Chapter 4.17-- Exceedingly Elusive

posted 6th Nov 2015, 9:09 AM

Chapter 4.17-- Exceedingly Elusive
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view HeSerpenty's profile

6th Nov 2015, 9:09 AM


Oh dear... things got really bad for Mr. Civilian. BUT GASP! There was a witness?

Everyone please meet Tia! I do believe she's the first fan-oc ever made for Serpents ^__^, created by Dreamfollower over on DeviantArt!
It's probably important that she witnessed this... but what do I know? ;D

LASTLY... looks like Keymen is on to someone? :3

WHATS THIS? A page on time? Why yes it is <3. Let's try to keep it this way, Serpy. Okay.

Have a great weekend you BEAUTIFUL people!

view HeSerpenty's profile

6th Nov 2015, 8:49 PM


I HAVE A LITTLE BONUS THINGY THIS WEEK! I recorded (a lot of) my page work as I was paging this week! I've never done it before at all..and this is the VERY first please bear with me. Interested in watching it all come together from almost start to finish??

I hope you enjoy it! Would you be interested in me continuing to do this? :3

view Centcomm's profile

6th Nov 2015, 9:17 AM


Ohh I like Tia! and ouch thats is gonna leave a mark or three .

view HeSerpenty's profile

6th Nov 2015, 8:49 PM



We will catch up again with this poor civilian... later >__>

6th Nov 2015, 10:10 AM


Aw man Heserpenty, why'd you changed your profile picture I loved the other one it was so cute! D; But the new one is halarious by the way.

view HeSerpenty's profile

6th Nov 2015, 8:50 PM


Lolol because it was TIME FOR A CHANGE! I had that other one up for over a year xD.. I always really liked it, but... I wanted to change things up a bit

A more accurate self portrait afterall X'D

view rufiangel's profile

6th Nov 2015, 10:14 AM


Omigoooooosh PLEASE be Hizruk-baby please please please you need that shoulder treated babyyyy ;3; ;3; ;3;

(and Kal, you monster! D:)

view HeSerpenty's profile

6th Nov 2015, 8:53 PM


Hizzy would be a lucky duck if he's the one Keymen is about to find right now! I mean of all the people looking for him..the DOCTOR that he's never met before would proobz be the most helpful one haha

(he really is XD. this ain't even half of it :'D)

6th Nov 2015, 10:23 AM


Well hello lovely, *familiar*, lady! :D I hope you stay safe from Kal behind that well (or chuck him in).

Poor old guy! Getting hit by someone wearing freaking ARMOR must hurt a lot. Go fight someone who can hit back Kal and quite beating up on kids in dungeons/old guys! >:( It might just be me, but I found panels 2-5 a bit confusing because the view switched from closeup to closeup so much.

So Keymen can detect things by smell, hmm? I'm REALLY curious whether that's a common Serpent trait or whether it's part of Keymen's blue-eye, suspicious-scar weirdness.

view HeSerpenty's profile

6th Nov 2015, 8:57 PM


Heheh it's so great that Tia is already known in my wonderful DA circle <333. I think she'll fit in rather nicely into the comic!

Yeaaa Kal sure didn't hold back! As we'll come to find out. Shucks, I'm sorry if the panels were confusin! I try to get them right, aah but sometimes I miss the mark a lil bit-- I was hoping to convey that the fact that Tia was watching was more important than the actual beating itself X'D. BUT! We will catch up with this poor old guy!

Hehe and yes! It is indeed a serpenty thing! His blue eyes n scar craziness well.. THATS a whole nother thing x3

view CiciEnixa's profile

6th Nov 2015, 10:27 AM


Oooh, hello, Tia, you're new and... are you supposed to be where you are, young lady? What is going on here?


view HeSerpenty's profile

6th Nov 2015, 8:59 PM


Lolol you're RIGHT! TIA! WHY aren't you away at school?!?! More on THAT to come ;D

LolOlol!! I cannot confirm or deny any of those things and CERTAINLY whether or not he is alright! <:'D Hehe

view ProfEtheric's profile

6th Nov 2015, 10:51 AM



And the scent thing there does serve to remind us that these characters aresn't exactly human...

view HeSerpenty's profile

6th Nov 2015, 8:59 PM



Lol yess Prof exactly!! I'm glad that shows through because sometimes its easy to forget they're not human. But indeed they're not!! :D

view Spelledeg's profile

6th Nov 2015, 10:55 AM


KEYMEN. It's totally your fault. And oh my ;-; Poor citizen and wahhh. So much going on. I LOVE the panel layouts on this page, it gives a good sense of the severity things are reaching.

view HeSerpenty's profile

6th Nov 2015, 10:05 PM


Thank you so much Spelly!! Yea things are mounting and mounting...hopefully it all pans out well! Hopefully. BUTLET'SFACEIT heh >___>

Also Keymen wants to ask you something in regards to the first part of your comment. Here he is..

*rolls eyes and shakes head* feel free to ignore him X'D

view junoro's profile

6th Nov 2015, 1:28 PM


I saw the last panel of this page and scrolled down to keep reading--but that was it! Aaah the suspense is killing me! Suddenly there's a witness to government corruption and suddenly Keymen sees something? But whaaaaat?

view HeSerpenty's profile

6th Nov 2015, 10:12 PM


Yay I am so glad you feel suspenseful! Successssss lolol

Yes there is a witness.... now if the lies start coming out, SOME one knows the truth X'D. Hehehe and as for what...I promise we will see next page! :D

view gideonland's profile

6th Nov 2015, 2:12 PM


But the civilian didn't even do anything. All he did was hear a rumor... This' so messed up. Maybe Kal just doesn't want him spreading this rumor? I think he's a great villain, btw; perfect contrast to Merek.

Let's hope it's Hizruk Keyman's on to, at last.
Great page, as usual.

view HeSerpenty's profile

6th Nov 2015, 10:16 PM


You're exactly right.. he didn't! And he is certainly not the only one spreading this around... however.. he was the only one to do so while Kalverick was within earshot. Big mistake D':

Gosh thank you so much tho its really great to hear that Kal is considered a good villain <3...and yes! He's kinda designed to be a major contrast to Merek :D

view Seabiscuit's profile

6th Nov 2015, 5:25 PM


Awww no, why you gotta be such a jerkass? Keymen, save him ;~;

view HeSerpenty's profile

6th Nov 2015, 10:18 PM


Kalverick... aka "Jerkass" <33
That's SO goin' on his profile lolol

view alston123's profile

6th Nov 2015, 6:59 PM


Oh. Whoa, so cool! I can't wait to see that, Serpy! :D:D:D:D

view HeSerpenty's profile

6th Nov 2015, 10:19 PM


Thank you Alston!! Hehehe the video is finished! (scroll up)...............and next week a very important character meet n greet <33 lol

view Slim Kittens's profile

6th Nov 2015, 9:20 PM

Slim Kittens

Thanks for posting the video. It's a treat watching a good artist create something.

view HeSerpenty's profile

6th Nov 2015, 10:21 PM


Aw thank you so much for watching it! I have to say knowing I was being recorded really kept me disciplined while I was working (maybe thats why the page is on time even X'D)

view Alicia's profile

7th Nov 2015, 12:54 AM


Keymen smells an injury? At this point THAT COULD BE ANYONE! Lookit everyone getting injuries all over the place! You so mean, Serpy! X'D

...Still, I really hope he finds Hizruk soon. lol

view HeSerpenty's profile

7th Nov 2015, 12:44 PM


Hahaha I know seriously XDD-- a BUNCHA people could probably use his help at this point XD

hehehe :3

view Matt Knab's profile

7th Nov 2015, 4:03 AM

Matt Knab

Yikes, he's following the scent of blood? That is both cool and scary at the same time. :)

view HeSerpenty's profile

7th Nov 2015, 12:45 PM


Lolol thanks Matt! Why yes... it is kinda creepy isn't it XD. Goood thing he's not a shark or something lolol :3

view Jarvi's profile

7th Nov 2015, 4:50 AM


NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Not the unnamed bald guy!

And who's the new lady? :o

view HeSerpenty's profile

7th Nov 2015, 12:47 PM


Egadz, you're right! He needs a name. How aboout..... uuuh...Daebo. I dunno. POOR DAEBO! I'm going with it! LOL

Lolol we shall find out more about her in due time, I promise, Dad!!!

view azureXtwilight's profile

7th Nov 2015, 5:02 AM


Oh,Keymen. Now I am 100% sure you are the most terrifying character in this comic. Seriously. He knows everything.

Also RIP unnamed bald guy.

view HeSerpenty's profile

7th Nov 2015, 2:02 PM


I know poor unnamed bald guy! Well.. he might have a ridiculous name now.. X'D

Haha again, Keymen felt compelled to answer the first part of your comment hehehe

(It would appear that if you speak directly to keymen he'll speak back X"D. Creepy O__o) (lolol)

view TheD-Wrek's profile

7th Nov 2015, 1:38 PM


That video was great. Very inspirational. :D

Oh, Keymen.... That injury you smell... Could it beeeee...? :O

view HeSerpenty's profile

7th Nov 2015, 2:04 PM


Hehehe I think we all hope it is who I think you're guessing it is!

Aw thanks D I'm glad you like the video! It is fun for me, I think I'll definitely make more :D

view revzet's profile

7th Nov 2015, 8:17 PM


LOVE the video, how did you do it? :0 I've been wanting to record a few of my art sessions lol

view HeSerpenty's profile

7th Nov 2015, 9:19 PM


Yay thank you so much!! I'm glad people are watching it! I've watched it myself about a billion times XD--- it makes it look like I know what I'm doing or something lolol

I downloaded a streaming software called X-Split so I could do picarto TV...aaand figured out that I can do "local recording" which records my own self and I can put it together in Windows Movie Maker and add music and stuff X'D. I'm still very new at it and figuring it out buuuut its really fun and rewarding! I think i have to pay to get better quality tho-- whiiich i might do XD

view rufiangel's profile

8th Nov 2015, 12:02 AM


view HeSerpenty's profile

8th Nov 2015, 3:06 PM



RUFI this is so wrong and yet SO hilarious att he same time X'D. It is very clear to me now just how much these two look identical! Thank goodness they have different armor at least so people can tell them apart!

view DLKmusic's profile

11th Nov 2015, 10:16 AM


All I have to say to this image (that I cannot get out of my head now) is that you are one sick twisted individual

view HeSerpenty's profile

11th Nov 2015, 10:56 AM


Haay!! :D
Lolol it's pretty messed up isn't it? X'D. Bleach works pretty good on mental images like that hahaha

view rufiangel's profile

11th Nov 2015, 9:18 PM


You're very welcome :D <3

view Alicia's profile

12th Nov 2015, 2:56 PM


I don't get it. I just see four drawings of the same person in that picture. :O wut.

(lolialmostdieduponseeingthis. Well done, Rufi. X'3)

view rufiangel's profile

12th Nov 2015, 7:05 PM



(<3 Yay that makes me happy :'D I'm happy it's bringing such bleach-worthy joy into people's lives)

8th Nov 2015, 3:44 AM


Wait-wait-wait. Keymen can "smell" an injury? How does that work?!

I really appreciate the video. It's really cool and I always wondered what program you use. It's Paint Tool SAI <3
You always invest so much time and detail on your pages, it looks really nice :)

Oh. Poor bald guy. He looks too old and unassuming to know anything. I hope Tia'll be fine.

view HeSerpenty's profile

8th Nov 2015, 3:09 PM


Yes he can! As well as all the serpenty people! Kinda like dogs and various other animals, serpents can smell blood, disease, infection etc. It comes in handy when one is looking for someone who is injured!

Thank you so much for watching! I will probably make more as it is rewarding for ME to watch them as well XD. I really appreciate the compliment so much <3... I care deeply about this comic and making it presentable!

Poor civilian just happened to be saying the wrong thing at the wrong time in the wrong place-- within earshot of Kalverick D:

view severin's profile

16th Nov 2015, 8:49 PM


Keymen looks so nice under those bright trees <333

And yay Serpy speed draw video :D *watches*

view HeSerpenty's profile

16th Nov 2015, 10:39 PM


Aww thank you so much!!!!

It was fun to make that video XDD

view Sleeper's profile

17th Feb 2016, 6:30 PM


I love those backgrounds! I gotta learn your tree art.

view HeSerpenty's profile

18th Feb 2016, 4:16 PM


Thanks so much, that means a lot! I am trying SO HARD to level up my background skillz X'D

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