Chapter 4.23-- Awkward Time

posted 27th Dec 2015, 7:36 PM

Chapter 4.23-- Awkward Time

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view HeSerpenty's profile

27th Dec 2015, 7:36 PM

HeSerpenty

Gwynn is NOT IN THE MOOD, Tia! She ain't havin it! Lolol looks like Momma is finally gonna find out what's going on tho (Lord knows Merek only muddled things up more X'D). I do hope you all remember this girl from a few pages ago!

LOTS of characters to introduce here XDD.. fan made ones more precisely ;D
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Etzel created by CHatterBOx010
Mara and Tael created by PearofDiscord
Rewald and Dinner created by BattlePyramid
And of course we remember
Tia created by Dreamfollwer!

Check out DA page to follow the links to the creators!

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view HeSerpenty's profile

28th Dec 2015, 12:23 AM

HeSerpenty



I plan to have a new incentive up next week!

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view revzet's profile

27th Dec 2015, 7:46 PM

revzet

Low key love the swirly words bubble xD

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view HeSerpenty's profile

27th Dec 2015, 11:56 PM

HeSerpenty

LOlolol why thank you! <3

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view Centcomm's profile

27th Dec 2015, 8:02 PM

Centcomm

Okay this is pure joy on a stick of a page Serpenty! I really love the innterplay of conversation here. Well done! Well done! and as always the art is a joy!

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view HeSerpenty's profile

27th Dec 2015, 11:57 PM

HeSerpenty

EE Centy thank you so much!!! That means a lot to hear, truly <333
I am so blesses so many people wanted to add characters to my humble comic <33

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view DLKmusic's profile

27th Dec 2015, 8:48 PM

DLKmusic

Great page to end the year on, Serpy! You really get that small town feel across well!

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view HeSerpenty's profile

27th Dec 2015, 11:59 PM

HeSerpenty

Thank ya so much, Sir!! I'm glad to hear, cuz I was hoping to convey that <3

It's a little challenging to juggle a lot of characters, buuut I think having more characters that matter..even background ones...really adds <3

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view Proxy170's profile

27th Dec 2015, 10:23 PM

Proxy170

"one of the only people" >.> That's a quick way to piss off people if you aren't "one of those people" lol XD Gwynn seems well liked though, just probably the source of a lot of gossip...

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view HeSerpenty's profile

28th Dec 2015, 12:05 AM

HeSerpenty

Hahaha!!! Weeell good thing the few other people she would be talking about happen to be the ones in this circle X'D lolol
Sooomethin' tells me tho that Gwynn does NOT care about people's feelings at this time :'D. That is why it is prooobably good that she caught Tia stealing and it distracted her haha X'D

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view azureXtwilight's profile

27th Dec 2015, 11:04 PM

azureXtwilight

I kinda love when it turns to the town so we can *checkotherpeoplesocscough* Seeing their original refs, I can see how amazing they turn out once they are in the comic! I can't wait to see Zen~

Also, Gwynn's up for a few surprising news.I wonder how she's going to take it!

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view HeSerpenty's profile

28th Dec 2015, 12:02 AM

HeSerpenty

Lolol yay I'm so glad to hear! I used to dread town shots, but now that I have people to fill it with it makes it so much more fun and rewarding <333. I already told u on DA..but I am SO excited to get to the scene I imagine for Zen XDD..... I THINK people will find it hilarious llol. I hope :'D

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view junoro's profile

27th Dec 2015, 11:55 PM

junoro

Ooooo I KNEW I recognized her! C'mon, spread the word! Make everyone realize how awful this place is! ...I think Gwynn already knows, but... now everyone else can know, too!

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view HeSerpenty's profile

28th Dec 2015, 12:03 AM

HeSerpenty

Lolol yis!!! It's time to RISE UP, PEOPLE! Oh but... do it wisely XDD. They don't wanna end up like that old man from earlier...............that Tia mentions XDDD lolol

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view junoro's profile

28th Dec 2015, 12:10 AM

junoro

Hmm, well there is strength in numbers! And if Keymen shows up to distract the bigger players, then the townspeople can get way farther in their revolution! :D

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view HeSerpenty's profile

28th Dec 2015, 12:18 AM

HeSerpenty

Heheh you are DEFINITELY right! And on the right track! I don't know if the Council realizes hooow many people are against them XDD
But perhaps some of our mains can help figure that out :3 hehe

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view ProfEtheric's profile

28th Dec 2015, 12:24 AM

ProfEtheric

Wowowowowowow!

Love these characters! Great page to introduce them!

(I especially like the little thief there...)

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view HeSerpenty's profile

28th Dec 2015, 11:40 AM

HeSerpenty

Thank you so much Prof!!! I'm honored to have these wonderful characters to fill slots with, I think it makes everything better <3

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view Jarvi's profile

28th Dec 2015, 12:58 AM

Jarvi

That bald guy from before! :D

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view HeSerpenty's profile

28th Dec 2015, 11:40 AM

HeSerpenty

Yes Dad! You're such a smart Dad! Lolol that's the guy!

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view Mel Cormac's profile

28th Dec 2015, 2:48 AM

Mel Cormac

Gwynn is in no mood for your shenanigans.

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view HeSerpenty's profile

28th Dec 2015, 11:41 AM

HeSerpenty

Sheee most certainly is not!lolol

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view MST3KFan's profile

28th Dec 2015, 3:04 AM

MST3KFan

Never attempt to steal in the presence of ticked off mothers wanting to break down the establishment. XD

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view HeSerpenty's profile

28th Dec 2015, 11:50 AM

HeSerpenty

Hahaha I know, right? EVERYone knows this! *shakes head at Tia*

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view Matt Knab's profile

28th Dec 2015, 3:15 AM

Matt Knab

TALKING ABOUT HUMANS IS ILLEGAL!
I guess...
Great expressions on this page!

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view HeSerpenty's profile

28th Dec 2015, 11:55 AM

HeSerpenty

Hahahaha when it comes to exposing big council secrets, it sure can be!! Lololol

Thanks so much, Matt!

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view Seabiscuit's profile

28th Dec 2015, 7:18 AM

Seabiscuit

Hahah, I kinda feel sorry for her.:D

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view HeSerpenty's profile

28th Dec 2015, 11:59 AM

HeSerpenty

It's never fun to get busted X'D

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view alston123's profile

28th Dec 2015, 3:11 PM

alston123

Haha. I love how the person who Gwynn busts for stealing is about to tell Gwynn what she wants to hear. If I were her, Gwynn wouldn't have been hearing anything!! :3 :P ^_^

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view HeSerpenty's profile

28th Dec 2015, 8:09 PM

HeSerpenty

Haha little does Tia know that she is telling Gwynn exactly what she wants to hear!
Thoooo I don't know if crossing Gwynn right now is a good job anyway xDDD

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30th Dec 2015, 9:11 AM

PearOfDiscord

Aaaaaaa!!!! This is an amazing page, Serpy, and its wonderful to see all of the fan characters. :DD

You did SUCH a good job on everyone (especially Etzel) and Tael hanging off the lacor in panel 5 is absolutely adorable!

Gwynn seems to better at law enforcement than the actual law enforcement is though. They should hire her! (or not)

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view HeSerpenty's profile

30th Dec 2015, 7:08 PM

HeSerpenty

Yay I'm glad you liked it!!! I hoped you would be excited to see Mara and Tael in there :D :D
Over on DA I guess I explained more my thoughts for these group of OCs (since all of them were spawned on DA <333)... if you wanna check it out! :D

Lolol Gwynn would deefinitely be good at it! It's the serving Council part she might struggle with though loololol..given her recent ragey feelings X'D

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31st Dec 2015, 7:31 AM

PearOfDiscord

Renwald and Tael being inseparable makes so muxh sense, and I wouldn't have thought of that on my own!

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view Alicia's profile

31st Dec 2015, 10:15 PM

Alicia

"Adults are crazy."
Yes. Yes they are. Moral of this page. XD

I love all of the cameos! Awesome page! <3

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view HeSerpenty's profile

1st Jan 2016, 12:39 AM

HeSerpenty

Truuuue that XD. SCREW adults, man!!!!

Thanks buddy!!! So glad to have them <33

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view Blissarda's profile

1st Jan 2016, 9:48 PM

Blissarda

You have wonderful style, I will need to read your comic from beginning to end. Excellent quality!

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view HeSerpenty's profile

1st Jan 2016, 9:59 PM

HeSerpenty

Ah! Thank you SO much, this very much brightened my day!! I hope you will enjoy the read!! I've learned sooo much since the beginning of this comic in terms of how to make them X'D...and still learning!

Day= made! :D

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view Chris the Blue's profile

23rd Jan 2016, 1:34 PM

Chris the Blue

One of the only people?
Yo, what about Serafine? Isn't she like your super best friend?

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view HeSerpenty's profile

24th Jan 2016, 1:43 AM

HeSerpenty

LOL! Weeell Sera might be part of a select few she's talking about XD. Tho................... she DOES kinda drive Gwynn crazy >___>

Nah she loves that lady X))) <333

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view BlueDragon's profile

30th Aug 2016, 11:50 PM

BlueDragon

Etzel is awesome :D Love his expressions.

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view HeSerpenty's profile

31st Aug 2016, 1:00 AM

HeSerpenty

Hahaha thank you so much! I enjoy cranky characters XDDD

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view Sovember's profile

3rd May 2018, 5:58 PM

Sovember

I’ve been too lazy to finish this started wayy long ago but now had some time catching up slowly @_@ great work so far!

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view HeSerpenty's profile

4th May 2018, 9:33 AM

HeSerpenty

Hhahahaa it's a lot to take it, I'll admit! But thank you so much, I'm glad you're enjoying it! <3

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