Chapter 4.29-- Civilian Gossip

posted 5th Feb 2016, 10:00 AM

Chapter 4.29-- Civilian Gossip
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view HeSerpenty's profile

5th Feb 2016, 10:00 AM


"Missing CHILD"................ well, he's not lying! Missing Hizruk.. missing child-- same difference! X'D

Uhh oh what's going on here? How is Kal gonna try to pin this on Merek? O__o;;;
Stay tuned to find out!


Speaking of Hizruk...I have gotten two lovely portraits of him over the last coupla weeks!! You should check em' out and follow the links to the wonderful artists who made them <33

Manga Hizruk by Dreamfollower


Realistic Hizruk by Ten Penny Officer

Last but not least, I finally updated my TWC voting incentive! So vote if you wanna see Hizruk's fun new scar, courtesy of the Baliath X'D

view Alicia's profile

5th Feb 2016, 10:07 AM



Man, tense situations like these have me all riled up. X3 Merek, you'd better figure a way outta this one FAST!

view HeSerpenty's profile

5th Feb 2016, 7:29 PM


Riled up is what I'm hoping for! Lol sounds like some things must have been twisted around... uuhhh hopefully they'll work themselves out X"D

view Dollipop's profile

5th Feb 2016, 10:32 AM


Ohhh I LIKE THE LIGHTING!!!! Tension build is awesome :D!

view HeSerpenty's profile

5th Feb 2016, 7:54 PM


Thank you so much!! Yea things are spiraling kinda downward XDD
the lighting on these pages takes me a while X"D

view Seabiscuit's profile

5th Feb 2016, 11:40 AM


Ohhh no that last panel

Uhhh ohhhh D:

view HeSerpenty's profile

5th Feb 2016, 7:55 PM


Uh oh yes.. indeed X"D

view MST3KFan's profile

5th Feb 2016, 1:47 PM


I'm going to guess the bald guy from earlier is being brought in...

Still, how this could be pinned on Merek...

Geez, Serpy. You seriously got me sitting on the edge of my seat here with things.

*casually slides back into seat to avoid falling and hitting the floor*

view HeSerpenty's profile

5th Feb 2016, 7:56 PM


That is a good guess! It will be interesting to see how Kal can pin it on Merek.. I suppose we'll find out in the next coupla pages!

And thank you so much! It really means a lot to me to know that people are excited to see what happens next! <333 *puts a pillow on the floor juuust in case u fall anyway XDD*

view alston123's profile

5th Feb 2016, 1:49 PM


Hehe. Missing child? Nice. ;P
Those bricks are so pretty, Serpy! ;D

view HeSerpenty's profile

5th Feb 2016, 7:58 PM


Hahaha he's not lying! Sorta XDD

And thanks so much! These bricky pages are pretty tedious at times.. I'm glad they look good! <33

view Matt Knab's profile

5th Feb 2016, 2:31 PM

Matt Knab

Uh oh, surprise witness!

view HeSerpenty's profile

5th Feb 2016, 7:58 PM


Complicates everything!!

5th Feb 2016, 3:03 PM


*slow clap for Merek's quick thinking* Now THAT was a good save! He probably has plenty of buddies with/knowing kids who could verify that for him. Heck, Mara would be happy to pitch in with Tael if it came to that.

The angles on this page are really well done! Demas looks menacing and loom-y since we get Merek's eye-level in panel 5. And the fact we only get to see the witness's feet is evil, now that we have to wait another week! :)

As to who the witness is, I'm going to go with baldy, although someone else wouln't surprise me. Wex was my first (worrying) guess, but he wears boots, and the dialogue doesn't sound likely for him. The only other person who could be incriminating and is likely to sound like that is that umbra recruit waaay back on 3.26, since he was the one who gave the information at Hoke's away in the first place.

view HeSerpenty's profile

5th Feb 2016, 8:13 PM


Lololol he redeemed himself for that dunce moment last page XDD. And its good to know Mara is willing to play along should he need it XDD... perhaps i'll keep that in mind ;D

And thank you!! Sometimes pages where nothing is really happening except dialogue can be a challenge xD. I been looking forward to this scene for a while tho!

Hahaha I need a name for Baldy! O gosh if it was Wex.. poor Merek wouldn't know what to do with himself! Let's hope it's not the case! Thooough ur right..... those don't look like Wex's boots ;D
That Umbra from page 3.26 (AWEsome of you to find that reference <333).... heeee better HOPE Kalverick never finds out who he is :'D. All of this IS his fault XD

view Chris the Blue's profile

5th Feb 2016, 6:01 PM

Chris the Blue

Ooooo, I hope it's not Barron...

view HeSerpenty's profile

5th Feb 2016, 8:16 PM


That would be really bad X'D....Merek wouldn't know what to do with himself if THAT happened :'D

view azureXtwilight's profile

5th Feb 2016, 6:05 PM


Ooh, that is a nice save Merek! Also I am gonna agree with everyone and say that is definitely baldy~

view HeSerpenty's profile

5th Feb 2016, 8:17 PM


That is a really good guess on you and everyone's part :3

ANd yes Merek redeemed himself!!

view Centcomm's profile

5th Feb 2016, 6:17 PM


Awesome page serpent! And verrry smooth Merek ( He's one of my favorites ) something tells me this person is going to throw a huuuuge monkey wrench into the works ...

view HeSerpenty's profile

5th Feb 2016, 8:18 PM


Lolol that's Merek! Mr. Smooooth! Except for when he's not XD

And... I think you're probably right >___> XD

view DLKmusic's profile

5th Feb 2016, 7:54 PM


Keep your Cool, Merrick, Let Kalverick lose his... that's the way you win

view HeSerpenty's profile

5th Feb 2016, 8:27 PM


That's actually quite brilliant!! And a really good plan! Let's hope he doesn't get pushed over the edge before this happens! :'D

view DLKmusic's profile

5th Feb 2016, 10:32 PM


BTW, Odds are that it's the bald guy, but there's a good chance that it could also be Nisha that Kalverick dragged in... and that would suck big time.

view HeSerpenty's profile

6th Feb 2016, 2:51 AM


O gosh X'D.. yea... that is another possibility for sure. WhoEVER it is.. it's not lookin like a good situation for them! D:

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5th Feb 2016, 11:52 PM



view HeSerpenty's profile

6th Feb 2016, 2:52 AM



O dear... looks like things aren't looking good for ANYone here now X'D.....even Kal!

view ProfEtheric's profile

6th Feb 2016, 1:30 AM


Whoa oh...

One: I bow to your superior lighting. Awesome.

Two: oh wow. So amped for the next page!

view HeSerpenty's profile

6th Feb 2016, 2:53 AM


Thank you so much, Prof!!! I really worked hard on it :'D
I think I found a system that'll work tho finally!

And YAY! I hoped people would be into this scene! <33

view rufiangel's profile

6th Feb 2016, 5:20 AM


Great page, Serpy-kins! <3 A dangerous 'rumour'? Feh. More like THE TRUTH HAS LEAKED OUT, SUCKA! Now you guys gotta deal with it and do all the damage control, and yappin' with Merek ain't gonna do no trick! :P

Gotta say, I'm not looking forward to seeing what Kal did to the poor old man... :< This isn't going to be pretty...

view HeSerpenty's profile

6th Feb 2016, 11:23 AM


Thank you Rufiii!! LOL and you're right about that! The Council can never be outright honest about ANYthing can they? Lolol

I knoow... Kal is a monster X'D. Just remember....sometimes things get upsetting around these parts! *buys chocolate bars ahead of time to give everybody* :'D

view Jarvi's profile

6th Feb 2016, 11:18 AM


Hahah good way out of this one Merek. Missing child(Hizruk) ;D
Hmmm.. I guess what baldy has to do with Merek, why is he an argument in this conversation?

view HeSerpenty's profile

6th Feb 2016, 11:33 AM


Hahaha he made up for his little moment of "duuh" last page XDD

And we shall come to find out I suppose! This particular group of vilains has a remarkable way of turning things around :'D

view Blissarda's profile

6th Feb 2016, 6:47 PM


The lighting in this room is so well done. Amazing work!

view HeSerpenty's profile

6th Feb 2016, 11:34 PM


Thank you so much!!! I think I'm finally starting to work out a system for this lighting thing X"D


view junoro's profile

7th Feb 2016, 12:45 AM


UM... This isn't okay?? I need some flowers and sunshine, NOW, not Merek getting politically outmanoeuvred and people getting beat up! I need to keep reminding myself not to grit my teeth, the tension's so high!

view HeSerpenty's profile

8th Feb 2016, 4:36 AM


*gives junoro flowers AND sunshine immediately! and chocolate and more flowers and sunshine and some adorable baby animals cuz..we may or may not be needing it pretty soon X'D*

I want to apologize for how you're feeliiiing, yeeeet.... it's kinda what I'm going fooor? <:'D
Things are definitely spiraling downward...THAT is for sure :')

view Outlaw's profile

7th Feb 2016, 4:56 PM


Oh, man!
That's one HECK of a way to end a page! I literally was like "SNAP!" as a finished reading.

Great work, my friend!

view HeSerpenty's profile

8th Feb 2016, 4:38 AM


Thank you so much! I'm very glad that it came out suspenseful which is how I wanted it <333
Things aren't lookin too good at the moment, are they? :"D

view gideonland's profile

10th Feb 2016, 1:28 AM


See. On his toes, like I said. ''Missing child"? Classic.
Kal is bringing in the guy HE beat up? What's the angle...

view HeSerpenty's profile

12th Feb 2016, 11:12 AM


Lolol he's smarter than people think!

Indeed.. how's he gonna turn this around? Everything that has happened is literally a result of HIS people screwing up (and Hizruk XD)...

view Proxy170's profile

11th Feb 2016, 10:45 AM


I think this page really shows how awesome your character design is. Merek and Kalverick have such different faces and body types, and they fit their personalities so well. Not many authors on CF have characters as unique in styling as yours!

And I am curious how revealing this gossip helps Kalverick...because then he'll have to address the fact they were hiding a human?? I'm sure the sneaky bastard has something up his sleeve and I' don't like it... >.>

view HeSerpenty's profile

12th Feb 2016, 6:07 PM


Proxyyy this is such a wonderful compliment, thank you!!!! The characters,, I think.. or I want...definitely carry this thing, so it's REALLY nice to hear when they're pulled off <3

Kal has so very many things up his sleeve all the time! Just about all of them deadly :'D
We'll have to just hope that Merek is smarter than they think he is!

view WitUnderPressure's profile

12th Feb 2016, 9:10 AM


You purposely positioned Merek in front of that banner, didn't you...?

view HeSerpenty's profile

12th Feb 2016, 6:08 PM


Lolol well I mean.. to be fair ITS right in front of the person Merek is talking to, soo X'D lolol

But yes.. yes, it was purposeful :P

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