Chapter 1, Pg 4

posted 18th Jan 2013, 9:39 AM

Chapter 1, Pg 4
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view Mara.Self's profile

18th Jan 2013, 10:00 AM

Mara.Self

He's so handsome!

view HeSerpenty's profile

18th Jan 2013, 10:53 AM

HeSerpenty

<:F! So happy you think so! :D

view Lady Jean's profile

18th Jan 2013, 12:07 PM

Lady Jean

Great use of shading! So...we like the voice in his head?

view HeSerpenty's profile

26th Jan 2013, 12:55 PM

HeSerpenty

Thanks girl! Are you asking if you're SUPPOSED to like that voice? That's up for YOU to decide ;P

24th Jan 2013, 11:16 PM

Looking7Glass

Awesome! Man your colouring style is so unique, I haven't seen much like it. I really like it. It's vibrant but easy on the eyes and draws your attention. The story is getting really interesting, keep it up!

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19th Jul 2015, 12:38 AM

HeSerpenty

THANKS Sister!! <33

25th Jan 2013, 5:40 AM

potatoeskins

Just a tad bit trouble with the font for the red text, but Im on my phone so probably not truly an issue.

view HeSerpenty's profile

19th Jul 2015, 12:35 AM

HeSerpenty

I have heard this a few times... I ended up trying to make it bigger so its easier to read in later pages-- WHY am I so obsessed with red on black for this thing?? XDD
But thank you for this honest feedback it was really helpful at the time! (despite me failing to say so sooner XDD)

view Marraph's profile

29th Dec 2013, 3:12 PM

Marraph

ATTRACTIVE CHARACTER ALERT

view HeSerpenty's profile

19th Jul 2015, 12:35 AM

HeSerpenty

Egads a 2013 comment that I KNOW had made my day at the time..... and I didn't reply D:
(III'M a jerk XD. *FIXES*)

Hehehe THANK YOU!! I'm SOOOOO happy you think so!!

view Jarvi's profile

22nd Apr 2014, 3:06 AM

Jarvi

Oh hello there nice drawn feet... I like nicely drawn feet :3

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19th Jul 2015, 12:36 AM

HeSerpenty

Feet seem to be getting harder for me and not easier lol...I'm a bit concerned about it actually... D:

view VulturesUnderTheMoon's profile

24th Jul 2014, 9:30 PM

VulturesUnderTheMoon

Ok so i decided to catch up on this...it'll take awhile...
Whe i saw the firat panel i thought he was naked ^///^ my mistake...
Not that i would mind! =3 hehe

view HeSerpenty's profile

24th Jul 2014, 9:53 PM

HeSerpenty

Hehehe XD

Lol well I hope you enjoy the story! I put so much blood, sweat, n tears into it T^T XDD

17th Oct 2014, 5:00 PM

Guesticus

Well, his feet _are_ naked, and he was topless, if that counts :D

17th Oct 2014, 5:00 PM

Guesticus

Well, his feet _are_ naked, and he was topless, if that counts :D

view TheD-Wrek's profile

2nd Mar 2015, 3:46 AM

TheD-Wrek

Love the expressions on his face here. :D

view HeSerpenty's profile

19th Jul 2015, 12:36 AM

HeSerpenty

Thank you D!! I've always loved drawing the expressions <3

view Ana Karenina's profile

23rd Mar 2015, 10:09 AM

Ana Karenina

Nice comic!!
I love the expressions and your panelling is amazing!

view HeSerpenty's profile

23rd Mar 2015, 11:14 AM

HeSerpenty

Thank you sooo much! (And thanks so much for the sub too! Its just the pick-me-up I needed today <333)

view RED2015's profile

22nd Aug 2016, 5:44 AM

RED2015

been able to squeeze out time to read this!I'm loving the art and how the story's developing

view HeSerpenty's profile

22nd Aug 2016, 8:12 AM

HeSerpenty

Awww thank you so much! You've no idea how much this positive feedback is needed for me right now <333

I'm so glad!!

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