice little shrine for Old Man Zak :'(

And Jonathan while I'm at it. Two unjust deaths courtesy of the Counci (and Kalverick) XD

view azureXtwilight's profile

27th Feb 2016, 12:01 AM


He doesn't really deserve this, and Merek doesn't deserve this either. The council and Kal needs some intervention. And now!

view HeSerpenty's profile

28th Feb 2016, 10:04 PM


So much injustice happening all at once! Hmmm I'm not sure if an intervention would work :'D lolol

27th Feb 2016, 12:44 AM


And here's the official declaration of martial law. These guys are asking for it now. No going back for them.
Let's see I've got the old styrofoam cups and the gasoline for the napalm, and I've got a bunch of old aluminum cans and a metal grinder. Now I need all the rusty tools we can find so I can sand them and collect the powdered rust. Then we're good for thermite. We'll also need a lot of saltpeter and charcoal. Sulfur would be nice but it isn't absolutely necessary.

27th Feb 2016, 8:43 PM


Trust me I'm a pyro.

view HeSerpenty's profile

28th Feb 2016, 10:06 PM


Hahaha I was thinking you sound like you know what you're talking about!!

Yea the Council is losing it I think! They can only run a nation this way for so long before it all comes back to bite ya in the end XDD

view Mel Cormac's profile

27th Feb 2016, 4:34 AM

Mel Cormac

This is probably the wrong time to notice it, but Merek is looking particularly handsome lately. I'll just slink off back into my corner.

Seriously though, Merek is made of tough stuff to barely even react to being PIERCED IN THE STERNUM WITH A SWORD, like "damn it there are more important things to worry about than this chest wound, I'm fine!" Damn, Merek, you're at risk of taking Hizzy's place as my favourite character. Right now they're about tied.

view HeSerpenty's profile

28th Feb 2016, 10:09 PM


Hehehe there is NEVER a wrong time to notice it <33333
Thank you so much!
It's kinda funny how rage can make physical pain feel... less lol. I'm sure he'll feel it more when all is said and done (especially grabbing that sword :'D). I remember when I was younger I'd squeeze my arm as hard as I could with my nails when I got REALLY mad lol.............aaand now I'm rambling X'D. *slinks back into MY corner* lolol

I'm reeeally happy you like him tho! AND Hizzy! They are two of my own personal favs <33. I'm really excited for the next interaction between those two :D

view Mel Cormac's profile

29th Feb 2016, 2:41 AM

Mel Cormac

Ohhhh I sense Hizzy is getting a telling off when next they meet, that boy is in TROUBLE.

view HeSerpenty's profile

29th Feb 2016, 10:48 AM


Lololol he IS.... he really is X'D

And you are probably on the right track ;D

view Dodom's profile

27th Feb 2016, 9:09 AM


Nooooo don't catch the sword, you can't strangle a bastard with severed tendons!!!

view HeSerpenty's profile

28th Feb 2016, 10:10 PM


That is a REALLY good point....
Maybe his hands are big enough so that he only needs one to strangle? X"D


view Slim Kittens's profile

27th Feb 2016, 11:26 AM

Slim Kittens

Serpy: "Hi everyone. My name is Serpy and I'm a serial character abuser."
Group: "Hi, Serpy."

view HeSerpenty's profile

29th Feb 2016, 10:43 AM


LOL haaay! I'm not any worse than anyone ELSE around who's not doing a gag-a-day or or lighthearted comedy genre x"D

EVERYone is mean to they characteeers :'D

view gideonland's profile

27th Feb 2016, 6:43 PM


Merek: "Yeah, I have a question: where do I resign?"

view HeSerpenty's profile

29th Feb 2016, 10:44 AM


Lololol no kidding!

view Blissarda's profile

27th Feb 2016, 8:53 PM


It is amazing how Merek can take that blow and that's the last thing on his mind.

view HeSerpenty's profile

29th Feb 2016, 10:44 AM


Indeed! I guess rage has a way of dulling pain-- at least for a little while XDD

view Jarvi's profile

28th Feb 2016, 1:17 AM


That evil laughter when he killed poor baldy guy... (what do my daughters have against baldy guys, why do you murder them? xD)

view HeSerpenty's profile

29th Feb 2016, 10:45 AM


Omg I had totally forgotten about Cici's bald guy too! X"D
Hay at least mine has hs eyes! :'D

(and probably bad parenting, Dad >___>) lolol

view Matt Knab's profile

28th Feb 2016, 7:58 AM

Matt Knab

Oh hey, that means his regiment will be off duty and available to join the REVOLT! XD

view HeSerpenty's profile

29th Feb 2016, 10:45 AM


Hahaha dang skippy!

28th Feb 2016, 3:40 PM


....I did expect this. But, not like this. . . Ugh.
Nice to know he had a name. Poor Old Man Zak. Is he realy as old as he is named? I thought he was 35-ish.
And Keymen will have a fit now. First Hizruk, now Merek. Orz.

view HeSerpenty's profile

29th Feb 2016, 10:47 AM


You know I never really intended for him to be "old' XDD.... but everyone kept calling him an old man so I went with it :'D

Lolol Keymen will be a busy guy having to look after these two! Merek with his temper and Hizruk with..............being Hizruk lolol

view rufiangel's profile

28th Feb 2016, 5:45 PM


All I can say is I am REALLY looking forward to the moment the council and Kal realise that it was one of Kal's loose-lipped buffoons that let slip the news about the extra human at the bar, though I can't say that buffoon is going to be in good shape afterwards if Kal gets his hands on him... :'D

view HeSerpenty's profile

29th Feb 2016, 10:49 AM


I know, right? PUtting Merek through all this XD...sealing their fates. AAAH yes...the buffoon would NOT fare well if Kalverick found out who it was loloool XDD

view Outlaw's profile

28th Feb 2016, 8:20 PM


Poor Merek....
Holding himself back and not kicking his snakey ass must require some serious willpower.

Can't wait to see Merek get his shot at this A-hole.

view HeSerpenty's profile

29th Feb 2016, 10:50 AM


You're absolutely right! It's probably more painful to hold back right now than that wound on his chest and on his hand XDDD

I think a fight between Merek and Kal would be really fun to watch XDD..:3

view DLKmusic's profile

2nd Mar 2016, 3:10 AM


sorry for posting so late, took a while to put what I had to say in words.

I'm actually disappointed in the council here. The intelligent thing to be doing is spend energy and resources finding the missing prisoner, rather than finding a scapegoat to cover the ass of an incompetent officer. To further aggrevate things, they confirmed everything to Merek by admitting they lost a prisoner that no-one knew about.

Kal had already been warned by the council of the consequences of something happening to that prisoner. It seems that warning is being ignored.

Other than being the Council's attack dog, maybe there's something about Kalverick that we don't know that makes the council afraid to move against him?

view HeSerpenty's profile

4th Mar 2016, 9:48 AM


It really does seem like they're losing it, huh? With the way they've built their little empire... I guess it comes with a sort of expiration date-- it's probably one of those "in trying to prevent, you CAUSE it" type of scenarios haha. Buuuut what you mentioned will be addressed in..well.. not next page but the page after X'D.

There is no doubt that they are handling this the wrong way aaand that Kalverick seems to get off really easy here :'D. He's uh..very special to them X"D................. but that sounds a lot nicer than it really is lolol.

view TheD-Wrek's profile

2nd Mar 2016, 3:07 PM


Kal you evil bastard!


Just how I like my characters. X)

view HeSerpenty's profile

4th Mar 2016, 9:49 AM



Are you tryin' to tell me that you are starting to like Kalverick?!?! :O

view Proxy170's profile

10th Mar 2016, 1:56 PM


Ugh, the way you drew Kal just makes me want to punch his face even more!! (this is a compliment, seriously) I feel like he was wishing the sword went deeper...Merek must have so much adrenaline right now if he just grabbed the sword like that.

view HeSerpenty's profile

11th Mar 2016, 11:47 AM


You know I feel like if people wanna punch Kal in the face after reading this page.. it IS a win for me! haha

And you're definitely right, Merek has some serious rage-fueled adrenaline going on!

view Chris the Blue's profile

18th Mar 2016, 1:18 PM

Chris the Blue

Guys, I kinda don't like Kal.

view HeSerpenty's profile

20th Mar 2016, 12:44 AM


What?!?!! How can this be?? he's like THE most likable character!


view Damatris's profile

10th Jun 2016, 7:59 AM



(Awesome looking page Serpy! <3)

view HeSerpenty's profile

10th Jun 2016, 9:23 AM



And thank u so muuuch! <3333

view HapyCow's profile

6th Aug 2016, 9:55 PM


Oh my God Merek's face!!! :0 He looks SOOOO pissed! Well shit. I'm pissed too! Stupid council..and Kal! Grr! What a great page!

view HeSerpenty's profile

6th Aug 2016, 11:44 PM


HAPY! <333
YEeeeeaaaaa he IS SOOOOOOO pissed x"D. The Council AND Kalverick needto get what's coming to them X"D

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