Chapter 4.28-- Where Have You Been?

posted 29th Jan 2016, 11:30 PM

Chapter 4.28-- Where Have You Been?
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view HeSerpenty's profile

29th Jan 2016, 11:30 PM

HeSerpenty

*face palms Merek at Panel 12* X'D
Well this isn't starting off well :'P

Let's hope he redeems himself next page

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It's not midnight yet! I still made it! I was gone literally ALL DAY........ else the page woulda been up HOURS ago :P

Thank you for your patience!!

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Plan to have a new incentive up by next week!


view Alicia's profile

29th Jan 2016, 11:33 PM

Alicia

Wuh oh! Merek is in trouble me thinks. D: How's he gonna get out of this one?

I love those highlights in the character's eyes from that fire btw! <3

view HeSerpenty's profile

30th Jan 2016, 1:58 AM

HeSerpenty

Hopefully by wising up by the next page and not looking like such an idiot? X'D

And thanks man!! <333

view junoro's profile

29th Jan 2016, 11:42 PM

junoro

That panel where the important looking person raises their hand to silence Merek is really cool! And Merek's reaction... is way less cool, haha. Try to be less suspicious, Merek!!

view HeSerpenty's profile

30th Jan 2016, 1:59 AM

HeSerpenty

LOL poor Merek X'D. Hay he can't ALWAYS be cool! :P

Seriously tho, hope he gets his act together by next page! To his defense.. he hasn't eaten or slept since Hizruk went missing.... :'D (justkiddingtherearenoexcuses)

view azureXtwilight's profile

29th Jan 2016, 11:48 PM

azureXtwilight

That is one badass councik room. Noe Merek's story telling skills are put to the test!

view HeSerpenty's profile

30th Jan 2016, 2:01 AM

HeSerpenty

Thank you so much! I hoped it would be impactful... or something X'D

It's time to test them lying skillz! Not a good start, buuut.. maybe he'll bring it back around :'D

view ProfEtheric's profile

29th Jan 2016, 11:50 PM

ProfEtheric

He's gonna need a smoke after this...

view HeSerpenty's profile

30th Jan 2016, 2:01 AM

HeSerpenty

AND a drink X'D

Yes... yes very much so lolol

view Vivocateur's profile

29th Jan 2016, 11:51 PM

Vivocateur

Ooo! I love the sinister council room. Very dramatic!

view HeSerpenty's profile

30th Jan 2016, 11:55 AM

HeSerpenty

Thank you so much! The Council has an affinity towards drama X'D

view Centcomm's profile

29th Jan 2016, 11:55 PM

Centcomm

Well .. crap. This has all the makings to be really really bad.

Fantastic backgrounds .. Really sets the mood!

view HeSerpenty's profile

30th Jan 2016, 11:55 AM

HeSerpenty

Yes it really does :'D
Merek better choose his words carefully the next couple of pages!

And thank you so much!! I really tried to make it moody <33

view Mel Cormac's profile

30th Jan 2016, 1:57 AM

Mel Cormac

Third panel... well THAT is ominous.

view HeSerpenty's profile

30th Jan 2016, 11:56 AM

HeSerpenty

Heheh... maybe just a wee bit :P

lolol

view CiciEnixa's profile

30th Jan 2016, 7:12 AM

CiciEnixa

The old council lady member going "where have you been?" reminds me of Molly Weasley in Chamber of Secrets yelling the exact same line XD Also do I sense the Fire Lord aura over there?

Merek, you better be quick on your feet there, lest you be doomed.

view HeSerpenty's profile

30th Jan 2016, 12:08 PM

HeSerpenty

LOL.... you mean old Council MAN? (with a soft jaw and stringy long hair X'D) lololol. I think someone else made a Harry Potter reference to that line somewhere! I'm afraid I do not know Harry Potter well enough to know this reference however :'D. Haha and yea, I realize it does kinda have a fire nation vibe, doesn't it? Hay its not MYYY fault the Council likes being underground where there is no natural lighting! :'D

view CiciEnixa's profile

30th Jan 2016, 4:17 PM

CiciEnixa

LOL he's a man?! Dangit, I've been saying old council lady in my mind all this time XD

view HeSerpenty's profile

30th Jan 2016, 10:39 PM

HeSerpenty

Lololol I suppose that is more a mistake on MY part X"D hahaha

view Slim Kittens's profile

30th Jan 2016, 7:42 AM

Slim Kittens

Busted! Remember Merek, the best lies contain a large amount of the truth. Just think of it as "creative narrating".

view HeSerpenty's profile

30th Jan 2016, 12:09 PM

HeSerpenty

That is so very true!! Let's hope he heard you X'D...

30th Jan 2016, 9:47 AM

PearOfDiscord

That is one imposing council chamber! I love the lighting and everything in panel 3 (although I was a derp and thought the fire/wall portion looked like a pizza oven XD).

My bad feeling from the last page has just gotten worse; even if Merek manages to lie to Demas (is that his name?) somehow, there's just no way that he could work out his story with Wex & co.

And Merek, could you be any MORE obvious about stalling for time? Go lie about chasing a drunk or an escaped lacor, literally ANYTHING where your command can vouch for you!

view HeSerpenty's profile

30th Jan 2016, 12:35 PM

HeSerpenty

Lolol EVIL PIZZA! THank you so much, I wanted it to be somewhat....affecting XD.
Yea there are so many things going on that could get so many people in trouble..... poor Merek is in a hard spot! And.. yea he's screwing it up a little bit right NOW, but.. i'm sure he'll bounce back! :'D

view Matt Knab's profile

30th Jan 2016, 1:22 PM

Matt Knab

The fire is a nice touch. Very cozy. Erm...I mean intimidating! I mean, ah, eheh...
No worries, Merek, just say you had some thoroughly embarrassing medical condition to take care of. ;)

view HeSerpenty's profile

30th Jan 2016, 10:41 PM

HeSerpenty

I suppose whether it is cozy or intimidating depends on who ya are! Like.. the Council probably finds it cozy X'D.......................... anyone else... probably intimidating! haha

That excuse could work! I mean Daggot is incapacitated and pooping his brains out right now.. .maybe there's a "bug" going around XDD

view Jarvi's profile

30th Jan 2016, 2:54 PM

Jarvi

"It's my... laundry day?" :D

God.. someone who was putting all those bricks together had a looooot of work in this place :D

view HeSerpenty's profile

30th Jan 2016, 10:43 PM

HeSerpenty

Hahaha I try not to think about how it mustve been to build this place x'D... it makes my head hurt!


view Blissarda's profile

30th Jan 2016, 3:57 PM

Blissarda

Saying he was knocked out drunk probably won't help, eh?

view HeSerpenty's profile

30th Jan 2016, 10:43 PM

HeSerpenty

Hahaha it maaay not help XD..... but it wouldn't be UNbelievable, sadly enough!

view MST3KFan's profile

30th Jan 2016, 4:55 PM

MST3KFan

Quick! Where's Phoenix Wright to help Merek out here?

Seriously, he looks like a deer in headlights. XP Better think of something plausible sounding.

view HeSerpenty's profile

30th Jan 2016, 10:44 PM

HeSerpenty

Hahaha yea he kinda dropped the ball a little bit on this page!!! Hopefully he'll redeem himself!

view gideonland's profile

30th Jan 2016, 9:16 PM

gideonland

Blame it on Kalverick somehow!

Seriously, LOVE this throne / council room. (I was gonna say fire nation too). Looks amazing! Not somewhere I would want to be, personally lol, but very nice design. Fits the creepy council vibe perfectly - where they discuss their schemes to make peoples' lives miserable.

Merek is always cool and has everything under control. Watch him handle this just like he's handled the TONS of other things he's handled so far.

Great page, keep up the great work!

view HeSerpenty's profile

30th Jan 2016, 10:46 PM

HeSerpenty

Haha it's funny you should say that! Kal isn't an innocent party in this whole ordeal :3

And thank you so much!! It was the panel i dreaded most on this page because the look of it is very important to me to get right XD

I'm sure Merek will get his act together soon enough!

Thank youuuu!! <333

view DLKmusic's profile

30th Jan 2016, 10:24 PM

DLKmusic

I'm at a loss... I have nothing witty or insightful to say, except, glad it ain't me facing that council!

Love the chamber of judgment, that is indeed a dark and intimidating place!

view HeSerpenty's profile

30th Jan 2016, 10:48 PM

HeSerpenty

I think we can all be very glad we're not in that room right now xDD. Typically... if you're in that room and not a Council member.. its never a good thing :'D

And thank you so much!!! I'm really glad it's giving off the right vibes!

view rufiangel's profile

31st Jan 2016, 2:34 AM

rufiangel

Where... have you been?

... all my life <3333


... no? :'D

Great job on the page, Serpy; I love how we get the scope of how intimidating the council is, and everything - the mood and lighting - is perfect! X3

Man, Merek, you better come up with a full and solid story, FAST :'D

view HeSerpenty's profile

1st Feb 2016, 9:13 PM

HeSerpenty

Lolol thanks Rufi!! I really hoped it would give off intimidating vibes X'D...glad to know it did!

Yea Merek best pull his act together REAL quick X'D

<3333

view alston123's profile

1st Feb 2016, 6:13 AM

alston123

At this point, I am so done with the council. I know that Merek needs to have their trust for a variety of reason, but I don't have to like it. -_-

view HeSerpenty's profile

1st Feb 2016, 9:16 PM

HeSerpenty

Hahaha oh Alston, don't be done with them yet! They haven't even gotten to do their DIRTY ROTTEN DEED yet! X'D

I think Merek is with you tho...whiiich is unfortunate cuz he WORKS for them :'D. Talk about bad bosses, eh? XD

view TheD-Wrek's profile

1st Feb 2016, 11:05 AM

TheD-Wrek

That room sure does set the tone for the page. And the lighting on Merek's face!

I'm getting worried for him though. :'D

view HeSerpenty's profile

1st Feb 2016, 9:17 PM

HeSerpenty

Thank you D!! Yea this is a place you do NOT wanna be that's for sure X'D

view Proxy170's profile

3rd Feb 2016, 8:26 PM

Proxy170

Merek's a smart guy, I'm sure he'll find an excuse, right??

I really wish I could see this page animated. Something about the giant chamber and lighting just gives you the audio feel for this page.

view HeSerpenty's profile

5th Feb 2016, 1:59 AM

HeSerpenty

Of cooourse of coourse he will! Hopefully! :'D

Eeee and thank you so much!! Animating this is a dream of mine <33
I hoped this page would set a certain mood!

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