Chapter 4.21-- Exceptionally Heavy

posted 11th Dec 2015, 1:00 PM

Chapter 4.21-- Exceptionally Heavy
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view HeSerpenty's profile

11th Dec 2015, 1:00 PM


Keymen, ya had the ball and then you dropped it X)
(Key probably realizes that if he got Uncle Merek BEFORE approaching Hizruk...seeing a familiar presence wouldn't have sparked that red-eye beasty)

FIRST FUN FACT ABOUT HIZZY'S PHYSIOLOGY: He's REALLY heavy..a LOT heavier than he looks. Wonder why that is :3
More fun facts to come this chapter!


HAY GUESS WHAT! Vote for us on TWC and you'll get to see a [sketchy] glimpse of Kalverick and Keymen's relationship when they were younger...

view HeSerpenty's profile

11th Dec 2015, 1:01 PM


Got some beautiful things to share if you wanna see some beautiful things!!!

First two are

Moody Merek and Pan Justice for Merlock by hykez87 (LOL)

and also

A Tranquil Hizruk by Gideonland

view Stever's profile

11th Dec 2015, 1:08 PM


Heheh, that last panel is so great. :D

Also, cute TWC incentive.

That "Pan Justice" was really funny XD

view HeSerpenty's profile

12th Dec 2015, 12:33 AM


Hahaha thank you!!!

Lolol I know I died when i saw it XDD

view junoro's profile

11th Dec 2015, 1:11 PM


Keymen seems like he knows waaaay more than he lets on... and then still ends up not using that knowledge, huh? At least Hizruk IS still alive! And hopefully he can get the help he needs for that nasty looking wound!

view HeSerpenty's profile

12th Dec 2015, 12:39 AM


Haha indeed... he is something else! One second he's got everything in the bag...the next second there's a hole in it X'D

Let's hope things get better hahahaha!

view junoro's profile

12th Dec 2015, 12:52 AM


Dang, Keymen! Learn how to sew your bags' holes up BEFORE you use them!

view Alicia the Bard's profile

11th Dec 2015, 1:25 PM

Alicia the Bard

Oh Keymen...! XD You have sealed the deal of me loving him with that last panel! I really liked him before, but this is the icing on top!

view HeSerpenty's profile

12th Dec 2015, 12:26 PM


Hahaha that makes me so glad to hear!! He is definitely something else x'D

Thank you so much!! :'D

view JammyTheBirb's profile

11th Dec 2015, 2:04 PM


Hizruk! D: Hope he's okay... at lease Keymen should be able to help him.

view HeSerpenty's profile

12th Dec 2015, 12:32 PM


I suppose if anyone can, it's Him! That's a long time to let an injury Like that go untreated :'D

view alston123's profile

11th Dec 2015, 2:14 PM


Hehe. Merek. That's my home dawwwwwwg! :D:D:D

view HeSerpenty's profile

12th Dec 2015, 12:34 PM


Yea boyyyyyy!!!! Lolol

view TheD-Wrek's profile

11th Dec 2015, 2:43 PM


Wille Key Coyote, super genius. :'D

No wonder he broke my Kat's toes on the dance floor, boy is heavy. XD

view HeSerpenty's profile

12th Dec 2015, 12:40 PM


One moment he's on it, the next he falls off x'D

Lolol Kats lucky it was just her toes and not her whole foot!

view EmmaDilemma's profile

11th Dec 2015, 2:53 PM


Oh my God >.>
Where is Merekk?? :D:D
I lovee it!

view HeSerpenty's profile

13th Dec 2015, 3:21 PM


He's on his way!!! Lol well.. he WILL BE! XDD

Thank uuuu <3333

view azureXtwilight's profile

11th Dec 2015, 4:29 PM


Now off to some bar where he can find Merek! Or he can just roast meat and see if Merek will smell it! ... I can't wait to see their reunion~

Also that panel where he says "How are you still living" is the best.

view HeSerpenty's profile

13th Dec 2015, 3:23 PM


LOL!!! A bar..... or meat........... the ways to find Merek XDD. Hahahaha that's hilarious-- what a man X'D

Lol thank you!!! making the look of the text convey the tone of what he's saying can be a challenge.. but I was pretty happy with it! :'D

view Jarvi's profile

11th Dec 2015, 4:31 PM


What were they feeding him in that dungeon? Rocks? ^^'
Also... some people just ignore that they should be dead :P

view HeSerpenty's profile

13th Dec 2015, 3:23 PM


LOL maybe that's all he could find to eat... a buncha rocks XDD

Yes..totally smart people do this. Totally XDD

view MST3KFan's profile

11th Dec 2015, 4:35 PM


Of course! Merek is the work horse when Keyman needs something heavy moved around. XD

And I love Keyman's reaction to Hizruk's injury. "How are you still living!?"

Sheer willpower, Keyman. Willpower.

view HeSerpenty's profile

13th Dec 2015, 3:28 PM


LOL yup!!! Merek is is such a dependable work horse <33

Haha I guess a wound like that deserves an enthusiastic reaction! He has some will to live, that Hizzy XDDD

view JayyLyn's profile

11th Dec 2015, 5:20 PM


Last panel: queue silly trumpet noise *whaaawhawhaaaaaaaa* XP oh, keymen, you silly monkey. X3
Maybe it's better Merek didn't see poor Hizzy in that state tho.. :(

view HeSerpenty's profile

13th Dec 2015, 3:29 PM


Yea it probably would have been upsetting for him......... if it woulda escalated to that level D:

BUT it's all gonna be okay now!! IT MUST!!! lololol

view ProfEtheric's profile

11th Dec 2015, 5:46 PM


Yes! Genius! *shake my head*

Keymen is great. :D

view HeSerpenty's profile

13th Dec 2015, 3:42 PM


Lolol yay thank you!! I'm glad ya think so! <333

view DLKmusic's profile

11th Dec 2015, 5:57 PM


Merek can help you get him back, no problem, but I don't think his being there would have avoided this encounter. If anything, it might have made it worse.

view HeSerpenty's profile

13th Dec 2015, 3:43 PM


Interesting point of view! This would suggest Hizruk doesn't trust his Uncle AS WELL as resents him--- I wonder if ya might be on to something there :3

We shall havta wait and see! :D

view DLKmusic's profile

16th Dec 2015, 3:03 PM


I don't think of it so much as a matter of trust...
Merek IS still an Umbra, and pretty much represents everything that Hizruk is running away from. I think that while in feral mode, Hizzy wouldn't have "seen" Merek, only an Umbra.

view HeSerpenty's profile

16th Dec 2015, 10:54 PM


This is also very true! And had THAT maybe things woulda been a lot worse indeed D:

What he fears more than death is being in that Dungeon again XD. What would take him back to the dungeon? Probz an Umbra D:

view CiciEnixa's profile

11th Dec 2015, 6:42 PM


LOL Keymen freaking out <3<3<3

Maybe Hizzy is heavy because he has an... um... "extra tenant" in his body? XD

view HeSerpenty's profile

13th Dec 2015, 3:45 PM



Cici. Are you letting Zepar go into people's comics and possess their main characters? Tell Zepar to go home. GO HOME,MAN! lolol-- so weird and creepy.. just what I love about you <33

view Centcomm's profile

11th Dec 2015, 8:06 PM


How are you even alive!!!
*sheer stubbornness *

Oh right... never mind :)

Great page!!

view HeSerpenty's profile

13th Dec 2015, 3:45 PM


Thanks Centy! Loolol stubbornness seems to be a common theme with some of these characters XDD

view kfish's profile

11th Dec 2015, 10:46 PM


Hehehe Hizruk's really heavy Kip's really light. Silly reptiles! And poor Keyman and Hizruk *sniff* I want them to be okay! I'm so anxious!

view HeSerpenty's profile

13th Dec 2015, 3:46 PM


Awww that's adorable!!!
Lolol Hizzy's like a....friggen dinosaur and Kip is like a cute little lizard <3333

Don't worry!! Things will get... better...maybe? XDDD

11th Dec 2015, 11:18 PM


Whoo, look at all those Keymen facial expressions and gestures! He's fun to watch, and you do a really good job of making the way he moves distinct from everyone else, and it's fun to watch. <3 Also the "Genius" panel IS genius on your part, haha.

I see the universe is still being mean to Hizruk (although its mostly his fault) - that bite looks even worse than last time - and I'm going to take Keymen's "best day" comment to confirm my he's-probably-really-ill-but-hiding-it theory from a few pages ago.

I like the new votebait! It's SO weird seeing Kalavarik not scowling/and or in angry-looking spiky armor.

view HeSerpenty's profile

13th Dec 2015, 3:52 PM


This comment is such a lovely compliment <33.. no, truly. I want people to feel like they are watching a story and not just read it...and I'm so happy that you can tell a character has a distinct way about him. That's SO awesome and makes me feel very happy :'D

Lolol and a few people caught that "best day" comment :3...that is all I'll say about that hehe ;D ;D

I know right?? It was weird DRAWING Kal like that XD. It really is quite sad...what happened between these two X')

view Matt Knab's profile

12th Dec 2015, 3:43 AM

Matt Knab

So...after that super cool standoff... Oh dear...
Is Keymen more of the leader/plan guy as opposed to the doing things guy?

view HeSerpenty's profile

13th Dec 2015, 3:55 PM


Lololol! He dropped the ball! BUTTER FINGERS XDD

WEll Key has lots of uh.. limitations he kinda HAS to rely on Merek who has a lot more access to things than he does :3. AND well.. Merek is a big buff guy who'd have an easier time carrying over 200 pounds of Hizruk a ways XDD

view rufiangel's profile

12th Dec 2015, 4:17 AM


Love, love, LOVE the page, Serpy-kins! X3 thw "hoooow are you still liviiiing??" series of panels are my favourite XD ahahaha oh man. Poor Hizruk-baby! ;3;* he really looks like he needs to stop acting tough, and get the help he needs.

I hope Keymen isn't going to leave Hizruk-baby passed out in the forest while he goes to get Merek :'D

view HeSerpenty's profile

13th Dec 2015, 3:56 PM


Aww Rufi thank you so much!!!! It's always great to hear when people enjoy the page <33

Hizzy definitely needs some help! Too bad he couldn't wait to follow Keymen home before he passed out tho X'D. Hoopefully Key n Merek worked out a signal system for if one of them found this elusive young fellow X'D

view Seabiscuit's profile

12th Dec 2015, 8:06 AM


Hahahah! Oh gosh, his reaction is the best. The absolute best.
And that damage...Holy hell, I'd almost forgotten just how bad it was. Holy shit that looks so painful! D:

view HeSerpenty's profile

14th Dec 2015, 1:35 PM


Thank you so much Sea!! Lololol
And I'm really glad it looks painful cuz it IIIS XDD (I spent like 10 minutes JUST on that wound XDD)-- GOOD thing someone's finally gonna do something about it!

view Chris the Blue's profile

12th Dec 2015, 7:03 PM

Chris the Blue

You shoulda asked Barron for help. He would've brought the whole cavalry and more, just to help a guy out, I'll bet.

view HeSerpenty's profile

14th Dec 2015, 1:37 PM


You're right, I'm sure Barron is one heck of a fellow! I'm sure he would do anything he could <333

Lolol I'm really happy ya like him! <3

view Proxy170's profile

14th Dec 2015, 7:56 PM


Serpy!!! Ahh so much has happened...but I am LOVING Keymen's character even more...super smart, quick wit, and yet still a bit of a softie...I want to know what makes him special! Please tell me you'll reveal more soon? Not that I don't care about poor Hizzy and his story, but gosh, there is so much mystery in your story. By the way I love how you drew Emma's OC Wex (that was his name, right? I know it was a few pages ago...) and totally made it your own...perfect mix of her vision and your style :D

view HeSerpenty's profile

14th Dec 2015, 9:17 PM


PRoxyyyy!!!! It's so nice to see your beautiful face around here again!!! Thank you so much! Keymen has a lot of layers to him! I'm super excited to show you guys even more and for the big reveal on his big secrets :3

And thank you!! Ihad SO much fun working with Wex and Jules <333...they are great characters and it's a pleasure to have them <33. Me and Emma made a good team! :D :D

view Alicia's profile

14th Dec 2015, 11:31 PM


Poor Hizruk... and poor Keymen too! Where is that big ol' guy when ya need him? <3

view HeSerpenty's profile

16th Dec 2015, 10:54 PM


Cleaning up everyone's messes that's where! Lololol

Maaaybe he's within earshot? XDD

view Damatris's profile

25th Dec 2015, 7:46 AM


Way to go Keymen. :'D

view HeSerpenty's profile

25th Dec 2015, 9:15 AM


Lolol.. He is a genius <33

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